Alternate Scene To Overpowered
Author's Note
I know this isn't a one page fanfiction scene, but a remake to one of my scenes I posted in my blog a while back. This is an alternate ending to Overpowered, to which involves Zephyr asking Victoria to go to the mall with him instead of Rainbow Dash.
I hope you enjoy though! (Side note: The episode belongs to Hasbro. Also, that I was originally going to post it on my blogs, but I guess not. Also, don't worry I know this is one page fanfictions, not long stories, so I'll be posting it!)
(Edit July 18 2021: Gave this story an edit, to fix somethings within the story.)
Alternate Scene To Overpowered
Sounds of agreements filled the room for a second, until they heard a sudden knock on the door. The group turned their heads to see Fluttershy’s brother, Zephyr Breeze, at the entrance of the music room. His eyes were looking upon Victoria, seeing her light brown hair within the light, while her dark blue violet eyes gave a sparkle by the same beam.
Victoria had her eyes locked upon her boyfriend’s, she couldn’t help but form a grin. The feeling of her heart began to flutter, and her cheeks became warm within seconds.
Rainbow glanced her eyes at Zephyr, then at Victoria. She turned her head away as she put her hand beside her mouth, her tongue then stuck out as she gave a small gag sound. Her friend Applejack saw, then she gave her arm a petite slap, making the athlete glare at her.
Zephyr had a smile on his lips, his brows were curved, and he leaned against the door and did a little finger gun towards his girlfriend. “Hey, m’lady,” he said, in a loud tone of voice. “there you are, do you wanna go to the mall with me?”
Victoria’s eyes slightly grew, and her mouth slightly agape. She couldn’t help, but fastly jumped off the second stair, then she ran towards him. “Yes,” she cried out happily, to which her body met his as she wrapped her arms around him.
A small grunt came from the male, then immediately he looked down at her. She saw that her head was between his chest and torso, he felt the soft, curly hair upon his blue skin while she gave him a small nuzzle. A smile formed on his lips, his heart fluttered from her acceptance and the hug he got. He couldn’t help but give out a hearty chuckle, while his cheeks began to turn warm.
Steadily, he wrapped his arms around her bottom. A gasp came from Victoria’s mouth, then in surprise, Zephyr began to lift her up and her arms were removed from him. “Woah!” she squeaked.
“Impressed,” he asked, within his vision he met her eyes again.
Victoria’s cheeks increasingly felt warmer than before. She met his velvet eyes once more, seeing his warm smile on her face while his eyes slightly gave a sparkling light; making it seem something magical and beautiful. Victoria slowly wrapped her arms around his neck, her legs doing the same.
“Yeah,” she said. “I’ve never realized you’re that strong, Zephyr.”
He gave another chuckle. “well, for the past month I have been trying to work out. I’ve been running around the tracks, lifting weights, drinking some of that,” he glanced his eyes away, his lips forming a small loosen frown then he gave a silent wince. “those, um, unusual tastes of protein shakes.”
Rainbow Dash rolled her eyes, her lips slightly frowned. She knew that it was both a lie, and the truth. Within her times within the break room of Canterlot, she’d barely see Zephyr do anything. Whenever he tried to do a push up, he couldn’t lift himself up. Whenever he tries to go on the treadmill for not even two minutes, he’s out of breath. And whenever he tries to at least pick up a weight, he started to complain on how heavy it was, even though there’re other varieties of dumb bells to lift.
She had encounters where she saw him, trying to drink either an energy or protein drink. Which caused him to automatically spat out in a nearby trash can by how chunky the texture felt or how the flavors tasted.
But the bright side from it, he’d try doing around ten jumping jacks or only one or two laps around the track.
“Well, I need to ask? Is this your belief on your supposed calling?” she asked. Zephyr’s eyes turned to Victoria’s again, he slightly nodded.
“Yeah! Maybe? Well, you don’t know it would be. I could at least show off some muscle.” he said, he used his left arm to hold her girlfriend so that she wouldn’t tumble off his grip. Her eyes looked upon Zephyr’s right arm, he lifted up. He began to flex his arm, within her view she saw nothing but just a thin muscle.
Pinkie pie began to snickered whilst the others winced. Victoria, instead, giggled gleefully.
“Like what you see?” he confidently asked.
“Wow,” her giggling stopped, to which she playfully said. “that gun sure is something, Zeph.”
He stopped flexing his arm, as it continued to hold her again. “Really?” he asked, his eyes turning to her as he curved his right brow.
She nodded, her eyes continuing to stare into his. “But I do admit, I can kind of see a bit of growth. I’m so proud of you for this, doing fitness for you're health.”
A small “hm” came from his mouth, his smile grew more. “M'lady, thank you so much. But, perhaps I could show you more than just my bulkiness.”
“Huh,” she said, immediately her brow lifted. “and what’s that?”
“This.” Slowly his nose leaned against her’s. Her cheeks began to become more warm. Instantly, she rolled her eyes, and her nose leaned towards his. They began to nuzzle, as they continually felt the touch of their skin, and the love as their hearts continued to beat. The two slowly closed their eyes, as they embraced.
Victoria’s friends continued to watch the moment, which led them either slightly giggling to themselves or looking away. Rainbow gave another gag, to which once again Applejack noticed, giving her another petite slap on her arm. “Do you mind not doing that?!” Rainbow grunted through her clenched teeth, the young farmer nodded.
“Well, you shouldn’t be rude. At least be respectful, even if you can't, try to be.” She whispered back, her head turning away from her’s. Fluttershy gave a small sigh, her cheeks began to turn hot while her eyes glanced upon the ground. Slowly, she couldn’t help but softly place a hand to her face.
Ten seconds later, the two stopped their nuzzling. The touch of their noses pulled away, their eyes slightly opened, meeting each other’s gaze. Zephyr gave her a little peck on her forehead, causing her to titter. "Ready to go?" he asked.
Victoria gave a nod. “Yeah,” she said. “luckily I did bring my wallet today.”
One more chuckle came from the male, then he started to walk out of the entrance. Victoria’s eyes glanced at her friends, then she said, her hand waving at them as it visibly started to disappear from their vision. “See you later girls, I’ll tell you what happens!” Then slowly, the couple walked away within the halls as the sounds of Zephyr’s footsteps slowly faded.
The room fell silent, the girls began to glance at each other. At first, they didn’t know what to say, as the entrance felt a bit unexpected. But from the experience they saw with their friend, they couldn’t help giving out “aw” then began to laugh. But the two girls who didn't laugh, were Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy.
“Why are you guys laughing, seriously didn’t you guys find that,” Rainbow winced. “uncomfortable?”
Pinkie Pie shook her head, then gave a grin towards her friend. “Oh come on Dashie, I thought that little moment was cute!”
“Y'all thought that was cute? I thought every single word that Zephyr came out of his yapper, made about much sense then a solar powered flashlight." Applejack said.
“At least Victoria laughed from it.” Sunset said.
“True darling, but, if my boyfriend did that to me, I would’ve just rolled my eyes,” Rarity said. “but we do have to be supportive of her. Especially if she’s dating Fluttershy’s brother.”
Once again, the girls agreed in unison until another tiny sigh emerged within the room. The six girls looked down at her, to see Fluttershy’s hand on her face. Twilight gave her a brow, as she adjusted her glasses. “What’s wrong Fluttershy?” she asked.
Fluttershy slightly glanced up at her friends, to which then she continued to put her hand on her face. “Oh, well. I’m feeling a bit,” she then got cut off by Rainbow.
“Embarrassed?” Rainbow added.
The pink haired girl nodded. “Yeah. I should tell him to tell me first before he comes in with an entrance like that.” she gave another sigh.
“That is understandable, I mean. It was unexpected.” Sunset said, placing a hand on her back.
“Yeah, and to me,” Rainbow gave a groan. “it was just bad. No offense Fluttershy.” Rainbow said, her tongue sticking out a bit.
“That’s alright Rainbow Dash,” she said, to which she lifted her hand from her face. She gave a small groan. Then her lips gave a semi-smile to each of her friends. “but I do admit. Even though my brother is embarrassing at times, and does his weird ego thing. I’m just gonna say that I am proud of him. For finding someone he can be with and cherish his love with, while she respects him for who he is.”
End Of Scene
Really, Really Short Scene #1 (Forest Kiss)
Author's Note
Before reading, I had this idea for some future fanfiction that Zephyr and Victoria get pony up accidentally, to which they have to transform to normal. So, I thought of doing a scene, where after hiding out in the forest, talking things out, I wrote this part as a cute, romance scene.
I hope you enjoy it!
(Edit May 25th 2022, gave this an edit.)
Really, Really Short Scene #1 (Forest Kiss)
“You know, at least it’s such a surprisingly good rain out today.” Victoria said, nuzzling herself closely into Zephyr, while he had his arms around her as she sat in his lap. The rain fell down lightly within the woods that gloomy morning. The now, ponied-up couple, sat underneath the tree whilst Zephyr’s wings were up as they formed a small “roof” upon them, to which at least they’d couldn’t get even more wet then before.
The grass was darker by the drops that fell, including the tree's leafs. A slight wind blew within the forest, the couple slightly shivered but the leafs Victoria picked up and “sewed” together by using the only two thinks she had: a needle, and some vine that she found from the trees. She made a blanket out of the material, as it took almost until the early morning to complete.
For a “plate”, they found the biggest leaf they could find to at least store some non-poisonous berries from the bushes. To their luck, Zephyr had food and a drink on him, it was just an apple given by Applejack, two granola bars, and a half drinken water bottle.
Zephyr had his back against the bark of the tree, feeling his clothes slightly soaked from the fallen rain. But, he pretty much didn’t care at the moment. He knew that he was semi-dry by the blanket, the leaves above, and his own wings. He kept Victoria dry as well, pushing his pride aside for her as he deeply cared for her. He adored her, like a lover he’d never had in the past nor in his whole life.
“Yeah,” he whispered, his eyes looking away from the rain then at his girlfriend seeing her gorgeous soaked brown hair while it shined by the semi-light from the grey clouded sky, while her purplish red horns looked like rubies. “but, I feel like surviving and spending time with you is better, m’lady.”
Victoria’s cheeks began to feel warm from the small comment she heard, which she looked up at him meeting his eyes. But she noticed both his velvet eyes shined yet she noticed a smile. That smile that he made, made her slowly smile back at him. Her face was cold, but by her cheeks becoming warm, it made it at least lukewarm. “Zeph, I’d say the same thing too,” she whispered back.
Then, they leaned their faces towards each other as their lips gently pressed against each other. It felt like the soft yet feathery touch of an angel’s wing, which Zephyr thought off. Their eyes were closed at the same time, they’re cheeks slightly became warmer yet their hearts continuously beat; if a melody slowly came to be.
Seconds later, their lips released and they leaned back just an inch. They slowly opened their eyes seeing each other’s faces, and the same expressions again. “Victoria,” he whispered again.
“Yes, Zephyr?"
“I love you.” he said, once again leaning his lips against her forehead, soon giving a gentle peck.
“I love you too.” she said with a petite chuckle.
End Of Scene.
For Her And Her Only (Scene)
Author's Note
Before reading, this is a practice scene I whipped up for my future Equestria Girls fanfiction of Zephyr and Victoria's love story. I hope you like it, and I'll accept critiques as well if I ever do more scenes.
But even while I was writing this, I had a bit of a lump in my throat by writing some of the parts of this scene. 
(Edit March 10th 2022, gave this an edit to make it better.)
(Edit May 25th 2022, gave another edit to make it better.)
For Her And Her Only (Scene)
Taking a deep breath, he shut his eyes for a quick moment as he began to speak to himself in a whispery tone. “Alright Zephyr ol’ boy, you got this,” he breathed out slowly, opening his eyes as Zephyr saw himself in the mirror, seeing himself dressed in a casual attire of his multicolored sweater of yellows and oranges, his wings were slightly widen out as his aqua blue feathers gave a shine by the light above the dressing room, and his pony ears were straighten. “this is your chance to impress a woman, you're gonna be for that woman, be strong with that woman, and be the perfect me you will be. So, just be cool, chill, and totally me! You got this me.”
He gave himself a quick pat on the back, before he heard a familiar voice outside of the room he stood in. “Zephyr? Are you ready yet? I’m all dressed.”
The prideful male gulped, but not loud enough for his date to hear it. He instantly froze up in place leading his pupils lowered, he could feel his cheeks give a slight warm shade of red, and his lips slightly narrowed. “Oh shoot,” he thought to himself loudly, he quickly glanced at the door then the mirror again, immediately he began to rush by giving his hair a quick check to make sure it wasn’t messed up, his face as he feared that pimples or scabs would appear, or that he made sure the clothing choice wasn't all goofy nor ugly.
As he continued, a minute soon gone by. He didn't want all this to happen! He didn't want to see himself looking like a disaster.
His heart began to now slightly race, he felt the palm of his hands beginning to become warm by the reaction, while thoughts now slowly rushed in. “this was a bad idea, this was a bad idea! Why did I agree to this, why did I?! What if she doesn’t like me? What if I smell? Perhaps not act right in front of her, oh! Why would she love me, I’m just a loser! A flirty loser who has trouble fitting in! I’m just a failure, I don’t deserve her!”his eyes widened of his final words, making him stop what he was doing.
His mind and the area around him fell silent. The feeling of his heart pounded faster while his lips gave a tiny, frowned agape with his eyebrows lowered. The breeze himself couldn’t believe what he said! Why would he think such a thing even though he thought almost everyday of his life, that he was confident he could get through this?! Even for a woman, that he grew to have such an appreciation and love for?
For somebody he grew to trust, someone who can literally laugh, chat, and hang out with, without being looked at as a loser. As a nobody. As a failure. One of his worst fears. To develop a friendship that could be something more, that he and she wanted, he knew deep down there're feelings for her. Because he loved her, for who she was. For her struggles, her personality, and for how her beauty was shown; that was like the finest pool's hidden treasures.
He loved her for everything.
“I am such,” a soft groan released from his mouth, shutting his eyes in frustration, before turning his head away from the mirror. He gently formed a fist, gave his head a small tap on the forehead. “a moron. An moron. A big dummy. You shouldn’t think like that me, you’re not a loser.” he whispered to himself again, but paused for a moment. He looked up to the mirror again.
Opening his eyes again, he noticed his reflection in the mirror that both his wings and ears drooped, his eyes noticeably back to normal except they gave a slight sparkle by the ceiling's light. His lips were frowning, and his black eyebrows pulled together, curving deeply.
“Listen here. You’ve gone through so much for the past few months, heck now for almost a year. From struggling to contain your new powers, hiding away from that maniac Tirek and his minions, you deserve this moment! To have fun, to relax, chillax, to have this wonderful date you’re gonna go on with her. Siestas even! It may not be what most dates are, but it’ll be fun.” he once again softly sighed.
“Your new friends have spent this moment helping me and Victoria to have this, and without them you’d have nothing, you've been alone. You've been walking down those same dang hallways, looking for Rainbows to flirt with or yet to embarrass your own sister! You’re not that anymore, well, learning not to be. But you'd been so close with them, you've made new friends, you've made new relationships. Even to you've restored your own relationships with your own family too! Me, remember this, because you’re not a loser."
Slowly, he moved his hand towards the mirror as he pressed his hand against it, feeling now the glasses' cold touch. He took another deep breath, slowly gave a smile to himself, his ears and wings immediately perked up. “You’re a winner.”
He continued to look at himself while he began to calm himself down, slowly his heart returned to his normal beat, and his body relaxed. Once again silence was around, before he gave another soft sigh, closing his eyes as his smile grew more. However, a knock on the door was heard.
“Zephyr, y'all done in there? Your date has been standing here; like a deer watching headlights for the last minute.” said Applejack, making his eyes open quickly, once again his brows lifted and lips narrowed.
Quickly turning his head, he removed his hand away from the mirror quickly turning himself towards the door. “Yep, totally ready.” His eyes glanced down at his clothes before giving them a quick dust off, and soon he plastered a confident smile. “I am as ready as I’ll ever be.” he stopped, his eyes glanced up to the brown door before him, giving another breathe as he grabbed the silver door knob.
“For her, and her only.” then his brows loosen up with his smile; warm as milk and honey, soon he turned the knob, making the door open before him with a creak.
End Of Scene
