Thank You Mistress, the Remake

by Ablegabriel

Rating: mature
Tags: Tempest Shadow, Sex, Sunset Shimmer, Profanity, Violence, Twilight Sparkle, Porn, Trixie, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Fetish, Comedy, Starlight Glimmer, Romance
Length: 13261

Twilight gets a harem

Twilight pulls many mares under her protection. Former enemies. Friends. Future friends? Everyone.

She will look out for all of her pets. Anyone who hurts them will....suffer severe consequences.

This story is co-written by me and my partner. His name on this website is The Lurker

Published 2021-08-17 21:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2023-02-19 04:47:08 UTC

Comics and Magic

"Lesson number one, Bottling up your feeling and hiding the truth." Twilight says to Starlight as they sit in one if Twilight's many libraries, "Now, a white lie is sometimes necessary. But a true friend will tell you the truth, and you should do the same."

"But...what if you accidentally did something that would hurt your friend. Wouldn't it be better to not tell them about it while you fix it so it's like it never happened?" Starlight asked.

"Of course not. A true friend will understand that it was an accident, even if they're angry."

"But what if it's something really bad...." Starlight whined. "I don't want ponies to hate me..."

"Starlight, ponies won't hate you. I promise. Just be honest and apologize." Twilight said reassuringly.

Starlight slammed her face into the desk and groaned. "Fine...I didn't like the lasagna you made last night. Please never make it again." Starlight said honestly.

"Oh...but was it better than last time? Spike's been teaching me." She asks hopefully.

"I guess..." Starlight shrugged. "I couldn't really tell a difference. But I'm not the best test subject. I don't like lasagna."

"Oh, okay. I'll practice with something different instead." Twilight said with a smile.

Starlight sat up with another groan. "Finally..." She sighed in relief.

"That was a perfect example of both being honest and not bottling up your feelings!" The Alicorn says happily, clapping her hooves.

"Does that mean I pass this lesson? Can we stop?!" Starlight asked excitedly. She was hungry and really wanted a break.

"Of course not silly, we just started! Lesson number two..." Thankfully Spike soon came to her rescue with a plate of sandwiches and a jug of juice.

"Oh would you look at that! It's lunch time already guess we will have to put this on hold bye!" She said before teleporting off. Half of the sandwiches and juice went with her.

Starlight had appeared in her room, plate of sandwiches and cup of juice on her table. She jumped into her bed with a groan of relief. She dragged her hooves across her face as she recalled all of the things they had done over the past few days.

"So...many...lessons..." She grumbled.

Starlight turned over and stared at the wall. She felt indebted to Twilight, because she was, and she'd do the things the Alicorn asked, but these lessons were starting to take their toll on Starlight. She liked spending time with her, and she was a good teacher, but it was just too much. Maybe she should be honest with her...

"That's what the lesson was about...teaching me to be honest." Starlight sighed as she sat up.

She quickly finished her food and teleported back to Twilight, who immediately perked up. "Oh Starlight, are you ready to get back to our lessons?!"

"Yeah about that, Twi..." Starlight said, taking a deep breath to calm her nerves.

"What is it? Is something wrong?"

"....I'm grateful for you sparing me and wanting to teach me friendship...but..." Starlight trailed off. "I...I think you're going overboard with lessons." She said, tensing her body because she expected some kind of harsh reaction.

"Oh no, not again...I did this with Sweetie and her friends to..." Twilight deflates at this information.

Starlight immediately felt horrible. "N-n-not that they're not good lessons! You're just hitting me with too many at once." Starlight said. "You're a great teacher, honestly!"

"You really think so...?" Twilight asks hopefully, looking at her through her hooves.

"Yeah honestly!" Starlight said, trotting over to her. "You just need to take it easy. Five hundred lessons a day is too much."

"I just wanted to help you as soon as possible...I'm sorry." Twilight said gently.

Starlight felt like she was going to cry for making Twilight feel bad. "You're doing great! I promise, just...just forget it."

"No!" Twilight shouted before she took a deep breath. "Look, if we're doing too much, then we'll cut back. I promise."

Starlight whimpered a little and shook her head. "Y-You don't have to!" The unicorn insisted. "I shouldn't complain...especially after you let me off without a punishment...." Starlight whimpered.

Twilight sighed before shaking her head. "Starlight...we need to be moving at your pace. Not mine. We have so much time, I shouldn't be trying to rush it." The Alicorn said as she lifted Starlight's chin up with a wing.

"....Okay...." Starlight whimpered. "Promise you aren't mad at me?"

"I promise." Twilight said with a nod.

The Alicorn pulled the unicorn into a hug, somewhat out of nowhere. Not that either mare minded. The hug made Starlight feel calmed and at ease. It warmed her greatly. The Unicorn snuggled into Twilight's wings, purring a little bit. The hug went on for awhile, neither mare wanting to break it.

Starlight just felt so...so....safe in Twilight's hooves and wings. She felt like everything she was running from her entire life was just...gone. She nuzzled Twilight happily.

Without thinking, Twilight nuzzled her back.

"Uh....do I need to come back later?" Spike asked from the doorway.

"Yes!" Starlight said as she continued to purr into Twilight's embrace.

Twilight rolled her eyes with a chuckle. "No you don't, Spike." She said as she pulled out of the hug, causing Starlight to whimper.

"How about we just sit around today and read instead of having a friendship lesson? How does that sound?" Twilight offered.

Starlight still hadn't let go of the Alicorn. "Whatever you think is best~!" She said with a smile.

"Star, we can't do anything if you don't let go of me." Twilight giggled.

"But I don't wanna!" Starlight whined.

Twilight rolled her eyes. "But you have to."

"But....but..." Starlight whimpered, ears folding sadly.

Twilight let out an exasperated sigh. "It's really okay, Starlight. I'll give you more hugs later if you want them." Twilight said.

"Okay...." Starlight relented, letting go of Twilight. Starlight smiled when she suddenly had an idea. "Can we read comics?!" She asked eagerly.

"Are you sure?" Twilight asked. "I just got a new book in about magical theorem written by..." The alicorn trailed off as she levitated the book over to herself.

She frowned when she saw the author's name. That frown turned into growl. "...by a self righteous prick who wouldn't know talent if it fucked him in the skull!!" Twilight screamed in a sudden and out of character rage.

Starlight yelped as she ducked, the book going sailing over her head. "Uh....Ms. Twilight?" She whimpered.

Twilight shook her head to snap out of her sudden anger. "Oh, I'm so sorry, Starlight. That wasn't meant for you." Twilight cooed before she began to rub Starlight's mane.

Starlight purred loudly and even began to pant a bit as her head was petted. She leaned into Twilight's hoof happily.

"Now, you said you wanted to read some comics?" Twilight asked. "Are they the ones that I think they are?"

"Yes!" Starlight said with an eager nod.

"Okay, okay!" Twilight laughed. "Spike, would you care to join us?" The alicorn asked.

"Eh, Sure. Why not? If comics are involved, then I'm in," Spike shrugged.

Twilight smiled and clapped her hooves together. "Wonderful! Starlight, why don't you go with Spike to pick out the ones we left off on. I'll get an area ready for us." Twilight said.

"Okay." Starlight said with a nod. "Come on, Spike." Starlight said before trotting out of the room.

Spike followed her closely.

"So...you were really enjoying that hug, weren't you?" Spike asked after a few minutes of walking in silence.

"Shaddap!!" Starlight groaned with a blush.

Spike laughed a little. "Well I don't blame you! Twilight gives the best hugs~!" The baby dragon proclaimed proudly.

Starlight rolled her eyes and picked up the pace a little. "Well I wouldn't know, since somebody cut my hug short." The unicorn grunted.

Spike gave her an eyeroll of his own and crossed his arms. "Oh boo hoo hoo. Please, you're going to be cuddling with her while you guys read." He snarked.

Starlight stopped in place for a second before grinning widely. "....Thanks for the idea~!" She said giddily before she broke into a gallop.

"Wh-Hey! Come back here!" Spike demanded as he ran after her. "I get to lay on her back and use her wings as pillows!"

"No!" Starlight said as she galloped. "I wanna snuggle into her side with her wings draped over me like a warm, safe cocoon!"

"But I called dibs!" Spike whined.

"Don't care!" Starlight grunted. "You've had her your entire life. I've only known her for like maybe a few months!" Starlight pointed out.

Starlight stopped galloping with a sigh as they got to Spike's room. The unicorn turned back to face Spike.

"Look, Spike. Just, stay here and let me spend the day with Ms. Twilight, and I'll get you a fire ruby." The Unicorn insisted as she opened the door.

Spike raised an eyebrow and crossed his arms. "Oh yeah, and where are you going to get a fire ruby? They're mega rare!" He asked, suspicion written on his expression.

"Spike. This is me, we're talking about." Starlight said with an eye roll. "I'll just use rarity's gem finding spell, use it only for fire rubies, and crank it up to eleven." Starlight said.

Spike blew smoke out of his muzzle but agreed nonetheless. "Fine, but if you fail to deliver soon I'll demand double!" He grunted.

"Hardly a problem!" Starlight said as she trotted inside.

She grabbed all the comics she wanted in her magic before trotting away. Spike sat on his bed, munching on some gemstones and reading Power Ponies.

Twilight was sprawled out on what was essentially a giant, room sized pillow, reading a book as she waited for Starlight to return.

She looked up as Starlight teleported right in front of her with a wide smile and a load of comic books.

"I'm back~!" Starlight announced happily.

"Welcome back!" Twilight said, smiling back at her Star Pupil. She looked around the room for a second before returning her attention to the unicorn.

"Where's Spike?" The Alicorn asked.

Starlight placed the supply of Comic books next to Twilight. "I bribed him so I could get you all to myself~!" Starlight answered honestly.

Twilight sighed at that answer. "Starlight....if you wanted it to be just us, all you had to do was just ask." The Alicorn said.

"I guess so," Starlight shrugged. "But this way Spike actually gets something out of it instead of simply being hung out to dry." Starlight said as she snuggled into Twilight's side.

Twilight put a wing around her with another sigh. "Still, please just ask next time, okay?"

"Yes Ma'am." Starlight said with a nod.

"Good." Twilight said before the larger of the two mares levitated over the first comic book.

There were also some snacks sitting around the super sized cushion. The current arc of the comics that they were reading depicted these two mortal enemies, who were alternate reality versions of each other, finding out that the only consistency they had in their lives, was each other. It was so interesting!

Starlight nibbled on of the sandwiches as they read.

"Do you think hedgehogs really have an innate speed trait?" Twilight asked as she munched on an apple.

Starlight shrugged in response. "Definitely not to this extent. But maybe some kind." She said.

The current page showed the blue hedgehog venting to his green counterpart, who for once was listening intently.

"Want to do some tests? I'm sure Fluttershy has a hedgehog we could borrow." Twilight said.

"Eh. I'd rather figure out a way to visit the dimension in these comics." Starlight said with a giggle as she flipped the page.

Twilight shook her head. "Dimensional Travel takes a lot of magic and time." She said.

"Well we do have an abundance of both." Starlight chuckled as they reached final page.

It was a beautiful shot of both hedgehogs hugging each other tightly in front of a sea of destroyed robots.

"That was so sweet! And Violent!" Twilight chirped as she took a bite out of another sandwich.

"I hope that this relationship of theirs is permanent." Starlight said as they started the next issue.

"I sure hope..." The words died in her throat as they saw the cover.

The cover an image of a broken heart with the blue hedgehog on his knees sobbing in the middle.

"What?! No!" Twilight opened it up quickly.

"Please don't do this to us!" Starlight said.

They eventually found the page the cover was based on. The blue hedgehog had failed to swim yet again was sad about it.

"Are you fucking shitting me?!" Twilight groaned, face planting into the cushion.

Starlight groaned as well as she dragged her hooves along her face. "I hate these bullshit baity titles! Whoever makes them needs to be fired!" She growled.

Twilight eventually calmed down with a sigh. "well...at least they're still together."

The ending panel was both of the hedgehogs walking into the sunset holding hands, leaving behind their so called friends.

Twilight took a deep breath as she closed the comic book. "I think we need a break from these. I'm tired of having my emotions thrown around."

Starlight sighed as she teleported the supply of comics into her room for safekeeping. "Alright." She said with a sigh. "What do you wanna do now?" She asked curiously.

Twilight gave her a mischievous grin. "....wanna mess around with some spells?" She asked, grin still present on her muzzle.

Starlight began to giggle. "You sure you didn't already start? Because it's like you read my mind."

Twilight rolled her eyes. "Reading minds is your thing, remember?" She teased with a smirk.

"Yeah yeah..." Starlight giggled as she stood up and hopped off the super sized cushion.

The pair of mares arrived in one of the Tree Castle's many 'Spell Rooms'.

"Alright, have you been practicing your defensive spells?" Twilight asked as she stood in her usual spot.

"Mhm!" Starlight said with a nod. She was eager to learn as much as she could about more Magic.

"Alright, I'm gonna throw some attack at you." Twilight charged up her horn.

Starlight got into a ready stance as Twilight charged up her attack.

To start, the alicorn shot out a basic beam attack. Starlight coated her hoof in magic and slapped the attack away.

"Deflection! Not bad! How about this?" Twilight grinned as she got another spell ready.

Twilight shout out a cluster of of magic missiles at Starlight. The Unicorn threw up a shield that blocked them all without cracking.

"Now let's see how long you can keep it up." Twilight launched a barrage of attacks.

Starlight eventually shifted to her strongest shield spell, which was essentially a giant diamond that encased her. She floated inside as all the attacks beat against it uselessly.

"Impressive...but not impressive enough~" the Alicorn blasted Starlight with her strongest spell.

The spell pushed Starlight away, and her shield began to crack. She tried to keep it up but couldn't manage it.

Just before it cracked Twilight let up, not wanting to hurt her, "You lasted longer than I thought you would."

Starlight let go of the shield and fell to the floor, panting. "Y....yay...."

"Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't mean to exhaust you." Twilight come over to help her up, summoning some water for her.

Starlight gratefully took the water and chugged the bottle. "Thank you." She said once she finished.

"No problem." Twilight smiled. "Do you want to stop or do you think you can keep going?"

Starlight weakly stood up and took a deep breath. "I....I can keep going."

"But do you want to?" Twilight questions sternly.

"Yes!" Starlight said. "I want to make you proud of me!" She whimpered.

"Oh Starlight." Twilight chuckled as she pulled her into a gentle hug. "You already have."

Starlight smiled happily and hugged her back. "In that case....yes...I want a break."

"Then we'll take a break. I'm sure Spike has made yet another delicious dinner that we can enjoy."

"You just had like five sandwiches....aren't you full?" Starlight asked as they parted.

"Uh, not really no." Twilight shrugs as they walk out.

When starlight stopped to think about it, neither was she. It may have been just her, but she swore her metabolism had increased since she became Twilight's student.

After a long, delicious dinner, Starlight volunteered to put away the dishes.

"Thank you Starlight." Twilight gives her another hug, "If you're really okay with doing it yourself then I'm gonna go to bed."

"Alright, good night, then." Starlight said with a gentle wave before teleporting to the kitchen.

"You wanna go to bed too Spike?" She asked motherly.

Spike was already asleep in his chair, snoring gently. Twilight lifted him onto her back, holding him with her wings as she carried him to his room. She placed him on his beanbag of a bed before heading up herself. Starlight hummed to herself as she washed the dishes. Her mind drifted as she cleaned.

Eventually Starlight finished and trotted to her bedroom after putting all the clean dishes away. Starlight yawned as she opened her door.

She flopped onto her bed closed her eyes. "Mmm....Spending the day with Mistress was so great...." Starlight said with a happy sigh. Her eyes shot open as she realized what she said

"....Ah...Fuck." Starlight groaned as she flopped back into bed.

Author's Note

AHAHAHAHAHA! FINALLY!!! IT'S BEEN SO LONG! FINALLY THE FIRST CHAPTER OF THE REMAKE IS HERE!

Yes, the comics that they were reading were Sonic The Hedgehog comics. Yes, I ship Sonic and Scourge. In fact they're my otp. And Yes, I made the arc in the comics up.

First Lesson

Starlight couldn't fall asleep for the rest of the night, the slip up fresh in her mind all night. Once the sun came up, she groaned and rolled out of bed.

"I'm going to need coffee. Or Energy Drinks. Fuck it, I'll drink both." She said as she tiredly stumbled to the nearest kitchen in the castle.

Starlight yawned as she walked through the doorway tiredly, eyes drooping. She opened the fridge and pulled out a fruit punch flavored energy drink.

She used her back hoof to close the fridge as she walked over to the coffee maker and threw it on. As she waited for the coffee, she snapped open the can and began to drink it.

The Unicorn eventually finished both energy drink and coffee. As she tossed the trash away she cracked her neck as she felt energized.

"Whew! That's just what I needed!" She said as she clapped her hooves together. "I feel like I could run a million miles!"

She said before she broke into a gallop. She headed to one of the libraries, eager to read some more on Magic.

Starlight spent the whole morning studying magic happily, throwing the incident from last night into the depths of her mind to worry about later.

"I wonder if Mistress will teach me more-.....I just did it again." Starlight said before slamming her face into her desk with a groan.

"Morning Starlight~!" Twilight chirped, entering suddenly, "Do you want to go out to breakfast with me and the girls?"

Starlight jumped a little from the suddenness, but she smiled and put the book down. "Sure! Where are we going?"

"Just to Sugarcube Corner." Twilight says, leading her out.

Starlight happily trotted after her. "Okay! I could use a good dozen pancakes. I'm starving!" She said, licking her lips.

"Make sure you ask for extra whip cream, it's so good!"

"I'm sure!" Starlight said as they trotted through town.

Everyone greeted Twilight respectfully, giving her a head bow.

Starlight felt very happy to be so close to someone who garnered the respect of everyone.

There were a few mares who seemed a bit too friendly, approaching Twilight with bedroom eyes that she was seemingly too oblivious to notice.

Starlight had a mixed reaction of anger and concern at this

"Oh, hello. Is there something you girls need?" Twilight asks nicely.

Starlight however was a little nervous and hid behind twilight. "Can you sign our books, princess?" One of them asked, holding up an nsfw novel.

The novel was titled: The Princess's Passion and was written by Dusk Silk. "Of course! Do you have a pen?" Twilight asks with a smile.

"Yes! Right here!" One of them said, levitating over a pen they kept in their pocket.

"Who am I making it out to?" She opened the book up to the first blank page

"Merry Maples!" The unicorn said, prancing in place.

Twilight quickly signed it and handed it back, "Here you are! Anyone else?"

The group of mares all held out their own Dusk Silk books, cheering excitedly.

Starlight took note of their sultry gazes and hand written messages they left in the books. One wasn't so subtle, a very revealing picture of her having been taped to the inside of the cover. Somehow, Twilight didn't seem to notice any of this. Just smiling politely as she signed the books.

Once there were no more books to sign, they seemed intent on staying. Starlight had enough. "Okay! Sorry, everypony, but the Princess has a meeting with her friends to get to! You don't want to keep her from breakfast do you?" Starlight asked. The group of mares sighed and shook their head. s, "No....we'll go." The ringleader said before they left. Starlight sighed in relief as they walked away. "Jeez, Twilight. You know, you can be so oblivious." She chuckled with a roll of her eyes.

"Wait, you think I don't know what they were doing?" Twilight asked with a genuine smile, laughing a bit, "Of course I do. I just pretend I don't notice to let them down gently.

Starlight stopped walking and gave Twilight a gobsmacked look. She certainly didn't expect that as a response. "Well....that makes....a lot of sense." Starlight said as she blinked.

"Well I've had to refine the technique ever since I ascended. I couldn't tell them yes, and I felt so awful rejecting them."

Something caught Starlight's attention in what Twilight had just said. She had to refine her technique once she became an Alicorn. That means she's been dealing since before she became a princess!

"How long have you had these...fangirls?" Starlight asked curiously.

"A few years now. I think. I forget when it started, but I'm fairly certain it was at Celestia's School."

Starlight wanted to know exactly when, but didn't want to strain the subject. If it had started right around when Twilight had begun school, then the lavender Alicorn had been dealing with fan girls for over a decade now, and that thought made Starlight shiver.

A few minutes later the mares arrived at sSugar cCube corner. "Hello Mrs. Cake." Starlight greeted.

"Why hello dearies! Your usual spot's already reserved, Pinkie's already here!"

"Thank you Mrs. Cake." Twilight smiled before she walked to the jumbo booth in the back.

As the two mares walked over, Pinkie bounced from her place in the booth. "Twilight! Starlight!!! Over here!!!!" She screamed at the top of her lungs.

Twilight was used to this, and smiled as she climbed in. Starlight however, was convinced someone had put a church bell in her head from how much her ears were ringing.

The unicorn shook her head before she walked over to the mares. She sat next to Twilight and began looking through the menu.

Just about any breakfast dish she could think of was on the menu, and in the end decided to just get a double order of pancakes.

"Shouldn't we wait until everypony gets here?" Starlight asked.

"No, we eat together but we order separately so we don't swamp the Cakes with orders."

Starlight shrugged. That made sense to her. "In that case, I want ten stacks of birthday cake pancakes with a huge helping of bacon on the side." Starlight told Mr. Cake.

"You got it! What do you want to drink? Water, juice, shake?" He offers.

Starlight smiled widely before declaring for all to hear: "Cocoa!" She said as she clapped her hooves.

"Ooh, make that two!" Twilight says happily.

"Yes ma'am!" Mr. Cake bowed a little before rushing off into the kitchen.

"It was a really good idea to introduce more than just sweets at Sugarcube Corner! It's been such a huge success!" Pinkie said happily.

The three mares waited for their friends to show up. They talked casually as they waited, Twilight's lesson helping Starlight hold a real conversation for once.

Fluttershy came flying in first. "I hope I didn't keep anypony waiting. Angel was being stubborn about his bath. Again." She sighed as she sat in her usual spot.

She liked to sit between everypony, it made her feel safe. "Of course he was." Twilight rolled her eyes.

Mr. Cake came trotting over a couple of moments later. "Hello, Fluttershy! What can I get you?"

"Oh um...just my usual please." She said with a small smile.

"Okay, one triple twenty stack of blueberry pancakes with a side of Applesauce coming right up!" Mr. Cake said before trotting back to the kitchen.

"Thank you!" Fluttershy called gently.

Starlight tapped her hooves on the table as they waited for the rest of their friends to show up. She decided to break the silence.

"So, Twilight. Fluttershy. Would it be too far to use magic to make Angel....more of an Angel?" Starlight asked.

Twilight patted her head with a wing. "We both know the answer to that, Starlight." She chuckled.

"Yeah yeah...." Starlight sighed as she crossed her hooves.

"I know Angel can be a little...." Fluttershy trailed off.

"Rude?" Pinkie offered.

"Annoying?" Starlight suggested.

"Downright Evil." Twilight stated.

"....of a hassle." Fluttershy finished. "But he means well. Sometimes."

Starlight sighed and decided to just drop the subject. That was when Applejack came trotting in.

"Whoo-we! That was one tough morning!" She said as she took her normal seat, right on the left edge. "Sorry I'm late ya'll'all, I had to buck a whole orchard by myself today."

"It's fine, AJ." Twilight said with a smile.

Mr. Cake ran over, ready to take the earth pony's order.

Applejack crossed her hooves with a grin. "Now why'd you come all the way over here? Ya already know I want five of yer Apple Pies!" She said with a chuckle.

Mr. Cake rolled his eyes as he wrote down the order. "Can't hurt to be sure!" He said before he ran back to the kitchen once again.

"Didn't you try bucking a whole orchard by yourself five years ago?" Starlight asked. "From what Twilight tells me, that went poorly." The unicorn pointed out.

"Naw, Star. That was when I tried to buck the entire farm. One Orchard I can handle." Applejack said with a grin.

Starlight shrugged as Rainbow Dash came flying in. "If you say so." The Unicorn said.

Rainbow Dash took her seat, which was opposite of Applejack. "Thanks for waiting for me Everypony!" She said. "I had to chase down a run away Helicopter. It was awesome." The Pegasus said as she began to preen herself.

Twilight and Starlight rolled their eyes at Rainbow's antics.

"I'm sure it was." Twilight sighed with a small smirk.

"Oh yeah, it definitely was. Wish you girls were there to see it," she said, grinning as she finished preening.

Starlight took a sip of water and sighed. Starlight counted down in her mind.

"Three...two...one...aaand"

"Hey! Why don't I tell you all about it!" Rainbow said with a grin.

"There it is."

The other mares at around and listened to the rainbow maned pegasus ramble on and on about how she spent the morning saving the skies from a helicopter.

It was over by the time Rarity finally showed up.

"Last one as usual!" Applejack teased.

"Terribly sorry darlings. Fashionably late~!" She said with a chuckle as she settled in between Applejack and Twilight.

"I saw it on the morning news as I got ready." Rarity said with an eye roll.

"Meh, I could tell the story way better than the news."

"Yes yes I'm sure you could darling." Rarity said as Mr. Cake came running by.

"Morning Rarity! Morning Rainbow Dash! Zap Apple Pie for Rainbow Dash, and an omelet for Rarity like usual okay thanks bye!" Mr. Cake said as he ran.

"I definitely could," Dash said, crossing her hooves as she leaned against the back of the booth.

The food started coming in dish by dish, everypony patiently waiting as they talked. Starlight was really hungry. When her bacon showed up she was ready to chow down, but she wanted to be considerate and wait for everyone's food to get there. Thankfully it didn't take long before the Cakes delivered the last order, the girls all voicing their thanks as they started eating.

Starlight practically dove into her food, forgetting both utensils and Magic. Twilight probably would have said something about Starlight's lack of decorum if she wasn't also eating quite messily.

"Mmmm... Just as good as always," Dash said with a smile.

"Man...I was really dumb a few months ago. Who knew I missing out on such good food!" Starlight as she wiped her face.

"Yes! The Pancakes trump all!!" Pinkie said before maniacally laughing for a few moments. She then went back to happily eating her pancakes.

"So, Mistress. Are we doing anything else today?" Starlight asked as she munched on some more bacon. She didn't immediately process what she said.

The rest of the group stopped eating and stared at her in silence for a few seconds.

"Um, Starlight?" Twilight asks, wiping her face.

Starlight looked up at her with a happy smile. "What is it, Mis...." She started to say. She trailed off and a look of downright terror spread across her face, her ears folding. "....oh god." She squeaked. Her horn lit up in magic before she disappeared in a flash.

She reappeared in her room, burying herself in her bed as she practically died of embarrassment. She lit her horn up in magic and began cocooning herself with her blankets and pillows.

"Oh god oh god oh god oh god!" She repeated as he hugged her pillow. "I messed up! She's going to think I'm a freak! she's going to stop teaching me Magic! I'll be on my own again! I don't wanna be on my own again!" She sobbed into her pillow.

There was a gentle knocking at the door that interrupted her wallowing.

She gently wiggled her head out of her blankets and looked towards the door through the waterfall of tears.

".....Come in..." She whimpered, hugging her pillow even tighter than before.

Twilight opened door and walked up to the bed. She looked nervous. Starlight's ears folded even more and she ducked her head back into her cocoon of blankets.

"....It's okay Starlight." She speaks up, trying to comfort her.

Starlight just began sobbing. "....No....No it's not! I'm a freak!" She sobbed.

Twilight climbed into the blanket cocoon, hugging the mare before she could protest, "No, you aren't."

"But...but..." Starlight whimpered. "I...I..."

"No buts. You aren't a freak." Twilight rubbed her mainne, wings wrapped around her.

Starlight's crying slowly tapered off. She eventually returned the bigger mare's hug. "...You...aren't mad at me?"

"Starlight, how could I be mad at you?" Twilight probed gently.

"I...I don't know! I just....Ugh! I'm so ridiculous!" Starlight groaned.

Twilight kept herself calm and composed throughout the entire conversation. "Starlight, stay calm. Let's just talk okay?" She said gently.

Starlight pressed her muzzle against Twilight's chest and sobbed again. "I don't want to! You already know the disgusting view I have of you! I'm sick!"

"Starlight...there is nothing wrong with you, or your feelings." Twilight said with a serious expression.

It took Starlight a couple of moments, but her sobbing eventually died down enough for her to look at Twilight clearly.

"There....there isn't?" The unicorn asked meekly.

Twilight shook her head. "No. There isn't." She assured Starlight with a warm smile.

Starlight weakly smiled back and leaned back into Twilight. "Th-Thank you." She spoke, voice barely over a whisper.

Twilight smiled warmly at her. "Anytime, anytime." She said as she nuzzled Starlight.

Starlight nuzzled her back. She felt so safe in her embrace. She never wanted to leave it. She really, really loved Twilight. She's been so good to her when she didn't deserve it.

Twilight sighed before she looked down at Starlight. "If...if you want me to e your Mistress...I'm willing to help." She offered.

Starlight gasped and looked up at Twilight, gazing into her beautiful purple eyes. "Really!?" She exclaimed with pure elation.

"Yes, really." Twilight confirmed, smiling widely down at the mare.

Starlight once again began weeping, this time out, out of joy. She held onto the Alicorn tight and thanked her profusely.

Twilight rubbed the unicorn's back and gently shushed her. "Shh...Shh...it's okay, my pet." She cooed lovingly.

Starlight shuddered happily when Twilight called her Pet.

"There's no need to cry my pet, you're supposed to be happy now remember?" Twilight said as she lifted Starlight's chin.

Starlight looked into Twilight's eyes after wiping away her tears.

"Yes Mistress!" Starlight said with the happiest smile Twilight had ever seen on the mauve unicorn.

"Good." Twilight said with a firm now. "Now, tell Mistress. Is there anything you want to do right now?" She asked the unicorn in her embrace.

Starlight grinned widely and nodded with great enthusiasm. "Yes there is! Can we please, PLEASE Celebrate this? I feel like we should!" Starlight said.

Twilight chuckled and ruffled Starlight's mane. "Of course we can, Starlight. What would you like to do?" The Alicorn asked.

Starlight gave her Mistress a sultry grin before she began to wriggle under the covers. Twilight grinned to herself as she did this.

"Oh, Starlight. Are you sure you're ready for that? I think you need some training, first." She purred seductively.

Starlight immediately shot out from under the covers, the blankets floating away from the pair of mares. She wore an eager grin for Twilight and nodded enthusiastically.

"Yes please! Train me, Mistress! I'm eager to learn!" Starlight said as she excitedly clapped her hooves together.

Twilight let out a sultry chuckle as she patted Starlight's head. "Of course, my lovely pet. But I need to order some toys to train your holes for me. But for now, we can start with how to properly worship your Mistress~." She purred.

Starlight shuddered from her Mistress's tone before she nodded excitedly. "Yes Mistress! I'm ready to start!"

"Very well then." Twilight purred before she sat on the edge of the bed. "Kneel." She spoke simply, her voice demanding obedience from Starlight.

Starlight immediately knelt before Twilight, a happy expression etched onto her muzzle.

Twilight looked down at her with a grin. "I'll ask you this one last time, Starlight. Are you sure about this?" The Alicorn asked. She was about to undo her modesty spell. Not many ponies bothered with one, especially in a small town like Ponyville, given the size of her....assets, it was pretty much an necessity for her.

Starlight gave her a happy nod. "I want to be the best pet I can be for you, Mistress Twilight."

"Prepare yourself." Twilight warned before she began to undo the spell.

Starlight grinned eagerly as Twilight's horn glowed. She couldn't wait to see it!

She could see nothing but it, it being the most glorious thing she'd ever seen. The thick purple shaft pulsed with blood, the twitch so powerful it could probably lift her up.

The musk hit her so hard she was convinced she'd never smelled anything else before, only this incredible scent. And below that shaft was arguably the best part, if only because of what it promised. The thick, turgid flesh flexed and tightened as even more unspent semen was produced.

Starlight drooled at the sight of the mighty Goddess cock.

"So....perfect." She muttered in her awe. Her gaze was transfixed on it, she couldn't make herself look at anything else.

Twilight chuckled a little and rubbed Starlight's mane. "I'm glad you like it, but you can stop eating with your eyes~." She purred. Her cock pulsed again.

Starlight finally managed to tear her eyes away and looked into Twilight's own lavender irises. "S-Sorry." The unicorn said sheepishly.

"It's okay~." Twilight purred gently as she put a hoof on her mane. She smiled darkly before suddenly grabbing her horn and burying the mare's muzzle in the muskiest part of her package.

Starlight let out a loud, eager moan at this and began to huff the musk like a drug addict. Her eyes rolled up and her entire body shuddered in pleasure as the smell addled her brain.

Twilight licked her lips as she watched Starlight huff. "Mmm...Just tap my thigh when you need some air." Twilight instructed as she kept her grip on her horn.

The Alicorn got a muffled "Ypph Mpptrpph!" In response.

After a couple minutes of huffing Twilight could feel an eager tongue begin to lick at her package.

Twilight sighed happily as she ruffled her new pet's mane. "Mmm...That's a good girl." She purred. "Keep that up." She said before letting out a small moan.

Starlight's entire body once again shuddered in joy filled pleasure when she heard the praise. She obeyed the order and continued her worship.

Twilight eventually let go of her horn to allow her free access to her sack. Starlight nuzzled and huffed and licked and sucked for minutes on end.

"That's enough." Twilight spoke up once her balls had been given a thorough spit shine.

Starlight whimpered as she pulled away from those amazing balls. "Okay..."

"Don't be sad, you'll love this next part~" Twilight assures her.

Starlight nodded as she regained her composure. "Yes Mistress!" The unicorn said excitedly.

"Good girl~ Now, you won't be able to swallow my flare yet, so I want you to make out with it instead~" Twilight held down her length so Starlight could reach her flare, cockhole twitching and starting purting out pre.

Starlight bounced in place giddily before she took the massive shaft in her hooves. She began to kiss and lick at her flare eagerly, she almost came from the taste of her Mistress's Pre alone.

Twilight sighed in satisfaction, Starlight being rewarded for each loving stroke and hungry lick by more pre. Starlight licked up every drop of pre that came her way. She had never tasted anything like it before! It was absolutely exquisite.

This went on for awhile, Starlight never getting tired of it. The unicorn had gone from making out with exclusively her flare, to her entire shaft. She licked, kissed, nuzzled every inch of the cock.

"Such a good girl, you're gonna make Mistress cum soon~" Twilight moaned happily.

Theis reinvigorated the unicorn exponentially. She doubled her efforts, wanting to bring her Mistress to orgasm as quickly as she could.

"Nnn, here it comes, open wide my pet~!!" Twilight moans, cock throbbing in Starlight's hooves.

Starlight placed her muzzle over Twilight's cock, ready for her orgasm. She formed as tight a seal as she could around the Alicorn's urethra before Twilight came. Seed flooded into her mouth, threatening to drown her. Starlight's horn lit up as she used a spell on herself to ensure she could handle the sheer volume of Twilight's Orgasm.

Only to have it canceled by her Mistress, "You need to train my pet~ Do your best~"

Starlight whimpered as the orgasm began to overwhelm her. She tried her best, but a little over halfway through, cum exploded from her lips.

Twilight pulled away and let her orgasm paint the unicorn white, giving her the best facial of her life. Starlight moaned as her mind was overcome with the scent and taste of her Mistress's cum. She squirted her sweet mare juice all over herself.

When Twilight's orgasm finally petered out, Starlight licked and sucked at her flare, trying to get every bit of seed she could.

Once she was done, she collapsed over the bed. "Thank...you...Mistress." Starlight moaned.

"You did so well my pet~" Twilight kisses her gently, pulling the cum out of her fur with her magic.

Starlight looked at all the floating cum and began drinking it. "Thank you!"

"You're welcome my little Glim-Glam~" Twilight cooed, cuddling her pet tightly.

Starlight snuggled in between her once she was finished. She felt so comfortable and safe, surrounded by her Mistress.

"I love you Starlight." Twilight made out with her gently as they laid there.

"I love you too, Mistress." Starlight said happily, kissing her back.

Author's Note

There we are! Chapter two is finished! Hope everyone likes it. And there's the first big change coming into the remake. Starlight is the main pet instead of Trixie. Whew. I know I'm going to get a lot of hate from people who hate Starlight.

But I can't help it. I love me some Glimmy Glammy.

I hope it looks as good as it felt to write! Please leave comments, I love responding to them.

A Day in The Life

The two mares had fallen asleep quickly after Starlight's First Lesson in submission to her Mistress. They woke up the following day, still cuddling happily.

"mmm....good morning Mistress." Starlight mumbled tiredly.

Twilight smirked and rubbed her mane. "Good morning, my pet." She purred into Starlight's ear.

Starlight shivered happily at the huskiness of her Mistress's voice. "Last night was incredible. Thank you, Mistress." Starlight said as she nuzzled the Alicorn.

Twilight chuckled and nuzzled her back. "You are quite welcome, Starlight." She giggled. "We should probably get up, huh?"

Starlight rolled her eyes. "Yes we should, Mistress." Starlight chuckled.

The unicorn sat up and stretched out, letting out a satisfied groan as she felt her spine pop. "Ugh...I love it when that happens." She sighed happily.

Twilight giggled as she too began to stretch. She sighed in sweet relief as she stretched out her wings. The pair of mares eventually pulled themselves of their comfortable bed.

"So!" Starlight said as she clapped her hooves. She turned to Twilight with an eager expression. "What are we doing today?" The mare asked excitedly.

Twilight chuckled as she began to walk out of the bedroom. "Well first things first, we should probably check in on our friends and let them know everything's alright." The Alicorn said.

Starlight smiled sheepishly. "Yeah....that makes sense, heh."

"But before that breakfast!" Twilight cheered before she lead her out, "And more importantly coffee!"

"Coffee sounds really good right now." Starlight said as they trotted to the kitchen.

When the entered the kitchen Spike was already cooking, having prepared plenty of food and three whole pots of coffee.

"You always seem to know when we're going to wake up, and you make sure to wake up earlier almost every day. How do you do it?" Starlight asked as she levitated over one of the pots.

"It's a gift." Spike sighed cheekily as he continued cooking.

Twilight rolled her eyes at this exchange as she levitated one of the finished slices of bacon over to her muzzle. It was perfectly cooked, as always. She munched on strips as she poured the biggest cup of coffee Starlight had ever seen. Starlight made her own bigass cup, but it was nowhere near the size Twilight was making.

"You'd think I'd need more than you." Starlight chuckled.

Twilight just chuckled before taking a nice long sip of coffee as Spike out down the last of the food.

"Go on and dig in!" He urged as he took off his apron.

The pair of mares looked at the breakfast bonanza before them. Starlight licked her lips as she levitated over some silverware.

"Don't mind if I do~!" She chirped happily.

"You're the best Spike!" Twilight praised him, stuffing her face almost as fast as Pinkie pie.

Seeing her Mistress act without manners a second time, Starlight shrugged and tossed away the silverware before following Twilight's example.

"Mmm! Yummy!" The mare commented.

"Yes Yes, well I do have some talents." Spike said as he carried the pots and pans over to the sink.

"Come on, eat with us Spike! You should enjoy the food you made!" Twilight insisted.

Spike dumped the dished into the sink. "The dishes aren't going to wash themselves, Twilight. I'll eat when I'm done." Spike said as he turned on the faucet.

"They can wait Spike! Tue food will get cold!" She clearly wasn't going to take no for an answer.

"Alright fine. If you insist," Spike said before sitting back down at the table after putting the dishes down and turning the faucet off.

Starlight was finished with her food in minutes. "Thank you for making breakfast Spike."

"No problem Starlight. Always happy to do it," Spike said with a smile as he finished his own food.

Starlight used magic to wash all of the dishes once everything was finished, trying to make Spike's morning just a little easier.

"Heh, thanks," Spike said with a smile as he started drying the dishes.

"Thank you for breakfast Spike!" Twilight hugged him from behind. "Me and Starlight are going to Rarity's for a bit, you want to come?"

"Nah, I'm good," Spike shook his head.

Twilight pulled away from Spike. "Alright, then!" She said before walked away.

Spike waved goodbye to the pair of mares as they left the kitchen.

Starlight pranced behind Twilight, a happy pep in her step as they walked. Twilight had a wide smile on her face as they walked through Ponyville.

"You're in a good mood." Starlight chuckled as she trotted next to the Alicorn.

Twilight just chuckled knowingly. "How could I not be?" She said with a smirk. "I'm about to get my pet her collar."

This news made Starlight gasped excitedly. In her excitement she teleported directly in front of Twilight. The lavender mare could see stars in her pet's eyes.

"Really?!" She asked, practically bouncing in place with giddiness.

Twilight stopped walking to address her pet. "Really." She assured. "And I'm going to make sure it's extra special, just for you~!" She purred.

Starlight grew a very wide smile before she hugged her Mistress tightly. "Thank you, Mistress!!" She said before pulling away. "Let's get there now!" She said before disappearing with a flash.

Twilight rolled her eyes before teleporting to the boutique after her pet.

When the Alicorn appeared, she had found her pet bouncing like Pinkie Pie in front of the door to Rarity's boutique. Twilight chuckled a little as she walked up to the door and knocked on it.

"Come in, Darling!" Rarity's voice chimed. "The door's unlocked!!"

Twilight and Starlight walked inside and greeted the alabaster unicorn. "Good morning, Darlings! Thanks for dropping by, what can I help you with?" Rarity asked as she walked over to them.

"I need a custom order. I want it done as soon as possible." Twilight said.

Rarity was idly making a dress with her magic as she conversed with her friends. "Of course, Darling! Is everything okay? You two disappeared on us yesterday. Did everything work out?" The unicorn asked.

"Oh yes we did. Splendidly." Twilight said with a giggle.

"Well that's just wonderful, darling!" Rarity said with a smile. She stuck her tongue out as she concentrated on the dress she was making.

She finished it up as quickly as she could manage so she could focus on talking to her friends.

"How did the talk go?" She asked the two mares.

"Like I said, everything worked out wonderfully." Twilight said, nuzzling Starlight happily. The unicorn cooed and nuzzled her back.

Soon, Rarity finished up the dress and quickly put it on a stand. She stretched her back before prancing over to the pair of mares.

"So, how can I help you two? What kind of dress do you need?" Rarity asked with a wide smile.

Twilight chuckled as she put a wing around Starlight. "No Dress. The custom order I'd like, is a collar~. The most beautiful and comfortable collar you can make."

Rarity blinked as she looked at the two mare, her mind going into many places until she realized what Twilight was asking. "Oh! Oh my...certainly!" She said with a small blush.

"I presume it's for Starlight?" Rarity asked.

The pair of mares nodded as Twilight retracted her wing.

Rarity coughed into her hoof. "V-Very well then. Come with me, Starlight." Rarity said before she lead Starlight to her measuring room.

Starlight stood on the podium as Rarity used magic to measure Starlight's neck.

"Congratulations." Rarity said to her, her blush was as red as cherries.

Starlight smiled at Rarity and nodded her thanks as Rarity measured her.

Once Rarity was finished, she gave Twilight and Starlight a couple of options to choose from. Starlight wanted it furred on the inside, and to have a little breathing room, and to have a charm that proclaimed she was Twilight's property.

Twilight smiled lovingly at Starlight as she gave off all the ideas she had for the perfect collar to the alabaster mare.

Soon Rarity had a vivid idea of what to work with. A furred, purple collar with a charm of Twilight's cutie mark. The collar itself would have Starlight's name stitched into it. It would have clasp that could only be opened with Twilight's magic on the back.

When Rarity finished the sketch of it, she showed it to Starlight, he whinnied in excitement and pranced around, chanting yes, much like Twilight did when she was a filly.

Twilight chuckled as she watched her pet prance.

Rarity was smiling as she began translating the Sketch into full on blueprints. "I'll have this ready within the week!"

"Thank you very much, Rarity." Twilight said with a smile. "Come on, Starlight. Let's go." Twilight said as she headed to the exit.

"Coming, Mistress~!" Starlight said joyously as she galloped over to Twilight.

Author's Note

A short but sweet chapter, finally delivered.

Collared

It had only been a few days, but it felt like 2 years had gone by in the blink of an eye. Starlight was broken out of her train of thought when Twilight cleared her throat.

"Yes Mistress?" Starlight asked, her tail wagging a bit in excitement.

"Now I hope you don't think that because of our new...positions regarding each other, that I'm going to stop teaching you about magic and friendship."

Starlight shook her head. "Of course Mistress! I know the lessons will never stop! I wouldn't have it any other way!" The mauve unicorn said happily.

"Good." Twilight said with a smile.

"Hey Mistress? Don't you think Rarity is taking a really long time with my Collar?" Starlight asked.
"Why? It's only been a few days. Rarity did say she'd have it finished within the week." Twilight pointed out.

Starlight nodded in agreement with her Mistress and sighed a little. "Yes, it has, but hasn't it also felt like it's been over 2 years?"

"Uh...well. I suppose so, but, let's just try not to think about that okay?"

"Yes Mistress." Starlight said.

Eventually, there was a knock on the palace door. Spike was walking over to it to open it when he was practically run over by Starlight in her eagerness.

She threw open the door with her magic and excitedly greeted Rarity.

"Why Hello Darling. I guess you are very excited, aren't you?" The alabaster mare chuckled.

Starlight bounced in place before she began to try and frisk Rarity for the box she was hiding.

"Now now Darling, don't you want Twilight to be the one who gives it to you?" Rarity said, stepping back a bit.

Starlight ceased her actions with a small blush. "Yeah, I-I suppose I shouldn't be so hasty, huh." The unicorn said with a nervous chuckle.

She let Rarity trot inside before she shut the door. Starlight galloped up to Spike who had just gotten to his feet. "Sorry for running into you." She said with a sheepish smile.

"Nn..s'okay Star." He said before shaking his head. "Gonna be dizzy for a few seconds. Hi Rarity."

"Hello Spikey Wikey~!" Rarity greeted the dragon as she trotted by.

Starlight apologized to Spike a second time before she followed Rarity. The pair of unicorns trotted through the Tree Castle together, headed for the room Twilight was in. She was laying on a large couch, going over some spells.

Once they arrived Starlight broke into a gallop and tackle hugged her Mistress, who wrapped her wings around her.

"Hello Rarity." Twilight greeted as Starlight squirmed and snuggled around under her wings.

"Greetings Darling. Terribly sorry for the wait. But I wanted to get it perfect!" Rarity said as she levitated a lavender box out of her saddlebags.

Starlight made grabby hooves at the box which Twilight took into her magic and levitated out of her reach. The unicorn pouted and crossed her hooves.

"Thank you Rarity. I'm sure your work is as spectacular and wonderful as it always is." Twilight chuckled. "Are you sure you don't want any payment for this?"

"Of course not Twilight! You're my friend, it was no trouble, I assure you." Rarity said.

Starlight slowly grew more and more impatient as the pair of friends chatted, with Twilight levitating the box above.

"Open open open open!" She chanted suddenly.

Twilight rolled her eyes before she set Starlight upright on the couch.

"I am eager to see how you two enjoy it." Rarity said.

The Alicorn of Magic nodded as she placed the box down on the coffee table. Starlight eagerly opened it with her magic.

She pulled the collar out of the box and grinned widely when she saw it. The band itself was the same shade of purple that Twilight's coat was, with white fur lining the inside of it to ensure that it was comfortable to wear. It had a charm of twilight's cutie mark that jingled pleasantly.

"I love it!" She cheered in joy.

Twilight chuckled as she took the collar in her magic. "It looks perfect, Rarity. Killer job as usual. You even got the enchantment I requested."

"This is the first piece Zecora and I worked on together technically." Rarity chuckled.

"It came out wonderfully." Starlight complimented. Twilight unlocked it with her magic and levitated it over to Starlight's neck.

The Alicorn cleared her throat, gathering Starlight's attention. "Now Starlight, once this goes on, only I can remove it." Twilight warned.

"Good! I want it on me forever!" Starlight declared.

Twilight smiled at this and happily clicked it around Starlight's neck. The charm glowed blue as the collar sealed itself around Starlight.

The mare gave out a happy whinny before she once again tackle-hugged her Mistress.
"Thank you, Mistress!" Starlight cheered happily.

Starlight was happily staring at her collar, jingling it happily as she did.

"Starlight. Starlight? Starlight!" Twilight called.

Starlight squeaked in and shook her head. "S-Sorry!" She said, standing at attention. Twilight chuckled a little, rolling her eyes.

"Now that I've got your attention, I believe it's time for some practice." The Alicorn said.

"For Magic. Right?" Starlight said with a tilt of her head.

Twilight grinned as her horn began to glow. "I'd sure hope so. We're in the arena after all." The Alicorn said happily.

Starlight grinned back as she drew her hoof on the ground, her horn glowing as well. "Well I'm ready Mistress." Starlight said before firing a laser at Twilight.

Twilight created a shield, effortlessly blocking the laser. "Good Job Star. You're getting better every minute, let alone every day. Now, I want you to focus on the Multiplication Spell Today."

"Yes Mistress!" She cheered before she casted the spell in question.
She created three clones of herself, all four of them grinning at Twilight. "Are you sure you can deal with four of me?" They said in unison, grinning confidently.

"Of course! It'll be easy." Twilight taunted.

The four Starlights gasped in play shock before they fired lasers at all sides of her. Twilight spread her wings and floated up.

Starlight grinned, having expected this. The Lasers blasted together into a big explosion.

"Very Impressive!" Twilight said as she created a shield she gracefully stood on it, blocking the explosion.

The Four Starlights levitated themselves and created pikes to launch at Twilight, who calmly dodged them. "Good, you are doing very well."

Twilight blocked another pike with a shield, the construct absorbing the other. She then split it in four and launched it at all of the Starlights.

They teleported out of the way and levitated around Twilight. The Alicorn dodged each attack Starlight sent her way so gracefully it was as if she were dancing.

"Oh my Stars!"

"She's so hard to hit!"

"She's so amazing!"

"I want her babies!"

The Starlights said.

Twilight giggled a bit at this before she cleared her throat. "Focus, Starlight. Don't let your awe of me distract you."

The four Starlights blushed and shook their heads.

"Yes Mistress." They said in unison.

They proceeded to shoot four giant lasers that morphed together into one massive laser.

Twilight smiled as she blasted the laser with a smaller but denser one that split it. The two lasers sailed past her harmlessly.
She smirked at the Starlights, spreading her wings majestically. "You're really getting the hang of using this spell to its fullest. But now I want you to try to use four different attacks at once.

"Yes Mistress!" The Starlights said.

One of them used a lite super speed enchantment on her body and rushed Twilight, who was still able to calmly dodge each attack.

The second blasted her with lasers while the third charged a big magic bomb. The fourth created pikes with magic to blast at her.

Twilight used a harden spell on her wings and smacked the pikes away, dodged four attacks from the speeded Starlight, and blocked all the lasers.

"Very good! Very Very Good!" Twilight praised, making all four Unicorns blush brightly.

The distraction caused the fourth's magic bomb to overload and explode. Twilight cocooned herself in a shield while the three clones unfortunately evaporated.

Starlight panted as she stood on wobbly legs. "How...was that?"

Twilight landed before her gracefully. "You did very well Starlight. Such a good girl." The Mare praised.

Starlight beamed at her Mistress's praise and wagged her tail, panting excitedly. Twilight walked up to her and petted her head.

The unicorn purred and nuzzled her hoof happily as her tail wagged. Twilight chuckled and hugged her.

"Such a good girl. Now, let's have a rest. Spike made nachos."

"Yay Nachos!" Starlight cheered.

Starlight stood in front of her room with Twilight, her tail wagging a bit in excitement. "Mistress, are you sure you don't mind me moving into your room?"

"Not at all, Are you sure you don't want your own space?"

"Of course I do, but I want to be with you even more!" Starlight said happily.

Twilight smiled at this and ruffled her mane with a wing. "Okay, my pet. I can give you both, let's leave some things here, and take a few things into my room.

Starlight beamed up at Twilight and nuzzled the taller mare happily. "Thank you Mistress! You're so generous."

"I aim to be a Good Mistress after all~!" Twilight chuckled, scritching her chin with her wing.

"Now go on my pet, pick out what you would like to take into our room."

"Yes Mistress!" Starlight said as she trotted inside. She levitated all of her pictures of her and her Mistress up, grabbed a trunk she had full of magical artifacts and tomes, and took one of her favorite kites. "Ready!" She chirped.

Twilight smiled and took some of the load in her own magic. "Then let's get going."

Starlight joyously pranced beside Twilight as the alicorn walked briskly. The pair of mares eventually reached the Master Bedroom. Twilight opened the door and Starlight zoomed through. She carefully used her magic to place her pictures on the wall to compliment the pictures that were already there.

Twilight moved the trunk to the foot of the bed. "Hmm. Hey Starlight!"

"Yes Mistress?" Starlight asked as she trotted up to her.

"I have an idea with your kite. Would you like it if I put up the kite hung up on the ceiling, as if it's flying?" Twilight asked.

Starlight squeed in excitement as she bounced in place. "That sounds wonderful, Mistress!"

The unicorn helped her Mistress hang up the kite. She held the kite spread up against the ceiling as Twilight levitated staples, making sure not to pierce the craft itself.

"Thank you Mistress!" Starlight chirped, nuzzling the Alicorn.

"Of course." Twilight chuckled. "Now then. It's our first time sleeping together~." Twilight purred, gently pushing Starlight towards the bed.

Starlight shivered in excitement before she smiled widely.

"Have you been practicing like a good girl?" Twilight asked.

Starlight nodded, her smile growing even wider. "Oh yes Mistress!"
Twilight gave her a sultry grin before she gently pushed her down onto the large bed. The alicorn pinned the smaller mare and purred down at her.

"Such a good little pet."

"If you've really been practicing, then I think you're ready to worship your mistress~"

Starlight squealed in excitement and nodded furiously. "Yes Mistress! Please let me!"

The alicorn grinned at her before she switched their positions so she was reclining against pillows and Starlight was at her hooves.

"Now just let me drop this spell..." Twilight dropped her decency cloak, the sight making Starlight's mouth water.

The Unicorn shivered as she tried not to drool over herself. She crawled forward and nuzzled the massive shaft. It was positively perfect in every way possible.

Starlight breathed in her musk and moaned in satisfaction. She began licking the giant alicorn cock from base to flare, moaning at the taste. Once she was at full mast she began to make out with her flare for a couple of moments. Eventually she managed to fit the flare into her muzzle.

Twilight moaned as Starlight suckled on her flare.

"Mmm~. Such a good girl." Twilight praised, petting Starlight's head.

The unicorn moaned around Twilight's cock and began swirling her tongue around the flare.

"Good girl." Twilight praised once again, resting her hoof on her pet's head.

Starlight's tail wagged quickly as she began to push herself further down Twilight's cock. She didn't expect herself to get very far her first time sucking off her Magnificent Mistress.

She managed to force a third of her cock down before she started gagging. Twilight rubbed her head and gently calmed her.

"Don't go farther than you can handle my pet. You're doing wonderful with what you can fit." Twilight cooed.

"Mmmm~!" Starlight moaned.

The Mauve Unicorn's tail's wagging grew faster. She bobbed her head along the parts of Twilight's cock she could fit, and used magic to create a swirling soft and wet vortex around the parts she couldn't reach. Starlight wanted her to feel as good as possible, and once Twilight started to moan repeatedly, it would seem that the unicorn had succeeded.

She kept sucking and sucking for what felt like hours of pleasurable worship to Starlight and Twilight. Eventually, Twilight's massive marecock began to twitch in Starlight's throat.
Starlight squeed in excitement, shooting pleasure ripples up and down Twilight's shaft. The Alicorn moaned and leaned back at this, her tail flicking against the bed as Starlight sped up.

Her cock twitched more and more. Starlight braced herself for the impending orgasm. Twilight grabbed her head with both hooves, and with a loud, guttural moan, came straight down Starlight's throat.

The submissive mare screamed in pleasure as her eyes rolled up. Her horn spurted some magic as her pussy leaked from her own orgasm.

Twilight's orgasm lasted for several minutes, being an alicorn and all. When it eventually died down, she let Starlight slide off her shaft.

Starlight laid against Twilight's hoof, breathing heavily.

"Thank you for letting me worship you, Mistress." She said tiredly.

Twilight chuckled and petted her head. "Of course my pet. Now why don't you clean up and we can snuggle."

"Yes Mistress!" Starlight said happily.

In the Morning,

An orange cream mare with white mane trotted towards the Tree Castle with a smile on her muzzle. "I wonder if she'll remember me!" The Unicorn said happily.

She looked around the town, having just moved to Ponyville. All the ponies here were so friendly!

The mare stopped in front of the tree castle's front gates. She took a deep breath and knocked on it. Spike opened the door and looked up.

"Hello!" The drake greeted.
"Hi Spike." The mare greeted with a wave.

Spike blinked in surprise and looked up at the mare, tilting his head. "Do I...know you?" He asked the mare.

"Well, Yes. But you may not remember me." The mare said, rubbing the back of her head. "I used to be the maid in you and Twilight's study-home."

Spike stared at her before recognition flashed. "Sunbeam Crush?!"

"You do remember me!" She cheered.

"Oh man, Mom's gonna freak when she sees you! Come in, come in!" Spike said, holding the doors open for Sunbeam.

The mare happily pranced inside after the little drake.

"Mom! Mom! You're never going to guess who showed up!" Spike said as he ran off.

Sunbeam was left in a sitting room, an apt name, as she sat down on one of the chairs to wait for Twilight to come down. She levitated a book out of her saddle bag and began to read it.

A few minutes later Twilight came trotting inside with Spike sprinting in right after her.
"Sunbeam! Oh my, it's been so long!" Twilight said, hugging her tightly.

Sunbeam smiled at this and gave her a bit of a nuzzle. "Stars, look how big you've grown! You've got wings now, Sparkle!" Sunbeam chuckled.

Twilight smiled as they separated from the hug. "It's so good to see you! What brings you all the way down to Ponyville?" The Alicorn asked.

"Well, I was in the area, and thought I'd visit. And uh...well. I was fired. And I missed working for you. You're about the only boss I had that didn't...well..." Sunbeam rubbed her foreleg where a black bruise was.

Twilight narrowed her eyes but didn't say anything else. "Well. My work is piling up. I could use an assistant." Twilight said to her.

Sunbeam smiled brightly and hugged the Alicorn once again. Twilight put her wings around her and nuzzled her. "Oh thank you Princess! I'll work harder than ever before!" The mare said happily.

"Now let me take you to your room, if you're gonna be my assistant, you should be able to live in the castle."

Sunbeam happily clapped her hooves together. Twilight smiled before she brought her to the stairs. Sunbeam was eager for her new life in Ponyville.

Author's Note

It's been so long! ITS BEEN SO FUCKING LONG! BUT IM FINALLY FUCKING BACK!

I like to think I'm better than ever at writing! I hope you liked my come back chapter.

It felt so good to write again. I'm so sorry for being gone for so long. But I'm back in the fandom, and I have returned to writing!

Magician's Folly

"Ow! Hey!" A blue mare shouted as she wiped a tomato off her muzzle. "If you don't like the show just boo like everyone else! Don't waste food to be a dick! I can't even eat this!" The Mare scolded.

This mare was a unicorn with a toothpaste like mane and a magician's hat and coat upon her skinny body.

"Good! You deserve to starve!"

"You're terrible and evil, not great and powerful!"

The mare just sadly looked at the ground. Her horn lit up, and the entire makeshift stage was imploded, causing a smokescreen where she was able to get by, but not before swiping bit pouches from at least half of the crowd.

She was skinnier than she'd like to be, but the only pro to this was it was easier to pickpocket. She hated that she had been reduced to this, but the entire world wanted her dead, and she didn't want to die.

"Trixie supposes that Canterlot is where she will die." The mare sighed.

The once Great and Powerful Trixie was reduced to this, a starving showmare reduced to petty theft. She had no idea what caused all of this to happen. But she knew it happened after she took her tour to Ponyville. And She knew it had something to do something with those heckler ponies.

She tried not to blame them, her life was too hard to focus on anything but trying to get her next meal. She only had enough bits to get a decent meal. As long as it wasn't on Restaurant Row.

She didn't even think a meal there would even sustain her. In fact forget the prissy restaurants of Canterlot, she was off to the marketplace.

Trixie sighed and began trotting off.

Starlight nuzzled her Mistress happily. She was snuggled up against her with one of Twilight's large wings draped over her like a blanket.

The Mares were on their way to Canterlot together in Twilight's personal train.

"Thank you so much for taking me to Canterlot Mistress!" Starlight chirped happily.

"Of course my lovely pet. I'll take you wherever I go." Twilight promised, placing her head on top of Starlight's, minding the smaller mare's horn.

Starlight smiled happily and nuzzled her neck. "I didn't know you had your own train!"

"I always forget about it. I don't know who commissioned the build but it wasn't me, I fly and teleport everywhere." Twilight giggled.

"I think its cool! I'd run around and explore it, but I love cuddling with you Mistress." Starlight cooed.

"I love cuddling with you too, Starlight." Twilight chuckled, kissing her horn.

The unicorn mewed happily and rested her head on Twilight. The train came to a stop in the Royal Canterlot Station. The two mares hopped off their seats and stretched out.

"Do you have anything to do here or are we just visiting?" Starlight asked.

"Well I came to buy some things only sold in Canterlot, but I mostly just wanted to sightsee with you and give you a tour, my little pet~." Twilight cooed.

Starlight blushed brightly and poked the floor with her hoof. "Aww! That's so sweet Mistress, Thank you~!" The happy unicorn said while Nuzzling her.

Twilight chuckled happily and kissed her head before they trotted off together. Twilight pondered what to show her pet first. As they trotted out of the train station, Twilight noticed something on one of the walls. It was some kind of poster.

Her eyes widened as she trotted over to it and read the poster. It was a wanted poster.

It Read:

Wanted: Trixie Lulamoon Attempted Destroyer of Ponyville

"That isn't right...she didn't try to destroy Ponyville, that Ursa Minor wasn't her fault." Twilight commented as she pulled the paper off the wall.

"Who wrote this?!" Twilight growled.

Starlight trotted up to her. "Is everything okay Mistress?"

"Not even remotely, Starlight." Twilight said.

Her unicorn pet's ears folded a little. "Oh. Is something going on?"

"Indeed. I think our visit is going to be a little longer than I intended." Twilight said as she showed Starlight the poster.

"Trixie Lulamoon? I went to one of her shows once. She was good. She tried to destroy Ponyville?" Starlight asked.

Twilight shook her head and flicked her tail. "No, she didn't. My friends heckled her when she came to the town, and these two colts brought in an Ursa Minor thinking her showpony background was fact. She definitely doesn't deserve this." Twilight said as she trotted with a purpose.

The Alicorn was angry at this situation. Canterlot was one of the worst towns to be a pariah in. She was going to Find Trixie, and find who ever wrote that false paper, and clear the mare's name.

Starlight trotted alongside her, happy to help her Mistress however she could.

"Look, Trixie doesn't want trouble. She just wants ingredients, and I can pay." Trixie said, holding a stuffed coin purse.

The Marketplace pony glared at her with her hooves crossed. "Everything you get will cost you double, fiend."

"Fine." Trixie grunted.

She bought a few cucumbers, tomatoes, and a pound of ground beef. This cost all her bits, thanks to the overcharge of the shop pony, but she got what she needed.

"Now get out of here!"

Trixie glared at the mare but trotted away, levitating her bag of groceries with her. The blue unicorn trotted back to her wagon. She had it backed up into an alley. Her wagon was her home, the only constant in her life anymore. She couldn't pull it anywhere, because her wagon wheels were almost destroyed from rot.

She would never make enough bits to get her wagon fixed, being blacklisted and hated for something she never did. She wouldn't abandon her home, so she was stuck in this Luna damned city. At least her portable stoves still worked. She pulled out her knives and began working her magic.

Outside of the Alley, Twilight and Starlight trotted by. They both ignored the ponies trying to talk to them as they moved quickly.

The Alicorn was writing things down in a journal as she spoke with Starlight.

"She was last seen in Central Canterlot Park trying to do a show yesterday." Starlight said as she finished scanning a newspaper.

"I see, I see. Good work, Star." Twilight praised.

Starlight blushed brightly at her Mistress's praise and happily nuzzled her. "Thank you~!"

Twilight smiled at her before she turned back to her journal. "According to my research, following this pattern, she may have gone to the marketplace today." The Alicorn said.

"Then Maybe we should check it out, see if anyone's seen her?" Starlight suggested.

"I think that's exactly what we're going to do, my pet. Follow me." Twilight said before she changed the direction of her gait.

Starlight followed closely behind her.

The mares arrived in Marketplace in a few minutes. Twilight did her best to ignore the swooning she caused just by being a princess. Starlight growled and hissed at them, only calming down when Twilight petted her with a wing.

She walked up to the first stand of many and cleared her throat.

"Hello Princess Twilight! Thank you so much for stopping by! What can I get you?" The Marketplace Pony asked.

"I'm searching for somepony specific." Twilight said. "First of all, can you tell me who wrote this article?" The princess asked.

The mare looked through the article and scoffed at it. "Ugh, that damn Lulamoon. I'm glad you're here to do something about her. She's nothing but trouble. Anyway, this article was written by The Canterlot Chronicle, they're in the Business Block, their building has a golden horseshoe with a quill inside of it on their door, you can't miss it." The Mare said.

Twilight nodded her thanks before galloping off, Starlight hot on her hooves.

"You got this on the account of someone from Ponyville?" Twilight asked the author of the article.

"Yes indeed Ma'am." The stallion said.

"Could you tell me who?" Twilight asked.

"I believe it was a donkey, I don't remember his name." The Stallion admitted. "May I ask why you're so interested in this ruffian?"

Twilight sighed and rolled her eyes. "Because she's not a ruffian. Everything you were told wasn't the truth. Trixie didn't cause the Ursa Minor to attack Ponyville, It wasn't her fault."

"Sweet Celestia." The Stallion said as he realized just how much damage to Trixie's reputation and wellbeing had been caused over false information.

"Indeed." Twilight said. She turned to Starlight and gave her a quick nod.

The Unicorn levitated a binder to the Stallion. "This is a record of everything that actually happened." Starlight told him.

"Please make a new article. Do you have any idea where Trixie could be at this time?" Twilight asked.

The Stallion nodded and promised the Alicorn to do just that. "She's in Alley somewhere in the food district."

Twilight thanked him before she and Starlight galloped away.

Trixie backed away from the group of ponies surrounding her wagon. "L-Leave me be! Trixie is harming no one!"

"So this is where you've been hiding you bitch!!" The leading Stallion growled at her.

Trixie whimpered and backed up against her wagon. "Just go away! Trixie has done nothing wrong!"

"You tried to destroy Ponyville! What's stopping you from destroying Canterlot? Huh?!"

Trixie sidestepped a punch at her face. "Well, The princesses live here for one, and two, Trixie doesn't want to destroy anything! All she wants is to perform! Trixie never attacked Ponyville!"

"Liar!" They all shouted.

Trixie eeped as she was descended upon by a pack of bloodthirsty Canterlot snobs. She managed to wrestle her way out of the group before she sustained too much injury.

"You aren't going anywhere Lulamoon!"

"Destroy her wagon!!"

"Yeah!" Everyone agreed.

Trixie began to sob and plead for them to stop and leave her alone.

”Enough!!”

A voice boomed from the entrance of the Alley way. Everyone looked over to see the princess of magic standing there, her eyes glowing with enraged power.

Trixie looked up in terror. Twilight had gone and become a Princess when she wasn’t looking. The unicorn was shivering in fear as Twilight stomped forward, each hoofstep cracked the pavement with powerful magical energy.

“P-Princess. W-We were just-”

”The three of you will leave her alone. NOW!!!”

The ponies screamed and galloped away from the Alley as fast as their legs could carry them. Trixie shivered in fear as Twilight trotted up to her.

“T-T-Twilight...I-I...”

“Trixie...I’m so sorry I let things get this bad.” Twilight said as she laid down on her barrel in front of Trixie. She placed a hoof under chin and brought her head up.

Trixie’s breath slowly but surely rightened as she stared into Twilight’s kind, soothing lavender eyes. “Y-You...You don’t hate Trixie?” The unicorn asked.

“No...no Trixie, no I don’t. I don’t know why somepony thought they had to ruin your reputation, but I’m so sorry I didn’t stop it. I had no idea about it until today. I’m so sorry.” Twilight apologized.

Trixie tried not to cry, and didn’t succeed very well. “Tr-Trixie has nothing...the wagon is almost in shambles...nopony will let me work...”

“I know, I’ve gathered a lot of information about your situation looking for you.” The Alicorn said. “I’m going to offer you a place in my castle, I’ll even give you a job to help you save money.” She offered.

Trixie looked up at Twilight in awe. “Y-You’d do that for Trixie?”

Twilight smiled at her and nodded. “Of course. I can’t help but feel like the fault is mine for not catching this sooner. You’ve been suffering for years now.”

Trixie began to cry again, she threw her forelegs around Twilight, hugging her while thanking her repeatedly. Twilight smiled and wrapped her wings around the smaller mare.

“It’s not a problem, Trixie. Not a problem at all.”

Author's Note

I changed the person who ruined Trixie's life from AJ to someone else.