Author's Note

These scenes somehow didn't make it into the final version of the manuscript. I'm publishing them now, a year later, as the sequel is being published.

The Missing Scenes

Stellar pushed herself slowly up and down on Firelight's mammoth cock, riding him in cowmare position as she gazed down into his eyes. To think that she was now moving so tenderly, when she would have had him mounting her and destroying her cervix instead, like she'd originally hoped...

But the sense of awe and wonder in the eyes that gazed back sparked her nostalgic passion for that special night with her husband so many years ago. His body trembled softly beneath her, betraying his apprehension about their activities. She didn't want him to do anything else but lie there so she could lose herself in his eyes.

There was also another thing she could feel flowing freely from this stallion: love. He loved her. Perhaps if she wasn't drunk on lust she would be deeply concerned, considering their current forms, but it seemed utterly inconsequential to her in this moment.

"This is incredible," he whispered. "Thank you."

Stellar Flare smiled, still slowly, deeply thrusting herself down on his member. It filled her up completely, and pulled away again, giving her a sense of emptiness and longing.

She had grown to be a bitter, selfish mare. She knew that. It was because of the emptiness in her heart when her husband had left her to raise Sunburst completely alone.

And this stallion was filling her emptiness with his entire self, body and soul. She realized as they slowly shifted their bodies that she didn't want Firelight anymore.

His cock began to pulse inside of her. She knew what was coming. "It's okay," she whispered. "Fill momma up." Seed flooded into her as his member began to seize and kick, and the stallion grunted and groaned in ecstasy.

Stellar secretly wished that she were young and fertile. That the spell wasn't protecting against an unwanted pregnancy. Because right now, whoever this stallion really was - when they woke up side-by-side the next morning - that was the stallion she wanted to be with.

Nothing could ever convince her otherwise.

Starlight stared, aghast, as she hovered outside the window of Room 403, peering through a small gap in the curtains. She'd tried pounding on the window to get their attention, but it seems the windows had a soundproofing spell.
A growing terror filled her heart with every single movement of hips, every deep, penetrating stroke into her own body's pussy. And it bothered her immensely that watching such a debauched act was turning her on as much as it was terrifying her.

She watched herself slowly lean forward to kiss her father full on the lips, her father's penis spilling semen from between her own thighs as it came free.

This was the worst possible thing that could have happened. She would never live this down - every pony in Ponyville would know about it, and her life was ruined.

"Look, there's the pony who fucked her dad."

Starlight could already hear the whisperings. Everypony that ever...

She stopped as a sudden realization struck her. Nopony in Ponyville had ever met her father before. Not a single one. There was no reputation to harm. At most, all anypony would have seen was the two of them walking together. She'd built up an insane scenario in her own head and she had been chasing this crazy problem over nothing.

A wave of relief washed over her. And with the stress melting away, so, too, did her inhibitions. She needed a cock. And she needed a cock now.

Flying as fast as Fluttershy's wings would allow, she forced herself back in through the window of room 412. She almost burst out of the bathroom, but then realized she was completely dry, and instead jumped under the water of the still-running shower.

It was cold. She shrieked involuntarily at the shock, but stayed under the spray long enough to not arouse suspicion in her beau, who was presumably waiting patiently for her return.

Turning off the water, Starlight hopped quickly out of the tub and pushed the door to the other room open again.
A note greeted her.

"To the pretty yellow mare, whoever you were: you give great head. But fuck you for ruining my vacation."

Thunderlane was nowhere in sight. Regret bubbled up in Starlight's heart as she read the note over again.

She fell back onto the chair in the corner. She'd fucked up her own weekend, too. Over what?

Over the possible thought that her father, who wasn't actually her dad, might be seen fucking herself? Even though no one knew who he was?

And the thought still had her a bit heated in the nethers. She set the note on the arm of the chair, and her forehoof wandered idly toward her slit.

Starlight began rubbing her clit, imagining that it was really herself being fucked by her dad. The thought itself was so much hotter than it had any right to be!

And as Starlight got into it, the chair began to rock. And the note fluttered to the ground, right next to something else that caught Starlight's attention just enough to give her pause.

It was a small key.

Engraved with Room 403.