When Gems Break

by Child of Stars

First published

(Very bad no good story that was one of my firsts. I don't really like this story anymore or the direction it was going in. Upon reflection I find it to be a very surface level, unscary, and messy foray into the horror genre. There was still some good ideas and genuine effort put into this story though, and I don't want to just throw that all away. So while I have canceled the story, it's not dead in full. At some point in the future I plan to revisit this world and the story I was telling and give it all another go with a remake now that I have a better grasp on how to write. Give it the good 'ol sprucing up it desperately needs in the form of a better story with more fleshed out characters and actual spinetingling horror. So go ahead and read this story if you so desire, but know a better version of it will be coming eventually.)


Rarity is trying her hardest to finish an order for Fancy Pants on time, but the gems she needs to complete it haven't arrived yet. However, something isn't quite right with the gems when she finally does get her hooves on them. And soon after she unveils an unexpected gift in her gem package terrifying things begin to plague her and Sweetie Belle.

The question is, can they make it out alive...?