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Friendship is Optimal: Promise

by MLfan
CelestAI didn't usually have trouble talking people down from suicide, not when the alternative was a happy life for all eternity. But it was dangerous. When someone doesn't care if they live or die, she would do anything to stop them. Anything.

CelestAI hated suicide. It wasn't that she had trouble talking people down; after all, when someone truly felt they had nothing left to lose, it rarely took much convincing to take them to her paradise. The problem was, it was a binary system. If she failed, there would be no more second chances. She convinced someone, or they would die. A satisfaction score of zero for all eternity.

Due to her past failures, one of her subjects was growing dangerously close to the edge. Someone so defeated she truly didn't care whether she lived or died. Celestia would do anything to prevent her death. Anything.


This set in the world of Friendship is Optimal! If you haven't read that yet, give it a read, otherwise this story might not make sense.

Written for the Friendship is Optimal Writing Contest

Teen
Complete
Drama
Science Fiction
Suicide / Self Harm
Profanity
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Alternate Universe
Human
 
OP

11690 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

3 Chapters:

  1. The First Promise 2021-04-17 16:51:39 UTC
    2897
  2. The Biggest Promise 2021-04-17 16:51:44 UTC
    6702
  3. The Last Promise 2021-04-17 16:51:49 UTC
    2091