The cute unicorn maid

by Timothy1509

Rating: mature
Tags: Shining Armor, Thorax, Twilight Sparkle, Sad, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Romance, Sex
Length: 4387

Thorax meets a cute unicorn maid named Twilight Sparkle during his time in the Crystal Empire.

Thorax is a reformed changeling who is a close friend of Shining Armor after Spike convinced him that he was never an evil changeling, he has also helped the captain of the royal guard out a lot with taking care of his daughter as well as playing with her. However, during the third day of his stay, Thorax has encountered a very cute and beautiful maid named Twilight Sparkle who is known as the younger sister of Shining Armor who is facing some pressure from her own brother. Would Thorax be able to persuade Shining Armor to be nicer to his sister?

New story! I hope you all will enjoy this one! This story is inspired by Cinderella a bit. Also, I do not own My Little Pony, it belongs to Hasbro. And the coverart I am using also belongs to it's rightful owner.

Published 2021-04-06 13:10:00 UTC
Last updated 2021-04-06 13:10:00 UTC

The changeling and the unicorn maid

Crystal Empire

It is a bright sunny day in the Crystal Empire, the residents of the town were seen having a wonderful chat with each other and the youngs were playing with each other in a merriment way in the playground. Life was great for the ponies of the Crystal Empire.

On the other side of the Empire, the captain of the Royal guard known as Shining Armor was seen giving his best friend Thorax a tour around his Empire. Thorax is a changeling who used to be rogue since the Canterlot Wedding incident, but after Spike took him in and convinced Shining Armor, Cadence, Starlight and the guards that he is a nice and innocent changeling who deserves to be respected and treated fairly.

As time went by, Shining Armor began to take a liking towards the changeling along with his wife Cadence as well as the guards. In the end, Thorax and Shining Armor became very close friends, the captain of the royal guards also taught the changeling some close quarter combat too during his stay in the Empire which resulted in him being an adroit and brave fighter. During the first two days of the changeling's stay in the Crystal Empire, he has done nothing but read science based books in libraries as well as assisting Shining Armor and Cadence in babysitting their daughter.

Today was now the changeling's third day in the Empire.

"So Thorax, what did you think of the tour?" Shining asked.

"It was wonderful Shining." Thorax replied with a smile "It feels good to have a stroll in other places rather than paying visits to the library. But note that I'm not saying that libraries are boring, it's good to see new stuffs." He told him.

"Indeed it is my friend. I'm glad you enjoyed every single ounce of it." Shining said with a smile.

After walking for another brief moment, the unicorn and the changeling have both arrived at the front gates of the castle. Two guards at the front saluted to the captain first then pushed the gates open. Then, both Shining Armor and Thorax walked through the gates. After that, they began to head to the front doors of the castle. Once they got to it, Shining Armor charged his horn and pushed the two doors open. Then, both he and his friend walked into the castle, closing the doors behind him in the process.

When they were in the castle, the unicorn and the changeling began to make their way to the kitchen where they will get something to eat.

"Thorax, I can never thank you enough for taking care of my daughter yesterday." Shining said in an appreciative tone.

"You're welcome Shining, after all, friends should help friends." Thorax told him.

However, during their walk, the unicorn and the changeling both heard some loud scrubbing noises. The two looked down to their left and saw a purple unicorn mare in a maid uniform scrubbing the floor with a scrub brush, there was also a metal bucket filled with soapy water next to her.

The sight has made Thorax's cheeks flush due to the elegance of the mare.

"Wow, she is beautiful." Thorax muttered.

Shining Armor immediately frowned when he saw her little sister working too leisurely. She used to be the student of Princess Celestia who asked her if she wanted to be a Princess. However, she has declined the offer due to her wanting to be an average unicorn mare in Equestria and wants nothing fancy or opulent. In the end, Celestia respected her choice.

"Twilight, work faster will ya?"

"Y-yes brother." Twilight said as she began to scrub the floor faster.

"You even missed a spot here!" Shining exclaimed pointing at a substance on the carpet.

"Oh! I'm so sorry Shining, I'll get to it soon. I promise." She told him.

"Well move your butt." Shining demanded, then he looked back at his friend Thorax "Come on Thorax, let's head to the kitchen." He told him.

Thorax snapped out of his daydream and said "H-huh? Okay."

After that, Shining Armor began to lead Thorax to the kitchen again while his sister helps clean the floor. During the walk, Thorax looked back at the unicorn mare with an expression of sympathy towards her, how can Shining Armor boss her sister around like that.

"Don't mind my little sister Thorax." Shining told him "She's here to do some work as well as listen to what we have to tell her to do." He finished.

"O-okay."

In the Kitchen of the castle, Thorax and Shining Armor were both seen eating a bowl of grapes that the chefs gave them. Shining was eating at a very hasty pace while Thorax was eating slowly in order to be respectful. They also had cups of hot chocolate.

"Wow these grapes are sweet eh Thorax?" Shining asked.

"Indeed they are Shining." Thorax said biting onto another grape delightfully "They are very sweet and scrumptious." He finished.

"Glad you like them Thorax." Shining said with a warm smile. He is happy that his friend is enjoying his stay in the Crystal Empire.

Seven minutes later, Thorax and Shining Armor have both finished eating their grapes. The captain of the royal guard then ordered one of his troops to go fetch his sister over here which he obeyed. One minute later, the guard managed to get Twilight into the kitchen dinning room. And Thorax blushed slightly again from seeing the beautiful unicorn.

"Thank you, you're now dismissed." Shining Armor told him.

The guard saluted to his captain and exited the kitchen.

"You called me for something Shiny?"

"Yes, help put our bowls in the sink please then wash them up." Shining ordered.

"Yes brother." Twilight said with a nod.

After that, Twilight walked up to the table and grabbed the two bowls in front of the changeling and her brother with her hooves. Then, she made her way to the sink of the kitchen and put the two bowls into the sink. She then prepared to wash the two metal bowls, but suddenly, the sound of glass breaking stopped her.

*Clank!*

The unicorn flinched from the sound, she turned around and saw a broken mug as well as some spilled hot chocolate on the floor.

"Clean the floor and put the broken mug into the garbage bin after you've finished cleaning the bowls." He ordered with an emotionless expression "After that, take out the trash." He added.

Twilight sighed and said "Yes brother."

"Good." Shining said as he stood up from his seat "Thorax, I'm gonna go check on my daughter with my wife, in the meantime, you can do whatever you like." He told him.

"O-okay thanks."

"Don't mention it buddy." Shining said as he patted on his shoulder. After that, he walked up to the doors of the kitchen and pushed it open with his hooves. Then, he made a left turn and began to head to his daughter's bedroom.

Thorax was a bit shocked by his friend's action against his own sister. What kind of brother does that to his own sibiling? Sibilings should show love and respect towards each other no matter how they treat each other as.

Twilight looked down at the broken mug and spilled hot chocolate with a sigh and began to clean it up. But suddenly, the changeling stood up from his chair.

"Let me help you miss." Thorax said as he levitated a dust pan, brush and tea towel towards him with his magic.

"Oh no no, it's okay I can do it." She told him.

"You need help, and I'm always opened to help anypony." Thorax insisted. After that, he bent down and dusted the broken mug into the dust pan, then he wiped the stained floor with the tea towel. Ten seconds later, the floor was clean, so, Thorax walked up to the trash can and dumped the shattered mug into it. Finally, the changeling teleported the dust pan and brush back into the opened cupboard closing it in the process. Then, he threw the tea towel into the laundry basket.

Twilight was truly flabbergasted by the changeling's magic skills, he was almost like her when she was young at school. But, the way he offered to help her has made her cheeks flush slightly.

"Th-thank you so much for your hospitality sir."

"You're very welcome miss." Thorax said with a smile "I believe that we have not fairly introduced ourselves. My name is Thorax, the reformed changeling that your dragon Spike brought in." He introduced himself.

"Nice to meet you Thorax, my name is Twilight Sparkle, the younger sister of Shining Armor." She introduced herself with a bow.

"Nice to meet you too Twilight, you're very cute when you're shy." He complimented, and that resulted in her blushing slightly in response. "Also, what's with your brother? Why is he so mean to you?" He asked with a raise of his eyebrow.

"Well... it's just that, ever since we were young, he does love and care for me but, he always put pressure on me with learning how to work. And after he married Cadence and got a daughter, he has assigned me to be a maid in his castle with only two hours of rest." Twilight replied with a disconsolate expression.

Thorax was scandalized by her reply, all of those obligations must be very tough and tiring, although he has helped his friend Shining Armor a lot with doing some work for his subjects as well as taking care of his daughter but, the way he is assigning his little sister with that amount of work with little resting time is just too impudent.

"Oh my, how can he be so impertinent towards you?" Thorax asked with a shocked expression.

"He is always rough around the edges around me." Twilight said in a dejected tone.

"I can tell by that." Thorax said "You know what, why don't I help you take out the trash?" He volunteered.

"Huh? N-no, it's okay, I-I can handle it."

"Please I insist, I want to help you as much as I can after all, this is what having integrity is about from what I've learned from Spike." Thorax told her in a polite tone.

Twilight was completely blown away by the amount of kindness that this changeling is expressing towards her. The guards including her brother were always rough around the edges with her by ordering her to work, but this changeling is probably the most polite guy that she has ever met. Twilight then began to admire Thorax as he begins to take out the trash from the trash can, she was seen blushing softly as well as having glittering eyes. The changeling then stood up after he took the trash bag filled with trash out of the trashcan. In the end, Thorax tied a knot on the trash bag and he was all done. Finally, he walked to the doors of the Kitchen and exited the room, after that, he made a right turn and began to make his way to the front doors of the castle.

Twilight was currently blushing softly while admiring the changeling with glittering eyes, not only because of his kindness, but the muscles she saw on him while he was taking out the trash bag.

"Wow, Thorax is so handsome." Twilight said softly. But then, her mind reminding her that she has tasks to do immediately snapped her out of it "Oh right! I have more things to do!" She exclaimed with wide eyes.

After that, she turned around and walked towards the kitchen sink to wash the two metal bowls.

At the garden area of the Crystal Empire, Thorax was standing in front of a large trash bin while still holding the trash bag in his right hoof. The changeling then pulled open the lid of the metal trash bin with his magic, after that, he threw the trash bag into the bin.

"Alright, all done." Thorax said with a smile. After that, he closed the lid of the trash bin. "Time to head back to Twilight and ask her what else she has that I can help with." He told himself.

Then, Thorax began to walk down the pathway that he took to get to the trash bin in the garden to get to the door where he will enter the castle again.

In a hallway, Twilight Sparkle was seen mopping the floor with a mop that was drenched with soapy water. She was mopping as hard as she could in order to make her brother and sister in law feel approved of her work so that they can be proud for once. However, her concern of her objective has made her neglect her surroundings, she then tipped over the bucket filled with water onto the floor.

"Oh crap!" Twilight exclaimed with a shocked expression "I gotta clean this up before Shining or Cadence sees this!" She told herself fearfully.

But, just as she made one step forward her hooves suddenly slipped from the slippery water which resulted in making her fall on the floor on her back.

"Oooof!" She grunted.

"Oh my! Are you okay?"

When Twilight heard the familiar voice, she looked in front of her and saw Thorax walking up to her which made her eyes widen.

"Wait! Don't come here!"

But it was too late, Thorax stepped onto the slippery floor and he slid forward towards Twilight.

"Whoa!" Thorax exclaimed as he fell down on something soft, hearing somepony whimper in the process.

Thorax got bewildered when he noticed that he did not hit anything hard on the floor during his fall, he expected it to hurt and sting but instead, he felt something soft, the soft texture was too soft to even be a typical carpet. The changeling looked down and saw that he was currently resting on Twilight.

"Uh..." Thorax said while blushing slightly.

Twilight was currently blushing so madly right now because of the position that she is in with Thorax, but at the same time, she got to stare at the handsome face of his.

"He is so handsome." Twilight thought.

"She is so cute and beautiful." Said Thorax in his mind.

However, the lovely moment was put to an end when the changeling and the unicorn heard the sound of somepony clearing his throat.

The two looked up and saw Shining Armor standing there with a raise of his eyebrow, the sight has made Twilight's eyes widen in fear as well.

"Um... Hello Shining." Thorax greeted with an anxious chuckle "This is not what you think it is." He told him.

"Its okay Thorax, I saw everything." He told him. After that, he stretched his right hoof out to him offering to help him up on his hooves.

When Thorax saw the hoof, he happily accepted it and grabbed it with his left hoof. After that, Shining Armor helped him up onto his hooves and off of his little sister. Then, the unicorn looked down at his little sister with a disillusioned expression.

"Stand up Twilight." Shining ordered sternly.

Twilight obeyed her brother's demand and immediately stood up on her hooves while looking up at him.

"B-brother, I-"

"Zip it Twilight, I witnessed everything so there's no point in lying to me." He told her, and that prompted her to sweat a little "First you fail in washing up the bowls, you broke a glass vase, spilled water, and now you almost injured my best friend!" He scolded her.

"S-sorry Shining, I just, I just."

"You just what?" He asked, but Twilight could only look down on the floor in mortification.

Thorax was looking at Shining Armor with an incredulous expression. How can he be so harsh and impertinent towards his own little sister? He just couldn't take it anymore, so, he stepped in between the two unicorn sibilings and stared at Shining Armor with an angry expression.

"Shining, your sister's done nothing but doing hard work and attempting to make you and your wife proud." He told him "How could you be so hard and impudent towards her?" He asked.

Twilight was very touched by the sight of Thorax defending her.

"She is my little sister, are you teaching me on how to be nice to her?"

"I'm trying to convince you to do the correct thing." Thorax told him "Ever since we got back from the tour, you have done nothing but bossing your sister around and criticizing her for minor mistakes, you even forced her to do something by intentionally dropping your cup! As a big brother, you must have impartiality, kindness, love, respect and integrity. Where the hay is your dignity as a royal guard and a big brother?!" He asked with a furious expression.

Shining Armor took a while to think about Thorax's veracious statement, back when he was a young foal, he has done nothing but boss his own little sister around without perceiving her feelings, he then began to reflect on what he has done today, he has bossed her sister again, shouted at her again, and made her clean up a mess that he intentionally did. After five more seconds, he has came to an understanding and sighed deeply.

"I guess you're right Thorax." Shining admitted, he then looked at his little sister "Twilight, I'm sorry for what I've done in the past and today, I hope that one day you can find it in your heart to forgive me." He told her in a shameful tone. After that, Shining Armor turned around and began to walk through the hallway of his house to continue his guard shift.

Thorax let out a warm smile after he has persuaded Shining Armor to be more polite and gentle to Twilight, he is also happy that he even apologized to her.

"There, now-"

But just as Thorax turned around, Twilight immediately wrapped her hooves around his neck and pulled him in for a kiss.

Thorax was caught off guard by this, he was seen blushing madly and his body temperature was rising up slightly. But at the same time, he did find the kiss quite good, Twilight's lips were soft and warm. Ten seconds later, Twilight broke the kiss and the unicorn and the changeling both began to pant heavily.

"Thorax, thank you so much for being so nice to me as well as convincing my brother to be nicer to me." Twilight said in an appreciative tone.

"You're welcome Twilight, after all, everypony deserves to have some respect, I fully know what impartiality and integrity is thanks to Spike." He told him "And if I were a stallion pony, I would treat you the same way that I am doing now." He finished.

Twilight couldn't help but squeal and hug the changeling from his heart-warming response. After a brief second, she released and looked at Thorax with a loving expression because, she has something in mind that she wants to do with him.

"Say Thorax, since you've done nothing but being kind and helpful to me, I think it's time for me to repay you for your hospitality." She told him.

"And what would that be?"

"Follow me handsome."

Then, Twilight turned around and began to lead Thorax to somewhere, the changeling was bewildered by this at first but, he shrugged it off and began to follow Twilight to where she was going to take him to.

After walking through the hallway for thirty seconds, Twilight has lead Thorax to a door, she activated her horn and gripped onto the door handle with her magic. Then, she pulled it open.

"Come on in Thorax." Twilight told him.

The changeling was perplexed at first but, he shrugged it off again and entered the room. When he was in, he could barely see anything in front of him due to the room's darkness, but then, Twilight flicked the light switch open and Thorax noticed that this here was a bedroom, probably Twilight's. There was a large white bed in front of him, a couch was sitting on the right side, there was a table on the left side along with a chair. A small window was seen above the bed.

"Twilight, why did you bring me to your bedroom?"

The changeling got his answer when Twilight gently wrapped her hooves around her neck and turned him around so that he could face her. After that, she began to gently push him to the couch, once she got to it, she gently sat him on it with her sitting on his hooves. The exertion has made Thorax blush slightly.

"This is your reward Thory." Twilight cooed, and Thorax blushed from the nickname.

The unicorn mare wasted no time and planted a light kiss on her lovers lips, Thorax was once again caught off guard by this, but, he disregarded it and kissed Twilight back, and the couple were letting out muffled moans into their muzzles. Ten seconds later, the couple released and chuckled.

"Want to undo me handsome?" Twilight asked rubbing her uniform.

Thorax blushed madly when he heard this, he knew what she meant but, he didn't want to upset her so, he had to accept it. However, he does want to have a show.

"I would rather see you do it beautiful." Thorax told her.

Twilight giggled when she heard the request.

"I accept your request handsome."

Then, Twilight reached for the large white bow tie wrapped on her back and pulled down the robes.

Thorax was blushing slightly at this, large amounts of love were gushing into his system, he just couldn't wait anymore. So, he wrapped his hooves around Twilight's back and lifted her up in the air, the exertion has made her yelp in surprise.

The changeling then made his way to the white coloured bed. Once he got to it, he tripped onto the back of the bed making the couple fall onto it with Twilight on her back, and Thorax on top of her. After that, he brought his head up to her and kissed her on the lips again with his eyes closed, and Twilight kissed back with her eyes closed.

After kissing for twenty seconds, Thorax broke the kiss and slid down to plant kisses on her neck, and the exertion has made her moan and giggle in surprise.

"Hee hee, Thorax, that tickles." Twilight giggled and moaned.

"I know but you'll enjoy it." He told her. Then, the changeling stuck his tongue out and began to lick her neck which made the unicorn mare moan and giggle in response.

After a brief moment, Thorax ceased the kissing and pulled his head up, then, Twilight slowly opened her eyes and looked up at her handsome changeling with a warm expression.

The changeling then travelled his eyes down to the bottom of Twilight's dress. After that, he gently gripped onto it with his right hoof and pulled it up gently, then he saw her wet member.

Twilight blushed madly when she saw Thorax pulling up her dress but, this is what she wanted, then, she rested her head on her pillow.

"Take me Thorax."

"With pleasure."

Then, the changeling adjusted his hardened member until it was positioned near Twilight's. Once he's done that, Thorax, slowly and gently pushed his member into Twilight's, and the couple let out groans of satisfaction when the contact happened.

"Oh! Oh my!"

Thorax then gripped onto her hips and began to thrust in and out of Twilight's member while hissing and grunting in satisfaction.

"Oh Thorax! You're so huge! D-don't stop!" Screamed Twilight.

"As you wish Twinkle's." Thorax called her with the nickname he had in mind.

Then, Thorax began to thrust faster this time, and with each thrust, he managed to make Twilight moan and scream in pleasure in return. A brief moment later, Thorax began to groan and hiss louder when he felt a slight sensation occurring in his member, while Twilight felt his member expanding inside of her's which indicates that he's going to release soon.

"T-Twilight, I-I can't hold it anymore." Thorax warned her.

"Then do it Thorax, breed your mare, let us have children." Twilight demanded as she wrapped her back hooves around his hips to corroborate that he does not go anywhere.

After four more thrusts, Thorax hissed louder when he felt that the warm sensation in his member was getting hotter, then, the sensation has proven to be too much for him.

"TWILIGHT!" Thorax yelled as he released his fluid into her member.

"OH THORAX!" Twilight yelled as she released her genetics onto her lovers member.

After ten seconds of spewing, the couple have eventually came to a stop and began to pant for breath. Thorax eventually ran out of strength and fell on top of Twilight, then, his deflating member popped out of Twilight's resulting in some of the changeling's fluid to flow out of her's, straining the bed sheets in the process.

"Your weight feels so good on me." Twilight moaned.

"I know but, you need to breathe." Thorax told her as he got off of her and layed next to her on her bed.

"Thank you so much for today Thorax." Twilight said wrapped her hooves around his back and pulling him in for a hug "I love you." She confessed.

"I love you too." Thorax confessed back.

"I love you more."

"I love you most."

After those confessions, Thorax and Twilight leaned their faces closer to each other again and kissed once more.

Outside of Twilight's bedroom, Shining Armor was seen looking through the small creak on the door while blushing madly, he had just witnessed what had happened after hearing some strange noises coming from his sister's bedroom. He sure was proud of the two of them.

"Wow, just wow. Congratulations Thorax, you've won the heart of my little sister." Shining said in a proud tone. He feels like a proud stallion.

Now, all he needs to do is to prepare to be an uncle for the upcoming months.

Author's Note

My new story has been accomplished! I hope you all enjoyed it!