Absolute Overhaul

by Hydreigon_Omega

chapter 4 - Fresh Blood

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When morning had finally rolled around, the six ponies and Chisaki decided to start preparing to head toward the library in search of any books that could help them towards their goal. Both Chisaki and Fluttershy believed it would be best for him to use his quirk to join their bodies together. The sky was a blood-like orange with the sun barely rising over the horizon. As the six of them prepared to leave, Chiskai listened for anyone outside of the hidden door, and once he knew no one was there, they exited the hidden hallway into the cluttered main room before they headed down the dirt road.

Every passing second it began getting more and more dangerous as it approached time for stallions and hermaphrodites to begin waking up. When they had reached the library, the sky had barely turned a light blue. The golden oak’s door creaked open as Kai ushered the five mares inside as he searched for anyone else waking up. Seeing that most were still asleep, he went in and closed the door behind them. Even if there was a lock to the door, Celestia wouldn’t have given a key to Twilight because she needed a master to rape her into submission. The faint sound of footsteps could be heard descending stairs.

“Twilight?” Someone said as the voice's owner descended into view. “Twilight!”

He was a purple and green dragon, not much shorter than most mares, but notably shorter. The drake had a short sleeved shirt exposing most of his draconic strength in his arms.

“Spike!” Twilight said as she ran to and embraced the small dragon in a hug

“When you didn’t come back last night I thought they snuffed” when Spike’s eyes landed on Chisaki, his expression went from fear to an expression of fuming hate, “Which would’ve been better, because it would have spared me the trouble of doing it myself.”

“Spike,” Twilight said, “He’s not like-”

“Don’t talk back to your master!” Spike snapped back,

“What is going on here?” Chisaki asked

“You know very well what's going on.” Spike said, “I am very lax when it comes to my mare, but when she stay out past nightfall, I have no choice but to rape her back into submission."

“I asked Twilight, not you.” Chisaki replied, his eyes like pin pricks scaring the short dragon.

“Spike isn’t usually like this.” Twilight said, “This is merely an act so that we don’t raise suspicion among the two of us. While my old masters, who are also my elder brother and hermaphrodite sister-in-law, is out of town, Spike was put in charge of ”

“Twilight!” Spike demeanor changed to a fearful one, “Did you just tell him that? Ugh! Now we’re both going to be snuffed”

“Uh, I don’t think so,” Pinkie piped in, “He did save Fluttershy after all, along with several other mares already.”

“She’s alive!?” Spike was dumbfounded

“Yes she is.” Chisaki said, as he used his quirk to separate their bodies once again.

Fluttershy managed to catch herself in mid air and land a little more gracefully than last time. Through Fluttershy and Chisaki’s merged body, and consciences, she was capable of listening to the conversation going on outside of their body.

“Fluttershy! You’re alive!” Spike said as he ran in for a hug

“Spike...” Fluttershy calmed the newly crying drake, “It is nice to see you again,”

“Can you two stop being cry babies.” Chisaki retorted, “We need to grab what we need and get out of here. Every second passing is another chance for a stallion or hermaphrodite to walk through those doors.”

“What do you need?” Spike asked, “We have all sorts of books.”

“Biology, Medical science, anything of that sort.” Chisaki said, “If it is science related take it just in case. We will only take one trip here and never return, it would be best if our goal remain hidden from the public.”

“This would be easier to find the books we need if I was here to organize it last night.” Twilight complained as she gazed over many of the titles in search for what they need, “Many ponies don’t appreciate organization as much as I do, they just stick it back on the shelves wherever they want.”

A few lucky hours have passed as no one even came close to the door in that time frame. They had amassed a small tower of 2 medical textbooks, an encyclopedia for standard animal biology, and a book titled ‘Aerodynamics for Dummies.’ While that last one may not be as useful as some of the others, they need all of the books they can get. Chisaki found another book to add to the pile, it was an in depth book about skeletal structure, it was roughly 2 inches thick. He opened the book to its table of contents, 12 chapters long not including the introduction and the author’s information. Chapter 2 was titled ‘Comparing Structures from Different Races of Ponies.’

Opening the book to the correct chapter, he was greeted by three different skeletal structures. Two of them had features that easily distinguished them from the other, it was quite easy to note that each structure belonged to a different race of ponies. He looked at the earth pony structure which seemed the one closest to his own. ‘Bones from the earth pony tribe are extremely heavy and sturdy when compared to other tribes. The durability of their bones is the reason why earth ponies are capable of pulling off feats of strength comparable to a young dragon.’

Chisaki looked towards the second diagram. While it shared basic skeletal structure, at least from a quick glance, the wings it had easily told him which race it was from. ‘While Pegasi bones are much more fragile than their thestral counterparts and other ponies, their light bones along with their wing structure allows them to fly.’

The last of the three races was unicorn. Its skeleton, needless to say, had a horn on its head, but said horn seemed smaller than it should’ve been. ‘The majority of unicorn bones aren’t on either side of the extreme, like earth ponies or pegasi are, but the bone attached to the frontal bone of the skull acts as a conduit for magic for unicorns. Even with a layer of keratin protecting it, it has been said that getting punched in the horn is similar in pain to getting kicked in the tescicles or giving birth.’

Chisaki closed the book after he decided it would be useful enough to keep. As he placed the book down on the table with the others, he heard the door to the library open. His eyes darted towards the door to see a red stallion accompanied by two caribou. Fluttershy had told him that they existed, but he had never actually seen them. If the stallion was 6 feet tall, then the caribou would’ve easily been 6’10”. Fluttershy froze in shock when her gaze connected with the stallion’s.

“I just came for my sister,” the stallion said as he approached the yellow pegasus, “But it seems I found something better. The princesses will be very pleased when they hear I found an escapee and snuffed her. Possibly even more so when she hears it was the element of kindness herself.”

As the stallion’s hand lunged for Fluttershy’s neck, it was stopped by Overhaul’s vice grip around his wrist. “Keep your filthy hands off her.”

The stallion yanked his arm back away from the painful grasp. “Who are you?”

“My name is Chisaki.”

“Are you her new master?”

Overhaul stayed silent for a moment to think his answer through, “I guess you could say that.”

“I see... I’m Big Mac by the way, I’ll just take my sister and I’ll be out of your way.” he said, “come on AJ, if you come willingly I may decide not to snuff you.”

“I’m sorry, but she’s not going with you either.” Overhaul said as he started taking off his gloves, “In fact, none of these mares behind me will not come with you as long as I’m in your way.”

"What!? I ain't gonna let you steal my mare." Big mac moved back toward the caribou before pointing a finger at overhaul. "Kill him, then you two can take all the mares here you want."

The two towering caribou walked over to Overhaul with malicious grins spread across their faces as they loomed over him. The caribou cracked their knuckles attempting to intimidate an unimpressed human. Even though they weren't directly facing the main 6, they could definitely feel the intensity of the caribou’s gaze. Fluttershy was sent quivering knowing that more than likely she'd become the caribous' next play thing, and possibly even their next mare meat meal.

"Look, I am not in the mood to get bloody right now.” Overhaul said, “So you two can just walk out those doors and I’ll spare your lives.”

“Spare our lives?” One of them said, “You must be extremely foolish to start making offers like that.”

“You tell ‘em brother!” The second Caribou said, “We caribou can snap your flimsy body like a twig and after that we’ll take all those mares right there for ourselves.”

A full force punch was thrown at Overhaul, capable of breaking steel if it had landed. Overhaul calmly side stepped out of the way, letting the sound of the powerful punch ripple past his ear. Grabbing the caribou’s arm with his bare hand, Overhaul used his quirk and completely eviscerated the caribou’s right half of its body. He followed up with a dash and clawed at the caribou’s remaining body, and turned him into nothing more than a blood splatter against the wall.

Overhaul turned to face the second caribou, his yellow eyes terrified the towering behemoth as they stared into his soul. The caribou tried to run away from Overhaul, but the caribou was shoved back into Overhaul by a strong claw slashing into his back. With a flick of his wrist, Overhaul turned the second proud caribou into nothing more than red mist which coated everything nearby. When the filthy mist cleared, Overhaul tossed his jacket to the young dragon covered in caribou blood.

“Here, you can clean yourself off with this.”

“Thanks.” Spike said as he used the green jacket to clean his face off, “What about Big Mac?”

“Oh yeah, I forgot about him.” Overhaul said, “Sorry for the mess Twilight. Try your best to salvage the books that got damaged.”

When he turned to face Macintosh, the red stallion had begun to run as far away as possible. Overhaul walked out the door and onto the dusty streets of Ponyville, the red stallion had already ran a good distance from library grabbing the attention of nearby ponies by the time Overhaul exited the library. He slammed his palm into the ground as he reformed the ground into sharp tendrils which punctured and broke Big Mac’s wrists and ankles.

“Aaahhh!” Macintosh screamed in pain as he was being tortured by a makeshift crucifixion.

“Citizens of Ponyville.” Chisaki raised his voice to the crowd as he approached the stallion writhing in pain, “I am the one you should fear as Overhaul, and I am a revolutionist! I despise misogyny and the objectification you have put on mares of your own kind. So I have decided to take the six mares you all know as the bearers of harmony and place them under my protection. And if any of you dare to even attempt to lay a finger on any of them, I will show no hesitation to kill you right then and there.”

Overhaul turned to face the crowd hundreds of stallions, hermaphrodites, caribou, and some mares on display we’re looking at him listening to his message in fear. Overhaul slowly began to draw an invisible line across the weakest part of soon to be dead stallion’s neck, before his hand snapped and began to choke his life out of him.

“But some of you may not take me seriously right now,” Overhaul said, “so to show you how serious I am I will make an example out of him for what’ll happen if you even try.”

Releasing the death grip around his neck, Overhaul flicked his wrist upwards creating a geyser of blood and guts that sprayed into the air. As the red rain poured from the sky, the stallion’s heart fell to the ground with a wet squelch. Overhaul picked it up with one of his bare hands and presented it to the crowd, before he crushed it spilling out the blood that was inside.

“I have not place for rapists in the utopia I will make.” Overhaul said, “And if you try and stop me, then you will suffer the same fate as him.”

Overhaul walked back to the library where the six mares were, but a simple glance sent an unintentional shiver down their spine. He walked up the group of mares and the young drake before he politely took his jacket back from Spike. He gestured with his hands for them to follow him, the large crowd of ponies made sure to avoid him, for their own self preservation.


Celestia sat on her throne as she waited for the next shipment of specially prepared mares, a letter was sent to her through dragon fire. Being a little confused, Celestia opened the letter and started to read its contents.

To Celestia, and whoever else this may concern.

As stated at the end of this letter, my name is Overhaul and I am the one who'll tear down your kingdom and transform it into a utopia molded by my own hands. Over the thousands of years of your rule, you have objectified and degraded mares of your own kind. I can not let this stand, so now I shall lead a revolution against you and you shall fall. Whether or not my revolution is an army of one thousand or one, your kingdom and everything you've worked for will crumble under my might. I have already taken the six mare whom you've dubbed as the bearers of harmony under my protection, send anyone or anything after them and I'll make sure that the next time you see those ponies, who you sent, will be as a crimson fog at your doorstep.

Your newest demon,

Overhaul.

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