Fall of equestria: the darkness comes
Prologue 2
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A year ago in equestria everything was peaceful as the peaceful ponies lived their normal lives, the council of friendship ruling and spreading their influence across ponyville, the crystal empire spreading it’s light across the lands and the two sisters of canterlot and their abilities to control the sun and moon ruled the land fairly. But then the caribou came, these caribou had magic of their own, mind magic, magic that made males lust for pleasure grew and magic that made weak willed females submit.
In a seaport town in equestria the Ponies were going about their business when all of a sudden, the sound of a horn came, a war horn, and charging up from the beach from viking like longboats were unusual creatures that would be known as the caribou, while some were normal colored others were white or grey.
The ponies panicked and screamed but tried to run but they couldn’t, the Caribou threw their spears at local resistant and butchered them, their shields held against any magic used by the Unicorns, the Pegasi that tried to flee or put up a fight were shot down by arrows. After victory was assured the warlocks, draped in their robes formed a magic circle upon and around the ponies encircled in the town centre.
A wave rushed over all of them and across the town, the females began to feel weak and no longer able to resist, the males however became stronger and many wrestled the females into huts or began to take their trousers off in public and raped the females. “That’s all in this town my king” said the white furred caribou warlock who was the high warlock and the second brother of King Dain himself, his name was Kaine.
Daine himself was an impressive specimen a white Caribou with large antlers, “good this is but the first and soon all females shall bow to this new order, even the slut Celestia” he vowed before turning to his first Brother, Thrain a grey Caribou wearing a hood and armor, Be ready for the next assault, find the nearest town and we shall conquer it” Dainn ordered, “indeed i shall my king” Thrain said, before turning to leave
The High generals of Dainn, who wore more armor than their viking brethren were the first to cheer and roar and soon the other caribou raised their weapons and cheered for their king dain
Their influence spread through equestria like a plague, they’re warlocks set up a magical barrier that made ponies unable to leave equestria and every other species except for caribou, unable to enter equestria. However this barrier would only last temporarily and so the pony caribou war started.
During the conquest of the crystal empire two new allies joined the caribou to take down the ponies as they were enemies.
Boulders were flung by catapults from upon the hills around the crystal empire hitting the walls of the city or going beyond and hitting crystal ponies, the crystal heart was forming a protective crystal wall around the empire and an army of Royal guards were fighting outside, on the battlefield the caribou were chopping down the royal guards like they were nothing.
You had to hand it to them, they weren’t stupid and were prepared with magic resistant sheilds, not to mention better trained than the guards, the royal guards hadn’t had enough time to prepare when the caribou came, their swords were blunt and badly made, their armor was made of gold which was useless in a fight.
The pegasus armor, despite pegasus being strong, weighed them down too much to fly fast enough and were hit by multiple arrows, the more guards that went down the closer the caribou came.
From their balcony shining armor and Cadence watched, a swarm of hideous bat like creatures circled the building hissing and snarling and baring their fangs, “damn it how did they even manage to get this far” Shining armor, “we have to do something, reinforcements will be too late to get here” Cadence agreed.
“Princess we need to get you out of here” one guard said, “are all the civilians evacuated?” Shining armor asked, “yes they are” the guard replied, “then let's go” Shining armor said, “wait maybe we can use the crystal heart to repel them” cadence suggested, Shining Armor pondered this, “it’s worth a try” he said as he grabbed his spear and head down with his guards. However what they failed to see as they passed an open door room was green insect-like cocoons and if you looked closely you could see the vague shape of royal guards.
Cadence and Shining armor continued to run down towards the crystal heart but once they exited into the castle courtyard they stopped dead as they saw the crystal heart missing, “the crystal heart!” Cadence exclaimed, then there came a maniacal laugh. They looked and found queen Chrysalis of the changelings herself with a small patrol of her changelings behind her.
The two guards next to Cadence changed into Changelings and seized her by the hands, Shining armor, held his spear at the ready, “you're helping the Caribou?” he asked stunned, he never thought that would happen, “of course they promised revenge on you ponies and all the love my Changelings could feed upon” Chrysalis chuckled, “release my wife” he ordered pointing his spear at Chrysalis.
“Oh but it’s not that simple, you see this is a challenge for the throne” she said, “you win and both you and your wife shall be taken in alive and not abused in any way, if you lose then you both go through different forms of torture, seperately. Not much of a deal but it’s better than nothing you have to admit”.
Shining armor gritted his teeth, “fine come” he demanded readying his spear, “oh i’m not the one challenging” Chrysalis said slyly, Shining armor heard something behind him, he just in time raised his spear and blocked a sword that had been coming at him, from the shadows a dark pony with a red curved horn stepped forward, his armor despite how clean it was seemed to diminish light instead of reflect it and his white fur rimmed red cape flapped in the arctic wind of the north.
“I have come to reclaim my kingdom” Sombra said, with a war cry Shining armor charged and shot his spear forward, Sombra parried it then sent a stab of his own, Shining armor tried to put up his magic shield, it shattered from the impact of the sword but it did block it, Shining armor stabbed Sombra, or he would’ve if Sombra hadn't turn into shadow and disappeared into the ground.
Shining armor turned around expecting an attack from behind, Sombra reappeared but where he had been before he turned into shadow, he slashed his sword at Shining armor, Shining managed to block it with his spear, resulting in it shattering. Sombra then sent a magic blast at Shining armor, this sent shining armor flying into one of the four legs of the castle.
This resulted in his armor becoming badly damaged including losing his helmet, Shining armor drew the sword from his back while getting rid of his arm and leg armor plating, keeping his chest. “Let’s even things out a little bit” Sombra said, removing his own arm and leg armor and his metal crown.
Shining armor was a skilled swordsman which is more than i can say for the rest of the royal guards, but Sombra was better, as the swords clashed Sombra was fighting like this was an everyday sport for him, he was not quite done playing around indeed he wanted a fair fight for a proper claim to the throne of the crystal empire. Sombra battered away the incoming attacks and allowed Shining armor to tire himself out, “you won’t...get away...with this' ' Shining armor painted.
Sombra smirked as Shining armor gave one final swing, Sombra batted the sword out of hand then trapped Shining armor in black crystals only leaving his head and hands free, “well done highness” said Dainne who walked in at that moment carrying a guards head, “take him to a cell and take her to her bed” his caribou soldiers nodded and did as they were told, knocking out Shining armor and tearing Cadance’s clothes off while dragging her.
With the crystal empire under new management, Sombra, Chrysalis and Dainne continued their campaign surrounding the entire kingdom until Canterlot was surrounded by the caribou, the changelings continued to infiltrate the castle, replacing guards, killing the males and kidnapping the females for the caribou troops. However there weren’t just infiltrators but also traitors within canterlot
The day of final battle finally arrived, the elements of harmony were taken to Canterlot by their bearers and prepared themselves for this day, but things wouldn’t go as their plans hoped it would.
Celestia and Luna sat on their twin thrones, both in their battle armor, Celestia had an axe and Luna had a scepter with a crescent moon, both looking highly majestic and ready for war despite their efforts for peace. Messages back had been rather rude and to the point that no peace was possible, they were both actually kind of scared of Dainne and his Caribou, of how quickly they had taken over the land.
“Are we sure this will work sister?” Luna asked, “honestly i’m a little worried it might not, but if that happens then we shall fight” Celestia said, “that’s what i like to hear” Luna said smirking a little. “The filthy caribou forces will be here in two days time, we should prepare” said their nephew prince Blueblood, how he was related to either of them was a mystery considering his manner and arrogance, he wasn’t even properly dressed to fight, more like stay behind and flee when things get bad.
“Thank you Nephew you may leave now” Celestia said, “but aunty i want to suggest a battle plan” Blueblood argued, “you heard my sister Leave young nephew” Luna demanded, Blueblood reluctantly left fuming slightly. “I worry about him sometimes,” Luna admitted, “as do i” Celestia agreed, “what of Twilight and her friends?” Luna asked, “let them have one last night of fun before they need to be ready for war” Celestia said reassuringly.
In the cafeteria
Despite It being long past closing hour the staff had allowed the element bearers, Spike and Sunset Shimmer in for a final drink before they were needed to prepare for the assault on canterlot, “i’m worried i can’t believe equestria has fallen into war” Fluttershy said in her usual quite voice.
Just imaging twilight and spike with wings
“I know sugarcube we all worried, we don’t know what powers these caribou have” Applejack agreed, “whatever we can kick their asses anyday with the elements” Rainbow said confident(or rather arrogant) to the end, “it’s not about the elements being powerful enough to defeat anything it’s about their tactics as well, what they can do” Sunset pointed out, “i agree with sunset, we have no idea what this enemy can do” she then smiled, “but i believe we can defeat them together”.
“I believe too Darling” Rarity said “and afterwards we can have a superduperbigyeahthewarisoverparty” Pinkie blurted, “yeah” Spike said with a smile.
They all began to head to their dorms, they had their showers and went to sleep, Spike being Twilight's sister slept in Twilight's room on his own bed, Sunset remained awake though she could not get to sleep. She was wondering what to do if the elements fail and they lose.
Two royal guards were stationed at their rooms, one of them being Sunset’s brother, Flash Sentry who was also Twilight's boyfriend if you can believe it.
However a figure creeped through the corridor on Rarity’s floor which was ground level luckily for him, the two guards recognised him and smiled sadistically at each other in glee.
When Rarity had arrived she had stripped off and if there had been anyone watching, revealed a pair of soft white breasts under a black bra and a black throng that was wedged into her soft ass, she entered the bathroom, closing and locking the door.
She took off her bra and thong, turned on the hot water in the shower and released a sigh of relief as she entered the hot water. Her purple mane sagged down due to it getting wet, eventually after 5 minutes she stepped out grabbing a towel and drying herself thoroughly.
She then styled her mane into its normal style once it was dry, brushing it as well before putting her bra and thong back on. She stepped out of her bathroom grabbing her night gown as she did so.
But before she could put it on, someone grabbed her and placed a cloth over her mouth. There was chloroform in it and within minutes of struggling she fell unconscious.
“Oh revenge is so sweet” said the intruder, Blueblood, as he took out some rope, tied her hands and legs together, blindfolded and gagged Rarity.
He opened the doors and outside there were some Changelings, a female one hopped down and took the form of Rarity including her thong and bra. “Make sure you act in character” Blueblood warned, as she handed Rarity to the leader of the group who nodded and flew off.
With one element unknowingly out of the picture the day of the battle was a disaster, fire reigned down on canterlot. The caribou used their sheilds to block the incoming arrows, compared to the caribou the Pegasi who flew in were incompetent fighters.
Very soon the elements began to prepare a spell, while Celestia and Luna opened the gates and met the caribou head on to by the elements' time. Diane, however informed by Blueblood, knew of this plan and so challenged Celestia to single combat.
While his high generals and Kaine the warlock infiltrated canterlot with the changelings, Thrain fought Luna in their own single combat challenge.
The changeling that replaced Rarity revealed itself as Kaine and his warlocks and high generals captured the Element bearers and caste a pre- spell, corrupting the elements of harmony
Instead of turning all the caribou to stone, the spell weakened all the mares physically making them unable to fight while making the males turn on their own and easier succumb to the caribou way.
Despite weakening themselves Celestia and Luna fought but Daine and Thrain won the single combat and in an act of humiliation tore the sisters Armor off and raped them publicly.
Spike was captured and was tortured in the dungeons of canterlot, the elements were separated so as to not be able to scene together, Celestia and Luna were kept as Daine and Thrains personal sex slaves in canterlot.
To keep themselves in further control all females had their wings and/or horns removed to be unable to use magic. The barrier around equestria was made permanent so outside help was unavailable, however hope was not lost.
Sunset had escaped the campaign and for a year had avoided the caribou and even if she was captured she had managed to escape before her horn was cut off. But to win a war sometimes unexpected circumstances have to be used.
Unknown P.O.V
“The witchblade shall be mine” I thought to myself as I was chained in a prison known as Tartarus, honestly though they call this a hell, I was never religious(hell I was a fucking mobster who sometimes had to burn priests) but I know what hell looks like.
The darkness practically pulled my first girlfriend down to hell, and then turned her soul into a hundred tiny bits unable to return. That was it for Jenny, shit I’m pathetic ain’t I, “we must escape” the voice of the darkness told me, no fucking kidding but with these chains no way old Jackie estacado is going anywhere.
Author's Note
Again sorry for any spelling mistakes, and yes sorry if the pictures aren’t as you imaging but they are the closest I could find to help visualise the story as I hope it does
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