Author's Note
This story is a first for me, but it was specially requested by my dear friend Critical. I hope y’all enjoy it. 
Vapor Trail: Age 20
Thunderlane: Age 29
Short: Mile High
***A Patriot Pony Short***
With a few precise turns of the dial lock, Vapor Trail opened her locker door and began pealing away her flight suit. Starting with the front zipper, she pulled it down until her shoulders were able to wriggle free. It wasn’t until her arms were out of the tight uniform that she was able to let out a satisfied sigh. She had just finished her very first practice session with the Wonderbolts, and the day had been rough on her. She was hot, sweaty, and terribly uncomfortable in her own hide. What Vapor desired now was a cool shower and a fresh change of clothes.
She stuffed the dirty flight suit in her duffel bag and dropped it on the bench behind her. Besides herself, the locker room was empty, so she figured no pony else would mind while she took a quick shower. Vapor looked back into her locker for her clean clothes, and in the reflection of her vanity mirror, she saw the door at the other end of the room open.
A hulk of a stallion stepped into the locker room and casually made his way over to the bench. Instantly aware of her own nudity, Vapor instinctively covered her breasts. She was utterly naked and out in the open, but the stallion didn’t seem to mind. In fact, he paid her no attention as he began stripping from his flight suit.
Vapor briefly wondered if he’d even seen her at all. Was he blind, or was he just being polite? Regardless of the reason, she thought only to leave with her dignity intact. She even considered taking her clothes and leaving without the shower, but then, the stallion looked up at her from the bench and offered her a friendly smile.
“Hey! I’m Thunderlane. You must be the new mare.”
Vapor was shocked by the introduction, and even more so by his outstretched hand. Hesitantly, she extended her own to meet his halfway. “Yeah... That’s me, the new mare...” She chuckled nervously, as shaking the friendly stallion’s hand left her breasts exposed. “I’m Vapor Trail.”
He had a charming glint in his eyes as he grinned at her. “It’s a pleasure to meet you, Vapor Trail. I caught some of your work out there earlier. You looked spectacular.”
She was already turning red from being caught in the nude, but now she was truly blushing. “Yeah, well... I mean, thanks...”
Thunderlane laughed. He finished slipping out of his flight suit and stood up from the bench. Now, he was just as naked as her, and he clearly wasn’t afraid to show it. “You wouldn’t be here if you weren’t a talented flier, but you had some moves out there. Captain Spitfire would never say it out loud, but she was impressed.”
Vapor’s ears felt hot, and her face had become a bright red hue. She could hear Thunderlane’s words in the back of her mind, but all she could truly focus on was his cock. It was great in length and girth, hanging freely from his crotch and nearly coming down to his knees. It took all of her willpower not to openly stare at it, but it was a battle she was sorely losing. The only thing that kept her from looking now was the fear of the embarrassment that would surly follow. She needed a way out urgently.
“I... I’m going to... I’m just going to step into the shower real quick and be on my way... It was nice meeting you-“
Thunderlane raised an eyebrow at her. He already had a towel thrown over his shoulder. “Oh, I was just about to hit the showers too! I’ll see you in there soon, Vapor.”
Fantastic. Vapor nearly slapped her face with the palm of her hand. There was no backing out now, having already made her plans known. She reached for her own towel and started to follow Thunderlane into the showers.
Vapor tried to reason with herself, figuring there was nothing to be afraid of. The locker rooms were co-ed, so the Wonderbolts must have done this all the time. Besides, Thunderlane seemed like a really nice stallion. However, as they stepped into the showers, her heart thundered in her chest.
It was simply a large, square room with tiles on every surface and shower heads fixed on every wall. There must have been a dozen of them. Thunderlane threw his towel on a hook by the entrance and stepped underneath the nearest shower head. With a turn of the handle, steaming hot water began to cascade from the faucet.
Vapor follows suit and picked a shower head on the wall opposite to Thunderlane. She turned her water on only ever so slightly, releasing a cold, refreshing rain. At the touch of the chilling water, her muscles tensed up, and her nipples hardened. She tried to keep her back to the stallion across the room, but the temptation to look was too great.
Out of the corner of her gaze, she saw him rinsing his hands through his mohawk mane. His eyes were closed, and he was clearly enjoying the soothing water. The sting of the cold shower snapped her attention back to the task at hand. She was losing focus.
Vapor began rinsing her own mane, wetting it while letting the water run down her face and chest. She had to wet her wings next. There was no avoiding turning around any longer. When she did, she once again saw the stallion’s massive cock in all of its glory, uncensored and without shame. She couldn’t help swooning at the mere sight of it.
Then, she looked up, and her eyes met his. “Vapor?”
She let out a sharp gasp and quickly averted her gaze. She’d stared for too long, and he’d seen her. What she feared had come to pass, and she had been caught. Overwhelmed with embarrassment, Vapor wanted nothing more than to shrink into nothingness. There was no way she could ever show her face around the Wonderbolts now. Everypony would think she was a pervert, and they’d be right.
Vapor was ready to break down and cry, but a gentle hand touched her shoulder. She turned quickly to find Thunderlane standing under her water. “Hey, it’s alright.” His lips formed into a reassuring smile. “I don’t mind. If there’s something you need from me, you only need to ask.”
The younger recruit was painfully aware of how close their bodies were. Despite the cold water raining down upon them, she could feel the heat from his chest. There was something she needed from him, more than ever. “Are... you sure?”
His smile widened. “I’m positive.”
Then, the hand on her shoulder moved up her neck and caressed her cheek. Vapor found herself being pulled in until his lips connected with hers. In an instant, she was trapped in his embrace as his bulky arms wrapped around her back. As the seconds passed, the kiss deepened until their lips parted to make way for their tongues. Vapor allowed his to enter her mouth and touch her own.
How quickly things had moved. Vapor was again overwhelmed. Not by embarrassment, but by the excitement, the thrill, and the anticipation of what might happen next. She shifted her wings subtly to allow Thunderlane free range to explore her rear, and he did just that, running his hands up and down her back. The tips of his fingers stopped just above her tail.
Vapor hesitated, if only for a brief moment. She’d never gone so far with a stallion before. This was exactly what she wanted. That much was clear, but that didn’t stop her first-time jitters.
To his credit, and to her relief, Thunderlane was being patient with her. Vapor rewarded his patience by shifting her tail to the side, silently granting him permission to continue. His hands then made contact with her flanks, and her heart soared. She moaned aloud into his mouth at his touch.
The kiss ended soon after. The both of them were breathing deeply. Her hands were flat on his chiseled chest, and his groped her flanks. Under the sting of the cold water, Vapor felt burning hot. “I... I want to go all the way with you...”
She knew he felt the same way. She could feel his stiffening shaft pressing against her mound.
Thunderlane loosened his grip on her flanks and nodded his head slowly. “Only of you’re sure.”
Vapor looked down at his cock, rippling and pulsating between her legs. She needed a closer look. “I’m positive...”
Slowly, she descended to her knees before him, keeping her hands flat against his body until they rested on his thighs. Her eyes were now level with the base of his shaft, and being so close to it, she began to truly understand the scale it. Every move she made now brought her deeper into uncharted territory. Only her curiosity, her desire, and her instinct guided her.
Vapor leaned in closer and carefully pressed her lips against the tip of the stallion’s hardened shaft, kissing it softly. She looked up, meeting his gaze to seek approval, and he nodded back at her, still wearing that charming smile. She couldn’t help smiling back and she moved in for another kiss, planting her lips firmly on his cock. All of her senses were on overdrive. Vapor could smell and taste his sweat from his own workout. It was intoxicating.
She kissed the shaft of his cock repeatedly, traveling down towards the base and back up to the tip. Then, taking his member in her hand, she attempted to wrap her fingers around the whole circumference, but his size was simply too great. Vapor explored every inch of the stallion’s penis, familiarizing herself with every vein and ripple, right down to his engorged testicles. It fascinated her and fulfilled her most innate desires at the same time. “Am I doing okay?”
Thunderlane beamed at her. “You’re doing amazing. You could also try sucking on it, if you want.”
Now there was an idea. Vapor did indeed want that very much. She took his cock in both hands and adjusted her balance on her knees. Using her hands, she guided the tip of Thunderlane’s cock towards her lips, always keeping her eyes fixed on his and seeking his approval. The last thing she wanted to do was make a mistake with his stallionhood.
Now, the tip was only a breath away from her lips. Her first blowjob was just a hair away. There was nothing for it. Vapor opened her mouth wide, and the tip passed her lips, quickly filling her mouth and threatening to go down her throat. He felt far bigger than he looked, but she couldn’t stop now. She’d only taken ingested a few inches of his mighty cock, and her mouth was already filled to the brim.
Vapor didn’t want to disappoint Thunderlane, especially since it was her first time, so she closed her lips around his cock and began sucking. The movements came naturally to her. She simply did what she always imagined it would be like. Regardless of her inexperience, it seemed to do the trick for Thunderlane. She felt his hand on the back of her head. He stroked her mane, causing her chest to flutter, but more importantly, it told her that he was enjoying it.
Success! Vapor was properly pleased with herself, knowing that she was making him feel good. She closed her eyes and focused on getting into a good rhythm. With every movement, she tried to take a little bit more of the cock into her mouth, loosening her jaw and exhaling through her nose as the head passed her lips.
She was getting hot and bothered herself. Leaving one hand to hold onto the shaft, she freed the other to play with herself, first tracing her fingers up and down the length of her slit before plunging them inside. This didn’t last, however, as Thunderlane placed his hands on her shoulders and hoisted her onto her feet.
Initially, Vapor feared she’d done something wrong, but those fears vanished when Thunderlane kissed her on the lips. It was forceful, deep, and passionate. Vapor wondered if she might be in love.
When the kiss broke, a thick strand of saliva bridged their lower lips. Thunderlane stared intensely into her eyes. “Are you ready?”
Vapor stared blankly back at him, unsure if she’d heard him correctly. His silence confirmed her suspicions. Without an ounce of hesitation left in her, she nodded and allowed him to take control.
Thunderlane kissed her on the lips again, making her heart flip in her chest as he turned her towards the wall. The shower head poured onto her back now, and a massive shape, which she could only assume to be his cock, pressed into her flanks. Vapor took deep breaths as he prodded her with his shaft. She knew what was going to happen next, and she couldn’t wait any longer. It was as though she was perpetually being held before the brink of a fall.
The stallion’s arms wrapped around her body, hooking under her arms before grabbing onto her breasts. She gasped at his touch as his palms brushed against her nipples, but she dared not protest. His cock poked against her slit with an obvious eagerness that she couldn’t deny, even if she wanted to. “Do it... please...”
That must have been enough for Thunderlane, because what happened next caused her mind to go blank. In an instant, all of her senses went offline, and her entire body felt a shock, followed by numbness. She could feel his breath on the back of her neck as he pushed into her, stretching and tearing her womb apart as he broke her innocence. Vapor winced as waves of pain began to wash over her, but she didn’t ask him to stop. She didn’t want him to stop.
Her body resisted his entry even though her heart and thoughts begged him to continue, and continue he did. Thunderlane didn’t stop until he had fully sheathed his cock in her slit and his pelvis pressed against her flanks. Then, he began to move. At first, his thrusts were subtle and slow as he deliberately pulled back out only to plunge back inside her womb, but as her inner walls began to accept his size more and more, he increased his pace.
Vapor tried desperately to muffle her moans, but it was a useless endeavor. Between Thunderlane’s hands playing with her breasts and his cock pumping in and out of her pussy, nothing short of a gag could silence her. Her moans quickly matched the rhythm of thrusts and the gentle ‘slaps’ that echoed throughout the room. Anypony anywhere near the locker room could certainly hear them, but Vapor didn’t care at this point. All she wanted was satisfaction, and it seemed that Thunderlane was willing to give her what she wanted.
He pounded into her with ferocity, now. Each hit from behind was a blessing. Vapor had never felt so fulfilled in her life, but just when she thought it couldn’t get any better, he stopped. Her pussy was without its mate, but before she could ask what was wrong, Thunderlane turned her around. He then slammed her back against the wall, lifting her up by her legs, and he pushed his cock inside once again.
Vapor cried out with wide eyes as he took her against the tiled wall and filled her womb with his member. Her soaking wet mane was stuck to her shoulders, but her breasts bounced in every direction possible. Every nerve in her body was firing like crazy. She could feel it all.
As if that wasn’t enough, Thunderlane kissed her neck tenderly. He was a multitasker indeed! His lips pecked at her repeatedly, traveling down her neck and even lower to her breasts. When he kissed her flesh, she arched her back violently, but the escalation didn’t stop there. Thunderlane, with the precision of an expert, latched onto her nipple and began sucking it, licking it, and even nibbling on it. He teased her most sensitive parts in every was possible, all while maintaining a steady pace and breaching her womb.
“Oh, Thunderlane!” Vapor couldn’t help screaming aloud. She couldn’t stop herself. Somepony must have heard them, but she didn’t care.
The stallion was moving with blinding speed now. Vapor couldn’t even feel her legs, but the happy chemicals in her brain told her it felt oh so satisfying.
“Va-Vapor...”
Vapor gasped as he moaned her name. She didn’t have to be an expert to know what he was trying to tell her. Her head was spinning in circles. There wasn’t any time to think, let alone tell him to pull out. Instead, she did the only thing she could and wrapped her limbs around Thunderlane, locking him in for better or worse. Through her gritted teeth, she snarled in his ear. “Do it!”
Thunderlane groaned aloud as he plunged his cock deep inside her pussy, slamming his pelvis into hers as he emptied his testicles into her womb. Vapor too climaxed, shivering violently as an intense orgasm shook the mare to her very core. Thunderlane continued to cream inside her. She felt every twitch as he pumped more and more of his seed into her welcoming slit, ravaged sore.
When it was over, she collapsed against the wall, unable to feel anything but the water hitting her feet. Through her hazy vision, she could see that Thunderlane looked less exhausted, but still spent. Both Wonderbolts breathed heavily and deeply. Vapor was ready to fall, and she might have if Thunderlane hadn’t caught her. “Are you alright?”
Vapor was more than alright. She’d never felt so good. She was deflowered, but she couldn’t be happier it was done by such a talented and gentle stallion. “Yeah...”
Still carrying her weight, Thunderlane chuckled and absentmindedly looked towards the other side of the room before finally meeting her gaze again. “If you don’t have anything else to do... You wanna get some drinks tonight? Just the two of us?”
Her marehood had been torn asunder, but she wouldn’t have it any other way. It was then that she felt warm fluids trickling from her slit and down her leg. Vapor knew the consequences of her actions would reveal themselves before long, but in the moment, she didn’t care in the slightest. She didn’t know who’s cum it was, the stuff leaking from her flower. It could have been his, her own, or a combination of the two. She felt her lips curl into a wide grin.
“Yeah...”
Intense sex and a date all in one evening? How could she possibly say ‘no’? Especially when she considered the possibility of the date ending with more sex. Now that she’d had it once, she was hooked. Thunderlane was like a drug, and she was absolutely addicted.
***The End***
