Mental Re-Make

The sun fell on the Crystal Kingdom, the scarlet and mulberry light of dusk refracting in the translucent crystals that the Crystal Palace, prismatic gradients spraying out across the warm air of springtime, instilling an indescribably beautiful visage upon anypony who could see it. Such light also filtered into the rooms of the palace, including the Princess’s personal quarters, the curtains of which fluttered just enough to let some small streaks of light in as the air was disturbed by the large double-doors opening. Princess Cadance strode through before letting them close behind her with an echoing slam, a sigh of relief escaping her lips as she released her composed demeanor.

The alicorn then lit her horn, a cyan hue wrapping around it and her regalia with enough brightness to glimmer in the reflections of the crystal walls. She pulled the tiara and peytral off her head and neck respectively while she stepped out of her slippers, floating all of the golden paraphernalia over to the top drawer of a wooden dresser on her left, placing it inside before looking towards the large bed straight in front of her.

The mare sighed again, this time wistfully, then started a gallop towards the bed while flaring her wings, jumping over with a large flap to land onto the incredibly plush bed with a soft thump. She giggled while grabbing the fluffy covers and rolling around across its expanse, ruining the impeccable assembly her maids put together previously. She may appreciate they work they do for her, but she’d prefer if this entire place could be a bit less sterile sometimes.

Regardless, though, Cadance stopped wriggling around to lay on her side, magicking part of the covers off of her to let them lay near her for when her husband finally completed that thing he was dragged off to do and joined her. Soft rustling sounded through the room as the alicorn shifted about to press the side of her head into her plush pillow, the warm and fluffy comforter raising slightly with the light flutters of her wings as she prepared to drift off to sleep.

However, that sleep was denied when her ears perked up as she heard a soft click permeate the room. She was sure Shining Armour was still busy with that guard work, or perhaps one of her other staff had something to tell her of?

That assumption faltered though, when she realized that it wasn’t the main door, but instead the balcony door, now quietly creaking open. Her assumptions went even further out the window when a unicorn stepped through, a light pink coat and dark purple mane faintly lit by the filtered light of the sunset, a rather stoic expression on her face as she looked inside, though slightly broken by surprise as she saw the Princess within still awake and looking back at her.

“Um, hi?” Cadance asked in bewilderment, leaning up while remaining in her bed to better face the other mare.

Said mare closed her eyes in slightly disgruntled thought as she walked further into the room, kicking the door closed and standing there while tapping a hoof.

“How did you get up here?” The Princess asked, making the other mare open her eyes and look back at her.

“Specialized levitation,” The unicorn said with a detached tone, getting a confused look from the larger pony. “It’s basically a form of flight,” She added and looked off to the side with mildly focused thought.

Some moments passed in awkward silence as Cadance considered that, before eventually muttering, “I didn’t think even Aunt Celly taught that...”

“She doesn’t,” The lilac mare responded in a somewhat irritated tone, taking a few moments after the Princess looked to her again to shake her head, gaining a look of sinister intent as she looked right back. “Regardless...” She started again, her horn lighting in an aqua hue which was faintly echoed by a glow across all the walls of room, “I am Starlight Glimmer, and I have come to fix some things.”

The mix of slight concern and fear the older mare got at the magic grew at that statement, tinging her voice as she asked, “A-and what would that be?”

A challenging grin grew on Starlight’s face, and she curtly responded, “You.”

Cadance had no time to think before she felt a blurring on her very mind, the dizzying sensation making her gasp and stumble back into the bed, leaving her thoughts sluggish as she tried to sit up. She soon spotted the unicorn across from her lighting her horn and realized it must’ve had something to do with the inhibition she felt in her mind.

“H-hey, w-what are you doing?” She tried to shout, though it came out slightly slurred and stuttered. The other pony didn’t respond but for a growing of her grin, letting her put the thoughts together ever so slowly. “W-why are you...” She started again, but had to press a hoof to her forehead to keep herself from blurring her thoughts any more, more time being taken before she remembered the pony’s supposed goals. “W-why are you trying to fix me? I-I’m not broken...”

“Maybe not by your definition,” Starlight replied with rancor, “But by mine, you are tyrannical; an utterly useless leader who doesn’t care at all about the ponies under her care, only making sure those in her little bubble are happy at the expense of everypony else.” She stepped forward, stopping at the hoof of the bed and resting her forehooves on it, patting it for emphasis. “Like this; you pamper yourselves in your massive castles, yet so many ponies around them are suffering.” The bed depressed somewhat under her weight as she jumped onto it, going further forward to stand right in front of the other mare. “You call yourselves a ‘friendly’ and ‘loving’ nation, yet it is replete with pain and hatred.”

The Princess had to shuffle backwards as the unicorn moved closer, a hoof darting out and pressing her barrel down to lay her flat on the bed, letting her stand right above the larger mare. “B-but, um...” She started, but had to pause to put her thoughts together, the fuzzy suffocation and bewildering revelation muddling her mind further.

“But you don’t have to be this violent...” Cadance eventually concluded, trying to hold herself together under the fierce tone and visage of the other pony.

“Yeah I do,” Said pony growled, “‘Cause otherwise, you’re not going to get it through your thick skulls!” She shouted, tapping the alicorn’s temple for emphasis. She leaned downward, getting the lower mare’s face while brightening her horn, the haze getting denser in a sharp spike, inciting a wave of dizziness in her that lasted for a few moments as she fell further back into the bed. “You’re always so confident in your unrelenting control of everypony else that you never try to change yourselves, and anyone that opposes you is just something to defeat, not an actual creature with emotions and a reason for doing what they do. I know that damn well...”

The disoriented Princess didn’t manage to pick up on the somberness in the unicorn’s voice, her tone baffled as she asked, “What are you talking about?”

Starlight got even closer to the larger pony’s face, their muzzles nearly touching as she replied with venom, “I’m talking about how my entire life’s work was ruined by one of you fools!” At a look of confusion and denial thrown her way, she continued in a more stoically irritated tone, “That purple one and her group of naïve friends came into my village, where I was keeping a society where there wasn’t inequality, class division, or those stupid ‘destinies’ that you ponies love to associate with cutie marks, and she absolutely fucking trashed it.”

Hot, heavy breaths escaped the unicorn’s nose as she looked down for a moment and tried to keep her objective clear, the vacated air brushing against the winged mare’s neck in a strangely pleasant way, but she quickly shook her head in an attempt to hold her will. “They took my ponies, my society, my world, and forced her ignorant beliefs of friendship onto them, leaving me with nothing,” She looked back into the alicorn’s eyes, “How can you possibly consider yourselves good when you destroy anything that doesn’t agree with you?”

Cadance looked back with a mouth opened in a mix of terror and dread, her fogged mind flooded with thoughts, some of examples the pain she had always denied causing, some of miscellaneous glances thrown to the poverty, or conversations around messy duties and true triumphs. Laboured breaths escaped her mouth as her mind went into overdrive, though none could really congeal into a full idea before a hoof pressed into her barrel, pulling a warm moan from her as the soft, yet demanding pressure tickled her mind in an incredibly pleasurable way.

“Well,” The dominant unicorn said, dragging the groggy and aroused Princess’s attention back to her malicious and salacious grin, “It doesn’t matter any more, because I’m going to change that.” She quickly grabbed hold of the other pony with her hooves as she finished her statement, flipping her onto her back and roughly groping her plot.

Loud, lewd moans were yanked from the alicorn’s throat as she felt the harsh pressing and kneading of of her ass cheeks, the ferocity of the encounter so far removed from the more compassionate ones she recalled having with her husband. The intensity gave her a sense of déjà vu, reminding her of a time she where she had much better and more satisfying sex with a partner that didn’t hold back in the slightest. She couldn’t place these memories with how different they seemed from the rest of her life, making them seem foreign and artificial, but she couldn’t piece together anything more coherent than that before the abuse on her flanks drenched her mind with more pleasure, reverting her thoughts to where she only wanted to give in.

Starlight pressed her barrel onto the other mare’s back, the wings there partially open and twitching with uncontrolled energy. “I think all of your misdeeds require some punishment, no?” She whispered lecherously, her muzzle close enough to the royal’s ear to leave her hot breaths to tickle it.

“P-punish-ment...?” Cadance asked between breathless gasp and heaving moans, looking back at the other pony with her voice rather submissive from the matching mindset settling in.

That question was soon answered by the unicorn’s hoof pulling back slightly, then darting forward to spank that plump pink butt with a solid slap breaking the torrid air. A mix between a gasp and a moan was forced from the spanked pony’s mouth, her already frightful and aroused expression growing further into a mix between terror and lust.

“O-oh Celestia…” The Princess moaned in realization and giddiness, gasping again as strong hooves pushed on her plot, and low grunt behind her followed by heavy breaths and quiet slurps letting her know that the other mare got up and was staring at her hindquarters, licking her lips in appreciation. She blushed at the attention and tried to pull away, but her limbs were quickly grabbed by aqua magic and pinned to the bed.

“No, no...” Starlight scolded lightly in a somewhat exasperated tone, “You’re going to obey me, and you’re going to take your punishment.”

Cadance shivered slightly at the commanding tone of the unicorn, some vague memories telling her of a past where such was common. These thoughts may not have meshed well with the rest of her blurrily recalled life, but it felt so good to just give in and say, “O-of course.”

The dominant pony wasn’t quite satisfied with that, responding with mild irritation, “That’s not how you address me.”

A light gasp was drawn from the alicorn and she blushed heavier in shame, and her thoughts whirled for a moment, attempting to find some instance of their relationship within the memories she had with her, unknowingly dragging her further into the delusion it held. “M-Mistress,” She eventually replied, recalling the mare she loved to submit to as she looked back into her grey-blue eyes, partially lit by the glow of her horn.

“Better,” Starlight replied, then summoned a paddle from her magic, inciting another cute, fearful gasp from the submissive mare under her. She stepped back off the bed get some distance while the paddle slowly crawled towards the soft flank of the Princess of Love, eventually touching the right cheek and faintly pressing into it while sliding across it.

A small whimper escaped Cadance’s lips, her eyes clenched shut in fear for the swift attack she knew was going to come, though only a soft, teasing pressure grazed across her plot. Several seconds passed with those movements, then stopping when the paddle pulled away, leaving her glutes twitching as she attempted to keep them loose despite the immense terror and arousal she felt.

The alicorn’s thoughts weren’t going to come true just yet as the paddle lightly teased her left cheek next, another gasp and whimper leaving her as she she shook uncontrollably. She desperately wanted that burning pain she found in her memories to envelop her ass and spike into her sex, the stiff paddle that would then graze it would drive her crazy with the torturous pleasure and the dissonance between the harsh, yet gentle motions.

The winged mare’s thoughts were suddenly torn apart when the light pressure quickly fled, and faint whistling signifying the paddle’s deft retreat, a slight pause occurring before it came back and smacked straight into her plot. A sharp crack of impact echoed through the room, quickly outshone by a high-pitched squeal that lasted for a few moments, then faded to be followed by quivery breaths and fluttering wing-twitches. The paddle came down again soon after, another loud smack and squeal breaking the air, though the latter was starting to mix with a moan.

Cadance was left to heave shaky breaths, her eyes wide open with pinpricked pupils as she felt a burning sensation begin to encompass her flank, soon gaining a spike of pain in the center of her left cheek that made her hiss in fear and pain. That spike of pain pressed slightly harder into her soft plot cheek with a rounded edge, her hiss loudening and eyes snapping shut in a vain attempt to soften the pain, but still she completely accepted the punishment her mistress had for her.

“Your ass is so soft, you know that Cady?” Starlight quipped as she continued to graze the pink butt before her, making its owner blush harder and press her head into the pillow it was on. “Bet your husband has had a lot of fun with this cushion, hm?” She teased, the other mare twisting her head to push her face into the pillow and closing up her wings to try to avoid the shame, but she still heard the cackle her Mistress got out of that action.

The alicorn didn’t have much time to think before the paddle fled and came down on her flank again, and again, and again. Loud shrieks of pain and smacks of contact filled the room with little breathing room between spanks, the shameful squeals getting even moreso as lust started to pervade them. The harsh strikes and torrid burning on her butt felt so painful, yet, for a reason she couldn’t determine, it also felt so incredibly arousing and made her sex start to leak its juices.

“You’re liking this, aren’t you?” The dominant unicorn asked in a far from questioning tone while she paused her assault, causing her slave to rest there for a moment as she caught her breath, before shaking her head in denial. “Liar. I can see your pussy just begging for attention,” She scolded, pressing the edge of the paddle into the puffy snatch that glistened with marejuice, forcing a tense, muffled moan from its owner.

“Hmm, I wonder...” Starlight muttered after a few moments, then pressed the glowing paddle harder into her slave’s sex. Said slave’s moan quickly grew in tension and volume, and she soon tried to close her legs to stop the teasing, but cyan magic wrapped around them and pulled them right back open. “No,” The Mistress stated, pushing the paddle even harder, which started to enter the pussy with a wet squish. “You’re going to take this like the obedient slave that you are,” She commanded as the edge of the paddle fully entered the tunnel, a light gasp braking the tense moaning for a moment at its insertion.

Cadance’s voice completely stopped as she felt the thick, stiff concoction of magic push further and further into her nethers, its arcane nature seeming to spark electricity across its surface and into the nerves of the flaming and pulsating tunnel that surrounded them, making the pleasure nearly overwhelming. The languid thrusting stretched her depths out pleasurably as well, though the low speed at which it was going wasn’t quite giving her what she needed.

“P-please,” The alicorn uttered, taking her mouth away from the pillow and looked back at the cruel expression on her Mistress’s face.

“’Please’?” Said Mistress then asked while slowly starting to twist the paddle as she kept thrusting it, “Please what?”

The added sensation pushed the submissive mare even closer to orgasm, though with how it still remained out of reach, it felt more teasing and torturous that gratifying. “P-please, harder...” She whimpered, and, seeing the raised eyebrow from the unicorn, added, “M-Mistress.”

Starlight looked at her slave for a moment, examining her desperate expression and utterly submissive posture, then looked up at tapped a hoof to her chip, seemingly in thought. “Hmm...” She murmured, closing her eyes and dragging the process out further for several seconds, before eventually looking back at the taunted pony’s face and stating, “No.”

Cadance gasped faintly in surprise and gained a pleading expression as she looked back and asked, “’N-no’?”

“No,” The Mistress replied calmly, then deftly pulled the paddle out, making it scrape against the inside of her slave’s sex and exit with a wet slurp, the blistering mix of pain and pleasure sending her oh-so-close to the razor’s edge of orgasm. A hearty gasp was let out from the pull and was followed by heavy, breathless moans and quick, uncontrolled wing-beats as their progenitor tried to collect herself, the teasing having thoroughly lashed her mind.

“Remember,” The dominant mare started with a stern tone, and continued slowly, “This is your, punishment.” She finished with a firm spank of the wet paddle against the plump flank, an enticing blend of a gasp and moan echoing the sharp slap.

“I-I’m s-sorry,” The winged mare whimpered as she tried again to calm herself. “Y-you may c-continue your, punishment...” She stuttered out, looking away and closing her twitchy wings to try to hide her embarrassment.

A sinister chuckle was all her warning before multiple more powerful swings of the paddle came down on her ass, a rhythm of whooshing wind, loud cracks of contact, and pained moans started, the occasional chuckle of malice from the Mistress or pause to further tease the receiving mare.

The blazing pain on her butt completely suffocated Cadance, leaving her only able to take in the torturous flames while unable to perceive the blurry, wetted visage before her, the stiff twitches of her lustfully engorged wings, or the drenched sex betwixt her hind legs as her body continued to fully respond to the kinky beating it was getting. Even when the beating stopped, she could hardly tell the difference as she was left panting lustfully while the mare behind her watched her sopping and throbbing sex with a sadistic expression.

Only after many seconds did the submissive alicorn come back to her senses at all, letting her notice the lack of cracking on her flank, making her slowly turn her head back to look at her Mistress while whimpering in need. At the other pony’s callous raised eyebrow, she muttered through pants, “Puh-please... M-more...”

Starlight grinned at the broken tone and expression of her slave, then started to leer at her while pulling the paddle back to show the immense amount of fluids that covered it. “’More’?” She asked deridingly, “What makes you think you deserve that?”

“You’ve... already p-punished me...” The needy mare gasped out, gaining a pleading expression as she continued to shake from the teased pleasure.

A mock thoughtful look adorned the unicorn while gazing back at the very non-Princess-looking Princess before her, then turned her attention to her plot. The cheeks there, usually a light orchid colour was now a bright crimson, though the cyan glow that was the only notable light source made it appear grey-blue, twitched with repeated and uncontrolled tensing and relaxing to make them jiggle tantalizingly. So much so that her lilac hoof soon wade its way towards the plush pillow with intention to feel the softness and tease its owner, and it did eventually make contact.

A desperate, tortured hiss escaped Cadance as she felt the hoof graze her flaming rear, the faint pressure spiking the pain and forcing her eyes to snap open and her mouth to clench shut while the rest of her body completely stiffened. “That may be true...” She heard the sadistic mare behind her say. “But are you really sure you deserve the pleasure of orgasm?” She taunted, pressing her hoof harder into her slave’s soft, blistering flank.

The harder pressure turned the alicorn’s hiss into a squeal, her body beginning to shake again as her eyes rolled up into her head, her pussy throbbing and gushing even harder as she was brought onto the knife’s edge of release, yet was denied access when the hoof pulled away to leave her gasping and panting in unrestrained lust. “Y-yes, I-I’m sure, M-Mistress,” She stuttered out, and paused for a moment before continuing to beg, “P-please, I-I’ve been a-a good girl... a-and took my p-punishment... haven’t I?”

Starlight turned her head to ‘think’ once more, if only to appreciate the broken mess of a mare before her, then finally relented, “I suppose so.” However, her final act of granting her slave release was far more than pleasant, as she took the paddle left floating in the air beside her and lowered it to leave its tip just above her thighs and moved it forward right behind the alicorn, then swung hard.

None of the air in the room was spared from shattering by the deafening shriek that erupted because of that paddle, its mark being made right on the snatch of Princess Cadance. Her release being granted with such violence forced noise from her throat that was infused with incredible pleasure and pain, the similar deluge of fluid from her sex splattering all over the bed and the crackling fireworks that erupted from her horn showered the room in multicoloured light.

The unicorn, meanwhile, watched on in mild astonishment, the copious amount of marecum spraying from her new slave’s honeypot matting her fur and the fluffy blanket below, all the while having to flatten her ears to help quiet the screaming and crackling. it continued for a long while, the loud noise ringing her ears so much that she began to develop a headache, and couldn’t tell how long it had been when the noise finally stopped and its progenitor flopped onto the mattress in unconsciousness.

The mare then was left holding a hoof to her head in an attempt to help curb the migraine and ringing ears, scrunching her eyes shut while inclined forward in pain. Some more time passed before it started to subside and let her open her eyes, seeing the fallen alicorn in front of her, and even through the aching fog, she couldn’t resist a mental quip of ‘Pathetic.’

When the inaffable effluvium finally lifted, Starlight fully stood up and examined the mess of a Princess that lay on the bed, the literal pints of fluid that ejected from her sex still lay in the covers between her hind legs, its musk suffusing the room and flooding the nostrils of the awake pony. Said pony started to walk around her winged counterpart, taking in the fully spread and flaccid wings, the utterly exhausted body that rose and fell with each slow breath, the frazzled mane, matted with sweat, and the partially gaping mouth that was covered in slobber.

The pink mare hopped onto the tall bed and sat down on a pillow right in front of the alicorn, smirking at the utter lack of dignity she possessed. “You Princesses always look so high and mighty on the outside,” She begun taunting, “Yet, behind all of that power and prestige, you’re just as pathetic as as everypony else.” She soon realized there was a prominent wetness between her own hind legs as she started to lean forward, prompting her to sigh in mild exasperation and note, “Can’t even stay awake long enough to get me off, can you?”

Sighing heavily, the unicorn leaned back into the backboard of the bed to try to take care of her own needs, but before she could begin, the main doors started to open, and white stallion with a blue mane entered.