Total Chaos Island

by Starlight Fan

Rating: teen
Tags: Drama, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Spike, Comedy, Starlight Glimmer, Romance, My Little Pony: The Movie, Discord, Alternate Universe, Main 6
Length: 8554

Discord gets 24 competitors from all across Equestria to compete in Camp Chaotix for 1,000,000 bits.

Discord gets 24 competitors from all across Equestria to compete in Camp Chaotix for 1,000,000 bits, who will win and who will end up going to the Dock of Shame find out on Total Chaos Island.

Published 2021-05-24 18:20:01 UTC
Last updated 2021-06-24 01:32:51 UTC

Welcome to the Island

Note: This all takes place after Season 8, Season 9 isn’t canon and it’s summer time. Also I figured with the movie theater I saw in One Bad Apple and the projector that was used in Hurricane Fluttershy, it’s safe to say some technology might exist in Equestria.

“Hello everypony, it is I, the great and magnificent Discord, welcome to Total Chaos Island. Here's the deal; 24 of my dear friends are going to compete for 1,000,000 bits. This place is called Camp Chaotix, there will be cabins for our contestants to sleep in, there is also the Mess Hall where contestants will dine on magnificent foods, the campers will have to survive challenges, the camp food, and most of all each other, find out who wins the 1,000,000 bits on Total Chaos Island.” Discord announced as he stood on the dock of his newest island.

After a commercial break Discord began speaking again “Welcome back, so our little campers are about to show up to compete for the money.” Discord explained.

“And here they come now, our first contestants.” Discord announced “Twilight, Spike, Starlight, welcome to your new home for the next few days.”

“Ugh Discord this place looks terrible, it does not look very healthy.” Twilight said angrily.

“Yeah this place is a dump.” Spike said angrily.

“Let it be known you can’t always expect luxury when competing for money.” Discord said smiling.

“Ugh.” Twilight groaned.

“Come on Twilight it’ll be okay.” Starlight reassured the purple alicorn.

“I sure hope so.” Twilight said heading to the dock along with Spike and Starlight.

Next up was Rarity who was grossed out by the island. “I thought this was going to be a deluxe spa.”

“Haha no, now if you’ll head to the dock you will see your friends down there.” Discord presented Rarity to the dock as she huffed.

The next boat showed up with a miffed Applejack.

“What in tarnation, we’re staying here?” Applejack asked.

“No you’re staying here, I have a resort with my name at another camp next door.” Discord explained.

“I did not sign up for this.” Applejack said angrily.

“Actually you did.” Discord pointed out flaunting the contract in front of her.

“Hmmph fine but I won’t like it.” Applejack groaned heading to the dock.

“Alright next competitor.” Discord said.

Next to show up was Rainbow Dash who looked determined.

“Aw yeah haha I am so ready to win this.” Rainbow Dash said happily.

“You can’t seriously be excited to be here.” Twilight raised an eyebrow “This place is a dump.”

“So what? I just can’t wait to win those million bits for the Wonderbolts.” Rainbow Dash said.

“Rainbow Dash I know how you are when you compete so promise me you won’t lose sight of yourself when playing.” Twilight flew up to Rainbow Dash.

“Don’t worry about it Twilight I’ll be fine.” Rainbow Dash waved off Twilight’s concerns.

The next boat showed up revealing Pinkie Pie.

“OMG hi guys, hi hi.” Pinkie Pie said running up to the dock. “I am so excited to be here, it is so cool we’re all gonna play a game.”

“Calm down Pinkie Pie.” Twilight said.

“Right, sorry I was just so excited.” Pinkie Pie said happily.

“Glad some ponies are happy to be here.” Discord smirked at his guests.

The next boat showed up and the pony who came out was Fluttershy

“Hi everyone I heard of this island where we can all play together for a million bits.” Fluttershy spoke shyly.

Another boat showed up “Welcome one and all to this spectacular performance you know her you love her as well let’s hear it for the Great and Powerful Trixie.” Trixie said revealing herself making everyone except Starlight roll their eyes.

“I see this is the place where we will be competing?” Trixie asked with a glare as she too was annoyed by the living conditions.

“Indeed just head to the dock.” Discord said, directing Trixie to the dock smirking the whole time.

Trixie held her head high and stood next to Starlight on the dock.

The next boat showed up with three fillies getting off together which were Applebloom, Scootaloo, and Sweetie Belle.

“Alright the Cutie Mark Crusaders competing in the show together this oughta be fun.” Applebloom said happily.

“Yeah this is gonna be awesome.” Scootaloo cheered.

“Seriously Discord you brought fillies into this.” Twilight said flabbergasted.

“Hey don’t look at me, they chose to show up here and their guardians allowed them to be here.” Discord said holding his claw and paw up in defense.

“It’s true.” Applejack confirmed for Applebloom.

“My parents allowed Sweetie Belle to participate as well.” Rarity explained.

The next boat to show up had Snips and Snails in it as they left the boat excitedly.

“This is the place Snails, I can’t wait to win some bits.” Snip rubbed his hooves together.

“Ooh water.” Snails was busy staring at the water.

Snips rolled his eyes at his partner as he began walking down to the dock.

“Hi Trixie.” Snips called out happily only for Trixie to turn away from the young colt making him frown.

Soon a boat showed up with two ponies on it, those ponies being Lyra and Bon Bon.

“Oh boy I can’t wait to compete, right Bon Bon?” Lyra said happily.

“I can’t wait either Lyra.” Bon Bon responded with a smile.

Lyra and Bon Bon headed to the dock as the next boat showed up with someone using a zip line it was revealed to be Lightning Dust.

Lightning Dust then did a flip onto the dock and landed perfectly.

“Aw yeah that was totally wicked baby.” Lightning Dust praised herself before glaring at a certain cyan pegasus. “Rainbow Dash.”

“Lightning Dust.” Rainbow Dash glared in return “You have some nerve showing your face here.”

“Oh yeah well I’m gonna kick your butt, and that is a guarantee.” Lightning Dust smirked.

“You won’t be able to beat me.” Rainbow Dash argued.

“Ladies ladies that’s enough, now here comes the next camper.” Discord said breaking up the fight.

Soon the next boat arrived and out came Sunburst. “Hmm, this is the place huh, this seems very unstable.” Sunburst said in a matter of fact tone.

“That’s what I said.” Twilight agreed with Sunburst.

“Oh whatever, just head to the dock.” Discord rolled his eyes.

Gilda was the next to show up on a boat “Well looks like this is the place, can’t wait to win this.”

Gilda then walked down the dock.
Diamond Tiara was the next to show up in a boat.

“Diamond Tiara, welcome to the island.” Discord announced.

“Hmm this island isn’t the best but it’ll do.” Diamond Tiara said somewhat disgusted.

“That’s the spirit.” Discord said with a smirk.

The next boat showed up and who stepped out shocked everyone.

Tempest and Grubber were the ones who stepped out as Discord then greeted the two “ Tempest, Grubber glad you could make it.” Discord said with a smile.

“I figured I’d see some old faces. It's nice to see everypony again.” Tempest said calmly.

The rest of the group were stunned to see Tempest again.

“Oh if you’re scared just know we’re reformed now, so everything is fine.” Grubber reassured the group with an innocent grin.

“Oh we know that already but thanks Grubber.” Twilight spoke out.

Next to show up on a boat was Suri Polimare.

“Suri, nice to see you.” Discord said.

“Thanks Discord.” Suri spoke as she headed to the dock as Rarity glared at her fashion rival.

The last boat appeared and it was revealed to be Derpy Hooves.

“Hi guys, Hi Discord.” Derpy began waving before she tripped onto the dock as she was getting off the boat.

“Are you okay Derpy?” Twilight asked as she helped Derpy up.

“I’m fine thanks.” Derpy rubbed her head.

“Great now that you’re all here, it’s time to meet me at the campfire.” Discord announced.

As soon as all the creatures made it to the campfire Discord began speaking “So this is Camp Chaotix, in this game we will split you into two teams of twelve, you will compete in challenges for immunity the team that wins will gain that immunity and the losing team will vote someone off and whoever has the most votes is out of the competition.”

“Oh my.” Fluttershy gasped.

“And just to be clear, even if I am friends with some of you, no one will gain special advantages because not only is it unfair, it’s also predictable and a major ratings decrease.” Discord announced.

“That’s fair.” Twilight said with glee “At least we all know it’s a fair game.”

“Alright good, now to split you all into teams Twilight, Fluttershy, Rarity, Scootaloo, Snips, Snails, Bon Bon, Sunburst, Tempest Shadow, Lightning Dust, Diamond Tiara, Suri Polomare you are now the Powerful Parasprites, now please head to the left.” Discord said.

“Wait what about Lyra?” Bon Bon asked fearfully.

As the twelve aforementioned went to the left of the area, Discord began calling more names “Spike, Starlight, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Trixie, Applebloom, Sweetie Belle, Lyra, Grubber, Gilda, and Derpy Hooves you are now the Daring Dragons.” Discord called out. “Now campers, you will sleep in different cabins, Parasprites on the left, Dragons on the right, and you will be eating in the Mess Hall.”

Confessional:

Discord: You will also be able to share your deepest thoughts in the confessional, let the audience know what you’re thinking.

Tempest: It appears the others are not over my actions as one of the Storm King’s followers, well I will prove to them I have changed.

Derpy(was facing the wrong way): I don’t get it, where’s the camera?

Lyra: I can’t believe I’m not on the same team as Bon Bon,(breathes in and out) keep it together Lyra you can do this.

Confessional Ends

“So you have a few minutes to head to your cabins until lunchtime.” Discord announces.

Soon the teams began settling in their cabins, at the Parasprites’ cabin Twilight, Rarity, and Fluttershy began talking.

“I don’t trust Suri or Lightning Dust.” Twilight whispered.

“Me neither, I say we all make a pact to vote them off.” Rarity said.

“Agreed.” Twilight said giving Rarity a hoof bump.

“I’m in too.” Fluttershy nodded.

Suri, while not hearing this exchange, raised an eyebrow.

Confessional:

Suri: It’s obvious those three are an alliance and it’s also obvious they don’t trust me at all, so I’ll need a few allies to stay in the game.

Confessional Ends

Meanwhile at the Dragons’ cabin Rainbow Dash began giving a speech “Alright team, here’s how it’s going to go, I am the leader around here.”

“And why should you lead the team?” Applejack asked raising an eyebrow.

“Obviously because I’m awesome and I have been on a lot of teams so I think I know how this type of thing works.” Rainbow Dash answered egotistically.

Applejack just rolled her eyes at this.
Confessional:

Applejack: Rainbow Dash better not let the competition get to her head again. Now I’ll try not to let the competition affect me either but I’m not sure about Dash.

Confessional Ends

Soon the campers found themselves at the Mess Hall, where Iron Will wa serving the food.

“Iron Will serves three times a day and you will eat it, three times a day, so grab your tray and get the food.” Iron Will commanded angrily.

Every creature started grabbing their trays with their mouths and began getting their food which was gruel.

As soon as every creature got their food, they began sitting down and eating it.

“The Great and Powerful Trixie does not allow herself to eat peasant food, she eats only the finest of cuisines.” Trixie complained, angering Iron Will.

“Was that complaining I hear?” Iron Will calls out from the kitchen.

“No, this is acceptable, I will eat it immediately.” Trixie said in fear.

“That’s what Iron Will thought.” Iron Will said angrily.

Starlight sighed at this display.

Confessional:

Starlight: Don’t get me wrong, I love Trixie and all but she really needs to think before she speaks.

Confessional Ends

“Are we all enjoying our meals?” Discord asked teleporting into the room making everyone except Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie glare at him.

“Good, so the first challenge is in ten minutes, meet me at the bottom of Mount Discord.” Discord said.

“What do you think he’ll make us do?” Starlight asked Spike in fear.

“Knowing Discord, he will make it difficult.” Spike said, sighing.
Soon the campers found themselves on the bottom of Mount Discord.

“Welcome to your first challenge, in this challenge you are going to race up this mountain.” Discord explained.

“Sounds simple enough.” Pinkie Pie beamed.

“But there will be geysers erupting hot steamy water, and here’s the catch, no flying and no magic, any use of wings or magic will result in you starting the race over again, the team that gets all their members up there first wins immunity.” Discord continued.

Confessional:

Starlight: No magic, huh. Well I guess this will be interesting.

Rainbow Dash: Ha, even without my wings I can still go super fast, so those Parasprites better watch out.

Confessional Ends

“On your mark, get set, Go!” Discord announced making all 24 players run up the mountain.

“Who will make it to the top of the mountain first, and which contestant will be eliminated first, and will Trixie ever shut up? Well we know the answer to the last one, but for the rest of the questions find out on Total Chaos Island.” Discord announced to the audience before cutting to a commercial break.

After the commercial break the Powerful Parasprites and Daring Dragons are seen racing to the top while avoiding the geysers.

Snips and Snails were running around in circles while Suri was watching the two with interest.

Confessional:

Suri: Perhap I have just found my first two allies, after all they are dumb enough to do whatever I want.

Confessional Ends

Suri then went in front of the two colts and began speaking “Stop running, both of you.”

Snips and Snails immediately stopped running and began panting.

“Listen you two, I know it’s scary but if you follow me, I can guide you two out.” Suri spoke softly.
“Okay.” Snips and Snails said smiling.

Meanwhile Rainbow Dash and Lightning Dust began racing each other.

“Ha, you’ll never defeat me Lightning Dust.” Rainbow Dash laughed.

“Oh yeah, how about now.” Lightning Dust said as she pushed Rainbow Dash into an already erupted geyser at lightning speed making Dash fly up into the air and then back down as Lightning Dust ran forward.

Confessional:

Rainbow Dash: Did you see that? That jerk totally cheated, she is so going down now.

Confessional Ends

Applejack and Pinkie Pie then ran up to Rainbow Dash whose back was now red.

“Rainbow Dash, are you okay?” Applejack asked, concerned.

Rainbow Dash then got up “Oh I will be, once I take that cheater down.”

“Whoa that looked fun I wanna try.” Pinkie Pie said, sitting on a geyser before it erupted sending Pinkie Pie up into the air.

“Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.” Pinkie Pie cheered before falling back down.

“That was fun, but it was a little hot.” Pinkie Pie said happily even though her flank was now red.

Confessional:

Applejack: I have no idea what goes on in that Pinkie Pie’s head sometimes.

Confessional Ends

Soon Lightning Dust made it to the top of the mountain.

“Aw yeah, do I win?” Lightning Dust asked happily.

“Not so fast Lightning Dust you have to wait for your whole team.” Discord smirked at the pegasus.

“Aw nuts.” Lightning Dust groaned.

Confessional:

Lightning Dust: Man, what is taking those losers so long?

Confessional Ends

Soon Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie were the next to arrive at the top of the mountain.

“Ugh I lost to Lightning Dust, this is so uncool.” Rainbow Dash huffed.

“Don’t get so down sugarcube, besides we haven’t lost yet, our whole team has to show up.” Applejack comforted.

“Yeah I guess you’re right.” Rainbow Dash said with a smile.

Meanwhile Fluttershy was walking carefully so the geyser wouldn't erupt at her, as Twilight and Rarity were next to her trying to get her to run.

“Fluttershy darling, we have to run or the Daring Dragons will beat us.” Rarity exclaimed.

“But the geysers scare me, I don’t wanna be hit by one.” Fluttershy says in fear.

“I know it’s scary but all you have to do is run around them and you’ll be safe.” Twilight explained.

“You really think so?” Fluttershy asked carefully.

“I know so.” Twilight said happily.

Fluttershy then began running around the geysers with Twilight and Rarity following her.

Soon we see Starlight and Trixie running together as they were running past the geysers and made it to the top of the mountain.

“Phew we made it.” Starlight sighed in relief.

“Gah, where are my teammates?” Lightning Dust asked enraged.

Twilight, Fluttershy, and Rarity then showed up, “We’re here, we’re here don’t yell.” Rarity said exasperated.

“You guys were taking forever.” Lightning Dust said angrily.

Tempest, Suri, Snips, and Snails all ran up to the top of the mountain.

Hmmph, too easy.” Tempest snickered.

Snails began speaking “Thanks for helping us Suri.”

“Yeah, we were really scared.” Snips said happily “But we’re glad you were there to help.”

“No problem little ones.” Suri said happily, making Twilight and Rarity raise their eyebrows.

Confessional:

Rarity: What is that manipulative mare up to?

Suri: All according to plan.

Confessional Ends

Gilda then soon ran up to the top of the mountain.

“Great job Gilda.” Rainbow Dash prraised.

“Thanks Dash.” Gilda said.

Meanwhile Scootaloo and Diamond Tiara were running across the geyser fields scared.

“Hey Scootaloo, I’ve been wondering, do you wanna form an alliance?” Diamond Tiara asked.

"Sure, that sounds fun, uh what’s an alliance?” Scootaloo asked sheepishly.

“It’s where we vote together and we don’t vote for each other.” Diamond Tiara explained.

Confessional:

Diamond Tiara: My mom made me watch some game shows on a projector, so I’m pretty much a pro at these things.

Confessional Ends

Sunburst, Lyra and Bon Bon then made it to the top of the mountain.

“Aw yeah, we’re so going to win this Dash, we only need two more teammates to show up.” Lightning Dust bragged.

Rainbow Dash growled at this statement and resisted the urge to pounce her.

Meanwhile Derpy was getting hit by every single geyser she came across due to her clumsiness. Her entire coat was red.

“Ooh something smells hot.” Derpy exclaimed happily before realizing something, “Oh wait, it’s me.”

Grubber and Spike were getting tired as they ran, so they started to fall behind.

“Oh boy, I’m getting tired.” Spike said, sweating.

“You said it, I don’t know if I can take it any longer.” Grubber exclaimed.

“We have to, for our team.” Spike said trying to motivate Grubber.

Applebloom and Sweetie Belle then managed to make it to the top of the mountain.

Soon the five remaining racers, Spike, Scootaloo, Diamond Tiara, Derpy, and Grubber began racing to the top, the first ones to make it up were…

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Scootaloo and Diamond Tiara.

“And the Powerful Parasprites win today’s challenge.” Discord announced happily.

The Powerful Parasprites cheered at winning the challenge while the Daring Dragons groaned.

We then cut to the Mess Hall where the Daring Dragons began having a team meeting.

“So what do we do now?” Applebloom asked, confused.

“We have to figure out who we’re going to vote off.” Rainbow Dash answered.

“If you ask me, I think it should be either Spike, Derpy, or Grubber.” Gilda said.

“What? Why me?” Grubber asked fearfully.

“Because unless I’m mistaken, you three didn’t finish the race on time.” Gilda replied angrily.

“That is a fair point.” Trixie said, agreeing with Gilda.

“Guys, come on I know I didn’t make it on time but I’m a great competitor please don’t vote me out.” Spike begged.

“I’m with Spike, he’s pretty useful, I think we should give him another chance.” Starlight said sticking up for the dragon.

Spike smiled at Starlight glad someone was helping him out.

“I say we vote out Derpy, she got hit by every single geyser.” Trixie said.

“Well I say we vote out Grubber, we’re gonna need all the strength we can get and no offense Grubber but you kinda lack it.” Lyra argued.

“Then why don’t we vote out Applebloom or Sweetie Belle, they aren’t that strong.” Grubber said defensively.

“Don’t you dare talk about my sister that way, and she is strong, she does hard work on the farm every day.” Applejack said angrily.

“Sorry.” Grubber apologized meekly.

“Oh Daring Dragons, it’s time to head to the elimination ceremony.” Discord announced.

Soon it was night time and the Daring Dragons found themselves sitting on logs at the campfire ceremony.

“Campers, here is how it works, you will go to the confessional and write in the ballot who you want out of the game, the creature with the most votes will be eliminated from Total Chaos Island and you can never come back, EVER.” Discord said.

Confessional:

Spike: Sorry Derpy.

Starlight: Grubber and Derpy both mean well but I don’t know who to vote for.
Applejack: How dare that varmit try to throw my sis under the bus, I’m votin’ for Grubber.

Confessional Ends

“You have casted your votes and made your decision, so I am going to call your names out, and whoever I call is safe and will get a marshmallow, if you don’t get a marshmallow you’re eliminated.” Discord explained.

“Rainbow Dash.”

“Applejack.”

“Starlight.”

“Gilda.”

“Pinkie Pie.”

“Trixie.”

“Lyra.”

“Applebloom”

“Sweetie Belle.”

“Campers I have two marshmallows left, the three of you did not do well in the race today. Next one safe is…” Discord said.

“Spike.”

Spike sighed in relief as he caught his marshmallow.

“The last one safe is…” Discord said.

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“Grubber.” Discord announced throwing Grubber a marshmallow.

Grubber sighed in relief “Oh thank you, thank you, thank you.”

Applejack glared at Grubber fiercely, making Grubber gulp.

“Derpy, the dock of shame awaits.” Discord announced solemnly.

Derpy then walked to the dock of shame.

“Sorry Derpy.” Lyra apologized.

“It’s okay guys. I’ll see you all later.” Derpy said happily.

The team waved Derpy off as she went on the boat.

Confessional:

Rainbow Dash: Derpy’s nice and all but she’s a bit of a klutz, sorry Derpy I had to vote you off.

Confessional Ends

“Well that was a shocker, will Grubber escape Applejack’s wrath, will the Powerful Parasprites win another challenge, and will Suri and Lightning Dust survive in this game? Find out on Total Chaos Island.” Discord announced.

Author's Note

So yeah I eliminated Derpy, hopefully I portrayed her well, also no I didn't eliminate her because I dislike her, I eliminated her because I had no plans for her. I have plans for Grubber so I needed to keep him in. Sorry Derpy fans.

Wake Up Already

“Last time on Total Chaos Island, I introduced our campers and had them compete in the first challenge. Spike, Derpy, and Grubber were all targets for them costing the challenge, but in the end Derpy’s klutziness got her eliminated. Will Grubber continue to survive being eliminated, Will Rainbow Dash let the competition get to her, and what is Suri up to, find out on Total Chaos Island.” Discord introduces.

(After theme song)

The Daring Dragons were at their cabins.

Starlight was snoring making Rainbow Dash angry.

“Ugh, does that pony ever stop snoring?” Rainbow Dash asked enraged.

“Oh why yes Trixie will have the peanut butter crackers.” Trixie said in her sleep.

“And does she ever stop talking in her sleep?” Rainbow Dash complained.

“Alright that’s enough, Starlight and Trixie clearly can’t help it, so leave them alone.” Applejack lectures.

“Fine.” Rainbow Dash crosses her hooves annoyed.

Meanwhile with the Powerful Parasprites they were in their cabins as an alarm clock then went off alerting everyone making them wake up.

The alarm clock was then stopped by Tempest.

“Rise and shine everyone we have to be up early if we don’t wanna be sluggish for today’s challenge.” Tempest explained as she got ready for the day.

“So, Tempest huh.” Scootaloo said sheepishly.

Confessional:

Rarity: I can’t believe Tempest woke me up from my beauty sleep, I was having the most wonderful dream about finding the perfect stallion.

Confessional Ends

The campers are then seen getting their food at the Mess Hall.

Everyone began snickering at Starlight as she entered the room, for she had a mustache drawn on her.

“Okay what?” Starlight asked incredulously.

“Someone messed with your face Starlight.” Trixie said with a mustache also drawn on her holding up a spoon to use as her reflection.

Starlight looked into the spoon Trixie had and rolled her eyes “Ha ha very funny Dash and Pinkie.”

“How’d you know it was us.” Pinkie Pie giggled.

“Because you two are widely known for pulling pranks." Starlight explained.

“Alright campers it’s time for the challenge.” Discord announced.

“So what is the next challenge?” Fluttershy asked.

“Well in today’s challenge you will be competing in the awake-a thon.” Discord said.

“The what a thon?” Rainbow Dash asked.

“In the Awake-a thon you will be trying to stay awake for as long as possible, the first team to fall asleep loses and will send someone home.” Discord explained “Now head to the campfire so you can start competing.”

Soon the campers were at the campfire where they began trying to stay awake.

“So how long do you think this will be?” Starlight asked Trixie.

“Relax Starlight, how long could this possibly take?” Trixie smirked.

24 hours later

“It has been twenty-four hours and all twenty-three campers are still awake.” Discord softly announced.

“Woo, stay awake for twenty-four hours, no big deal, woo-hoo.” Scootaloo cheered before she fell asleep.

“There goes our numbers advantage.” Lightning Dust dully replied.

Soon she saw Grubber and Sweetie Belle asleep on the ground and smirked.

“Or maybe not.” Lightning Dust said.

Applebloom and Applejack were trying their hardest to stay awake.

“I’m so tired.” Applebloom said.

“You and me both, but we can pull through.” Applejack said trying to motivate her little sister.

Meanwhile Suri was watching Twilight, Rarity, and Fluttershy as they were talking.

Confessional:

Suri: So my plan is to get enough allies to vote with me and I think I know just who to put in my alliance.

Confessional Ends

Suri looked over and saw Snips and Snails together.

“Perfect.” Suri muttered to herself.

“Hey Snips, Snails can I talk to you for a moment.” Suri whispered walking up to the two colts.

“Sure Suri.” Snips whispered back.

Suri, Snips, and Snails were now at the back of the campfire.

“So I was thinking we form an alliance to make the final three, how do you feel about that?” Suri explained.

“That sounds awesome.” Snails said happily.

“Count us in.” Snips replies.

“Great, now let’s just try to stay awake, okay.” Suri said.

“Got it.” Both unicorns spoke.

Confessional:

Snips: Perfect I just got my ticket to the final three, I’m so gonna win this.

Confessional Ends

24 hours later

It was night time, as we see that Rarity, Fluttershy, Snips, Snails, and Diamond Tiara asleep for the Powerful Parasprites while Applebloom and Lyra were asleep for the Daring Dragons.

"Weaklings." Lightning Dust muttered to herself, angry that half her team was asleep.

Twilight began talking to Tempest while they were at the campfire "So Tempest how have things been since the Storm King's defeat?"

"They have been good, I have been traveling the world with Grubber and I came back to show how I've redeemed myself." Tempest explained.

"That's great I'm glad to see you again." Twilight said happily.

"Me too Princess." Tempest said.

Meanwhile Trixie began talking to Starlight.

"Hey Starlight I was thinking we should form an alliance, are you in?" Trixie whispered.

“Sure Trix I’d love to be in an alliance with you.” Starlight whispered happily.

“Excellent.” Trixie whispered gleefully.

Confessional:

Trixie: Trixie plans on winning this game. To do that I’ll need a few allies, Starlight is a given since we’re best friends, but who else should I bring into the alliance?

Confessional Ends

“So Starlight who do you think we should add to our alliance?” Trixie asked.

“How about Spike?” Starlight suggested.

“You mean the dragon?” Trixie raised an eyebrow.

“Yeah he’s pretty nice and I am close with him so it’d probably work out.” Starlight explained.

“Fine but you have to ask him.” Trixie said.

“Deal.” Starlight beamed before going off to ask Spike about the alliance.

Spike was busy trying to keep himself awake while also staring at Rarity.

“Ah.” Spike sighed happily at the sight of his crush.

He then felt a tap on his back and was surprised to see Starlight.

“Oh hey Starlight, how’s it going?” Spike asked with a smile on his face.

“Hey Spike I just wanted to ask if you wanted to be in an alliance with me.” Starlight said.

“Sure Starlight, I’d love to.” Spike said happily.

“Awesome by the way, Trixie is also in our alliance.” Starlight said “Are you okay with that?”

“Sure.” Spike shrugged.

Confessional:

Spike: After last elimination, I need to make sure I’m safe so getting as many allies as I can is perfect for me.

Confessional Ends

A while later Bon Bon and Sunburst had fallen asleep for the Powerful Parasprites and Spike and Trixie had fallen asleep for the Daring Dragons.

“Well the dragon definitely did do better than last time.” Gilda shrugged.

Meanwhile Suri was beginning to talk to Lightning Dust.

"Hi there Lightning Dust." Suri waved happily.

"Don't pretend to be friendly, it's so fake, what do you want?" Lightning Dust replied bitterly.

"Ugh fine I came to offer you an alliance deal." Suri said getting right to the point.

"And why should I align with you?" Lightning Dust asked raising an eyebrow.

"Because you and I are the most unpopular teammates and you need all the allies you can get." Suri explained.

Lightning Dust thought about it for a moment and she realized it was true, Rainbow Dash and her friends would be out to get her and she did need allies.

"Fine I'll align with you." Lightning Dust grumbled.

"Great, now I was thinking about eliminating one of Twilight's friends if we lose." Suri smirked.

Lightning Dust beamed at this idea maybe this wouldn't be so bad after all.

"I like the way you think." Lightning Dust grinned. "But how do we eliminate one of them, they're too popular."

"Leave that to me." Suri answered before walking away.

Discord began walking over to the nine awake contestants and began clapping “Bravo my little ponies, so you’ve made it this far into the awake a thon, impressive but now it’s time to make things harder.”

“What is he going to do now?” Twilight asked angrily.

“Time for the history of Equestria, chapter one.” Discord began reading.

Confessional:

Applejack: Oh come on, you know what, bring it on.

Confessional Ends

As Discord was reading Suri and Lightning Dust fell asleep for the Powerful Parasprites while Rainbow Dash, Starlight and Gilda fell asleep for the Daring Dragons.

“And the Earth Ponies, Pegasi, and Unicorns were all against each other but then a huge storm happened causing them to hate each other more than ever.” Discord read.

Twilight noticed Tempest about to fall asleep, “Tempest.”

Tempest then fell on the ground asleep.

“No, Tempest.” Twilight said tiredly.

“So...boring....must.....stay.....up.” Applejack said trying her best to keep fighting but she then falls asleep.

“You can go to sleep now Pinkie, I have had some late night study sessions before so I am a pro at staying up.” Twilight bragged.

“Ooh cool, I’ve had my share of late night parties so I’m also good at staying up.” Pinkie Pie beamed.

24 hours later

It was now morning, everyone but Twilight and Pinkie Pie left the campfire and Twilight and Pinkie Pie were still up.

“Well it’s time for a ten minute bathroom break, any takers?” Discord smirked.

“You know what I can’t hold it anymore, I’ll go.” Twilight raised her hoof.

“Remember you’ve got got ten minutes.” Discoed reminded the purple alicorn.

“Fine but keep your cameras out of the stall.” Twilight glared making Discord nod in understanding.

After ten minutes Discord went to check on Twilight.

“Oh Twilight, time’s up.” Discord knocked on the stall door.

He then opened the stall closing his eyes but opened them once he heard snoring.

Twilight was seen asleep on the toilet.

Discord then picked Twilight up and teleported her and himself to the campfire.

“It appears Princess Twilight has fallen asleep on the can which means Pinkie wins for the Daring Dragons.” Discord announces.

“OMG I won, I won, yay!” Pinkie Pie cheered before falling on the ground unconscious.

“The Powerful Parasprites will be seeing me at the elimination ceremony tonight.” Discord said.

Suri, Snips, Snails, and Lightning Dust then had an alliance meeting.

“So who should we eliminate tonight? Twilight? Rarity? Or Fluttershy?” Lightning Dust asked.

“Easy, I know who we’re gonna eliminate it’s gonna be Fluttershy.” Suri smirked.

“That wimpy pegasus, why?” Lightning Dust asked.

“She’s too popular and she did bad in the challenge.” Suri remarked.

“What about Rarity, she’s also useless and her whining gets on my nerves.” Lightning Dust said.

“Rarity is less of a threat for now, Fluttershy is more popular and also did bad in the challenge we may not get another chance like this.” Suri pointed out.

“Snips, Snails, I need you to get your two classmates Scootaloo and Diamond Tiara to vote with us.” Suri said.

“What do you want us to say to them?” Snips asked.

“Well here’s what I want you to say.” Suri said before the screen cuts to black.

Meanwhile Twilight, Fluttershy, and Rarity are seen discussing who to eliminate.

“So who should we vote out, Suri or Lightning Dust?” Twilight asked her friends.

“I say we vote out Suri, Lightning Dust at least is good in challenges.” Rarity said.

“I’m okay with whichever we choose.” Fluttershy said meekly.

“Alright Suri it is.” Twilight said “I’ll try and get Scootaloo, Tempest, and Sunburst to vote with us.”

Twilight then left to talk to the three aformentioned.

Twilight saw Sunburst and walked over to him.

“Hey Sunburst.” Twilight waved.

“Oh hey Twilight, what’s up?” Sunburst asked.

“Hey Sunburst I just wanted to ask if you could vote out Suri, she’s very manipulative and could get to the end if we don’t vote her off right now.” Twilight explained.

“Hmm, I guess I can vote her out." Sunburst said.

"Thanks Sunburst." Twilight said happily.

Soon Twilight began talking with Tempest at the campfire.

“So you’re saying that you want me to vote out Suri, is that correct?” Tempest asked.

“Yeah, it would be a really big help, so are you in?” Twilight replied.

“Count me in Twilight.” Tempest nodded.

“Awesome, thank you Tempest.” Twilight beamed.

“You’re welcome Princess.” Tempest replied.

Meanwhile Snips and Snails were walking to the cabins to find Diamond Tiara and Scootaloo there.

“Hey guys.” Snips beamed.

“Oh hey Snips and Snails, what is it?” Diamond Tiara asked politely.

“Oh I just wanted to ask if you’d be willing to vote out Fluttershy with us, Suri, and Lightning Dust?” Snips asked.

“Work with Lightning Dust, nuh-uh, she’s a jerk.” Scootaloo huffed.

“Yeah but think about it, Fluttershy did bad in the challenge plus she is super popular and has five besties on her side, if she doesn’t get voted out soon she might win.” Snails argued.

Diamond Tiara raises an eyebrow at this, Snails had a point about Fluttershy.

“Hopefully you at least consider it.” Snips said before he and Snails left.

“Can you believe them, I can’t believe they think we’d work with Lightning Dust.” Scootaloo scoffed.

“Well...maybe we could just This once vote with them, and vote for Lightning Dust next time.” Diamond Tiara said hesitant.

“What? But why? Fluttershy’s one of our friends.” Scootaloo asked incredulously.

“I know Scootaloo but if we want to make it far in this game we have to make some sacrifices and you heard Snails, if she goes too far it’ll be impossible to vote her out.” Diamond Tiara argued politely “Look I won’t hold it against you if you don’t vote her out. I understand if you don’t want to.”

Diamond Tiara then left Scootaloo alone to think.

Soon Scootaloo was seen walking to the campfire ceremony with Twilight catching up to her.

"Hey Scootaloo, everything okay?" Twilight asked concerned.

"Oh I'm fine Twilight, don't worry I'm just upset we lost." Scootaloo lied.

"Oh, okay well just to let you know, me, Rarity, Fluttershy, Tempest and maybe Sunburst are planning on voting out Suri tonight, and I was wondering if you wanted to vote with us." Twilight said.

"I think I might vote for Suri." Scootaloo said.

“Yes, thanks Scootaloo.” Twilight hugged the filly before letting her go and heading to the campfire.

Scootaloo could do math, there were going to be five votes for both Suri and Fluttershy, while her gut told her to vote out Suri, she knew Fluttershy was a big threat, and who knows who Bon Bon will vote for, she had no idea what to do.

We then cut to the campfire ceremony where all twelve teammates were sitting on stumps.

“Powerful Parasprites, I have eleven marshmallows on this plate but twelve of you, whoever does not get a marshmallow is eliminated from the game. Now go cast your votes in the confessional.” Discord said holding up a plate full of marshmallows.

Confessional:

Twilight: So long Suri.

Rarity: Take this clothes copier.

Suri: Sorry Fluttershy but you gotta go.

Bon Bon: I think we’re all voting for Scootaloo, she fell asleep first for crying out loud.

Scootaloo looks conflicted until she finally writes a name down.

Confessional Ends

“You have all casted your votes and made your decision, when I call your name you get a marshmallow.” Discord said.

“Bon Bon.”

“Sunburst.”

“Diamond Tiara.”

“Snips.”

“Snails.”

“Rarity.”

“Tempest.”

“Twilight.”

“And...Lightning Dust.”

Scootaloo, Fluttershy, and Suri all looked worried.

“Campers I have only two marshmallows left, the three of you all got votes tonight, the next one safe is...” Discord announced.

“Scootaloo.” Discord said.

Scootaloo sighed with relief before getting her marshmallow.

“The final marshmallow goes to...” Discord dragged on.

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...

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...

...

“Suri.” Discord said solemnly obviously upset that Fluttershy had been eliminated.

“What?!” Twilight and Rarity said in shock.

“What? Why me?” Fluttershy asked.

“This doesn’t make sense, there were meant to be six votes for Suri unless...(gasp) one of you lied to me.” Twilight gasped.

“It wasn’t me, I voted for Suri.” Sunburst said defensively.

“Princess I swear I voted for Suri.” Tempest promised.

Scootaloo looked down in shame “They’re telling the truth it was me, I voted for Fluttershy.”

Twilight, Rarity, and Fluttershy gasped.

“But Scootaloo why?” Twilight asked feeling betrayed.

“Snips and Snails made great points that Fluttershy would win this if she got any further since she has you girls on her side I’m sorry.” Scootaloo said guilty.

“Well now that we’re done with that, Fluttershy the dock of shame awaits.” Discord said.

“I understand, bye everypony, I’ll see you all later.” Fluttershy said before getting on the boat.

Discord was then seen on the dock

“Well wasn’t this the blindside of the century, will Twilight forgive Scootaloo, will the alliance of Starlight, Trixie, and Spike work out, and will Suri and Lightning Dust dodge another elimination, find out on Total Chaos Island.” Discord announced.

Author's Note

I hope you enjoyed the chapter, so about Fluttershy's elimination, out of all the Mane 6 she was the one I had the least plans for, so I made her the second boot, sorry Fluttershy fans.

Waters of Doom

Discord: Last time on Total Chaos Island, the contestants had to stay awake the longest for their team, many alliances were formed, in the end Fluttershy was eliminated due to a blindside by Suri and Lightning Dust. Will any more Elements of Harmony be eliminated, will Tempest redeem herself for her actions, and will Spike ever stop kissing up to Rarity, find out here on Total Chaos Island.

We then see Trixie, Starlight, and Spike at the campfire talking about their alliance.

"Hey Spike, you wanted to see us." Starlight said.

"Hey girls, I just wanted to know if Twilight and Rarity could join the alliance if she makes it to the merge?" Spike asked.

Before Starlight could respond Trixie covered her mouth "Absolutely not, if we bring those two into our alliance they’ll drag the rest of their friends into it and then all of them will vote us out when we're the only ones left." Trixie objects.

"Twilight wouldn't do that to us." Spike protested.

"Oh really, those four friends of hers are always going to be her first priority, besides why would she keep two reformed villains and a mere assistant over her besties?" Trixie argues "And besides even if Twilight wouldn't want us gone can you really say the same for her friends."

Starlight begins putting a hoof to her chin in thought.

Confessional:

Starlight: Twilight and the others wouldn't do that to us, would they?

Trixie: I meant what I said, Twilight would choose her besties over us and it's time Starlight and Spike see that.

Spike: Twilight and Rarity would never sell me out, I have been through a lot with those two, I doubt they would want to vote me out.

Confessional Ends

Soon all the campers were on the dock where Discord was waiting for them.

“In this challenge you will all be swimming in the water and get me a golden necklace I have hidden underwater, whoever brings the golden necklace back to me first, wins.” Discord said.

“Child’s play.” Tempest rolled her eyes.

“But the catch is there will be an area with electric eels which will deliver painful shocks if you encounter them.” Discord said.

“You’re insane.” Lyra said in shock.

“Oh, am I, if you have a problem with this challenge I’m sure you will enjoy being eliminated.” Discord sneered.

“Ugh fine, I’ll play.” Lyra rolls her eyes.

“So on the count of three you will be swimming for the treasure, one, two, three.” Discord counts before every creature began diving in the water and began searching for the golden necklace.

Twilight and Rarity began discussing as they were swimming.

“I can’t believe Fluttershy got eliminated last night. She did nothing wrong.” Rarity said incredulously.

“Me too, and now it looks like it could be one of us next, if we lose, that cannot happen.” Twilight said.

Meanwhile Snips and Snails were searching underwater for the gold necklace but they needed air eventually so they rose up.

“Did you find anything boys?” Suri asked.

“Unfortunately no.” Snips said downtrodden.

“Well you better not give up or one of us could go home.” Suri yelled.

“Gah, yes Suri.” Snails said in fear before going back underwater.

Confessional:

Snails: Suri kinda scares me.

Confessional Ends

Sunburst was looking underwater for some gold when she accidentally bumped into something, he went back up to see that it was Spike.

“Oh hey Spike, how’s it going?” Sunburst asked “You look down.”

“Well I was just wondering if I have a chance with Rarity, I mean I’ve been thinking about telling her how I feel for quite some time but I’m pretty nervous.” Spike explained.

“Spike, my advice is that you should just tell her when you feel your ready. Who knows she might actually feel the same way.” Sunburst said happily.

Spike began putting a finger up to his chin in thought.

Soon Applebloom and Sweetie Belle began swimming through the ocean together until they found the gold necklace.

“I found the necklace.” Applebloom yelled with delight to Sweetie Belle catching the attention of almost everyone.

Confessional:

Applebloom: That may not have been my smartest moment.

Confessional Ends

“Quickly get the gold.” Suri called out to her team.

Lightning Dust soon began swimming for the necklace, Applebloom and Sweetie Belle began swimming away but Lightning Dust was quicker and used her mouth to grab the gold and softly pushed Applebloom away from the gold necklace making Applebloom drop it.

Lightning Dust began swimming back to the shore but Gilda tackles her as the two began wrestling for it. Some eels showed up and began shocking both Lightning Dust and Gilda.

“Yeeeow.” Lightning Dust squealed making her throw the gold necklace backwards to which Spike caught.

Spike began swimming with the gold necklace in tow but he soon found himself surrounded by Suri, Snips, and Snails.

“Hand over the gold and no one gets hurt.” Suri threatened.

“Never.” Spike glared.

“Fine then you leave me no choice.” Suri said before she jumped at Spike grabbing the necklace with her mouth, the two began fighting for the necklace to which both refused to let go.

Snips soon bit Spike’s tail making him recoil in pain making him let go of the gold necklace

Suri then swam to the shore with the gold necklace, with Rainbow Dash not so far behind she was about to catch up with Suri until Suri made it to the shore.

“Well it looks like the Powerful Parasprites win.” Discord announced.

“Aw nuts.” Rainbow Dash groaned.

Soon Applejack, Pinkie Pie, and Rainbow Dash began having an alliance meeting.

“So who are we gonna vote off?” Applejack asked “I think it should be Grubber, he ain’t the strongest creature on our team plus we gotta save Applebloom somehow.”

“We might not be able to convince anyone to vote him off, you might not like this guys but I think we’re gonna have to vote off Spike.” Rainbow Dash said with hesitance.

“What?! But why Spike?!” Pinkie Pie asked incredulously “He’s our friend.”

“I know it’s just he also screwed up, and he’s not really that strong, I mean he totally kinda cost our team the challenge and it might be easier to convince some creatures to vote him off.” Rainbow Dash said with a sigh.

“I guess you’re right.” Applejack sighed.

“What? But guys-“ Pinkie Pie began before Applejack interrupted her.

“I know sugarcube but Spike did screw up and while he may be our friend he has to go.” Applejack said.

Pinkie Pie sighed knowing she wasn’t gonna be able to save Spike.

“Then it’s settled I’ll go see if I can get anypony to vote him off.” Rainbow Dash said.

“I’ll go talk to Applebloom and Sweetie Belle.” Applejack said.

Confessional:

Rainbow Dash: Do I feel bad, kinda, but Spike has been dragging us down plus Applebloom probably was gonna get caught with the gold anyway and besides it is to help Applejack keep her sister in the game so it is a sacrifice we have to make.

Confessional Ends

Rainbow Dash began flying over to Gilda.

“Hey Gilda.” Rainbow Dash said happily.

“Hey Dash, what’s up?” Gilda returned the greeting.

“Nothing much, listen, I think we should vote off Spike today, I mean he kinda cost the challenge by letting go of the gold.” Rainbow Dash explained “Plus Applebloom probably would’ve gotten caught with the gold anyway but Spike has no excuse.”

“Hmm I’ll think about it.” Gilda said.

“Thanks G.” Rainbow Dash said before flying off.

Confessional:

Rainbow Dash: That went well, but knowing Pinkie she might not vote with us so it’s always good to have some extra votes.

Confessional Ends

Rainbow Dash was then seen talking to Lyra.

“So yeah what I’m saying is Spike should be the one to go tonight.” Rainbow Dash said.

“Interesting, I’ll consider voting off Spike.” Lyra smiled.

“Great.” Rainbow Dash said before flying off.

Neither knew however Trixie was watching the whole thing, Trixie then began smirking to herself.

Confessional:

Trixie: Well well looks like I was right about Twilight’s friends. Pity for Spike, but good for me.

Confessional Ends

Trixie then saw Spike and Starlight at the cabins alone and ran in.

“The Great and Powerful Trixie has something urgent to share.” Trixie said breathing in and out.

“What is it Trixie?” Starlight asked.

“Rainbow Dash has been rallying votes to get Spike out.” Trixie explained.

“What?! That can’t be true, you’re lying.” Spike said worried.

“Spike, we’re allies, why would I lie to you about your safety, apparently she’s trying to save Applebloom who just so happens to be Applejack’s sister.” Trixie said.

“I gotta admit Trixie kinda has a point, she doesn’t really lie much ever since she’s been reformed.” Starlight admits with a sigh “Spike she’s probably right, I mean it is a game after all.”

“I guess you might be right, so what do I do?” Spike asked.

“Perhaps if somepony were able to rally the votes against Applebloom maybe Spike could be safe.” Trixie said looking at Starlight.

“Oh, me I mean, okay.” Starlight said “What do you want me to say?”

“Well here’s what I want you to do.” Trixie said before the screen cut to black.

Soon all eleven Daring Dragons were seen at the campfire ceremony.

“Greetings campers, go on and cast your votes this is sure to be interesting.” Discord smirked.

Confessionals:

Rainbow Dash:(Sighs) Sorry Spike.

Applejack: Spike I hate to do this but it has to be you.

Starlight: Sorry about this Applebloom.

Spike: Applebloom.

Pinkie Pie: I can’t vote for Spike or Applebloom. I vote for Grubber.

Confessional Ends

“I have ten marshmallows on my plate, but there are eleven of you if I call your name come up and get a marshmallow.” Discord said.

“Lyra.”

“Gilda.”

“Starlight.”

“Trixie.”

“Applejack.”

“Pinkie Pie.”

“Rainbow Dash.”

“Grubber.”

“And... Sweetie Belle.”

“Spike, you let go of the gold necklace allowing Suri to win the challenge, Applebloom you made a big mistake of yelling out that you got the necklace, the last marshmallow goes to...”

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...

...

“Spike.” Discord announced.

“What in tarnation?!” Applejack said in shock.

“Applebloom the dock of shame awaits.” Discord announced.

“I understand, I screwed up. I should’ve never called out that I got the gold necklace, well I’ll see y’all later, I hope Applejack or one of my fellow Crusaders win.” Applebloom said before going to the dock of shame.

Confessional:

Trixie: Trixie was able to get Starlight to convince Lyra, Grubber, and Gilda to vote out Applebloom, I of course I knew my plan would work due to Applebloom also being a weak link in challenges and costing the challenge. Sorry Dashie next time don’t mess with my allies.

Confessional Ends

“Ooh sneaky, will Spike be furious at his friends for what they tried to do? Will Applebloom’s elimination affect Applejack’s and the rest of the Cutie Mark Crusaders performance, find out right here on Total Chaos Island!” Discord said closing off the episode.

Author's Note

I had no plans for Applebloom so I eliminated her.