Unicorns, Pegasi, Earth Ponies and Thracians

by Lightrise

Rating: everyone
Tags: My Little Pony Comic, Other, Adventure, Gallus, Twilight Sparkle, Young Six, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Random
Length: 2916

Half of the population of Equestria is enslaved and captured by unknown ponies, and it's up to the Young Six to save the day.

In a night, half of the Equestria population disappeared, and the evidence pointed out that they were, indeed, kidnapped.
Twilight soon found an ancient scroll that describes there is a fourth tribe called Thracians, and soon believe that they were the ones who cause this tragedy.
Twilight and the others soon arrange a rebel village to protect anyone from disappearing, but the young six decided to head to Thrace themselves.
Meanwhile, a young mare desperately tries to escape her dungeon and reunite with her friends.
Will they succeed?

I highly recommend you read the IDW publishing comic miniseries: Feats of Friendship first. Mostly about this story is about the miniseries's plot.
Comedy is for the humor.

Published 2021-06-19 06:20:01 UTC
Last updated 2021-06-23 12:20:04 UTC

Prologue- What happens next?

Lightrise! LIGHTRISE!!!

What, who, when, how... Ooh, it's you Guardian Spear ( My another OC, based on my sister). Why are you freaking out like you freak out about obsessing strawberry macarons last week?

Cause, I just get a parcel from the mailbox, AND GUESS WHAT!

What?!

IT'S THE MLP IDW COMIC MINISERIES FEATS OF FRIENDSHIP!!!

Uh huh. You do know that I got that a year ago, right?

Yes? What's your point?

And you read it before. So why are you freaking out?

Oh, silly. I finally get my own comic! But...

Ah, I see. Wait, what did you say?

There is still one thing that confused me.

Go on...

What happen after Swift Foot left Ponyville to fight for her friends?

Well, what are your theories?

Don't know. Did she win and take over Thrace? Did she DIE? Did she lost the fight and the MLP finale is just from a Alternate universe? Gah!!! I don't know!

I know what happened.

Eh? How did you know?

Years ago, I came to Ponyville to meet Twilight Sparkle and her friends. I share her information about Marelaysia, she seems impressed, and make me her penpal since then. Didn't I told you before that story?

No, or maybe I forgot.

Oh. The thing is, when we pay a visit to the human world, Equestria had an attack.

Let me guess, from Thrace?

Yep.Princess Twilight send me letters about what happen then. She even ask Gallus what happened, since he also has something to do to keep Equestria safe and sound.

So, what happened?

Well...

Thousands of years ago, before the ruling of Princess Celestia and Luna and even before the land of Equestria was named, there was a ram born from the ground, and after he grow up, he named himself Grogar.

He discovered the ability to create monsters and discover a bell that was a good use, he grew selfish because he is the only one who can create magic such as that. He declared himself king, but a king needed subjects.

So, he use his ability to create mythical creatures, but he mostly create the four tribes: Unicorns, Pegasi, Earth ponies and Thracians.

Pegasi were the one with wings, that can soar through the sky.

Earth Ponies were the one with strong hooves, although powerless but smart and strong.

Unicorns were the one with horns, which Grogar accidentally granted them magic, and they became overpowered.

Lastly, Thracians were the one that looks like Earth ponies, but they have magic like the unicorns, and they eat meat.

After Grogar discovers the magical creatures, he became frustrated, declare himself emperor and use the monsters he create to attack the ponies, so he can be the only one who can use magic.

And soon came a unicorn, called Gusty discover Grogar's plan, decided to save the creatures from the monsters, but first, he must take down Grogar.

He finds out that the bell he is wearing is a powerful artifact, so powerful that it could banished Grogar to the sky. So, he began his plan.

He called upon all tribes to take down Grogar, create an army and charge into his castle, and distract Grogar, while Gusty quickly gets the bell, and soon combining his magic with the bell to banish Grogar to the night sky.

Grogar was gone, everypony cheered, but soon, the world they live in became too cold, one reason was the winter snow, other was the hatred for each other.

Since half of the world was filled with overpowered ponies, the other half of the ponies felt jealous and started a fight with them, but knowing that the world might broke, they decided to depend on each other for some months, by depending the unicorns to raise the sun and moon, the pegasi for the weather change and the seasons, the earth ponies to grow their crops, and the thracians to build their houses.

But one winter, the weather was uncontrollable, even the pegasi cannot do something, the unicorns somehow could not raise the sun and moon, the crops died because of the cold weather and the houses mostly were destroyed because of the winter wind.

The four tribes has each leader, Queen Platinum from the unicorns, Commander Hurricane from the pegasi, Chancellor Puddinghead of the earth ponies and King Thrace from the thracians. And they each had a number two to support them.

They decided to discuss what to do with the weather with their tribe alongside them, but instead of came to agreements, they fight instead , blaming each other about the cold weather. Cannot stand the other tribes anymore, each tribe shows their true colors, they fight and the discussion hall almost became a battlefield.

At the same time they fight, mythical creatures called the Windigos appeared: they were the causes of the cold weather. They fed the hatred of the creatures of another creature, and as hatred the grew stronger, it could be cold enough to froze the whole land.

Not knowing of the windigos, each tribe decided to move to a new place to leave the cold weather and the other tribes too.
So, each leader and their number twos leave their land to find a new home. The thracians, however was late to find a new home as King Thrace was busy working before he left with his number two.

The other three tribes found a new land, but turns out, the land they found was the exact the same land the other tribes picked. The leaders of the three tribes fight again, strong enough to let the windigos came to froze everything.

The leaders and their number twos decided to take shelter in a cave to hide from the cold weather, but they fight, AGAIN because they were arguing about the space in the cave. As they each fight, the leaders soon turned to ice statue because the windigos follow hatred wherever they go.

The number twos, however, didn't fight, and they tell each other how much they should depend on each other, and as they were froze to ice, the unicorn's number two Clover the Clever form a fire with his magic, then the fire formed into a heart.The fire chased the windigos away, the number two were unfrozed, they each felt joy and they became friends.

They sang carols, tell stories and shared their food to each other. As the continue to do that, the leaders also unfrozed, realized their mistakes and became friends, and named the land they discovered, Equestria.

But before they named their land, King Thrace arrived, but he was left out in the cold. The cave was closed, he and his number two wasn't welcome in. Frustrated and betrayed, he left Equestria and let his tribe to a new land: Thrace.
This is, the history of the thracians.

Cool story. But I think that the king of Thrace was too dumb.I mean, if he wasn't LATE, this would've could rewrite history.Plus, couldn't he name his land something cool like Bone island, Corspe land or something?

The names sound more scary than cool to me, although the island was clearly look like bones. But yeah, King Thrace was dumb.

*Giggles*

Hey, I heard that!

Eh, ghost of King Thrace? Let's laugh even HARDER!

Oh, come on! I am the King!

As the three tribe live in peace and harmony, Thrace had a new king after King Thrace died ages ago. He was called King Diomedes, and he married a young Thracian mare named Earl Jade.

King Diomedes seem to rule the land wisely, but actually he is planning on revenge in Equestria. He later on discovered the magic of friendship, and the three tribes use it to keep their land safe.

At the same time, Earl Jade gave birth to her four daughters. The older sibling is Terri Belle, which is great fighter, but also a terrible sister.

Than came the twins, Blonn Di and Shining Light. They were supposed to be fine, until the last sibling came, they became mean and always tease her.

And about the young sibling, Swift Foot, was a kind pony who always listen to her family commands. She was also the reason why Earl Jade died of tiredness, and that, make her family hated her.

King Diomedes decided that the magic of friendship was the three tribe's strength, but also their weakness, so he decides to use the magic of friendship to DESTROY Equestria and rule it.

He ask Swift Foot to disguise as an Earth Pony and went to the school of Friendship to destroy friendship, to let them fight while the sneak in...

I've already know the rest of the story. The thing is, what happened after Swift Foot return to Thrace?

Well...

Equestria- Train Chat

When me and my brother, Guardian pay a visit to the human world last summer, something happened in Equestria.

As I said, it's summer, so the schools will have a 104 day holidays, and that included Twilight's SOF, or I can say, School of Friendship.

Normally most of the students will stay in Ponyville because they live there, including Sandbar, but the rest will aboard the train to their homes.

Smolder and Gallus were the last ones on the train. Gallus was sleeping by the window, carrying a bag that fill with some stuff. While Smolder smugly order food to the pony who serves snacks.

"Yeah, and I want the most luxurious gem... s, and don't worry, I may, or may not pay for it." Smiled Smolder.

"Uh, Smolder, we don't serve gems. Yet."

"Just give me some cupcakes. In secret."

"How am I supposed to give you something in secret?"

" Make sure no creature saw the cupcake, Ok?"

The pony nodded, then get a box that labeled " Meat" and put the cupcake with pink frosting and rainbow sprinkles inside, that hand to Smolder.

Smolder was satisfied, and the pony gave her the bill. "Your payment."

Smolder rolled her eyes, and gave some money and tips to the pony.

After the pony left, Gallus let out a yawn, then woke up.

"Where's Yona?" he asked.

"She already arrived at Yakyakistan fifteen minutes ago. You are taking a nap." Said Smolder, as she noticed the bag that Gallus is carrying." What did you have there?"

"Student of the season award, plus a photo." Gallus boasts to Smolder with pride. "Wait... didn't I mention that?"

"No, by the way, congratulations!" said Smolder.

The student of the season award is something that Starlight set up this spring, as she is the principal now. The student of the season award is to see which student behaved well in spring, autumn or winter. The award was not publicly announced, because Trixie wants it to be mysterious for some reason.

Since it was set up this spring, Gallus was the first one to recieve the award. Sunburst takes a photo of him, and Starlight gave him the trophy.

Starlight said that the trophy making company was from Manehattan, and that company always put his boss's cutie mark on the trophy and whenever they give free stickers.

The cutie mark is a golden horseshoe with two white-colored wings, since the boss was a pegasi.

Gallus suddenly realized something. One of his friends has the same cutie mark as the boss, whatever his name is.

"Coincidence?" He asked himself.

Suddenly, he saw his angel and demon poof out and said "I think not!". Then they disappeared.

He take out something from the bag, and it was two silver medals and a group photo.

The two silver medals are from the Feats of Friendship, a competition organized by Twilight before she left to became a princess.

The Young Six are in second place because they had an argument between the competition, but meh, they can won the gold medal next spring anyways.

Actually, there are seven of them who get second place. Not just them, but a mysterious earth pony, Swift Foot.

But when the medal was supposed to given to her, Twilight informed them she disappeared somehow.

They tried to connect with her, but she has lost signal.

All that she left behind, is her medal.

Gallus examined the group photo to check Swift Foot's cutie mark, but she was right in front of the camera, without her flank being shown.

"Weird," murmured Gallus.

Has nothing to do for now, Gallus takes out his " How to learn Yak language 101" guidebook. After promising Yona that they will work more harder than ever to learn her language, he bought a book from a yak merchant who only speaks yak.

Nowadays, he can say basic words.

Think about it, the reason why Gallus argue because he thought he is a leader and his friends don't appreciate him, so he instead being a jerk to every creature.

Gallus sighed.

"Although I am clearly a leader, obviously for a reason, I shouldn't be a jerk!" He thought. "Plus, they are my friends, not my subjects."

After giving up on the cutie mark problem, he practice some yak sentences.

"You have arrived at Griffonstone. I repeat,You have arrived at Griffonstone." The announcer suddenly spoke.

Gallus look outside the window, and yes, they are near the Griffonstone station.

"Yak, yakkie yak yak york, yakie yak yik ( Oh come on, I haven't finished my sentences, the train had already arrived at the station)," Gallus said.

He takes his bag, ready for his depature.

He wave hands to Smolder before leaving, and said: "See you next summer, buddy."

"You too, bro."

They hugged each other, then after Gallus step off the train, the train left for the Dragonlands.

Take a deep breath... exhale.

Next stop, home.

Grandpa Gruff was satisfied to see Gallus's award, and he hang the medal, his photo and his trophy onto a almost-creaked cupboard.

Grandpa Gruff said:"Now, kid, hand me the other medal and the group photo."

Gallus think about it for a second.

"Nah, I'll put those in my room." He said as he flew away to the basement.

The basement is a cranky, old room filled with hays (his bed) and a ground filled with rocks.

Gallus puts Swift's medal and the group photo onto a rock, and take a nap onto the hay piles after that.

His eyes gently closed...

"Hello, my student. Long time no see." A voice boomed over Gallus's ears, causing him to wake up.

"What... Where am I?" Gallus was surprised, until he saw he was no longer in a room, but a place filled with doors and lights, and it seems like the doors are infinite.

"Over here." The voice gently said, and as Gallus turn right, he saw...

"Princess Twilight, what ever are you...wait, is this...the dream realm? Am I dreaming?"

"You are sleeping, but you are not dreaming." Twilight said."I summon you to the dream realm for a reason, although you were napping."

"And why is that?" Gallus asked."Ooh, that rhymes."

"I'M BORED..." Twilight smiled bitterly."Except for Spike, I don't have companion to have fun with me. My friends are working, so I figured since you are napping, why don't we explore the dream realm together? I mean, there are also creatures who are asleep. I'm free."

"Ok...Wait hold on!" Gallus suddenly think of something, then ask Twilight a question:"Can I go into Swift Foot's dream?"

"Swift Foot?" Twilight thought for a moment, then replied:"You can, you just need to find the door that has her cutie mark. I'm also wondering what is she doing, because I haven't seen her for months."

Soon, they found the door, with her cutie mark printed on it, as they opened it, they saw...

"Nothing?" Gallus asked, as the door behind it was just a white blank room.

"Swift Foot probably didn't take her nap. Weird." Concluded Twilight, as they walked around the room.

Suddenly, as if she heard something, she frowned.

"Oh shucks. Really Spike? REALLY?" asked Twilight.

Suddenly, Gallus heard something.

"Gallus! Woke up dude, dinner's ready!" Gilda's voice spread over his ears.

"I need to go, Gallus. Apparently SOMEONE broke my favorite bookshelf and I need to fixed it. It's nice to have you in the dream realm."

"No problem, Twilight. I can visit here anytime, as long as I'm asleep without a dream. Gilda called me for dinner anyways."

With Twilight's horn glowed, Gallus soon found himself laying on the hay pile.

Alright, time for dinner.

"Griffonscones, AGAIN?" Grandpa Gruff complained.

"What?! They are the only one I could cook!" Complained Gilda.

"Then learn a new recipe!"

"Ok stop fighting guys...these griffonscones are delicious!" Cried Gabby with joy.

"I know right," Gavin, a younger griffon said."Tuck in, the scones are getting cold!"

Gallus silently look at them while eating a griffonscone, he felt that eventhough they are not truly his biological family, they felt like one.

When the clock strikes ten, Gallus went down the basement.

As the moonlight shines through a window and the room, he never felt so peaceful and safe.

He tucked himself into the hay pile, and after he said: "Goodnight me," he fell asleep.

Suddenly, his angel and his demon appeared.

"Should I tell him or should you?" Asked Angel Gallus.

"Don't worry, he will find out soon." Smiled Demon Gallus.

Suddenly, the bushes outside the window glowed red eyes.

"Time for the invasion,my fellow Thracians." A voice boomed.