Celestia's Champion (Comment Driven)

by Caecae97

Rating: mature
Tags: Anthro, Main 6, Romance, Tirek, Changelings, Porn, Second Person, Spike, Non-consensual, Adventure, Timberwolves, Sex, Violence, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe
Length: 2050

Every four years, Princess Celestia holds a tournament to pick the Demon Champion. To most, being chosen as the Demon Champion is a fate worse than death. This year, you have won the tournament, and now your fate is sealed.

Every four years, Princess Celestia's guards gather strong stallions, mares, and even creatures that are not ponies. They are entered into a tournament, one that will decide the fate of Equestria's safety. There is a realm, known by many, feared by all. The Demon Realm is a place of utter horror. Demons run wild and try to emerge from the crack between worlds. The tournament is held to choose who will enter the Demon Realm and attempt to stop the demons from breaking through. This year, you have won the tournament.

Mods: This is not the same story as Celestia's Champion - Fimfiction. That story was not comment driven, it had scenarios for multiple characters, regardless of comments. I realized it would be too confusing for readers to have to go to different chapters that are out of order in order to continue reading, similar to those create your own story Goosebumps books. This one is purely comment driven, and scenarios will be done based on readers' comments

Published 2021-06-01 02:10:01 UTC
Last updated 2021-06-03 18:21:24 UTC

A Champion is Born

It's that year, the year where the tournament to decide the Demon Champion is held. Your village elder has given you to the guards from Canterlot. Now you move towards the Royal Coliseum to fight for the dreaded title of Demon Champion. First, tell us who you are.

Are you?

A: A Unicorn stallion with Were-Timberwolf in your blood. Unlike most stallions your age, you are extremely muscular. Because of your heritage, you don't have a normal equine cock, you are gifted with a 7 inch canine cock, 10 inches including the knot. It's no surprise your village elder chose you to give to the guards, given your massive amount of brute strength. You could easily rip a small demon's head off. The guards are oblivious to your bloodline, but during the full moon, that is when you turn into a Were-Timberwolf, and all hell breaks lose. For your entire life, the village elder has kept you under lock and key during the full moon, never letting you transform. When you arrive at the tournament, many others fear your size and sheer muscle mass. You try your hardest to lose the tournament, but the only way you could do that is by refusing to fight, which warrants execution on the grounds of treason. Unfortunately for you, the other competitors are incredibly weak, and are eliminated, leaving only you. Celestia speaks in her booming voice, "The royal is over, one competitor remains! Young stallion, you have been given the great honor of being this year's Demon Champion! May Faust grant you luck on your quest. We are counting on your strength to protect Equestria from the horrors of the Demon Realm." You are given three days to pack the essentials and say your goodbyes. After that, you are escorted by the royal guards to the portal to the Demon Realm. Not looking back, tears in your eyes, you walk through.

Right before you do, you say, "When I make it back, and somehow, I will, I will be stronger than any of you bastards could imagine. And when that day comes, I will have my revenge on Celestia."

The guards laugh at your threats and one of them says, "Keep dreaming! Nobody's ever returned from the Demon Realm!" and then kicks you into the portal.

B: An intersexual Dragon/Kitsune hybrid. Your heritage has left you with some strange physical features. You have nine fox-like tails, and a pair of large black dragon wings. But what is very interesting about you is your D-cup rack, your three cocks that look and function like octopus tentacles, and your virgin cunt. It is unknown what gender you truly are, even to you, so everyone refers to you with gender neutral pronouns. You have the magical powers of a Kitsune, and the physical strength and endurance of a Dragon. As the tournament starts, you sigh and say, "Let's just get this over with already... It's best not to drag my fate out." Any fighters who come close to you are burnt to a crisp, and those that try to attack from afar are blown away with a strong heave of your wings. Celestia speaks and tells the others the tournament is over when she asks you if you have anything to say, you say three words, "Fuck. Off. Celestia." and walk away, flipping the Princess off in front of the entire stadium, ignoring the jeers from the crowd. You spend the next three days meditating. You have nobody to say goodbye to, and you are more than capable of fending for yourself in the Demon Realm.

When the guards take you to the portal, one of them says, "You've got a lot of nerve pulling that stunt during the tournament. Then again, the Demon Realm is a perfect place for a freak like you. I'm sure you'll fit in perfectly with the scum that lives there. Seems like nobody will miss you either, so it's a win-win for everyone, except you of course."

You chuckle and say, "I have nothing to argue about. You're right. I have nobody to say goodbye to, other than this pathetic world, and the dictator who rules it." and before the guards can retort, you walked through the portal.

C: A female plant creature with many flowers and thorns stemming from your body. Your left arm is a large carnivorous plant that could easily devour a person whole. Your most notable features are your thorn-like nipples and the thorns on the inside of your cunt and ass. Obviously, that scares most males away if your arm doesn't. Unlike many others, you entered the tournament of your own free will. Some people call you courageous, and others call you insane, but you don't care what they say. The reason you entered the tournament was to satisfy your bloodlust. You feel cheated, calling the tournament child's play. Celestia decides to test you to see if you can live up to your bravado. She sends out a mutated timberwolf, it's at least 10 times the size of a normal one. You charge at it and dive head first into its mouth. The crowd jeers and claims you were trying to make it so there was no Demon Champion this year. Celestia smirks to herself and calms the crowd saying, "Do not worry my citizens. This creature is simply showing off her brutality."

As she says this, you burst your way through the timberwolf's stomach, putting it on the ground writhing in agony. The plant on your arm's teeth were stained red with blood, the timberwolf's innards ripped in its fangs, and it snapped its jaws shut, splitting the bone it was holding right in two. You holler at the top of your lungs, "You give me a target, I'll take it down hard!" the jeering from the crowd turned to cheering, the people obviously had faith in you.

You spent the next three days training, and when the guards brought you to the portal, one of them said, "We salute you! You are the most vicious Demon Champion we've ever had, and if you play your cards right in the Demon Realm, you may be the last one we need! Good luck!" and the two guards gave you a salute before you entered the portal.

Into the Demon Realm

You just arrived in the demon realm, and unlike what you thought it would be, it's much like Equestria's smaller towns, mostly forest and normal landscapes. You imagined it would have looked like a volcanic wasteland and said to yourself, "Strange, this place is nothing like what I thought it would be."

As you step towards a tree, and imp jumps out at you with a knife in his hand and says, "Another champion? You look like you'll make a good slave!"

As you stand up to him, the imp is only a measly 3 feet tall, if not shorter, whereas you stand at seven feet. You look down at the imp and say, "What were you saying about a slave?" before picking him up, grasping him by his throat.

The imp coughed and wheezed as he tried to beg for mercy, "Please! D-Don't kill me! I'm just doing my job! I'm Lord Tirek's slave master! He sends me all over the Demon Realm to procure slaves! Please, I beg you! I'll do anything!"

You think about your options, releasing him or killing him...

Release Him

Your grip on the imp's throat softens, before you drop him to the ground and tell him, "You're lucky it's not a full moon right now, otherwise you'd be settling in my stomach. Anyway, you said you'll do anything, so you're with me now."

The imp gulped, "B-But... if Lord Tirek realizes I've defected to a champion, he'll have my head on his mantle!"

You think for a moment and ask the imp, "What if he thinks you're dead? There's probably plenty of imps, are they really that hard to tell the difference?"

The imp nodded, "Yeah, that could work, but you'd need to get this earring off me, it's my mark of recognition. If you send an imp without my earring on it, he'll know the difference right away."

You nod and carefully remove the earring so as not to cause the imp any pain. Soon enough you kill another imp and put the earring on the left ear, just like it had been on the imp you spared. You place him out in the open for Demon God Tirek's goons to find and return the body to him.

You ask the imp, "So, what's your name?"

The imp replied telling you, "My name's Magnus. Thank you for sparing me."

"Don't worry about it, let's just find some food and a place to sleep for the night."

Kill Him

"I am nobody's slave. If you think I'm going to go quietly, you're dead wrong. Emphasis on dead." before crushing the small demon's windpipe in your hand and throwing his corpse to the side.

As you continue on your way, a voice yells, "Help!" and you rush over to the voice to see a shark girl in chains.

You figure the girl was captured by the imp you killed, and break her free of her chains, "You ok?"

The shark girl nodded, "Thanks to you, yes. I'm in your debt. I don't have a place to call home or anyone to call family." before looking you up and down and grinning, "You're pretty cute." before lunging at you, pushing you to the ground as she locked her lips with yours, playing with your tongue as she kissed you.

You wouldn't admit it, but this shark girl was beautiful, so you didn't mind what was happening. As she pulled your pants down, you told her, "You've already got me hard, so let's skip the foreplay."

She smiles at you and positions her soaking wet pussy above your cock and says, "I want this huge canine cock all inside me, so don't worry about busting your load in me." before lowering herself onto your cock and moaning in pleasure as she moved her hips up and down.

"You're not the one who's going to do all the work." you told her as you pull out and flip her over with her ass in the air before plunging your dog cock into her again.

The shark girl moaned even more, "Oh yes! Fuck me like an animal master! Make me your bitch!"

As you plunged your cock in and out of her, you asked, "You're getting close, aren't you? I'm going to shove my knot into you." before pushing the knot of your 7 inch cock into her, until it was fully in.

As you pushed it in, the shark girl screamed in ecstasy, "Oh fuck yes! I'm cumming! Fill my pussy with your seed master!"

Soon enough, as your knot went into her, you could feel yourself cumming and told her, "With pleasure!" before unloading your cum into her pussy. Her cunt was so wet you were able to actually slip your knot out of her without causing any pain. You laid down next to her on the ground and said, "If you really want to travel with me, I won't stop you. But I should probably know your name."

The shark girl cuddled up to you and said, "My name's Ariel. You were fantastic master" before kissing your cheek.

A few hours later...

You and Ariel had cleaned up when she told you, "I know a nice place we can camp out for the night and maybe catch some fish for dinner."

She led you to a large lake, and told her, "Thanks for this Ariel, I appreciate it." before sitting down and lighting a fire while Ariel dived into the water and soon came back out with a very large rainbow trout in her hands. When she brings it over to you, you cut its guts open and take out the inedible parts like the skeleton and start cooking it over the fire.

As dinner came to an end, and you put the fire out, the two of you went to sleep, Ariel cuddling close to you again.