Elements of chaos and Naruto

by kazoie1

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Crossover, Alternate Universe, Human, Sad, Dark
Length: 1062

Naruto runs away a finds a dark land of ponies

Betrayed by his parents naruto runs into a strange forest and all moast drowns in a pound but what if the pound was a portal to Chaotic Equestria

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-09-10 12:14:01 UTC

The beginning

(btw before you start my gramer is aperantly realy bad so...)It was a normal day for 5 year old Naruto Uzumaki Namikazi.

It started by walking up in his family home, alone. His family consisting of his mother, Kushina Uzumaki Namikazi,

A woman with fiery long red hair and a temper to match, his father Minato Namikazi,  a man with spikey blond hair while his wit was just as sharp, and his twin sister Hitomi Uzumaki Namikazi, a little girl with long blond hair tied up into two pigtails.

He got up from his bed in his room and went to his personal bathroom for a shower. When he got into the bathroom he noticed his form in the mirror. He looked similar to his sister however he had more boyish features to him and his hair had a bad case of bed head. While noticing that he still had his pjs on he quickly took them off revealing a horrific sight. His whole body under his pjs were littered with many scars and a few kanjis branded into him meaning terrible words such as ‘demon’ or ‘monster’. The little boy not bothered by this quickly showered and went back into his bedroom to get dressed for the day. He quickly put on his undergarments as well as an orange jumpsuit as well as to cover up his scars and branding.

He then quickly walked into the family kitchen that down the hall from his room to look for any notes that his parents may have left for him. When he got to his kitchen he started to look on the table only to find nothing there.  He then scoured the kitchen looking for anything that would give him a clue to the rest of his family’s whereabouts, but like before comes up with nothing.

Frustrated he reasoned with himself that one of his parents many friends would know how to locate them….again. Sadly this was not the first time that his family had left him somewhere without a word and quietly left to train Hitomi because of her status of holding a great demons chakra inside of herself.

After going to get his shoes from the front door he rapidly ran towards his front gate to start his search. He got to the gate and proceeded to go through it and closed it. After locking the gait he turned to face his village that he had lived in for his whole life, Konohana. Unfortunately this didn’t last long as he felt a glass sake bottle hit him in his head from behind and quickly fell to the ground from the massive amount of pain now blossoming from the back of his skull where four large shards of glass where still stuck in his head. He then tried to get himself up when he heard a familiar voice say “Hello demon”. He successfully got on his knees and turned his head behind him to find a terrible sight.

His parents where the one who had thrown the glass sake bottle together while his sister was beside them smiling gleefully. “w…h…why?” he barely whispered through the pain. “It is because you are a demon” he heard his father reply casually as if talking about the weather. “Bu-“ Naruto tried to reply on to be cut off by his mother angrily “You are nothing but a demon and a thief you rotten little punk” as they had nothing else to throw they walked to him as if casually strolling through a park.

Naruto then quickly got up and ran in a random direction away from his parents. He tried to look back as he ran only to barely notice that they weren’t even moving anymore and continued to run.

Soon after he found a forest near where he was running, feeling a raw feeling of dread from the forest he began to try and flee from the forest only to hear the sound of three people casually walking towards him. Fearing that it was is parents and sister he ran into the forest completely forgoing the feeling of dread he experienced earlier. Soon after he felt disy and noticed a pond of water that was brown and set of warning bells in his head.

Naruto decided to not worry about his senses another time and walked over to the pond and looked into it, the murky water bubbling slightly.

His vision then began to blur as he collapsed into the pond. Naruto realising that he fell in the pond tried to swim up but couldn’t wasting most of his oxygen. Slowly Naruto stared to lose consciousness however he suddenly felt if he was in the middle of the air.

Falling with his head down that last thing that he remembered was hitting a dark pink PONY with straight hair with the back of his head where the shards of glass where causing the creature to bleed terribly on the back of his head. With a strange feeling of connectedness to the creature he fell on and after noticing dark red chakra flowing through the back of his head he finally passed out completely

Meanwhile

In a secret cave under konohana a voice was heard by three people that where shrouded in shadows.

“Good job you three now we don’t need to waste any more resources on the demon brat” said a mysterious being. “Now,” it said, “come forward I have a new mission for the three of you”. The three people moved forward revealing Naruto’s family.

However in a mere second their appearance was changed by a single hindsighn and a single word that they said, “Kai”.

Meanwhile (again)

Minato Kushina and Hitomi were walking on a path outside of konohana to a meeting with one of their best friends.

“I have a feeling we are forgetting about something” Minato said to his wife. His wife replied with “it’s probably not that big of a thing if we didn’t notice until now Minato.”

However a feeling of massive dread and guilt overcame them that they couldn’t shake off.

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AN

So how was it….. just comment on what you think I will try to reply to it but please no trolling

Arg I need comments because I actually want to improve

btw dark pinkamena not cartoony dark pinkamena

random pic time I am