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Royal Rewrite - The winner wrote the history

by Zalmax
Princess Luna and Queen Celestia in the castle of the two sisters. [Slice of Life]

A thousand years ago they lived in the Everfree Forest. As the centuries moved on, all the small changes accumulated to make them two very different royal sisters.

This story introduce Queen Celestia and Princess Luna, when the difference between them is at its peak.


The story is "locked" to scare away readers, because it's incomplete. I wanted to improve my English writing as I went along, but the more I learnt, the more I realized there was a lot more to learn.

So the initial break planned for a few months to become a better writer looks like it may take forever. Although the entire arc up until the first MLP FiM episode, may never be finalized, I may eventually dump the finished part that wraps up these early years.

The rest of the storyline makes it more of an anthology -- linked together in how Celestia changes -- was fun to write, but is boring to read.

Teen
Incomplete
Dark
Sad
Drama
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
PRP

21444 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

6 Chapters:

  1. 1 - Introducing the sisters 2021-08-02 04:48:05 UTC
    8283
  2. 2.1 - A bad day to assemble 2021-10-04 21:01:23 UTC
    1738
  3. 2.2 - Shack of the Forsaken 2021-10-04 21:01:32 UTC
    1731
  4. 2.3 - Questioning 2021-10-04 21:01:42 UTC
    2134
  5. 2.4 - The battle begins 2021-10-04 21:01:54 UTC
    3500
  6. 2.5 - The battle of harmony 2021-10-04 21:02:03 UTC
    4058