A Demon’s Rise

by LazyChaoticUmbreon

Rating: teen
Tags: Discord, Violence, Princess Celestia, Sex, Human, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Princess Luna, Original Character, Science Fiction, Comedy, Tragedy, Profanity
Length: 878

Some Demons run head first into their problems, but this demon does something much, much worse.

Shadow Demon, the conquerer of Hell, slayer of the gods, and many other titles he has never nor will ever care about. Being defeated in his world he seeks a way back to his home and take revenge on the ones who wronged him. First he must deal with the discrimination.

This is a complete overhaul of an old fix I had written awhile ago. Originally I scrapped this, but I thought I would bring it back.

Published 2021-03-05 06:50:00 UTC
Last updated 2021-06-26 05:30:23 UTC

Chapter 1: Shadow Demon

Dragon Lands

The molten rocky, heated, and dead wasteland that was the Dragon lands was a danger in its self. Dragons lived in these wastes and to most creatures it was insane to even think someone could survive in these conditions, but to the Dragons it was perfect.

Somewhere in the Dragon lands a portal opened and a creature was tossed from it. Landing hard onto the ground with a metallic thud.

It had the body of a dragon, but it walked on all fours and was not bipedal like the others that lived there. It had grey metal like scales and a black under belly. It had two ears on its head and two large horns behind its ears and two smaller ones next to the others. It had a tail blade in the shape of a scythe.

The Dragon opened its blue glowing eyes as the portal closed behind it. The dragon slowly stood up as its it surveyed its surroundings.

“Where am I?” It spoke aloud turning out to be a dragoness as her voice sounded cold and robotic sounding. She looked at her surroundings seeing nothing but molten rock and lava.

“Your in our turf. That’s where you are.” A male voice said as she looked behind her and found three bipedal dragons behind her.

The first dragon had red scales and an orange under belly orange fins on top of his head. His tail ended in an arrow.

The other one to his left had brown scales and had two big light blue horns with a tail that ended with a ball with spikes resembling a mace. The last of the group to his right had purple scales reminding her of a certain purple dragon that she had a bone to pick with for what he did. With the purple scales he had what looked like hair on top of his head covering his eyes. This one however had a tail that ended like a normal tail.

She sat on her back legs further examining the group before her. Not noticing that they were trying to get her attention. It took a flick to the head did she then snap out of her trance.

“What is a dragoness such as you doing all the way out here?” The red drake said.

“And who might you be?” The dragoness said.

“I’m Garble and these are my....companions.” The red drake now identified as Garble. “And what might your name be little missy?” Garble said taking a step closer to her.

“My name is Dark Cloud and if you will excuse me I have somewhere to be.” Dark Cloud said as she stood up and tried to make her way past them but the two quiet ones quickly haunted that motion.

“Hold up. We aren’t done yet. You have yet to answer my question.” He said.

“And you haven’t asked me yet. What’s your point?” Dark Cloud asked.

“Well it’s just what’s a pretty dragoness, such as you self, doing all the way out here?” The red drake asked starting to trace his finger across Cloud’s chest and neck that if she did or could or had any knowledge, would have ran as far away as possible from the situation.

“I was on an assignment given to me by my commanding officer, but hindrances keep popping up preventing me from completing my task.” She explained completely unaware of what the red drake was doing until she felt him rub his finger lower down her body and in which she punched him in the face shoving him off of her and tackling him to the ground.

“While I am flatter by your advances on me and while my master had given me the ability to reproduce and to feel everything that comes with such a freedom, that doesn’t mean I and stupid enough to know what your doing.” Dark Cloud put her paw in front of his face as her left fore leg shifted into her arm and a device that replaced where her claw used to be. “This device here burns hotter than the magma pools around you and is used to make sure that beams of metal stay glued together, but not once have I ever tried it on any living thing because my creator doesn’t allow it. But he’s not here to stop me.” Cloud said with her emotionless sounding voice.

She brought the torch closer to his hand until it touched his scales which he figured out didn’t hurt. He was relieved until he felt a sudden surge in the heat and it started to melt the scale on his claw away as well as his whole claw. As cloud just stood there with an neutral expression on her face as she secretly relished in his girlish screams. After a couple of minutes that felt like hours she let off of him.

Seeing her handing work she looked at the other two who raise their claws and backed away. As she got closer she noticed that height difference. She was shorter by their standards. They both quickly rushed to their friends aid. Unknowingly to Dark Cloud she now had a target on her hide for what she did.

Chapter 2: End The Beggining

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