Territory laws and policies

by Mpony1

Rating: mature
Tags: Sunset Shimmer, Anthro, Diamond Dogs, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Rarity, Porn, Sex, Slice of Life
Length: 4161

Rarity gets taken by the Diamond Dogs and held prisoner and its up to Princess Sunset Shimmer to save her, but its not going to be that simple.

This story is based during the events of chapter 28 of Sunsets Herd by madhat886

Its not necessary to read the chapter or the whole story to understand whats going on here, but I do highly recommend giving madhat story a read, its really good.

Equestrian Princess and Governess of Ponyville, Sunset Shimmer, just learned from Spike that Rarity had been kidnap by some Diamond Dogs, while the two were out digging for gems. She quickly realize that Rarity wasn't kidnap but instead was taken prisoner for stealing the Diamond Dogs gems on their land.

Sunset fully believes Rarity is a no good thief and deserves to be punish for her crimes. Twilight doesn't believe she's a thief and shouldn't be treated as such.

Who is right and who is wrong? Did Rarity purposely tried to steal from The Diamond Dogs or not?

Warning story contains: Futa's on futa, gangbang, excessive cumming, inflations

This Story was inspired by the arguments I had with another reader named MegaMasterKing in the comments section of chapter 28 of Sunset's Herd. We both gave very good valid points on Rarity situation and I just wanted to express all that in this story.

Published 2021-04-09 16:30:01 UTC
Last updated 2021-04-09 16:30:01 UTC

This land is their land

Author's Note

Note: Everypony and Diamond Dog are female futa's; with a cock, balls, and pussy.

Meaning all male characters ar female futa versions of themselves.

Sunset Shimmer however is still in her human form, but she does have wings, a horn, she's somewhat taller and larger then normal, and also have a cock and balls along with her pussy.

More importantly the world of "Sunsets Herd" is a sex free world. Where everybody can have sex with one another anytime they want. Sex is a big, natural part of everyday life. But even a world like this have laws and give out punishment to those who cause trouble.

Note: Since the word "Diamond Dogs" get used a lot, i'm gonna shorten it to "DD'S" at some point.

This land is their land

In the Golden Oaks Library bedroom, Indigo Zap, Sugarcoat, Sour Sweet, Lemon Zest and Sunny Flare all watched as their princess fucks her aide’s brains out. Being Batponies their cocks are much larger than most earth ponies, all being 24 inches in size with different thickness for each of them. And each of them had already filled up Twilight’s cunt full of their first load of cum, leaving Sunset to have sloppy seconds just like she likes it. Sunset wasn’t alone as she had Moondancer joined her in fucking Twilight who has her cock buried in Twilight’s cunt that’s already stuffed with Sunset’s cock. Both of them made Twilight scream as they pump their cocks into her with both of them making it so that when one cock goes in the other goes out. With Sunset bending down to drink from Moondancers breasts drinking her milk, to get a intake of fluids.

While they wait they’re busy having fun with their princess other herd members. Minuette, Lemon Hearts, Twinkleshine, Lyra Heartstrings, Derpy, and Bon Bon. All of them are on their hands and knees on the floor around the bed being fucked by one of the Shadowbolts. All waiting for their turn to join their princess on the bed. Sunset wants to introduce all of her herdmates her new cock and doing it in small groups, where her new bodyguards also get to introduce themselves to them, namely introducing them to their massive and powerful cocks.

“THEY GOT HER!” Spike shouted as he bursted into the room.

“What happen now?” Sunset asked wondering what kind of a mess Rarity got herself into as that’s what usually happens around here.

“Diamond dogs!” Spike shouted.

With a sigh Sunset pulls herself out of Twilight, flew over and landed in front of the panicking dragon, knelt down, and place a gentle hand on his shoulder to try and calm him down. “Take deep breaths and try to relax." Spke did as Sunset said doing the breathing exercises Cadance thought Twilight. Once Sunset noticed he was calm enough she said. 'Now start at the beginning.”

"Ok!" Spike said calmly. Everyone in the room had their attention on Spike as he began to explain things. Turns out that Sapphire Shores, the Pony of Pop, has just commissioned Rarity to design five costumes for her upcoming tour. There's just one problem; Shores wants them to be covered in gems, and Rarity had just gone through the last of her stock. In order to satisfy Shores' order, she goes gem-hunting with Spike in a nearby quarry. While Rarity casts Detect Gem with her horn, Spike digs up the caches of gems she finds. And that’s when the Diamond dogs grab her.

"I tried to fight them off but their were 3 of them and they were much stronger then me. Once they got me out of the way long enough, I could do nothing but watch as they drag Rarity underground." Spike held his head down in shame, mad at himself for failing to protect Rarity. He raised his head up again to look at Sunset. "I wanted to try and go save her, but I knew I wouldn't stand a chance, so I ran back here to get you guys so we can save her together."

"And we will!" Sunset acknowledge. "But first I need a better understanding of the situation." Sunset turned and walked towards her book shelf.

"A better understanding?" Spike asked Confused. "What's their to understand? Rarity was kidnapped and we need to go save her."

Upon reaching the shelf Sunset search through it, all while still talking to spike. "I know that's what it look like but Its probably not what was happening....ah ha! Here it is." Sunset pulled out a large scroll from the shelf and then walked over to her desk, where she opened up, and laid it upon it.

Spike was still confused. "What do you mean? I know what I saw! What makes you think she wasn't kidnap?"

"That's what you're gonna help me solve. Now come over here and look at this."

Spike rush over to the desk and hop up on the chair to get a better view. On the desk was a geological map of the are surrounding ponyville.

"Now I know Twilight had thought you about geography and how to read maps. I also know that you're very good at reading these kinds of maps. Now I want you to show me where exactly you two were digging gems."

Spike took a look at the map. It wasn't hard to read and it was very well detailed. With his knowledge and sense of direction it didn't take long for Spike to point out the exact location where he and Rarity were digging.

"Here!" Spike tap the spot on the map. The location he pointed to wasn't even that far from Ponyville. "That's where we were digging and where Diamond Dogs drag Rarity underground."

Sunset took a look at the spot that Spike pointed to and immediately understood the situation at hand.

"Ah! So that explains everything." Sunset said.

Twilight walk up and spoke. "So what's going on Sunset?"

Sunset points to spot on the map that Spike showed her. “This is where she was digging up gems? That’s where the Diamond dogs live, so they’re just imprisoning a thief,” Sunset said after having Spike show her where he and Rarity were digging for gems on the map.

"Theif?!" Question Spike. Shock at hearing what Sunset just said.

"Yes Spike. You and Rarity were digging on Diamond Dogs territory. This whole area here," Sunset gestures to the huge spot on the map. "belongs to the them, that especially includes all the gems buried there. In other words you two were stealing their property and they took Rarity to punish her for her crimes."

Spike look dejected. He didn't know they were stealing from the Diamond Dogs. He knows that the gems, like the Apple Family apples. Are their lively hood. The DD'S use the gems to trade for food and other needs. No different than AJ selling her Apples.

The thought that he was helping Rarity steal from them made him sad, angry, and betrayed. He never would of imagine that the beautiful, gorgeous, generous Rarity would do such a thing and use him for her scheme, but one thought bother him.

"Sunset?"

"hmm"

"Why didn't they take me to? I was helping Rarity dig for the gems. So doesn't that mean I'm just as guilty?"

Sunset shook her head. "No Spike! They wouldn't blame you for Rarity crimes."

"But why?" Asked Spike.

"Its no doubt that the three that took Rarity, were watching you two gather gems before striking. Trying to understand the situation. They saw you a baby dragon being led around by a full grown mare. Since you are just a kid, they couldn't punish you in accordance to their laws. The best they could do is send you back home. But since Rarity was their, using her magic to find the gems and have you dig them up, they clearly saw a mare using a naive little kid to help her steal from them. In other words you were innocent, so they had no reason to take you.

Spike simply nodded in understanding.

“So what do we do now?” Twilight asked.

Sunset let out a deep sigh. “I need to go and talk with the Diamond dogs Pack leader, Polly” Sunset said. "I want to see how long their planning on keeping Rarity prisoner. Seeing that this is her first offense (I hope) they should only hold her for a day making her work their mines....that or fuck her." Sunset shrugs. She then walk over to her closet to put on some casual clothing. Since she will be heading underground soon, wearing a formal dress doesn't seem like a good idea.

All I wanted was to spend the day fucking my herd with my brand new dick. Was that too much to ask. Sunset thought as she selected T-shirt and jeans and began putting them on.

The Shadow Bolts also went about putting their clothes on. As Sunsets personal body guards its their duty to escort her wherever she goes especially when visiting another country. Even if said country is literally right next door to the town their in and is a decent size of land within Equestria itself.

"Is it ok if we come along?" Asked Bon Bon.

"Sure why not." Answered Sunset.

Her herd started grabbing their clothes and getting dress. Once everyone was fully dress they left the library and headed straight to Diamond Dogs land.

As they walk everyone chatted with one another. All except for Twilight her mind been on other things since they left the library.

She was behind the group as they walk, moving at a good enough pace so she wouldn't lag too far behind. She was deep in thought about something and Spike was the only one to notice that something was troubling her. He lived with Twilight his whole life to know the signs, so he slowed his pace a bit to walk next to his sister/mother.

"Is everything ok Twilight?" Spike asked.

Twilight snap back to reality and look down at Spike. "Oh umm! Yeah, maybe, I don't know!"

"What's got you all bothered?"

"Its about Rarity! You don't really believe she's a thief, that she would actually steal The Diamond Dogs gems on purpose do you?"

Spike took some time to think about that before answering. "To be honest I did felt betrayed earlier, after what Sunset said. The thought that Rarity would use me to help her steal, made me angry but at the same time, I can't see Rarity doing such a thing."

Twilight nodded. "I feel the same way. Rarity doesn't seem like the type of pony who would steal from others like that."So the question is why did she take the DD's gems?She thought.

Twilight tried to figure out this complex puzzle. She doesn't believe that Rarity was a thief at all, yet she was caught on DD territory and was illegally digging up their gems. She can't deny the evidence in front of her, but she had a gut feeling that Rarity is innocent in all this, she just couldn't tell how.

Twilight looked back at Spike and asked him a question.

"Hey Spike! is this the first time you help Rarity with gem collecting?"

Spike shook his head. "No it's my second time helping her. Last time we collected some gems in a cave south of Ponyville, its a bit further away than the DD's land but still manageable on foot no problem."

"Then why didn't you two go back to the cave?"

"Rarity said that its mating season for the bats that live in there, and that it was too dangerous."

That's true. Bats during mating season can be very hostile to anyone who enters their nest. That would explain why Rarity would need to go and search for gems elsewhere. Earlier Spike said that Rarity used her gem detecting spell to find exactly where the gems were buried. Could it be possible that she used the same spell to locate another nearby source and follow the trail till she ended up in the DD's territory, if so then that only leaves one last question that need to be answered.

Did Rarity know she was digging on The DD's land or not?

All evidence points to"yes" It's basic knowledge that the DD's live within Equestrian territory, unlike the other races that live outside it. All young foals are thought about the other races and where they live in school. You're also shown a map of the world that shows you exactly where each race resides. A special map was made to help show exactly where the DD's live, considering their given land isn't as big as the others; it was the same map Sunset showed Spike earlier.

So their shouldn't be no reason for Rarity to not know such common information.....Right!? Yet despite all that Twilight still can't help but feel something is wrong about all this. She still strongly believes that Rarity is innocent in all this, she just doesn't know how exactly.

Sunset and Co. Soon left Ponyville. The DD's land wasn't far and they would soon arrived there shortly. Twilight, still believing in her friend continues to try and figure out the mystery behind why she was stealing The DD's gems. She could only hope she could come up with a strong argument to help support her case.

Diamond Dog Tunnels -

Rarity had thought that by whining she would be able to get the Diamond dogs to release her when they tried to use her to find more gems for them, as well as buy herself some time until Spike comes back with their friends and rescue her.

But sadly her whining didn't stop them as she had hope. They no longer wanted to make work the mines, so Instead they just decide to have their way with her. The Diamond dogs like ponies are a futa race. Powerful hands were planted firmly on her shoulders and when she looked up, all she saw was the red stomach of one of the dogs. The red tip of her cockhead already poked out of its sheath right towards her face. With a groan of frustration, Rarity reluctantly leaned forward to lick the cock head. The dog growled approvingly above her as more and more cock slid out of the sheath.

The cock tasted foul to Rarity, but she knew she had to continue on. Her lips opened wide to take in that thick cock. Her head was suddenly slammed forward forcing all of the cock into her mouth at once. One of the other dogs had rammed into her pussy with her giant cock with such vengeance that Rarity’s muffled scream about the rod in her mouth could be heard echoing throughout the tunnels.

It continued to get worse and worse for Rarity as she felt something big nudge against her lips. The Diamond dogs are just like their lower evolved cousins. The realization sank in fast, but not quick enough as the knot of the dog’s dick forced its way into her mouth. Her jaw strained as it opened wide to allow access to the thick knot before it popped in finally.
Rarity whimpered about the thick cock knit that is now behind her teeth. Her nose flared wide to take breaths in as the massive thick cock had slid down her convulsing throat forcibly. The burning heat of shame grew more intensely as she felt pleasure coursing through her. Even with the painful stretching of the knot pushing into her battered cock filled cunt, she felt the burning pleasure and ache for more. Both dogs were now locked in her and began to rapidly hump their hips as they laughed at her and growled with pleasure at this new bitch servicing them.

Rarity could only moan as she was rocked back and forth between the two dogs as the sweat poured off her body. Their powerful bodies giving them such power that she was helpless with her slender body. She looked like a piece of beautiful pale meat skewered on both ends by two hard throbbing rods. For minutes that seemed like hours, they fucked her twat and mouth relentlessly with heavy panting.

Soon she felt their bodies tense as they were about to cum. The cum erupted from both cocks as her body shook with the humiliating orgasm. Her throat gulped frantically to try and keep up as she felt her hot wet cunt filled to the brim. Her lithe body continued to shiver with her climax as she screamed nonstop about that invading hunk of cock. Rarity was forced to suffer this humiliation further as their cocks had to slowly soften and shrink before the knots locking them into her beautiful naked body let them slid out wetly.

Rarity didn't fight as two other dogs picked her up and placed her between them. Both of their massive cocks pointing to her cunt and butt. As one both thrust into her holes forcing the tight holes wide as their massive cocks powered into her. Rarity was forced to ride the tide as the two dogs pushed up into her, working against each other, with one pulling, the other pushing and repeating the order in inverse. Each thrust filled the hallway with the meaty smack of flesh smacking flesh.

Rarity’s pussy overflowed with her juices as she experienced the first of many orgasms, the flow spilling out and covering the cock and balls of the dog fucking her womanhood. This, of course caused the dog’s balls to wetly smack against the other dog’s balls, inspiring the dog in her ass to increase the force of her blows even more. The end result had Rarity’s mouth open, unable to contain her pleasure anymore as she panted openly from the intense double stimulation from both her ass and pussy.

Through this both dogs would issue out barks, urging the other on. The dog fucking Rarity’s asshole cupped the pony’s huge breasts, squeezing the jiggling tit flesh with every thrust of their hips. As that happened, the dog fucking her cock up into Rarity’s uterus grabbed a fistful of the pony’s now large ass cheeks, holding onto the pony, urging her faster down on her cock and spreading the cheeks even wider for the anal fucking dog.

It was a blur of activity, smacking flesh, splashing fluids, quivering sexes. As Rarity felt the bases of the cocks of the dogs begin to expand she experienced another earth shaking orgasm. Her thighs quaked around the dog underneath her, body shaking from intense pleasure. A flood of vaginal juices spewed from her twitching maidenhood, soaking the lap of the dog and making a puddle of sex juices on the floor.

Even as the dog’s knots locked in her ass and pussy she was experiencing another, much stronger orgasm. And then she was riding a tide of one intense orgasm after another as the dogs picked up their pace, their ability to thrust now much shorter now that their knots were in, but also much, much faster.

The rapid fire pace was working over her ass and pussy, causing her such intense pleasure that her vagina was experiencing one orgasm brought by her pussy being fucked, and one orgasm brought on by her ass being fucked, and then the process being repeated. In a matter of moments the world ceased to exist, the only sounds being Rarity’s pulse pounding her head, the only sights being white static before her eyes, and the only feelings being that of her ass and pussy being fucked by two huge, wonderful dog cocks.

The dogs didn't seem to mind, their attention solely focused on fucking the holy living hell out of the holes that they had chosen for their own. As their frantic pace reached a crescendo the pony could take no more and her eyes rolled into the back of her head. It was as darkness was creeping into her vision that she felt the first tidal wave of cum blast its way into her womb and colon, soon reaching such a volume that her stomach was forced to expand to make room for it.

“Rarity there you are,” Sunset said as she appeared with the pack leader of the Diamond Dogs. Her other friends are with her.

“Sunset you came to save me?” Rarity asked.

“I talked with Polly the leader of the Diamond dogs as made some agreements. In exchange for the gems they dig we provide them with goods like shipments of pigs and chickens for them to eat,” Sunset said making the dogs in the tunnel excited.

“And me?” Rarity asked.

“You were stealing their gems on their land. So after you services all the pack members you’re free to go along with the gems you came for,” Sunset said. (1)

“What?” Rarity ask her eye twitching as the pack is well over a hundred strong and she has heard how Diamond Dogs balls have large reserves and can pack any pony up with cum.

Her eyes darted around as she is surrounded by The horny pack of Diamond Dogs she supposedly stole from. All of them wanted a piece of her, to fuck her till their balls were completely empty.

Its extremely rare that the DD's ever get the chance to fuck a pony and they were going to enjoy fucking this one to the fullest.

“Sorry but you are the thief here,” Sunset said leaving with the others to talk with the elder of the pack over the trade deals and leaving Rarity to her punishment for stealing.

"Theif!? Sunset wait! What are yo- ahhhhh!!!!" Rarity didn't get the chance finish her question. Once the DD's were given the ok, they didn't hesitate to literally dog pile her as they began punish the fashionista who dared try and steal from them. By giving her a hard fucking by every single Diamond Dog and with over hundreds to satisfy. Rarity in for a long day.

Sunset and Co. Left the area but only Twilight stayed behind, feeling bad for her friend.

From the entrance tunnel, Twilight could see only small parts of Rarity as the other Daimond Dogs started to assume various strategic positions around her. She watched for a moment as an white shin and ankle protruded from the mass of bodies as one of the DD's slithered her hips brutally between Rarities legs. Wasting no time in fucking the hell out of her. Twilight then frowned as she heard Rarities screams turn to gasping grunts and one of the DD's at her head smile a relaxed, pleased smile.

"Oh Rarity! Unlike me and Applejack. I don't believe you deserve this." Twilight thought.

Twilight remembered how both she and Applejack face a similar punishment for all the trouble they had done to the citizens of Ponyville. Which is being brutally gangbang by everyone in town. Orderd by Sunset herself after she look up what punishments she could give out with the help of her moms and aunts. Applejack let her pride get the best of her by refusing help with the apple harvestings after Big Macky got hurt. Which in turn cause her to make a series mistakes that hurt the town due to her exhaustion. As for Twlight she made everypony in town set up things for when Princess Celestia and Molestia came to visit. Sunset told her that she didn't need to do that and that it was a waste of time. That the Princesses visit was a casual, unofficial one. But Twilight didn't listen and made everyone work their butts off for nothing. So as punishment she was to get her butt pounded by everyone in town and let them have their way with her. Twilight learned her lesson that day.

Twilight and Applejack's punishments were rightfully justified. They earned themselves being the center of those brutal gangbangs. But Twilight doesn't think that Rarity is in the same boat as they were. She doesn't believe Rarity is really a thief despite the evidence against her. She truly believes in Rarity innocences and after arriving here she was able to come up with a strong theory which could explain what really happened. All she needs to do now is tell Sunset. The sad part is. Twilight knows full well that this won't necessarily free or help Rarity. Thanks to the Diamond Dogs laws. But at least it could clear her name.

With new determination Twilight follows after the group to catch up with them. Hating to leave her friend behind to this fate as DD's have they way with her. Twilight will do everything in her power to clear her name. Afterall friendship is worth fighting for and Twilight will fight for her friend even if it means going up against another.