Pipsqueak's fetish trouble
Author's Note
Load Full StoryNext ChapterI have read many a fap/clop fiction and I have developed a simple formula for writing a submissive fic properly.
I have simplified it into two to three parts
- The setup
This is where the characters are thrown into the situation that makes them submissive. It's not bad to have the character enjoy being submissive at this stage. Sometimes, it even helps move things more smoothly in later chapters.
- The resistance
This is where the soon to be sub fights back, in denial of their position. Sometimes the situation is hopeless, and sometimes there is a chance they can succeed in escaping. This part can sometimes be large enough to make its own chapter, but sometimes the action can start and end so quickly that this step is skimmed over and the final part becomes the second part.
- The breaking
this is where the character gives in and accepts that they are helpless. At this point, the character can not fight back their fate and has accepted it. Sometimes, the character even loves being in this state.
This is the formula I use when writing serious fap/clop fiction, and I just thought you should know. Enjoy this read, fellas.
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