Warlock III: The first and the last

So,

This should go into a blog, but honestly who will read any of my blogs about this story?

Let's start with what I already wrote in the previous AU's under the chapters.

Warlock I and II

As mentioned, the Warlock II and I universe is very poor and for the most part, I can do anything with it. And that is what I'll do. It literally gave me the skeleton, I give it the meat and the life it needs but doesn't have.

A hell lot of things will be said about Ardania in the future but many won't be actually part of the universe if you decided to go into it yourself.

At the same time, because its so little, It would be a crime, literally, for me to not include everything the franchise offers. This is why I will use things from the one and only book about the Warlock world. Stuff from the book, and therefore canon will be written in green text.

This story is first and foremost written to improve my own skills at using the English language. The fact I can get you guys to read it, is a bonus because I am providing someone entertainment while at it.

Meaning that I really would like you guys to be active, help me get better, from serious and long comments to just small remarks every five or ten chapters saying: "You're better than before" or on the contrary "Boi you got worse/are standing in one place"

And I hope you guys will restrain from turning into the German soldier from Wolfenstein when he is talking to the KKK guys and tell me as he did to them, about how I butcher your beautiful language.

I chose to take a different approach, especially add realism and brutality to the MLP universe

Why? This way it will be easier for me to use the sad tag, and forge some nice situations. I understand that many prefer submissive and tiny ponies. I prefer something that has spice, and you can expect the MLP universe with all the incoming events will be at times bloody.

Why Anthropomorphic?

I like to implement some sexual innuendos here and there, you know, a tiny fetish like licking and so on. Foreplay is important. Thing is, with normal ponies, it turns me away, that is why I choose anthro's because I am more comfortable with them.

I don't have much time, and I will probably rarely update. If I get better, I will stop.

That is how it is, I have many other important things to do, and I treat this story as some sort of self-improving session on which I'll spend an hour or one and a half every three or four days. Not to mention that after I'm done with things I get easily exhausted like hell and this will have an effect on the story.

Pictures

When it comes to pictures, as you saw, I used already them in three chapters. I know that using pictures is lazy, but at the same time, I'd like to explain.

I add them to show what I know I don't have skill (yet) to describe, to present the image as best as I can through text without dragging it/or I lack knowledge about (like armor). This, of course, doesn't mean I shouldn't try and do it, and I will plan on slowly going up the ladder, and when the time comes also go for the harder to describe objects.

So tell me, in what situations would like me to see using pictures? On small stuff, not to waste time on it, or on the bigger ones?

In the end I will choose what is best for me on my own judgment, but it'll be cool to know the general opinion among the site members.