Astartes: the ending.

by Loyalist alpha legion

Rating: teen
Tags: Gore, Violence, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Human, Warhammer, Sad, Main 6, Adventure, Crossover
Length: 1084

what if The retributor from astartes didn't die, and landed in equestria ?? Find out more about brother Valencius and his new life of survival.

The retributor astartes from the fan film "Astartes" goes to equestria instead of dying. How will brother Valencius adapt and survive his new environment ?

This is the end of Valencius old life of war, but also the beginning of a life of peace and prosperity.

The story is in direct link with Horatiu's tales

Published 2021-01-30 06:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2021-01-30 06:50:01 UTC

The beginning of the end

Somewhere near ponyville, a portal opened. It was purple and pink and it cackled with surnatural energy. Suddenly something fell out.

Thump.

The retributor landed on his knees, still dazed by the sudden loss of psychic energy. However, the Astartes recovered rather easily and took of his helmet and vomited as he throwed the helmet of. He then realized something was of: he was curently lying on a grassy plain.

His hand clawed at the earth as he raised his head. He saw nothing very dangeous, so he eased himself a bit. He stood up, and looked around him.

He was in a green valley. A few airborne xenos could be spotted in the blue sky that were quite similar to "birds" could be seen and a few scattered quadruple animals were minding there own business. His eyes laid the most important detail so far: a road leeding to a small town laid a few meters from the armored giant.

Valencius walked over to his helmet, picked it up and put it back onto his face. He pressurized it and soon warnings glowed on his eye lenses. Having no other thing to do, Valencius decided to walk down the road.

A few minutes later, the space marine arrived before the small town. He could distinguish equine-like Xeno, that looked very human despite their alien anatomy.

Valencius slowly took hold of his bolt pistol with his right arm, the other one unusable since the plasma explosion that took it away. He slowly walked backwards, not wanting to be spotted by the local population. He hid in a kind of agriculture facility that regrouped trees over a few imperial acres. He stalked past a Working orange xeno and hid in the far corner of the facility.

Up in the sky, A blue xeno spotted a big animal and went over to investigate. The blue xeno saw a Huge intimidating figure and decided to go seek to him. Valencius was surprised to hear a perfectly spoken High Gothic.

« Hey you !!!! » the xeno yelled « what are you doing here ?? »

Valencius stood, undisturbed as he scealed his helmet, making it imune to the intense babling of the small xeno.

It tried to punch him, but hurt it’s « leg » Instead. It tried to pull him, shout at him, fight him, shout again, all these things for about an Hour. Finally, it groaned in frustration and left him in order to fetch "her friends".

Next, another purple psyker Xeno tried to lift him with her magic, but the anti-psyker generator he had on his hip was enough to stop her from doing that. She then tried to ask questions, but Valencies stood still and didn't answer.

"This is strange !!!!!" the purple xeno yelled" I'm on the brink of a scientific breakthrough, but I can't use my magic and he can't answer me !!!!!!!!!!"

"ummm......" a timid xeno wispered "maybe I can try to stare him......"

" Go ohn and try, Flutthers" the orange xeno with a hat said.

The yellow Xeno stared at him, and he stared back through his helmet.

"I don't think it worked.........." The xeno named "fluttershy" said.`

" All he needs is a big paarrrttyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!" a pink xeno yelled as it throwed food and pieces of paper at his face.

The orange Xeno tried to tie a lasso on his head and fist, and failled to move him an inch.

next, some kind of militia tried to move and arrest him, but all their attempts failed.

A few hours later, all the other xeno abandoned trying to talk, fight or capture him.

And Valencius stood there, unmoving as a stone statue. The locals even started to believe he was a statue.

At dawn, next day, the xeno discovered that he was gone. Valencius had left in the cover of the night and he was now far away. He was at the base of an interesting city: it was built in a mountain. He climbed all the way up to the top of the mountain and he leaped into the air. He crashed right through the ceeling of the throne room. As he stood up, he saw a black xeno that was surprised and stared at him.

Valencius just stood, and he constantly kept an eye on the aggressive black xeno that tried to attack him in several ways, none scoring a hit.

Valencius then remarked two things: a) A large group of xeno was coming his way.

b) There was a warp portal at the back of the room.

A few minutes later, a large mob of poorly armed xeno walked in and started charging at him. Having no other option, the retributor threw himself into the portal, unfortunately pushing the other black xeno with him into the warp.

They both landed in a plain need a tall mountain. Valencius's cogitators informed Valencius of the warp energy emanating from the top of the mountain and something to his left.

A large "statue" of a once living creature was standing before him. Before he could deduce anything else accept its size (about the height of a knight, as long as two baneblades) and it's meaning ( the subject must have been alive once, being reduced to a staute by a psyched or deamon.) A black equine face appeared before him.

"THOU was idiotic enough to land through MY PALACE but thou was stupid enough to bush me into the one-way portal!!!"

"The 'Idiot' was able to beat you several times and he had no other option. If you want to whine go somewhere else."

"WHAT??????? YOU take orders from me, you--" She was interrupted by a punch to her stomach which resulted in flinging her into the statue.

She got up and flew up to him. AGAIN.

" When we get back, you are going to have some serious problems. I am princess Luna from equestria !!!! First one of your kind foalnap my sister and push her into a portal and now the same goes with me!!!! " she exclaimed "Now YOU are going with me and then We are going to find my sister."

The space marine simply walked towards the mountain.

"How dare you disobey me !!!!! come back!!!!!!" Luna yelled.

The marine continued walking forward.

" AAARGGHHHHHHHH" luna yelled as she had no other option but follow him

Author's Note

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