When The Broken Rise
Arrival
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Yes, I know I shouldn't post a new story. But this was inspired by AkumaKami64's Cyoa prompt, The Alicorn King. I was also having a bad day and finally writing this made me feel better. I hope that I can get back to my other stuff soon. My writer's block has been acting up plus things have been very busy lately. I am often too tired to write. I hope this finds everypony well and I have nothing but best wishes for everypony for the upcoming year.
ALL HAIL THE HOUSE OF REN.
Arrival
He was alone, searching through the detritus of his former life. His sister was gone, vacated to find the family she'd always wanted.
"Can't say I blame her," He lamented as he searched through what was left to sell, "Mom was the one the held us together. And there is no way I would want her to wallow with me."
Scavenging within the leftovers of his life, he pulled a dull crown from a box marked, 'Expendables.'
Rubbing it lightly, he examed the dull grey thing, "To light to be Iron, to dull to be Steel."
A Black stone adorned the crown, "It's more a circlet, really. Hold on. What's this?"
Whispers of shadow and waves of darkness shimmered over the crown. Pouring onto his skin, the man cast out the crown. Only to find it stuck fast to his hand. Shades rose up from the concrete floor of his garage, no sound arising from their passing. Strange things watched him from the sidelines, never entering his line of site. Their chitterings and scuttlings revealing their presence. A voice echoed out, dire in its pronouncement.
"Let the one of Hektonhere bred, join those that call for him."
"Let The Master of Dark Magic take his throne."
"Let The Alicorn of the Broken rise."
Yet for all this, a fascination had settled over the man. Placing the circlet upon his head, the shadows and darkness claimed their Prince.
Pain pierced his head as he opened his eyes once again. Slamming them shut once more, he groaned.
"Oh come on you big baby, the transmutation wasn't that taxing." A low baritone rumbled, "You are seriously taking away from my snuggle time with Fluttershy and that just won't do."
Opening his eyes once again, he slowly began to take stock of his surroundings.
- He was in the comfiest bed he'd ever had the privilege to be in.
- He was not alone.
- Person meant him no immediate harm.
- An extra pair of arms and what felt like four sets of wings had been added to his body.
Easing himself upwards, he gazed upon the sole other occupant of the bed-chamber. It was a serpentine creature with the head of a goat, a paw of a lion, an eagle talon, a dragon's leg, a donkey's leg, and a superbly sinuous tale. The mismatched horns of a deer and a croked unicorn's horn adorned his face. The creature smiled at him, showing one snaggletooth among many sharp teeth.
"Alright," He groaned, "How much fucking drugs and alcohol did I ingest last night that Discord turned me into a self insert?"
Raising his top set of arms to his forehead, he felt twin intertwined Unicorn horns, "And why am I twice as horny as I was yesterday? What is this double the pleasure, double the fun?"
"Heh, I like you," The debonair deity of chaos chuckled, "But I am afraid no drugs and/or alcohol was responsible for this."
The man raised his eyes to glare at Discord, "What did you fucking do?"
Discord rubbed his lion's paw against the back of his neck, "It was from before Fluttershy befriended me. A leftover plot that I could never locate. The idea of a crown sent out into the entirety of the multiverse. Each version of it only becoming real when picked up by a Male."
"So, it turned me into the male of a species that only has females?"
"You are correct sir!" Discord guffawed, shifting into a suit and tie as confetti fell from the ceiling.
"And why don't you tell me what I've won?"
Discords smile threatened to split his head, "At last an Alicorn with a sense of humor!"
Darting forward, Discord pressed the tip of his eagle talon against the man's forehead.
Clutching his head once more, Prince Malem shook himself.
"Holy Shit did I go Edgelord!" he critiqued, "grab me a mirror, I need to see the damage."
Discord chuckled as he poofed Prince Malem into the center of a wring of mirrors.
"Standing an incredible 8" tall, weighing in at I don't care. His white eyes see things unseen, his unkempt grey coat and white hair mean he has more important things on his mind. I give you, your new body... PRINCE MALEM!!!!!"
"And I went for the dark tower, decided I wanted to bang Chrysalis for all eternity, plus went as dark as I could without actively being on the side of the caribou. Who will be showing up in a couple of years. Plus Monsters. I enjoy a dual aspect in Necromancy and Biomancy, plus lesser aspects in Darkness, Shadows, and Blood. And I made all Equestrians vaguely slutty. And Anthro. With no limit on Magic. What in the fuck is wrong with me?"
Discord patted the newly born Alicorn on the shoulder, "If it makes you feel any better, you did improve me and Fluttergirls snuggle time."
"Oh god please tell me you're getting your Draconoquess Dick wet with Fluttershy. After all the shit you've been through the both of you deserve some happiness."
"And what makes you think I will answer such a disrespectful question?" Discord snarled.
Malem snorted, "Just stop man. We both know that I am the only one that can talk to you like this. And that you love it. Because even though Spike and Big Mac are your bros, there are still lines they would be too terrified to cross. I chose to be the Alicorn of the Broken for a reason. I can recognize a fellow clusterfuck of a shitshow. We can save the niceties for out in public. Besides your reaction told me everything. Good on you. I expect to be godfather to the child. Now if you'll excuse me, I have a Changeling Queen to make my submissive."
Discord shook his head, "Good Luck. I am sure Chrysi will be all lined up for that."
Malem smiled nastily, "Discord, you're forgetting one simple thing."
"And what is that? Oh Prince My Prince."
"You didn't limit any knowledge I have from my previous existence, plus I now have the resources to exploit them."
With that Malem strode from his room, pausing only to throw on a pair of pants and a jacket. He winked at the horrified Discord, as the door slammed behind him. Leaving one shell shocked Lord of Chaos behind."
"Oh Dear Celestia," He muttered, "What have I done?"
Dried rock crumbled under my feet, the shadows allowing me to approach silently. A little Biomancy and my smell was undetectable. A few other tweaks to myself and the changelings in the area lit up like bonfires to my senses.
I love stacking the deck in my favor. This is to easy.
Reaching the entrance to my Queen's hidey hole, I announced myself.
"Prince Malem, Alicorn of the Broken, demands an audience with Queen Chrysalis."
The words reverberated into the caverns.
"Who Dares Demand Anything of Queen Chrysalis?" My soon to be bride replied.
"I am the first Male Alicorn," I clarified, "And You Will Be My Bride!"
Silence echoed throughout. Her brood held back, unsure what to do without orders from their Queen.
Good, I chuckled, Their lack of initiative will bind them and their Queen to me better than any chain.
A dark figure strutted towards me. She was thin, but still had the vestiges of the curves that had made her a beauty. Her dark chiton glimmered through the thin gauze she wore to keep away the chill. Her blue hair hang loosely around her shoulders, knots beginning to form.
"I admit you are easy on the eyes," Chrysalis purred, "But what makes you think that I will marry such as you. Shall I become some thing to warm your bed, only to be troted out to display your power. You think to highly of yourself."
"You shall definitely warm my bed," I sneer back, "But why would I display my greatest asset to my enemies?"
Chyrsalis stepped back, her cheeks flush. Sniffing the air, she considered my words.
"I would be your greatest Asset?" She inquired, "How?"
"I need both infiltrators and a companion." I smile, "And I think your assets fit on both those bills."
"You intend to take over Equestria?"
I shook my head, "I intend to save Equestria. Dark times are coming. I don't have the time or the luxury of being noble about it. Something I think you can understand."
Stepping closer to her, I bowed slightly. Shifting my magic into myself, I changed myself further. Chemical processes clicked into place, a musk beginning to ensare the changeling Queen.
Chrysalis shook her head, "What..... are... you?"
I smiled as the changelings around me wavered, "I told you that I neither had the time nor luxury to be noble. You're the first piece of the puzzle. And know that I have you and your unaltered changelings, Equestria has a chance.
More of my Musk wrapped itself around Chrysalis' mind. She began to waver as I detect several of her brood jump the others. The slapping of flesh on flesh and an exact copy of my musk wafting down to us.
"I... won't... submit," She replied, even as we could both smell her arousal.
Stepping forward again, I grasped her in my arms, stealing just a bit of her life force she crumpled into my arms. Kissing her firmly on the mouth, I wrapped my tongue around hers. My saliva modified to be slightly addictive. Tearing the gauze from her I spun her around. With my top arms, I pushed her against the wall of the cave. My lower arms freed my cock.
"I am going to make you beg to take me inside you," I snarled into her ear, "I will not put it in till you do."
Pulling her back, I lifted her upwards. My lower arms held her in place, as I ground my erection against her pussy. My upper arms traced her breasts, rubbing her nipples ever so lightly. My lower arms shifted downwards as I began to finger fuck Chrysalis.
"I... Don't... Beg..." She moaned.
I laughed, swaddling her in more of my musk I felt the first of her orgasms. Her buddy shuddered and shook, her pussy dripping with moisture.
"You will not cum again until you do," I whispered into her ear.
Not bothering to hide the purple glow of my magic anymore, I halted her ability to finish. While also cranking up her body's sensitivity to pleasure.
Chrysalis shrieked as my hands continued their molestations, her tongue fell from her mouth as her eyes lost focus.
"Please let me cum." She begged, "I need to cum so badly."
"Not until you beg for me to slam my cock deep inside you," I sighed into her ear, "Not until you beg me to finish deep inside you."
"Take my ass," She bartered, "Cum inside my ass."
"I intend to," I teased, "But today I will Cum deep inside that pretty Changeling Pussy."
"I might get pregnant," She moaned, "I'm fertile."
"I know," I mutter into her ear, "I intend to make you a mommy. You and many others. I have to start my dynasty somewhere. I just wanted you to be the first. To be the mother of my oldest.
The prospect of being the mother of my oldest child further aroused her. Reaching over her head, she brought her lips to mine. Our second kiss was electric as she gave in to my demands.
"Do it," She begged, "Please cum deep inside me. Knock me up! Please I need the release. But you better take responsibility."
Lifting her up slightly, I slid into her depths. THe both of us moaned as our combined sex smells spread to all present changelings.
Looks like I won't be the only one starting a family I smiled as I heard several of the couples finish.
Bending Chrysalis over, until her hands and feet rested against the ground. I proceeded to pound her. All four of my hands roamed her body as I continued to piston into her. Dropping the restriction on her Orgasms, Chrysalis' pussy clenched tightly around my cock. The pulsing velvet warmth drove me over to the edge as I emptied myself into the well-fucked Queen. Withdrawing from her, I smiled as she fell to the ground. The once-proud Changeling Queen humming contently as she used her finger to hold my seed inside her. I knelt down and stroked her cheek. She purred as she nuzzled against my hand.
"Gather your people," I said gently, "It is time for them and you to come home.
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