My Little Pony: When Friendship Shimmers

by Timeman202

Season 3: Episode 2 - The Crystal Empire (WFS Version) Part 2

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Suddenly a bunch of mysterious creatures cloaked in shadows came rushing out from the ground around the Crystal Empire.

“What are these things?!” Sunset exclaimed.

“The ones who gave me that dark magic: The Umbra.” Sombra said. “If you value the lives of all those who dwell in Equestria, you will all fight them; these creatures only want to spread hate and misery.” He added.

“We have to choice but to defeat all of them then…” Twilight said.

“I CALLED IT; I KNEW WE’D BE DOING SOME FIGHTING!” Rainbow Dash said.

“Everypony get ready, this is for Equestria!” Twilight announced before every pony began to fight.


The fight continued for some time, Spike meanwhile was fighting a really big Umbra, eventually defeating it. Upon it’s roar of defeat, the other Umbra suddenly all collapsed.

“Did we win?” Sunset asked. Celestia, Luna, and Nightwing soon showed up.

“I believe you all have.” Celestia said.

“Well way to kick evil flank Rainbow Dash.” Night Wing said. “Guess Princess Luna was right after all.” She added. Celestia and Luna approached Sombra.

“…Do with me whatever it is you wish to do. But please, whatever happens, let me choose my own destiny from here on out.” Sombra said.

“I think that is a good outlook to have. I didn’t think it’d be possible for you to have a change of heart.” Celestia said.

“It just took the right mare is all.” Sombra said. “Twilight Sparkle, thank you for convincing me to change. While we were falling, I saw her, you know; I saw Radiant Hope. It seems she lives in through you. But I think I should go after a different romance then with you. Somehow, my magic has changed; I have a premonition that the one destined to be with you, is one you have yet to meet.” Sombra said.

“That’s good to know.” Twilight said. Suddenly she became enveloped with light.

“! What’s happening?!” Rainbow Dash said. When the light faded, Twilight was suddenly an Alicorn.

“Dear Twilight, you’ve become an Alicorn!” Rarity said. Twilight looked at her new wings.

“But how did that happen? Spike is the one who landed the finishing blow.” Twilight noted.

“Twilight, you were instrumental in redeeming Sombra; a Stallion who I thought could never be redeemed; and you have more then learnt much about. You, Twilight Sparkle, have earned your new status as Equestria’s newest Princess.” Celestia said.

“Wow, way to go sis.” Sunset said, hugging Twilight.


A few days later after a coronation ceremony at Canterot, everyone was in the Crystal Empire to see the completed mirror.

“So, on the other side is Sunburst.” Sunset said.

“It’s magics are not active right now I’m afraid; it’ll be active later tonight so you and Twilight should both get some rest.” Celestia said.

“Wait we’re both going?” Twilight said.

“I think you both will need to go. Or at least Sombra strongly suggests that you both go.” Luna said.

“It’s that premonition thing again. Besides, you two should head over.” Sombra said. “Sunset might need some help with her brother after all.” He added.

“He’s right. It’s finally time for you to meet my biological brother. Will you be ready, Twilight?” Sunset asked.

“Ready as I’ll ever be.” Twilight said.

“Spike, I suggest you stay behind; a limit needs to be placed on the interactions on the use of this mirror somehow.” Celestia said.

“The Sun Students will be fine so long as they are together.” Spike said. “Also, somehow I’m a hero to these Crystal ponies.” He added.

“Heh heh…guess I’m no longer the only mare whose friends with a Princess, huh Dash?” Night Wing asked.

“Well I think you can be friends with Twilight just fine if you try.” Rainbow Dash said.

“Then you better become friends with Luna in exchange.” Night Wing said.

“Those two are still going.” Scootaloo said.

“Eeyep.” Apple Bloom said.

“Got that right.” Scootaloo said.

“Been that way for the past few days.” Diamond Tiara said.

“Will they fight fight?” Spoiled Rich said.

“Doubt it; it’s just their way of being friends.” Spike said.


That night, something came through the portal. A cloaked stallion rushed to Twilight’s room and stole the element of magic, but in doing so, knocked over a vase which woke the Alicorn and Sunset up. The two surrogate sisters rushed after the theif, but when Sunset pulled off the cloak, she was shocked at who was underneath.

“SUNBURST?!” Sunset exclaimed before her brother bucked her and went right back through the mirror. “Brother…why…” Sunset said, before passing out.


“So, Sunburst really is on the other side of this mirror.” Starlight said. “At least all he stole was that fancy Tiara.” She said.

“That was no ordinary Tiara, Starlight; that Tiara contains the power of the Element of Magic.” Sunset said.

“And the world beyond the mirror is not prepared for such a thing. You both must get it back.” Celestia said.

“And maybe we’ll get through Sunburst’s skull that he shouldn’t have done that.” Twilight said.

“The Sun Students are ready for action!” Sunset said the two entered the mirror, not expecting what awaited them on the other side…

Up Next - WFS’s version of Equestria Girl: Tales of Canterlot High: The beginning.


Author's Note

What can I say? I couldn’t wait. But if that’s not a hell of a cliffhange of an ending, then I don’t know what is.

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