The Equestria evo hero

by Jayelms43

Rating: teen
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Death, Human, Anthro, Main 6, Princess Luna, Spike, Comedy, Violence, Princess Celestia, Big Macintosh, Gore
Length: 4970

The name is marquis Smith and I'm the evo hero of Equestria.

The name is marquis Smith and I'm the evo hero of Equestria, and this is my story on how I came to Equestria and help the Equestrian fight the caribou.

Also did I mention that I died and I meet god who sent me there.

Published 2021-03-14 17:10:01 UTC
Last updated 2021-04-14 13:56:56 UTC

Round 2 mark vs king Dainns three generals

Round 2 mark vs king Dainns three generals

(Mark pov)

Once I landed a good distance away I deactivate my creation before yelling out " I can see King Dainn didn't take my advice so he sent his three generals that is also his three sons out of the six so tell me boys are you ready to die or are you going to turn tail and run" I said to them they just stared at me before one of the three raise his right hand a piece of the earth came up beside him and he chucked it at me.

"Wait a minute that's not magic and that's not telekinesis neither this can only mean one thing these three have nanites like I do" I thought as the boulder came straight at me.

https://youtu.be/gWdm5CWKrwk

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I dodged out of the way before bringing up the smack hands and charging at him he brought both his hands up bringing a wall of Earth in between us stopping me from getting to him.

The second General got in a crouching position before blue Lightning appeared all over his body he charged me with blinding speed he throw a right hook connecting with my Cheek.

And the third General appear right behind me while I was flying back from the punch grab me by the back of my neck before slamming me down to the ground face-first.

"Now that we got your attention and it's probably time to introduce ourselves my name is black flame and those two are my brothers lightning strike and Stone Crusher, we are the three out of the six of king Dainn general and sons of king Dainn himself" he said while crouching down next to me before standing up and kicking me away.

I got up off the ground before dusting myself off before looking at them in Surprise "so you guys have nanites too huh, well it makes no difference because I will still kick your ass" I said being out the magna blades and get in a Crouch position.

All three of them came at me it was before I having a flash back to what God told me when I was screaming in pain.

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"I'm also going to boost your speed strength and stamina and durability not much at least to superhuman levels as long as nothing too crazy happens I think you'll be all right"

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(Third person pov)

"Alright let's get this started" mark thought before put in his headphones and select a song before getting into a fighting stance.

https://youtu.be/SVi1oSK80EY

When the song started mark ran at the first caribou general he swung his sword trying to stab one of the general the first one teleported behind trying to end the fight quickly before marquis duck and swept his legs from under him.

The Third General trying to hit him what a large Boulder before Jackson use his sword to cut it in half are running straight at him and delivering a roundhouse kick to his face.

The second General try to Rush him, but this time he was ready for him, he duck under a left hook before sending a flying knee to his chin knocking back the caribou General a few feet away.

They all try to Rush him once but he noticed it created the skull Stoppers in jumping into the air before thinking to himself.

" if Rex can create new build can I have the same ability to" mark thought before trying to create one then like Rex he saw the blueprints create something instead of trying to figure it out he was able to do it instantly

https://images.app.goo.gl/fGATYMpiRZrvbmb77

The arm Cannon was just like any other new build black with blue lighting around it he looked at it before smirking and saying to the caribou.

"Oh now you guys done f**k up now " mark said before taking aim at a Caribou an firing it and one that could control the Earth was too slow to get out of the way and being vaporized in an instant.

The rest of the Caribou Army was shocked and scared of what happened while the other two generals were angry about your brother dying, they trying to rush him but Mark saw this is shut off small blast at them one teleport all the way what the other uses lightning speed to dodge.

"Damnit I need something to make me go faster so I can keep up with them" mark said before putting away the arm cannon and try to create another build.

https://images.app.goo.gl/PskZ1H5q5UHwpbbv6

Once mark made them he noticed that everything was moving slower than normal, he realized that he was just faster than everyone else he smirk before getting into a Chinese stance when the samurai was about to pull out there sword and ran at the last two generals

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(Celestia pov)

Me and my sister an the element bearers made it to the battlefield just in time to see half of the caribou either died or run; only people who were there was two of king Dainns generals and mark who was just standing there.

"Look out" Twilight said to mark but instead of getting hit he moved at blinded speed he appeared on the other side of the battlefield with his sword stressed out they stood there for a couple of minutes before the last two fell to the ground.

I was in shock I believe my sister and the element bearers were to, I shook out my shock like state and walk over to see if he was okay and to ask him more questions.

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(Mark pov)

I stood there in the middle of the battlefield staring at the two bodies but my mind was reeling with questions; " how could they have nanites and why are they here I should be the only one with this power" mark thought before thinking.

"And more importantly how could he have modern technology when the Equestrian still use swords and shields, I might have an idea but just the thought of him being here especially after the real rex dealt with him scare me" mark thought before the princesses and element bearers came up to him.

" I see you finally showed up to the show too bad it already ended so was it awesome or wh-" mark didn't have time to finish his sentence before been tackled To The Ground by Pinkie and Fluttershy one of them worried the other excited but a little worried too.

"Are you hurt, do you need medical attention need any first aid" Fluttershy said while looking over mark making sure he is Alright.

"That was super awesome, hi my name is Pinkie pie do you like parties do you like cakes or cupcakes" Pinkie said while having a excited smile but no one saw that she was worried that he was hurt.

"Ms. shy and ms. Pinkie may you please get off our new friend so that we can continue our questions and have a welcome party for him" Celestia said with a smile.

" sounds like a great idea also I'm getting quite tired so can we do this tomorrow" mark said and everyone agreed and went back to the castle of the Two Sisters But everyone didn't notice that a single caribou was watching the entire fight the caribou said something into his Communicator before running off to report to his superiors.

Author's Note

Sorry it took so long and have to worry about working other things hopefully I'll be able to get the next you chapters out soon if you're one of us to part with Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie yes I'm making that a ship.

Talking to God again and meeting the captain of the solar and lunar guard

Talking to God again and meeting the captain of the solar and lunar guard

Mraquis mind Escape

I'll looked around to see the white void that I met God in and saw him sitting in a chair drinking some tea and i sat next to him before saying.

"Mind telling me how the caribou has nanites and modern-day weapons when the Equestrian only have swords and shields" I said looking at god.

"Well I did say that it wasn't the same as you thought it would be but I should have been more specific in my explanation but no matter, and if you are wondering how they have nanites then you already know the answer to that" god said making mark started to shit bricks.

"So you're telling me that Van f****** Kleiss is there working with King Dainn to help him take over the world, and he has been there since the fall of Equestria" I asked looking at God while trying not to freak out.

"Yes and that he also gave him the Alpha nanites that how he was able to take over so quickly and stay in power for so long, but knowing that the power you have now won't be enough I'm going to have to give you a third Item for you to use, whatever you wish to have I'll give it to you" god said drinking his tea.

I thought about it for a moment before remember a certain item that I can use, I looked at God and said " can you give me a Kakugane from buso renkin and also can you make it into Genji katana but black and white with a little bit of red, also make it the number 3 black Kakugane as well" I said in a series tone while god look at me like I was crazy.

"You do realize what they could do to you and those around you right because if you don't than why would you ask for something like that" god said.

"Because I need something that can give me an Edge in combat if you saw what happened to those who had that power you know what I need it for" mark said looking at God.

God Sigh before create what Mark asked for it looks just like the one that Kazuki Muto had, after mark had his Kakugane in his hand he felt intense pain goes through his body, he took off his jacket and shirt to see his skin turn a peach color before a symbol of the Kakugane number three was printed on his left chest.

https://images.app.goo.gl/ytqu3h3q877bPPDT7

(Also this is how his sword would look like)
https://images.app.goo.gl/U9d3UURrDNneZHbW9

"I hope you know what you are doing my child because this can lead to something you will have to deal with" god said as the dream ended.

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(Mark pov)

I woke up with a gasp of air I found myself in the room that Celestia gave me after the fight with King Dainn sons and the Army he sent, once I got out of bed I saw the Kakugane that God gave me sit on the dresser next to the bed.

"So it's wasn't a dream I am really in Equestria and the caribou are really in salveing the mares. Well I better get some training in with my Kakugane before seeing the princesses" I said before putting on the same cloths and heading out the door.

Once I made to the training grounds I saw solar and lunar guards training team but they was more mares than it was stallions, the stallions were geting angry gares sent there way maybe because of what king Dainn did to the stallions and they don't trust them.

"Well none of my business I better start training and seeing what abilities I have with my Kakugane" I thought before shouting out.

"Buso Renkin" I said before my katana formed in my hand with sheath attached to it.

"Alright let's see what I can do" I said before drawing my sword and light of black and red energy surrounding it, everyone stop training looking at the stranger that princess Celestia let stay in the castle.

The stallions looked at him in amazement while the mares looked at him in anger and skepticism; at the same time the main six and princesses were just coming out to see marquis training

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(Third person pov)

The practice the few swings at his sword before thinking "I wondering" mark though before sheathed his sword and closed his eyes a second later a copy of his katana but made out of black and red Crystal appeared in his hand he's stared at it for a moment before throwing it up in the air.

Than he disappeared then reappeared in the air where the Crystal Sword was he leaded on his feet before saying without really thinking "I got to said this is surprising considering where this ability came from" he said before a solar and lunar guard mares came up to him and said.

"So you think you are so special because you defeated 3 of king Dainn general and a army of caribou" the lunar guard mare said with some sarcasm laced with her voice.

"No I don't think I'm special I know I'm special because you have to know when you are good at something or not" mark said Already know what this is going to lead to.

They both had a look of anger before the solar guard mare said "let's see how smug you are after we defeat you" she said drawing her sword and shield along with the Lunar guard mare as well.

"Okay but first" mark said before taking off his jacket and shirt along with his goggles and gloves an walk over to the main six more specifically Pinkie and Fluttershy and asked "can you hold this for me", mark said with a smile the two of them nodded and mark head back an got in a fighting stance.

The three of them stared at each other before one of the mare rush at mark for a downwards attack but Mark dodged out of the way and drew his katana with the attack of his own making the mare barely block it with her Shield, than mark creature a other Crystal Sword throwing it at the solar guard she blocked it with a shield but forgot that he can use it to teleport.

He then teleported to the other side of the training ground before standing up straight saying "let's see if you can handle me in my new form" mark said before his skin turned light brown and the symbol of the number 3 black Kakugane appeared on his left chest everyone was shocked about his new transformation.

The two guards didn't have enough time prepare before he disappeared and reappear in front of the solar guard and punch her in the gut sented her flying across the training field letting hard on the ground she was gasping for air guess she had the wind knocked out of her.

" I guess you can't handle me then because you're so blinded by your Rage of the caribou and what they did I can't see that you would not be able to beat me" mark said blocking an attack from the lunar yard and throwing a right hook into her abdomen her clutching her stomach while keeled over.

Mark was about to say something before for his felt a sharp pain in his chest he look down to see a sword sticking out from behind him, everyone in the training ground was shocked that the solar guard stabbed him, the princesses with about to step in before Mark turn around and bitch slap the mare so hard that she flu straight into a nearby wall.

"Wow not only did you get a cheap shot in but you also tried to kill me the one person who can help you deal with the caribou" Mark said pulling out the sword and healing the wounds shocking everyone even more.

"THAT'S ENOUGH CAPTAIN FIRE SHOT AND NIGHT BLADE" Celestia said in the royal Canterlot voice.

Everyone stop what day were doing and bowed to the princesses except for mark who stand up and said to the princesses "hi tia and lulu how is your morning" mark said with a smile.

Both princesses smiled and said that they had a good morning before telling Mark today want to finish asking some questions, he nodded and they went back in inside the castle.

Going to Equus and fighting some caribou

Going to Equus and fighting some caribou

(Mark pov)

My name is marquis Smith and I live in new York city more specifically Boston, I have three siblings two sisters and one brother, I'm half American and half Mexican, my mother is Mexican and my father is American; I live with my family when I was just 4 years old, I'm now 20 years old now.

I was walking around the park thinking about my life up to this point, I was just about to head back to the house before I knew it a bright light blind me and I fell unconscious.

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When I woke up I realized that I was not in my bed and all around me was a white light I got up off the floor and looked around before I said.

"Qué está pasando (what's going on)" I said before someone was laughing when I turned around I saw the last person I ever meet.

Sitting in a chair with a fresh cup of tea while looking at me was god himself than he said "have a seat my son we have alot to talk about" he said before drinking some of the tea.

I sat down with god and drink the tea that he gave me before asking "did I die or I am dreaming" I asked while looking at him.

"No my child I brought you here to ask you a favor" he said I was curious about this favor so I nodded and he continued.

" you see a fellow God or in this case goddess ask me for some help with her world it seems to be overrun with some species called Caribou led by the crazy king that goes by King Dainn what I ask of you to help her rescue her world" god asked me lowering his head to me.

I was confused about this whole thing before he saw my confusion he held out his hand I was about to ask what he's about to do before his hand touched my forehead, I saw images that almost made me vomit but what I saw females being raped, males being brainwashed or doing free will, and kids being sold as slaves well King dainn set up top his throne in Canterlot.

"que diablos acabo de ver (what in the hell did I just saw)" I said in my Spanish language.

" what you just saw was only the tip of the iceberg on this world is called Equus this is happening all around the world you only saw the part is happening in a land called Equestria" god said while sipping his tea.

" so what you want me to do about it I'm just a regular human I don't have no special abilities or powers" I told him he just laughed before saying " my son I know that what I'm about to do if you agree is give you only two items to take with you to Equus" he said with a bright smile.

I was excited cuz I can choose any two things I wanted but what to choose and then I remembered my favorite show as a kid it was called generator rex than I asked him.

"Can I have rex Powers more specifically his nanites and the Omegle one nanite" I ask he nodded before placing his hand on my forehead I felt extreme pain go throughout my body it only lasted for a couple of seconds before disappearing.

" that I gave you the powers now for your second item" he said before two Magna blades appeared out of thin air I recognize these blades from anywhere there were six swords he used to fight alongside Rex.

"Take these weapons and help save this world I'm counting on you marquis Smith" god said handing me the blades and Rex signature jacket, gloves, and goggles.

I nodded before put on the jacket and gloves an goggles on my head; he snapped his fingers in a bright light blinding me before I found myself falling from the sky seen a fight going on below me.

I just smirked and put the goggles over my eyes, I put my headphones in before selecting a music that was just right for this occasion.

https://youtu.be/KI96t1Xi9cI

I put my hands together and create the Smack Hands and aimed one of them to the ground before yelling.

"IN COMING" I said before making a large crater in the middle of the battlefield.

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(Third person pov)

The Equestrian guards were fighting the caribou, they were trying to fend them off it was no use they were to strong, before lot seems lost they as well as the caribou hear somepony yelled out.

"IN COMING" somepony before something landed in the middle of the battlefield, it looked like a hairless monkey that had two huge metal gauntlets, anyone surprised that the metal gauntlets retreated back into his body, he lifted up his goggles before saying.

"The names marquis Smith now Thrill Me" the creatures said in a cocky tone everyone just stood there for a moment before the one of the caribou soldiers got the bright idea to attack him his right arm had blue lines before turning into a Giant blade.

He block incoming attack before kicking him away then he retracted the blade back into his arm before more blue lines appearing on both his arms he just created the Funchucks and he started to spin the ends of them around before hitting a group of caribou with them.

The Equestrian guards stood there in shock that some strange creature is helping them fight the caribou so they went in to help him.

With Rex's help them they was able to push back the caribou from the forest they were and claim a victory, he retracted his build before looking at one of the nearby Guards before saying.

" hey by any chance is there a person named princess Celestia or Luna by any chance" he said taking out his headphones.

"Yes right this way I will lead you to them" one of the guards said before leading him to the princesses.

What the caribou and Equestrian didn't know was that they were about to have one hell of a thrill ride.

Author's Note

Hope you like this chapter see you in the next one

Meeting the Princesses of the Sun and Moon and the elements of harmony

Meeting the Princesses of the Sun and Moon and the elements of harmony

(Mark pov)

Me and the guards were walking through the hall of the castle, they said that the princesses and element bearers were waiting for me in the throne room.

"Man I hope this goes well because I don't think I can take on four princesses and the elements of harmony all at once" I thought to myself as we made it to the throne room.

"Well here goes nothing" I said as the throne room doors opened.

https://youtu.be/gWdm5CWKrwk

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Once the doors opened and we went into the throne room, they lead me to the princesses, and they bowed but I still stood standing.

"Bow to the princesses" one of the guards said I stood there not given a damn, one of them was about to hit me with his spear before I grabbed it out of his hands and broke it in two.

"Cualquiera de ustedes, cabrones, una vez para intentarlo de nuevo (any one of you fuckers once to try that again)" I said with blue lines showing up on my left hand meant I was about to use my nanites.

"Wait guards stand down and put away your weapons" someone said in a motherly tone, I looked over to see princess Celestia and princess Luna sitting on their thrones while princess Cadence and princess Twilight stood next to them.

The guards stood down and back away from me I looked at them powering down my nanites, "So you must be Celestia and Luna, and Cadence and Twilight the alicorn princesses I am right" I asked the four looked at me before the white one nodded her head before saying.

"Yes we are how do you know our names stranger" Celestia asked in a kind tone while her sister looked at me with a angry look and Cadence and Twilight looked at me with curiosity.

"Well you see Tia my God sented me here to help you out with the caribou and freeing the ones that are in slavery" I told them everyone was shock that I used Celestia nickname instead of her real name.

"YOU DARE SAY MY SISTER NICKNAME INSTEAD OF HER REAL NAME" Luna said but more like shout it at me; I cover my ears and said in my Spanish language.

"Dios, maldita sea, mujer, baja el volumen (god fucking damn it woman turn down the volume)" I said while still holding my ringing ears.

This seems to make her angry because she fired a magic blast at me and it was strong by the looks of it before it could hit me I used my nanites to create the block party blocking her attack senting it out near a opened window.

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(Third person pov)

Everyone was surprise that he was able to block princesse Luna attack even she was surprise by this hairless monkey power before shaking it off and going ready to fire again before her sister stopped her.

"Luna that's enough" Celestia said stoping her from shooting another magic blast at the strange creature, before anyone could do anything they heard a loud crack coming from the stranger.

When they turn around there he was with the Slam Cannon on his right shoulder aimed at Luna before saying.

"quieres ir princesa perra que vamos (you want to go princess bitch than let's go)" he said in his strange second language.

"Please let us calm down and think with cooler heads" Cadence said getting in between mark and Luna, once everyone clam down they started to ask him questions.

"So what is your name and how did you do that" Twilight said being the first ones to ask the question.

"My name is marquis Smith and what you just saw me using was called nanites; nanites are little tiny machines that was help cure diseases and helped make the body more durable and healthy, the ones who created them did succeeded and what they set out to do but it had an unfortunate turn of events, is there started to affecting everything to the plant the trees to the water even if people were affected by it it was small things like they will gain powers or abilities. But there was some who weren't so lucky they got meturned into ternative monstrous things to a person Made complete Stone to a man who needs a fresh supply of nanites to survive because his were unstable. I told them, everyone was surprise about what I told them before someone said.

"Wait you said that a man needed a fresh supply of nanites but his was unstable what do you mean by that" one of the guards asked.

"Well this man name was Van Kleiss he's was of the ones who's was head scientist of the project on the nanites on a day of the accident he was there right in the center of it and got the worst of it he didn't change physically but he got some unstable nanites put inside of him making it unable for him to survive without a fresh supply of them, also he's a dictator that wants all people who are Evo's to be the Supreme dominant species but those who aren't affected by the nanites to be nothing more than animals surviving in the wilderness" I said.

Everybody was surprised by this one person being affected with such an illness best deal what's the rule the world then Princess Celestia ask the next question.

" so you said that these nanites can affect people and turn them into monster does that mean that you can to" she said I shook my head then said.

"No the nanites that I have are different they were the first batch that was created before the final product, my nanites didn't have have those problems like those did, but my can cause memory loss up to the point where I only remember my name" I told them.

The question went on about this for a couple of hours before they heard a loud explosion come from outside what everyone looked out the window they sell another large army of caribou but this time they had three generals.

"Well looks like the caribou came back around 2 then I better introduce myself to them" mark said before creating the Boogie Pack and flew off everyone was surprise that he could fly to but they shook it off and got ready to fight the caribou.

But what mark and the Equestrian didn't know that the three generals had the same power as mark did, but what the 3 generals didn't know that mark can cure eve's as well.