Season 9 The ending of the end rewrite

by NoOneKnown

Chapter 2: Canterlot raid

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The fight between Lord Tirek and Pillars of Equestria was over. It occured that he was more powerful than all Pillars combined so he didn't struggle too much in defeating them.

Chrysalis fought Starlight Glimmer and ex-queen of changelings was victorious. As soon as she disoriented Starlight with magical blast, she wrapped her enemy's body and horn with changeling goo to prevent any escape attempt and carried her into dungeons under Canterlot, where she soon was locked up.

Chrysalis was already near Canterlot, waiting for her allies. She soon spotted Tirek running towards their final destination - the Canterlot Castle.

"Here you are!" - Chrysalis exclaimed

"And so you!" - Tirek replied - "How was your fight with this Starlight?" - he asked, quickly realizing he's just rhymed

"It was cakewalk. She almost defeated me by shooting magical blast into mountain and causing avalanche, which fell on me, but I still had enough stamina to unbury myself, stun her and lock her up underneath Canterlot, in a dungeon." - Chrysalis said with pride - "and how was your battle with Pillars of Equestria?"

"It shouldn't be called battle - it was some beatings for these bloody Pillars. They weren't even trying to stop me" - Tirek bragged - "Also, that explains why Stalight was there, trapped in greenish cocoon in these dungeons when I got inside to lock Pillars up" - he added

"Now let's roll! We still got Canterlot to demolish and Twilight to beat up!" - Chrysalis commanded and flew to Canterlot

"Wait!" - Tirek shouted, making Chrysalis stop.

"What is it?" - Chrysalis asked, before landing near Tirek

"Where's Cozy Glow? I haven't seen her since we left our hideout? Have you?" - Tirek asked, a bit concerned

"Neither me! Maybe she's already done with those pathetic princesses, their precious student, Twilight Sparkle and her puppets, a.k.a friends"

"Well, only one way to find out" - Tirek said and ran towards Canterlot. Chrysalis flew up and followed him

Minute later, they were already in Canterlot Castle, surrounded by Royal Guards. They wouldn't care about these guards and just headed to the throne room, if they weren't so annoying; flying around them and blocking their way. The villains, enraged by them, started to fight the guards.

Guards weren't a challenge at all to empowered Lord Tirek and Queen Chrysalis. They were getting knocked out with one punch or magic blast.

"Hey, Chrysalis? It's a bit boring, isn't it?" - Tirek said with sly grin.

"Yes, let's have some fun!" - Chrysalis shouted and shot magic blast to one of the towers, causing it to collapse.

"Oh yes, that's beautiful" - Tirek approved the idea of causing damage to Canterlot Castle.


In Canterlot Castle, everypony and Discord was thinking of strategy to fight off Lord Tirek and Queen Chrysalis, and then suddenly they heard door open with a thud.

It were three other royal guards running towards Princesses and their group - two pegasi stallions with golden armours and unicorn mare with black armour. Once they reached the group, pegasus guard shouted

"Tirek and Chrysalis are already in Canterlot and are too powerful! This is emergency!"

Other pegasus guard added - "they are decimating our guards and other protection"

Twilight's ears dropped, eyes widened and her face had an expression of panic. She didn't move and said anything, just stared at the guards.

"Twilight, yer good?" - Applejack asked, tapping her shoulder with left forehoof

But soon she recovered and her panic only increased.

"Well, don't be scared, but..." *gulp* "I don't know what to do in this situation!" - Her voice became more somber - "Our strategy would be good if they didn't come to us, now our plan is useless. It's over now!" - Twilight's eyes get watery and her voice is cracking - "I...I failed - not as a princess, but also as a friend. As a pony after all! And because of that, Equestria will be doomed" - at this point she falls on the floor, put her head facing her crossed forelegs and bursted out crying.

At this moment, everyone in the throne room started feeling down, both from seeing Twilight like that and the fact that they enemies - Lord Tirek and Queen Chrysalis are likely to take over Equestria and ruin it.

Fluttershy approached crying Twilight, picked her up and wrapped her forelegs and wings around her in a hug, trying to console her, with Twilight's right cheek rested on her chest. Her crying lessened to single sniffs and hiccups.

"Shhh, Twilight! Everything will be alright! It's not your fault at all" - Fluttershy soothed. Everyone else just stayed quiet.

"I-I-I might h-have an ide..a" - Cozy Glow stuttered, feeling bad for Twilight. Princesses, that Draconequus and these 3 guards stared at her

"Then say it! Now!" - commanded black-armoured unicorn guard

"I'll pretend I'm still by their side! I can lay down here and claim that it was a trap, got defeated and lost my alicorn form! This way, maybe I'll be able to sabotage them!" - Cozy capsulized her strategy

Everyone was sceptic. Will she really keep fighting by their side or rejoin the villains?

"I guess it's worth trying." - Princess Celestria said kindly and then added "You better don't let us down!"

"I won't! I promise!" - Cozy said, while trotting near throne room doors, laying on the floor and disheveling her curls to look more convincing when she'll say she was defeated.

"Pretty smart..." - Twilight whispered, still being in Fluttershy's embrace. She heard it and couldn't help smiling.


Soon after that, huge beam of magic blasted from the wall behind Twilight's throne, turning it into tiny particles just to reveal the remaining two villains.

Tirek was first to notice lying Cozy Glow, with her disheveled mane and her eyes closed.

"Chrysalis look! Over there!" - he pointed to lying filly

Chrysalis gasped and yelled - "What did you do to her?!"

"I told them that you're all incoming" - Discord answered - "so, we set an ambush for you all, but apparently you can't work together. And you even left one of your allies on her own" - he smirked

"Oh shut it!" - Chrysalis snarled, giving Discord extreme glare.

"We are wasting time. Don't you remember what we are here for?" - Tirek reprimanded her - "You're ready?"

"Let's do some redecoration" - She said with evil grin.

With that being said, Tirek and Chrysalis were charging their magic for powerful blast. Princess Celestria and Luna quickly realised what they were up to and created magical shield to protect their group.

*BLAST*

Bigger part of the Castle was gone and fell from the mountain down to Ponyville.

"Oh no!" - Twilight yelped and gently wiggled to make Fluttershy release her from embrace, what she did. Then, Twilight looked around in shock.

"Oh, but we aren't done yet" - Chrysalis claimed in evil tone.

Then, they both charged another blast, but this time at Twilight and her group. Princesses shield was handling this attack very well at the beginning, but then it began to crack under the force of the beam.

The shield vanished right away and all the group was blasted with it.

Everyone inside this shield was quickly stunned and all of them, who were able to cast spells and get out of there, were too weak to use their magic. They were all lying unconscious on the floor.

Lord Tirek was the one to approach them with smirk - "You really thought you could win against us"

"Silly ponies..." - she added then turned to Tirek - "give me that bell"

"What? Why?" - he asked

"Since Cozy is too irresponsible to use the power in this bell, I might be able to use it correctly" - she explained

"Well...if you think so" - he agreed reluctantly, because he wanted all this magic.

Then, she used a spell for releaving power on Chrysalis before saying "enjoy".

Chrysalis was surrounded with energy zaps and glowing. Soon she got out from this shock caused by magic passing to her and noticed, that except the crown and shoes, now she was wearing full greenish armour, which meant she was even more powerful.

"I am pleased with this" - Chrysalis said, clearly enjoying increase of her power, then pointed at them with contempt - "What do we do with them"

"The best idea is just to lock them up underneath the Canterlot, in this dungeon. No pony, or other creature will be able to hear them. Even more - there are pieces of your throne, so they won't be able to use their magic" - Tirek suggested

"This is the best we can do" - Chrysalis appreciated his idea - "just one thing, for safety of course"

Then she wrapped their enemies in the same goo she used on Starlight Glimmer

"Nice work. They won't escape now" - Tirek praised her for this idea

Chrysalis then told Tirek - "But you'll have to carry them. I will carry Cozy and scold her when she becomes conscious"

"No problem" - he quickly answered, nodding his head and lifting them all in one-piece jelly-like goo.

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