Chapter 1 First kiss
Is beautiful today from Ponyville, and Hurricane Blade in the Sugarcube Corner to helping Pinkie Pie make cupcakes, pies, and cakes. And they have so much fun together, they giggle and talking to each other. And later they are done, go outside from Sugarcube Corner and they giggle still, chatting a lot of things.
''Oh my gosh, that was so fun! are you agree Canea?'' Pinkie Pie asks and jumping around from Hurricane Blade with a huge happy face.
''Yes Pinkie, it was, and I have it so much fun with you today.'' Hurricane Blade says with a warm smile and Pinkie Pie jumping again with excitement, hugs her tight that Hurricane can't breathe.
''Awwww! I'm glad you do Canea! and you like a sister to me, Oh, we should do a friend necklace together!'' Pinkie Pie says with excitement and hugs her still but very tightly, Hurricane feels like she gonna go to heaven soon.
''Y-Yeah, P-P-Pinkie we should but can you just let me go ready? l think l gonna go heaven s-soon!'' Hurricane Blade says without breathing, Pinkie Pie let her go and giggle nervously.
''Hehe, sorry about that Canea.'' Pinkie Pie says with a nervous smile and Hurricane breathes a little bit, a smile with a giggle,''
''Hehe, is alright Pinkie but this time don't send me to heaven soon when you hug me.'' Hurricane Blade says joking around.
Hurricane Blade, Pinkie Pie laughing about that joke and started walking around in Ponyville, talking about random things. And laughing about it, Pinkie stops jumping around.
''And, oh look there our friends, and wait where is Rainbow Dash?'' Pinkie Pie asks confusedly and Hurricane Blade looking around, been confused too.
''Well, I'm not sure but let's ask them and find out where is.'' Hurricane Blade says and Pinkie Pie nods with a big smile on her lips.
''Okie dokie lokie Canea!''
Pinkie Pie says and both walk over to their friends, Their friends see them and Applejack is the first one who said hello to them by raising her hat from her head.
''Howdy to you two!'' Applejack says with a smile and then Rarity comes to says hello to them too.
''Well, hello darlings.'' Rarity says with fixing own mane and then comes Fluttershy to says hello to them too with a shy, and quiet voice.
''Uhm... Hello,'' Fluttershy says shyly and Twilight comes to say hello to them too.
''Hi, Pinkie and Canea,'' Twilight say with a warm smile, Hurricane Blade and Pinkie Pie say hello to them too.
''Hello, girls! we just thinking where is Rainbow Dash?'' Pinkie Pie says with a smile and Hurricane Blade comes to agree with Pinkie.
''Yeah.'' Hurricane Blade says with concern.
And Twilight, Fluttershy, and Rarity thinking about where Rainbow Dash is too but Applejack comes to answer that question to them with a smile.
''Ah'm, thinking she sleeping on ah clouds, Sugarcubes.'' Applejack says with concern and Rarity comes to agree with Applejack.
''Oh yes, darlings, l see her sleeping on clouds in this today but Hurricane? l want asks you something.'' Rarity says with concern but smirks a little bit but does not show it and Hurricane Blade nods.
''Sure, Rarity, What is it?'' Hurricane Blade asks with concern and a little bit curious but soon she feels fears when she sees Rarity smirks at her.
''Well, darling, how are you and Rainbow Dash having going on? are you two secretly dating?
When Rarity asks that Hurricane Blade started blushing so hard and her friends looking at her, really see that she is blushing but Fluttershy doesn't like that question from Rarity. Cus she thinks that Hurricane is too much taller than Rainbow Dash and Hurricane Blade tries to defend herself from that question.
''W-W-What are you talking about Rarity?! I and Rainbow Dash are just friends,'' Hurricane Blade says with a blush on her cheek but all only smirks.
''Oh, come on darling just admit, you like her.'' Rarity says with tease and Hurricane Blade started to feel uncomfortable with a blush on her cheek.
''Yeah, ah you should admit your own feelings from Rainbow Dash ready, sugarcube.'' Applejack says with girn on her lips with Rarity.
''Applejack! you too?! Hurricane Blade blushing and her friends girn but not Fluttershy.
Uhm...Girls?'' Fluttershy tries to get attention from her friends.
''Yeah! you should tell her cus we know how you looking at her.' Pinkie Pie says with excitement.
''W-What you all mean? l looking at her as a friend.'' Hurricane Blade says very uncomfortably and Fluttershy tries to get attention again.
''Girls?'' Fluttershy says with annoying.
''Oh, c'mon Canea, just admit ready,'' Twilight says with a teasing tone but then Fluttershy has it enough from that.
''GIRLS STOP!!! don't you see that she is uncomfortably about that?!''
Fluttershy yells to her friends and her friends looking at her with shock on the face even Hurricane Blade is in shock too, Fluttershy noticed and feel bad that she yelled at her friends but she to tell them the truth.
''l'm sorry, but uhm... Do you all think is too much? cus Hurricane Blade is a very taller mare than Rainbow Dash, that she can be crushed her for one min it.'' Fluttershy says with a serious face but quiet voice.
Hurricane feels little hurt and flys away that no one not noticed, flys her super-speed but not likely when Rainbow Dash does. And Rarity is a shock what Fluttershy says, she can't believe that she says like that. ''Fluttershy darling, how you can say something like that to Hurricane Blade?'' Rarity asks her with shock.
''Yea! why you so mean all suddenly? that's nothing like you all!'' Pinkie Pie asks with worry about Hurricane Blade's feelings and soon Fluttershy noticed what she is done.
''Oh my, I'm sorry, l-l... Uhm.'' Fluttershy doesn't know what says and Applejack noticed that Hurricane Blade is gone, she sighs.
''Sugarcube, ah'm think you are late for that cus she has gone,'' Applejack says with a serious face and all gasp, them looking the around and not see Hurricane Blade anywhere.
For while, Hurricane Blade flies away far from Ponyville but not so far away. And she flys down on the ground, she started walking a little bit and sitting on the grass. Meanwhile, when she sitting on the grass and looking at the lake, thinking a lot of things what be happened to her life. And how she meet her friends but one friend she can't trust now, she is Fluttershy who hurt her own feelings from that taller thing. And she sighs but soon Rainbow Dash becomes her mind who is her close friends, very loyal to her and funny. But soon she feels something inside her heart, her heart started beating fast and her cheek is so red, she touches her cheek with her one hoof.
''What's wrong with me? I'm not like Rainbow Dash like that or do l?''
Hurricane Blade asks herself but soon shakes her own head and started walks home but later water fall on her from the sky, she was shock and soaking wet. Soon she hears someone's laughter from on clouds who she knows as well.
''Ha ha ha hahaha! you should see your own face, you are soaking wet!'' Rainbow Dash says that but still laughing and Hurricane Blade look at Rainbow Dash with annoying eyes, rolled her own eyes but she can't help it smile and Rainbow Dash noticed, smile too.
''So you have done naping hmmm?'' Hurricane Blade asks with a smile and Rainbow Dash nodded only.
''Yep, and sorry about that water thing but you to admit it was funny, hehe, tall mare.'' Rainbow Dash says with smirks on her lips, Hurricane Blade started to feel sad again what Fluttershy says to her but shake her head again and be in her thoughts.
''Stop Hurricane Blade is just your nickname but why it hurt me too much?!'' Hurricane Blade says that and Rainbow Dash sees that her friend not listening to her so she gets worried about her, fly over her.
''Hurricane are you okay?'' Rainbow Dash asks her with worry voice and Hurricane Blade looks at her.
''Hu? oh yeah, I'm fine Dashie and sorry about that so what you say?'' Hurricane Blade asks her Rainbow Dash looked at her shock cus her close friend never call her Dashie before.
''Uhm, do you just call me Dashie?'' Rainbow Dash asks, Hurricane Blade nods and walks too close to the lake, and sitting on the grass, Rainbow Dash gets worried and she walks over to her, sitting next to her and both looking at the sunset, and they think the sunset is beautiful today.
''Rainbow...?'' Hurricane Blade looking at the sunset with a quiet voice.
''Yeah?'' Rainbow Dash looking at her with concern.
''Can l? uhm... Asks you something? Hurricane Blade asks shyly a voice and Rainbow Dash nods.
''Of course, you can. Go ahead, but why you been come shy all suddenly? is just me, awesome me.'' Rainbow Dash says with a smile and Hurricane Blade thinking that too.
''That's a good question Rainbow Dash.'' Hurricane Blade says with concern and Rainbow Dash is disappointed that she does not call her Dashie anymore so she gonna tease her a little bit.
''Awww! not Dashie anymore? that's a shame, not even a kiss on my cheek Melody?. Rainbow Dash says with a tease.
Hurricane Blade's heart started racing hard and her face is so red, that she calls her real name and started to defend herself from that. ''Wh...What the hay is that supposed to mean Rainbow Dash?! you sound like we dating something.'' Hurricane Blade says that with a serious face but still blushing and now Rainbow Dash blushing but started to be annoying.
''Melody, what the hay?! Rainbow Dash asks with a serious face and Hurricane Blade rolled her eyes.
''Well, you started!'' Hurricane Blade says with anger and Rainbow Dash pushed her to the ground, she is top her and Hurricane blushing.
''No, you started!'' Rainbow Dash says with annoying.
But soon she noticed that she is top on her but not friendly way and she feels her heart racing hard, Rainbow feels two hoofs on her cheek from Hurricane Blade and she kisses her. Rainbow Dash has wide eyes but Hurricane kisses her still and but soon she noticed, stop fast and looking at her. Rainbow looking at her in shock and Hurricane Blade feels embarrassed. ''Oh, my gosh Rainbow Dash, l sorry, l-l... l don-'' Hurricane Blade be cut by a kiss from Rainbow Dash and she has wide eyes but, Soon, she melting on the kiss and close her own eyes, kiss her back with passionately. Time is frozen well for them, but what gonna happened next when both stop kissing? and both kissing each other heavily, they not noticed night come very soon.
Author's Note
This story is old that l never behave time finished this story, l pause on chapter 4 and here is the old version: https://www.deviantart.com/diamondix25/art/Is-Just-Kiss-Right-848515379
Chapter 2 Tonight thoughts
Chapter 2 Tonight thoughts
It tonight, and Hurricane Blade is in her bed thinking about something. She thought about what Rainbow Dash says to her when they stop kissing each other and what gonna happened to their friendship, do it becomes something like a relationship that they started dating, or do they been just friends rest of their lives? but still, Hurricane feels embarrassed and shame she do that Rainbow. But she kisses her back so what wrong then? and Hurricane Blade sighs on her own bed, thinking does she is in love with Rainbow Dash or not? and she feels so confused about this, soon flashback comes to her mind.
Flashback.
When Hurricane Blade and Rainbow Dash stop kissing each other, both looking at each other with a blush on the cheek and soon they started kissing each other again on lips. And both melting on a kiss, they kiss is intense but mostly passionately but soon Rainbow started moaning a little bit on the kiss. And she wants to go little french kissing with her, Hurricane mouth is open and Rainbow Dash put its tongue in her mouth, started its tongue kissing and Hurricane Blade feels wet tongue in her mouth, she started blushing hard and feels nervous. And she pushes Rainbow a little bit, blushing more and Rainbow Dash too.
''Did you just kissing me with your tongue?'' Hurricane Blade says with breath a little bit, Rainbow Dash breathes too and nods.
''Y-Yea.'' Rainbow Dash says with blushing and breathes still, Hurricane Blade blushing too.
''Oh, o-okay.'' Hurricane Blade says with blushing.
Meanwhile, Hurricane Blade and Rainbow Dash blushing hard what happened to them just now, both have an awkward silence. ''Oh my gosh! what I'm gonna do? l can't ruin my reputation in Equestria but still.'' Rainbow says in her thoughts and she looking at Hurricane who watching the lake with a cute face. ''Seriously? do she to be damn, cute? Rainbow Dash says within thoughts, a blush on her face, and Hurricane Blade noticed that Rainbow looking at her, She blushes but soon she has broken awkward silence.
''Soo... Uhm, what we gonna do about this?'' Hurricane Blade asks with a blush on her cheek and Rainbow Dash thinking about this.
''Well, l-l... l think we should take this slow a little bit about this.'' Rainbow Dash says with a careful tone that she does not hurt Hurricane Blade's feelings but she fails.
''Oh, l see, well for you reputation is more important you when relationship huh?'' Hurricane Blade says with disappointment and soon tears become to her eyes, Rainbow Dash noticed that she crying and she has wide eyes.
''Melody, d-do you cry? please don't cry! l not mean like that, l just.'' Rainbow Dash says with worried and tries the best to comfort her with her wing on her back but Hurricane Blade pushed her away from her.
''Just what? you only care about your reputation, not me and Fluttershy was right l just a taller mare who crushed stallions, mares one min it!'' Hurricane Blade says with tears in her eyes and Rainbow Dash looking at her confusedly.
''Wait, Fluttershy and Crushed, what hay are you talking about?'' Rainbow Dash asks confusedly.
Hurricane Blade just flashes into the sky with tears and fly away fast her own home, left Rainbow Dash on the ground all alone with shock and wide eyes.
''Melody, wait!'' Rainbow Dash says but it was too late and she does it face hoof. ''Damn it!'' she feels bad and she knows to make things right with her tomorrow.
Flashback End.
Hurricane Blade feels guilt and bad what she says to Rainbow Dash before, but soon she put one hoof on her own lips. And she feels like Rainbow Dash's lips taste like blueberry before when she kissed her, sigh and trying to get to sleep but she can't able do it but still she trying.
''Oh Rainbow, what we gonna do about this? why we can't go where we are friends before? but is different now, nothing can't change that now.'' Hurricane Blade says in her thoughts.
Hurricane Blade sighs and soon she has tears in her eyes again, she knows that she messes up with Rainbow Dash and now she thinks their friendship over in this and cus Rarity. And she sighs again, soon she falls asleep and later in Rainbow house. She on her own bed and thinking about what just happened to her with Hurricane, she feels bad about what she says to her. And Soon she touches her own lips with her hoof, thinking that her friend's lips taste like a strawberry milkshake and Rainbow Dash licks her own lips a little bit and blushing for embarrassment what she thinking just now. She tries to get back to sleep and thinking that can they be friends again or does their friendship become more than just That? Rainbow Dash becomes more annoying, shakes her own head, and goes to under the pillow, blushing crazy and goes out from under the pillow.
''Oh my gosh! what I'm gonna do? l never being care romantic so much before but now l do and l feels so confused now, but still, l to make things right with her but how?'' Rainbow Dash says in her thoughts.
Soon Rainbow Dash falls asleep even is almost morning and soon or later she wakes up yawning hard, she has a messy mane and looks at her own face. And see that she is very tired, she too tired to brush her own mane or anything so she just brushes her own teeth and soon she started flying to clear skies. Even she very tired and she yawning again but she knows she to do this, soon she goes to see her own friends especially Hurricane Blade. With Hurricane, she brushes her own mane and brushes her own teeth, she so tired too from yesterday. She yawning and soon started to do chores for bucking strawberry Apples from the trees even she very tired so she bucking Strawberry Apples from trees and still Rainbow Dash is in her thoughts.
Author's Note
Here is Chapter 2 and here is the original from chapter 2: https://www.deviantart.com/diamondix25/art/Is-Just-Kiss-Right-848851966
