Hypnotized Fluttershy
Fluttershy gets hypnotized by Rarity before she goes of to Canterlot for a week
Fluttershy gets hypnotized by Rarity before she goes of to Canterlot for a week,
because of reasons you will read in the second chapter, But Rarity accidentally leaves a hypnotic suggestion in her subconsious.
Poor Fluttershy...
First story I am critic proof but will listen to any critisism (also english isn't my strongest point)
I added it to the Fan/fic/ Theater 3000 group, because why not? Riff it if you like. Get creative. And let me know if you riff it, no hard feelings will be involved.
9755 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read
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9 Chapters:
- Chapter 1 - Prologue (Soon to be edited) 2012-09-24 21:17:16 UTC1096
- Chapter 2 - Some problems (Soon to be edited) 2012-09-24 21:21:38 UTC1364
- Chapter 3 - Final setup (Soon to be edited) 2012-09-24 21:24:40 UTC990
- Chapter 4 - Day 1 - Show your idea's to the cranky one (Soon to be edited) 2012-09-24 21:27:04 UTC1078
- Chapter 5 - Day 1 - Double Rainbow is to obvious so I'm going with two pots o' gold (Soon to be edited) 2012-09-24 21:29:57 UTC1675
- Chapter 6 - Day 2 - Randomish Stuff (Soon to be edited) 2012-10-13 23:23:14 UTC1256
- Outdated News Archive. News/Guess what? 2013-05-10 23:54:19 UTC73
- Chapter 7 - Day 3 - Hypnotized Fluttershy Resurrection (The Once Aborted Chapter) (Soon to be edited) 2013-08-29 00:34:36 UTC1611
- Chapter 8 - Day 3 - Waking up (Soon to be edited, I swear) 2013-09-15 12:34:18 UTC612