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The Stupidity of The Crimes of the Condemned and those who followed. (Remake)

by Mpony1
All they had to do was one simple thing but instead they decided to be stupid and that stupidity nearly cost us everything. Their decision to not take proper actions will be their downfall.

This is an alternate ending on the story The Crimes of the condemned by WurkyWilk 358 0W0.


Its been a month since the utter destruction of "The Purest." The evil organization of highly racists unicorns hell bent on slaughtering all non-unicorns ponies and taking the throne for their leader have been completely crush before they can begin their plans of mass genocide and taking power.

The human prisoner wakes up from his coma and is soon visited by Princess Luna and Shining Armor. Though they are happy to see him awake. It would seem that they have much to tell the human about what happened after he was attacked.

The human will soon learn that his plan to help others nearly got Equestria destroyed. He will also learn of the many great consequences of his choices.

All which could of been avoided if he just did one simple thing.


I originally made an alternate version to the Canon version of the original story but I haven't gone back to it. So I decided to "Remake" it with this one and get straight to the heart of why I started writing that story in the first place.

This version will follow everything that happened in the original until Chapter 6 where this story begins.

I hope you enjoy!

Teen
Incomplete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Alternate Universe
Tragedy
Profanity
Human
Anthro
Drama
 
OSPP

9110 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

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