A nightmare night Carol's

by Blackcatsuperfan1

Rating: everyone
Tags: Main 6, Slice of Life, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Young Six, Other, Starlight Glimmer, Adventure
Length: 16782

Like a Christmas tale but this is like nightmare night

The young six get trapped in in a book called a nightmare night Carol's

Published 2021-09-10 22:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2022-07-31 19:11:36 UTC

a Adventure begins

Our story begins at the school of friendship where the young six were trying to study for a book assignment but there efforts were in vain. And feeling like their efforts were in vain Yona said with a board tone" Yona wishes that Twilight give us a project on smashing. Then Gallus said to Yona with a cocky tone in his voice" yeah Yona I agree with you because all these books sound boring to read".

And seeing his friends yawning and boredom sandbar said to his friends with a happy smile" come on guys I think we just need to give these books a chance and who knows maybe there's a book in here we'll all like to do a our report on".

And after 5 minutes of looking through the books of the School of friendships library the Young six decide to give up on finding a book to read for their report. And after the young six decided to give up on finding a book for their report a single pony named Starlight glimmer came into the library seeing that the young six were having a difficult choice with picking out a book for their assignment.

And after seeing that the young six were about to give up on their search to find a book for their book report Starlight Glimmer decided to help lower the search for the perfect book for the young six report. Then Starlight Glimmer found the perfect book for the young six. And after finding the perfect book for the young six star like Glimmer came up to the young six with a smile on her muzzle. And after coming up to the young six starlight glimmer said to them with a smile on her face" so every creature how's the book report going?

And with a pouty look on her face Smolder said to starlight glimmer" it's like a telling a greedy dragon to give us some of his treasure".

And hearing her answer to her question starlight glimmer said to the young six with hope in her voice" well if it's going that bad I think I have the perfect book for you guys to do your report on".

And hearing that coming from Starlight Glimmer the young six turned their heads and their attention to starlight glimmer. And hearing that Starlight Glimmer had the perfect book for them ocellus asked Starlight Glimmer with curiosity in her voice" really what book would you say would be the perfect one for our report?

And knowing he had the answer for their question Starlight Glimmer pulled out a old-fashioned book out of her saddlebag. And after pulling the old fashioned book out of her saddle bag the young six saw it was a kind of old book that they haven't seen before called a nightmare night Carol By: Cat Redder.

And after seeing the book that Starlight Glimmer showed them the Young six thought the book was nothing special. And seeing that the young six was thinking that the book was nothing special Starlight Glimmer said to the young six with hope still in her voice" now every creature I know that the book looks boring but if you give it a try you will understand why this book is a liked classic".

And seeing that their counselor wasn't not going to stop until they give the book a try. And after deciding to give the book a try the young six saw a picture of a handsome pony in a tux. And after seeing the picture of the pony silverstream said to Starlight Glimmer with a flirty tone in her voice" hey darling who's this hunk down here in this photo?

And here is a photo of the author in this story

And hearing they saw a picture of the author Starlight Glimmer said to the young six" oh that's the author of the book Cat Redder".

And after telling the young six who the pony in the picture was Starlight Glimmer saw that Yona Oselas Silverstream and Smolder were having dreamy looks in their eyes. And after seeing Yona Oselas Silverstream and Smolder had a dreamy look in their eyes Starlight Glimmer said to Gallus and Sandbar with a giggle in her voice" looks like you boys might have some competition".

And not liking what Starlight Glimmer said to them Gallus said to Starlight Glimmer with an irritated tone in his voice" you mean Sandbar because me and Silverstream are not dating ".

And after hearing that Gallus and Silverstream was not dating Silverstream Starlight Glimmer said to Gallus with curiosity and her voice" wait if you and Silverstream are not dating then who is she with then because Pinky said Silverstream was dating someone and I thought she was dating you so if he's not dating you then who is she dating?

And to answer Starlight glimmer's question Gallus said to Starlight Glimmer with a cocky tone in his voice" it's a familiar little green and purple Little dragon".

And after hearing who Silverstream was dating Starlight Glimmer was shocked that the little dragon could put the moves on the niece of the queen of the Sea ponies. And after hearing that the the dragon she and Twilight new closely was in a relationship with Silverstream Starlight Glimmer said in her head" I can't believe it Spike and Silverstream were totally dating my mind is blown".

After getting over herself knowing that Spike and Silverstream were dating the little dragon was cleaning the floor mine his own business. When Spike was still clean the floors and Starlight Glimmer got over her shock Starlight Glimmer saw that the young six went back to the book. When the young six went back to their book the Young six started to read the book that Starlight Glimmer had given them.

When Spike was still mopping the floor and the young six were still reading the book Starlight Glimmer gave them a certain princess Twilight Sparkle had just came in to check up on the young six to see how their report was going. But to their surprise when Twilight comes into the room to check up on the young six because not knowing that the floor was still wet Twilight fell onto the floor. And right when Twilight fell into the floor a spark of magic fired out of her horn.

And right after the spark of magic fired out of Twilight's horn the spark of magic blasted the young six making a giant flash of light. And after a few seconds Twilight Spike and Starlight Glimmer saw that all the young six were gone. And knowing that the young six were gone Twilight Spike and Starlight Glimmer did not know the adventure the young six would be thrust into.

To be continued

Author's Note

Hey guys it's me blackcatsuperfan1 I hope you guys like this story and if you guys do you like the story let me know in the comments

A new world

We start our chapter with Sandbar and Smolder falling out of the sky and hitting the ground. And after Sandbar and Smolder hit the ground and Sandbar and Smolder got up on their hooves and claws to get themselves back together.

And after getting their selves together Sandbar and Smolder saw that they both look completely different. And seeing that they both look totally different Sandbar and Smolder both said at the same time" what are you wearing?

And hearing both of their questions that was the same question Sandbar and Smolder look at themselves and saw that they were both wearing different clothes. When Sandbar and Smolder looking at theirsalves Sandbar saw that he was wearing a black and white business suit with a red tie. When Smolder was looking at herself see that she was wearing a blue 1390 dress. And not wanting no one to know she actually liking the dress she pretended to hate wearing the dress.

And seeing the look on smolder's face not knowing she actually liked the dress Sandbar said to Smolder" okay smolder we need to figure out why we look like this".

And knowing that they would have to find out why they looked completely different Sandbar said to Smolder not knowing how they got those clothes on" Smolder do you know how we got these on?

Then Smolder said to Sandbar" no I don't know how we got here".

Then Smolder realize that the rest of their friends were not with them. And after realizing that the rest of their friends was not with them Smolder said to Sandbar" hay Sandbar where are the are the others?

And hearing her question Sandbar notice that Smolder was right that the rest of their friends weren't with them. And after realizing that the rest of their friends weren't with them Sandbar said to Smolder" you're right Smolder where are the others?

Then Sandbar notice that they were not even in ponyville. And knowing that they weren't in ponyville Sandbar said to Smolder" Smolder where in the Equestria are we?

And hearing Sandbar's question Smolder also notice that they were not in ponyville. And after noticing that they were not in Ponyville Sandbar and Smolder saw that they were in a different town. And after seeing that they were in a different town Sandbar saw many different species of creatures that were walking around the town.

And after seeing all the different types of species that were walking around the city Sandbar walked up to a griffin to ask then the name of the city that they were in. And after walking up to the Griffin the Griffin saw Sandbar walking up to him. And seeing sandbar walking up to him the Griffin said with an Irish accent" good morning to you lad is there something you don't know I can help you with lad?

Then Sandbar said to the Griffin" yes sir can you tell me where me and my friend are?

And hearing Sandbar's question the Griffin said to Sandbar" oh I see lad you and your dragan you're friend are new to this place in that case lad I like to welcome you and your dragan friend to Nightmareville the most happiest place in all the lands".

And looking at all the creature in the City Sandbar saw that all the creatures in the had a gloomy look on their faces. And after seeing all the creatures in the had a gloomy look on their'
faces bar said to the Griffin" sir I don't mean to insult you but they don't look all happy to me".

And seeing what he meant the Griffin said to Sandbar" I know lad the town looks all gloomy but that's just because of one pony colt".

And hearing that all this gloomy trouble was because of one small Colt Sandbar said to the Griffin" all this gloom is coming from a small colt?

Then the Griffin said to Sandbar" yes lad that colt thinks that just because he hates nightmare night where he can make all the shops can't even sell any decorations candy or even costumes.

And hearing what the colt is doing to the city Sandbar said to the Griffin" really this colt has that much power to take a whole holiday away from whole city?

Then the Griffin said to Sandbar" yes lad that colt has been through tragedy in his life but the town does not like to talk about it".

Then Sandbar said to the Griffin" well what's this called name maybe if I talk to him maybe I could get him to change his mind".

Then the Griffin said to Sandbar" there is no chance in that lad many creatures have tried before you".

And hearing that the Griffin didn't have so much confidence in him Sandbar said to the Griffin" well sir those creatures never had help from a dragon because with my dragon friend with me I think we will get him to change his mind".

And knowing that nothing would change his mind the Griffin said to Sandbar" well lady since I see that there's no changing your mind the Colt's name is Sour treat and lad since I see that there's no talking you out of it I wish you good luck lad".

And after telling them the colt's name the Griffin walked off seen where his next adventure would take him. And after the Griffin left sandbar said to smolder" can you believe this Smolder all this gloominess is coming from one small colt".

And still not believing that all the gloominess was coming from a small colt Smolder said to Sandbar" I can't believe that the colt's name is Sour Treat but I'm glad that we don't have to worry about that because all we need to do is find a way back to Ponyville".

And after hearing what Smolder said Sandbar said to Smolder" I wouldn't say that Smolder".

And hearing what Sandbar said to her Smolder said to Sandbar" what do you mean I shouldn't say that?

And with a funny feeling in him Sandbar said to Smolder" because I have a funny feeling that we're going to be running into him".

Then Smolder said to Sandbar" what do you mean you have a funny feeling that we're going to be running into him?

Then Sandbar said to Smolder" because for some weird reason I just know we're going to be seeing him".

And with a annoyed look on her face Smolder said to Sandbar" ok Mr feelings then tell me where are we going to be seeing Sour Treat at".

And with his weird feeling about how he knew where Sour Treat would be at Sandbar said to Smolder" Wells Smolder something's telling me that we're about to meet sour treat when he walk passes when he comes through that alley right now".

And like Sandbar said a colt with a black mane and Gray coat with a fancy business suit and top hat with a red tie with a mad look on his muzzle had come out of the alley and walking towards them like Sandbar had said.

Here's a picture of Sour Treat

And when Sour Treat was walking through the city Sour Treat pass by Sandbar and Smolder. When Sour Treat pass by Sandbar and Smolder a cold chill went down their spine. When a cold chill went down their spines Smolder said to Sandbar" ooh did it just get colder here for some reason?

Then all of the creatures in the city of nightmareville started to sing a My Little pony version of Scrooge from the movie a Muppets Christmas Carol.

Here is the song screams from a Muppets Christmas Carol use your imagination to imagine a My Little pony version of the song.

And after hearing the song about Sour Treat Sandbar thought that now he might have heard of Sour Treat before. And like a bolt of lightning it had hit him now and feeling like a bolt of lightning had hit him Sandbar has figured out where they were. And now knowing where they were Sandbar said to Smolder" Smolder I think I know where we are".

And hearing Sandbar saying that he might know where they are Smolder said to Sandbar" wait you know where we are?

And thinking about it some more Sandbar said to Smolder" yes Smolder I do know where we are".

Then Smolder said to Sandbar" then tell me where we are".

Then Sandbar said to Smolder" Smolder do you remember when we were all in twilight's library and we were all reading that book?

And hearing Sandbar's question Smolder said to Sandbar" yeah I remember us in twilight's library and we were reading that book what about it?

Then to answer Smolder's question Sandbar said to Smolder" Smolder I think when Twilight blasted us I think that blast send us into the book".

And after hearing her answer Smolder showed her assignment with a shocked look on her face. Hearing that Sandbar said that rest of their friends and herself were in a book Smolder said to Sandbar" okay Sandbar if we're in a book then how do we get out?

And to answer her question Sandbar said to Smolder" well Smolder we would probably have to finish the story or see if Twilight could get us out of here".

And after hearing her answer Smolder started to worry that they would never be able to get out.
And seen the look on Smolder's face Sandbar said to Smolder" whoa whoa whoa whoa Smolder you don't need to worry Twilight she's probably trying to find a way to get us out of the book right now".

And outside of the book Twilight Starlight were panicking about what happened to the young six until spike said to them" Twilight Starlight calm down I think I know what happened to them?

And hearing that Spike might know what might have happened to them Twilight said to spike" what do you think happened to them Spike?

Then spike said the Twilight to calm her nerves even more" Twilight I think what happened to the young six was when your magic blasted them I think you're blast of magic must have sent them into the book".

And hearing a rational reason on how the young six could disappear without a trace Twilight and starlight and Spike started to figure out a way to get the young six back. When Twilight Spike and starlight glimmer were figuring out a way to get the young six back Starlight glimmer said to Twilight" Twilight what do you think they're doing in the book?

Then Twilight said to Starlight" I don't know Starlight but what ever they're doing in there I hope they're safe and they're doing better than we are.

To be continued

A decision made

Hey every creature it's the author of the story before we start where we the left off I'm going to have a contest who do you think I'm going to have as the ghost of nightmare night pass

A Gallas

B Yona

C Ocellus

D Silverstream

Okay guys while you guys think about that I will start this chapter of the story Sandbar and Smolder in shock that they were in the book that they were just reading a moment ago. And after a few minutes of getting over the shock of their cells of being in a book a thought came to smolder.

And with the thought in her head smarter asked Sandbar a serious question" Sandbar I have a question where's Yona and the others?

And pondering the question Sandbar said to Smolder" yeah you're right Smolder where are the others the last time I saw them they were with us".

Then giving a few minutes to think to herself Smolder realize what had happened to the rest of their friends. And thinking that she knew about what happened to the rest of their friends Smolder said to Sandbar" Sandbar cheer me up because I know this sounds crazy like discord crazy but I think when we were all that into the story we all became characters in the book".

Then Sandbar said to Smolder" you're right Smolder that does sound crazy but I think if we all want to get out of the book then we'll have to finish the story".

And hearing what Sandbar made sense Smolder said to Sandbar" okay sandbar if the only way we could get out of here is to finish the story then we should keep following Sour Treat then?

And hearing that from Smolder Sandbar said to Smolder" you're right smarter being the narrator I know exactly where he is".

And with a irritated tone in her voice Smolder said to Sandbar" okay since you know where he is where would he be?

And knowing where Sour Sweet was Sandbar said to Smolder"simple he got his family's candy store so let's go to the store and keep an eye on him".

And knowing that sour sweet was at his family's candy store Sandbar and Smolder walked off towards their destination. And after a few minutes of walking Sandbar and Smolder had finally reached their destination.
And after reaching their destination sandbars and Smolder looked up at the store sign and and saw that of the store was called Sweet families Candy Kingdom.

And seen that this was our sweets family's store Smolder said to Sandbar" okay Mr narrator if this is sour sweets candy shop then how do we get in because the way that it looks looks like he's not wanting to see anyone".

And knowing that he was being narrator of the story Sandbar knew what was going to happen next. And knowing what would happen next Sandbar said to Smolder" it's simple smarter we go in the building with Sweet Star".

And not knowing who sweet star was Smolder said to Sandbar with curiosity in her voice" Sweet Star who in Equestria is that?

Then out of nowhere a mare that look like Starlight glimmer came knocking her cousins door.

Here's a picture of the mare

And after knocking on her cousin's door a small purple and dragon and shoot the door and said to here" why hello lady Sweet Muffin what bring you here on this lovely day?

Then Sweet Muffins said to the purple and green dragon well Spikeus I'm here to see my dear little cousin Sour Treat".

Then Spikeus said to Sweet Muffins" Sweet Muffins please you didn't come here try and your cousin open nightmare night stores are you because if you are then by the dragon Lord's treasure you must have a lot of guts".

Then Sweet Muffins said to Spikeus" no my dear friend I just have a lot of Hope for a lost soul".

As they we're talking Sandbar said to Smolder" quick Smolder when Sweet Muffins goes into the Shop we should follow her for we can hear what they say".

And liking his plan Smolder and Sandbar wait until Sweet Muffins to go into the Shop. And right after they made their plan Sweet Muffins and Spikeus had stopped talking and started to let Sweet Muffins into the shop. And right when sweet muffins went into the shop Sandbar and Smolder followed her into the shop.

When Sandbar and Smolder we're in the Shop Sandbar and Smolder felt extreme cold that develop in the shop. When Sandbar and Smolder the extreme cold that developing in the shop Smolder said to Sandbar" Sandbar I think this was a mistake because it's warmer outside than it is in here".

And right after Smolder said that Spikeus walked up to Sour Treat. When Spikeus in front of Sour Treat Sour Treat said to Spikeus" is there something you need Spikeus?

Then to answer Sour treat's question Spikeus said to Sour Treat" Sour Treat sir the workers wonder if it's okay if they can put in a piece of cole in the fire they say that the ink keeps freezing".

Then Sour Treat said to Spikeus" tell the other workers I said no and that's not good enough for them then ask them how would they like to be unemployed".

And after saying that Sour Treat knew that his workers would get back to work. And after sour treat said that Smolder said out loud to every creature to hear" by the dragon lord this guy really is a jerk".

Then sweet nothing to came up to her cousin and said to him" hello cousin I came to wish you a happy nightmare night cousin I came here to ask you if you would like to join me in my husband for dinner".

And with annoyed tone in his voice Sour Treat said to his cousin" no cousin I do not see the purpose of going to dinner with your husband and also cousin I have no idea what gave you the idea to get married".

Then Sweet Muffins said to her cousin" Sour Treat I got married because I fell in love".

Then Sour Treat said to his cousin with a angry and mocking tone in his voice" I love a more ridiculous sentence then have a happy nightmare night who was up to me every person he said have a happy nightmare night with be killed and be buried with they're Lantern next to their heart".

And hearing what her cousin said sweet muffins said to her cousin with a disappointed tone in her voice" cousin you don't expect me to believe that you believe that but I will inspect your wishes because even though marriage hasn't put a bit in my pocket I still feel that it has put a lot good of things in my life".

Then Sour Treat said to his cousin with an angry tone in his voice" then cousin I wish you a good day".

Then Sweet Muffins said to her cousin with a smile on her face" and also cousin I wish you luck in your life and also even though every creature hate you I want you to know I don't hate you because I know that somewhere deep in your heart still lies the heart of that sweet colt and knowing that I like to say have a happy nightmare night to all around me".

And Right after Sweet Muffins said that Spikeus started clapping for her because of her inspiring words but with one look from Sour Treat stopped him from clapping.

Then Sour Treat said with a angry tone at his cousin" I said good day cousin".

And after that rude good day from Sour Treat Sweet Muffins walked out of her cousin's shop. And after Sweet Muffins left Sour Treat's store Sandbar said to Smolder" Well Smolder if we had to try and change this cult from bad to good then we have some work to do".

And outside of the book Twilight was telling the rest of her friends about what had happened do the young six. And after telling the rest of her friends on what happened to the young six Rainbows Dash said to Twilight" so let me get this straight Twilight when you walked in you accidentally fired a blast of magic at the Ocellus and her friends then you realize that the blast of magic must have sent them into the book".

Then Twilight saw that her friends were taking this very calmly and wondering why her friends were taking this calmly Twilight ass her friends how they were taking this whole situation calmly.

And seen the look Twilight face Applejack said the Twilight" Twilight we're being okay about this because we know that the others will get out of that book when they finish it or because all of us are going to try to get them out because you know that we're all not going to stop until we get them all back".

Then Twilight realize that Applejack was right that if the young six didn't get out of the book by themselves and herself and her friends would get her out of the book.

To be continued

A ghost warning

Hello every creature it's me again like I said the contest on who would be the first ghost is over listen to the story to see who is the first ghost and no my audience back to the story.

And after Sandbar and Smolder saw that Sour Treat had just angrily shouted at his cousin sweet muffins Sandbar and Smolder saw a familiar green and purple dragon walk up to Sour Treat.
When the familiar green and purple dragon locked up to Sour Treat the green and purple dragon named Spines said to Sour Treat" a sour treat may I have a word".

Then Sour Treat stop telling his bits and look up to Spines then said to him" Mr spines what brings you the pleasure of talking to you today? Then Spines said to sour treat with a little chill in his voice" you see sour treat tomorrow's the day before nightmare night". Then Sour Treat saw that spines was going to ask him for something and knowing that spines wanted to ask him for something sour treat new he was not going to like it but said to Spines" Mr Spines I know that tomorrow is the day before nightmare night so don't waste my time on silly antics ask me what you want to ask me".

And knowing that his boss knew that he wanted something from him Spines said to Sour Treat" you see I was going to ask you if I could spend the whole day with my family tomorrow and spines I know what you're going to say that nightmare night is just a full holiday taking money out of the young stallions pocket but please sour treat I asked you for a little kindness for I can spend with my family".

And seeing that spines would not let this go Sour Treat said to Spines" fine since you won't let this go Mr spines you may go and spend the whole day with your family tomorrow but be here on nightmare night day". And seeing that his boss said yes Spines said to Sour Treat with happiness in his voice" why thank you sour treat I won't let you down I will be here on nightmare night".

And knowing that he could spend time with his family tomorrow spines went back to work counting the inventory. When spines was counting the inventory cute familiar of ponies named Mac Jack and Jack Smith looking for donations for the poor and hungry.

Then Jack Smith went up to Sour Treat and said to him" why good morning young Colt me and my brother are going around getting donations for the poor and the hungry would you like to donate to the cause". And seen that the two ponies wanted some beds for their charity Sour Treat said to them" no thank you sir". Then Jack Smith thought that sour treat wanted to be anonymous in his donation and thinking that he wanted to be an ominous in his donation Jack Smith said to sour treat thinking that he was going to donate to their cause" you want to be anonymous if you're donation young colt".

And see that the two ponies didn't get that he didn't want to donate any of his bits to their couse sour treat said to them" sir and madam I did not want to donate any of my hard-working bits to your donation".

And hearing that Sour Treat did not want to donate to them Jack Smith said to Sour Treat" but Sour Treat since you won't sell any of the candy you have here to do the town's ponies every pony has been going through a hard time so can you just spare a little of your bits to help the hungry and the homeless".

Then sour treat said to them with a curious tone and his voice" don't mind taxes pay for the workhouses and for celestia's dungeon? And hearing that from Sour Treat Jack Smith said to Sour Treat' why yes sour treat but what did those places have to do with anything? Then Sour Treat said to them" if the homeless and the needy need to go somewhere then they should go there".

And after hearing that from Sour Treat Jack Smith said to Mac Jack and Sour Treat" a lot of sweet ponies with ladder died and go to that place isn't that right Mac Jack? And seen that his wife was right Mac Jack just said yes with one single word yep. And seeing that the two ponies were not happy about his answer Sour Treat said to them" then if they're going to die then they better do it soon better do decrease the kingdom's population".

And after hearing that from sour treat Jack Smith said to her husband Mac Jack" come Mac Jack we don't want to take any more of sour treats time".
And just like that Mac Jack and Jack Smith went out the door not to bother Sour Treat again. And after hearing that from sour treat Smolder said to Sandbar" Sandbar did you just see that I have the mind that go up to him and take that gold". Then Sandbar said to Smolder" I know you do and I half of a mind to let you but we must finish the story"

And after a few hours of work Spines and Sour Treat decided to close up shop. And after Spines and Sour Treat close the shop they both started to walk back to their homes. And after 20 minutes of walking sour treat at finally reached his home. When Sour Treat was about to unlock his door Sour Treat saw that the door knocker transformed into the head of his old dead business partner Discus. And after seeing the the door knocker turning into a head of his old dead business partner the shock made Sour Treat fall on his back. When Sour Treat was on his back Sour Treat looked at the door knocker to see it was just a regular door knocker again.

And seeing that it was a regular door knocker again Sour Treat thought it was just a trick of the light of the Moon. And thinking that it was a trick of the light of the Moon Sour Treat unlocked his door and locked into his home not knowing that Sandbar and Smolder had followed him. And seen where sour treat lived Smolder said to Sandbar" creepy place isn't it sandbar but anyway now that we're here what do we do now?

Then Sandbar said to Smolder" it's simple motor we wait because right now for some weird reason I feel like I know that Sour Treat getting ready for bed". Then Smolder said to Sandbar" wait a minute how can you tell what he's doing when he's in there and we're out here? Then Sandbar said to Smolder I don't know but to see if I'm right let's say that sour treat was forced to light the candles by his scare at the door". And for some weird reason like Sandbar said a lights came from the windows.

And seen that what Sandbar said came true smolder said to herself" how does he do that? Then out of nowhere in a minute for them to blink Sandbar and Smolder saw they were in sour treats home. And after Smolder and Sandbar saw that they were in treats home Smolder and Sandbar saw sour treat eating a bowl of soup.

When Sour Treat with eating his soup sour treat started to hear noises coming from the hallway. And hearing a noise coming from his hallway sour treat saw a ghost of his dead business partner Discus".

Wait a minute why do I have to be the dead business partner.

Discord you're messing up the story.

I know but still why do I have to be the dead business partner.

Because discord it's my story.

Well I don't want to be the dead business partner can you have me play something else.

Well I can't see you not doing this up I play someone else to be the dead business partner I'll have Grandpa gruff play the dead business partner happy now discord?

Thank you my young pony"

Sorry about that folks but as you see discord didn't want to play the dead business partner so the dead business partner will be played by Grandpa gruff his name will be Grandpa Graff now that that's taken care of back to the story.
And after seeing the ghost of his dead business partner Grandpa Graff sour treat said to Grandpa Graff" Grandpa Graff is that you? Then Grandpa Graff said to Sour Sweet" yes it is me Sour Treat can you not see with your own eyes?

Then sour treat said to Grandpa Graff" yes Grandpa graff I can see with my own eyes but I do not know if this is real or not". Then Grandpa Graff said to Sour Treat with a curious stone in his voice" Sour Treat you sound like you doubt your senses why is that? Then sour treat said to Grandpa Graff" because Grandpa Graff a slight difference to the stomach can make you see things".

Then Grandpa Graff said to Sour Treat with a scary tone in his voice" sour treat do not doubt your senses what you are seeing today is real because of your miss doing I am here to warn you that tonight three spirits will come and see you". And wondering why three spirits would want to come see him sour treat said to Grandpa Graff" Grandpa Graff why would three spirits want to come and see me?

Then Grandpa Graff said to Sour Treat" to see if a boy like you could change your ways because if not you will end up with a fake like this so sour treat if you want to not end up like this change your terrible ways". Then Sour Treat said to Grandpa Graff" but why three can I just see them all and just get it over with?

Then Grandpa Graff said to Sour Treat" no sour treat you must do as you are told in to make sure you get my point time for a little musical number.

And after the little musical number Grandpa Graff said to Sour Treat" now that you got my message I'm going to let you know inspect the first ghost at 1:00 and for your sake you better hope you can change. And and after Grandpa Graff his message to Sour Treat Grandma Graff disappeared like a Mist in the wind.

And after seeing that Smolder set to Sandbar" I don't know about you sandbar but I think this story sounds like it's going to get even better".

In outside of the book Spike was looking through the book that the young six were trapped in until he saw that the words that Smolder just said were written in the book. And sing the words that Smolder just said were in the book spike went over to Twilight and said to her" Twilight Twilight I have something to tell you". And seen that Spike had something to tell her Twilight asked spike what he wanted to tell her.

And seen that he had her attention spike said to Twilight and her friends" is he Twilight I was looking through the book that they were in and I saw these words". Then Spike showed the words that smolder had just said. And after seeing the words that Spike show them Twilight and her friends realize that the young six say will be written in the book.

And after seeing that the young six had powers to rewrite the story Twilight and her friends knew they how to find a way to get them out of the book good and fast.

To be continued.

Author's Note

Hey guys I know I said I was going to put the ghost in this one but I decided to pay it in the next chapter until then vote on who I will pick to be the ghost of nightmare nights pass

The ghost of nightmare night past

We start our chapter with Sandbar and Smolder who were trying to figure out a way to get over the gate of sour treats home. When Sandbar and Smolder who were trying to figure out a way to get over the gate of Sour Treat's home Sandbar figured out how to get over the gate in front of our treats home. When Sandbar figured out how to get over the gate in front of our treats home Sandbar said to Smolder" Smolder give me a boost over the gate". And hearing that Sandbar boost over the gate Smolder lifted Sandbar off the ground and lithium to where he could climb over the gate.

When Sandbar was lifted high enough to where he could reach over the gate Sandbar climbed over the gate. And after Sandbar climbed over the gate Sandbar landed on the other side of the gate then said to Smolder" okay smolder climb the gate like I did". And like Sandbar did Smolder she was at the top. When Smolder was on top of the gate Smolder said to Sandbar" Sandbar are you sure about this? Then Sandbar said to Smolder" come on Smolder you don't have to worry I'll catch you".

Then Smolder said to Sandbar" Ok Sandbar I jump you'll catch me right". Then Sandbar to Smolder" motor I swear you have nothing to worry about I'll catch you I swear". When motor was about to jump Sandbar realize that he forgot his jelly beans. And after realizing he forgot his jelly beans Sandbar said to Smolder" wait Smolder I forgot my jelly beans". And fortunately to Sandbar Smolder didn't hear what he said. And not hearing what he said smolder jump from the top of the gate expecting Sandbar to catch her. And to her surprise Sandbar didn't catch her. And seen that Sandbar didn't catch her felt the hardness of the cold ground hitting her body and her snout.

And after hitting the ground Smolder pulled herself off the ground and saw that Sandbar was on the other side of the gate. And after seeing that Sandbar outside the gate Smolder said to him with a angry tone" so you swear to catch me huh". And seeing the mad look on her snout Sandbar said to Smolder" what forgot my jelly beans". Then and realizing Sandbar it was on the other side of the gate Smolder said to Sandbar" wait how did you get on the other side of the gate?

And hearing her question Sandbar said to Smolder" oh that's easy I just walked through the bars". And to show what he meant Sandbar showed Smolder that the barge were wide enough for he could just walk through them. And seeing that Sandbar could just walk through the bars Smolder said to Sandbar" wait you mean we could have just walked through those bars the whole time". And seen that sandbar was a complete moron Smolder said in her head" seriously this is the the pony I want to have Karen with".

And knowing what she was mad about Sandbar said to Smolder" what what did I do? And seeing that Sandbar didn't know why she was mad Smolder said to Sandbar"really you are such an idiot no wonder Yona is dating Spike with silverstream". And still wondering why she was still mad Sandbar said to Smolder" no really what did I say what did I do? And knowing that it would go in one ear and out the other Smolder said to Sandbar" nothing nothing let's just get in the house".

And not wanting to make your matter Smolder and Sandbar walk into Sour Treat's home. And with two minutes of walking Smolder and Sandbar were in front of Sour Treat's door. When Smolder and Sandbar we're in front of the door Smolder was about to open it until Sandbar said to her" wait t smolder I had to do something before we go in". And hearing that they had to do something before they could go in room Smolder said to Sandbar" really what do you have to do?

Then Sandbar said to Smolder" I have to do this remember". And to show her what he meant Sandbar said out loud: expect the first ghost at 1:00". And right when Sandbar said that a heavenly glow came out of nowhere and lighted the whole room. And after a few minutes the lights was gone and in the room was a certain Changeling. And after the light was gone Smolder rubbed her eyeballs and said to Sandbar" I I I I think that light turned my eyeballs". And after rubbing her eyes a bit her vision came back to her. And with her vision back to her Smolder open the door to Sour Treat's room.

And Smolder open the door to Sour Treat's room Sandbar and Smolder saw their changeling friend Ocellus. And after seeing friend Ocellus Sandbar and Smolder went over to Ocellus to ask her what happened to her. Then Ocellus heard the sound of her two friends Sandbar and Smolder. And after Ocellus heard the sound of her two friends Sandbar and Smolder Ocellus turn her head and saw her friends running towards her. When Sandbar and Smolder we're finally in front of Ocellus Sandbar asked Ocellus" Ocellus what happened to you?

Then Ocellus said to Sandbar" I don't know what happened to me guys all I remember is reading that book then Twilight blasted us with that blast of magic then I find myself here wearing some kind of weird get up". Then Smolder said to Ocellus" do you know what happened to the others? Then Ocellus said to Smolder" no I don't I don't even know how I got here also guys can you tell me what's going on?

Then Smolder Said to Ocellus" look Ocellus we're in a book the one that we were reading when we all got blasted by twilight's magic so me and Sandbar figured out that if we go along with the story then we could probably all get out of here".

Then Ocellus said to Smolder" that seems logical to me but can you tell me why do I look like this". Then Sandbar said to ocellus that's simple Osiris since we're in the book The tale of nightmare night then you must be the ghost of nightmare nights pass". Then ocellus said to Smolder" really I'm the ghost of nightmare nights pass I better do something to make sure that I am the ghost of nightmare nights pass". Then orcellus looked over at Sandbar and and figured out the right idea to test if she was the Ghost of nightmare nights pass.

When Ocellus was right in front of Sandbar Ocellus Said to them" well here goes nothing". And with one step Ocellus went right through Sandbar's body. And right after Ocellus went through Sandbar's body Sandbar said out loud" ow it tickles". Then Smolder said to Ocellus" well I guess that proves that you're the ghost of nightmare night pass well if we want to get out of the story or sell it you better do your little ghost thing to Sour Sweet he's the colt with the gray main. And he's the one who hates nightmare night so we need to teach him that nightmare night is about love and friendship and all that".

Then Ocellus said to Smolder" that sounds like something I could do". Then Smolder said to Sandbar" with ocellus doing her ghost thing will be out of here in no time what do you think Sandbar Sandbar". Then Smolder look at Sandbar and saw him jumping back and forth through Ocellus. When Sandbar was jumping back and forth through Ocellus Sandbar was saying" left side right side left side right side ow it's still tickles". And seeing that Sandbar was planning with Ocellus in here goes form Smolder said to Sandbar" Sandbar stop playing with Ocellus in her ghost form".

And knowing that Smolder was right that he had to stop playing with Ocellus in her ghost form and that if they go by the story that they could get out of the book. Then Sandbar stopped playing with Ocellus ghost form for Dallas could do her ghost thing. Then ocellus went up to the trucks up to Sour Treat giving him a fright. And after ocellus gave sour treat a fright Sour Treat said to Ocellus" are you the spirit that was that was proper size this night". Then ocellus said to Sour Treat" I am that I am I am the ghost of nightmare night pass I am here to take you on a journey through the pass".

And after Ocellus said that Sour Treat thought that she was going to take him back in time to learn about the holiday. And thinking that Ocellus was going to take him back to the past to learn about the holiday Sour Treat said to Ocellus"ma'am I have no interest on learning about how the holiday started so please be off". And seen that sour treat flat that she was going to to take him back in time just to learn how the holiday started Ocellus said to Sour Treat" sour treat grab on to my robe and I will take you back through time because we are not going back through time to learn about the holiday we're going back from time to learn about you".

Then ocellus started to sing the song seeds of the past.

As Ocellus started to sing seeds of the past Smolder and Sandbar grabbed onto Ocellus's robe as she grabbed sour treats hoof and flew him out of the window. And after Ocellus flow out the window Sour Treat could see his hometown from how far up they were. When sour treat was looking at his hometown sour treat notice a bright light in the sky. And after noticing the bright light in the sky sour treat said to Ocellus". spirit what is that light up there you can't be daylight".

And seen the question on sour treats face Ocellus said to Sour Treat" do you not worry Sour Treat that is the path". And back at Smolder and Sandbar saw the bright light in the sky Sandbar said out loud with amazement" motor you got to look it's so beautiful. Then the bright light in the sky covered Sour Treat Ocellus Sandbar and Smolder the bright light send them to the past.
When the bright light in the sky was sending them to the pass Sandbar was amazed but Smolder said with fear in her voice" I want my Mommy".

Then in a flash of a second Treat Ocellus Sandbar and Smolder saw that they were in the town they were in but back in a distant past. And and after seeing that they were in the past Ocellus was still singing seeds of the past. When Ocellus was still singing seeds of the past Sour Treat saw many of different creatures that were once his old and dearest of friends. And after seeing many of is used to be friends sour treat saw a pony couple that he recognized like if it was yesterday.

And the pony couple that sour treat recognized were the faces of his own parents Good Sweet and Sour Coin who were taking a younger version of him trick or treating. And after seeing the faces of his beloved parents Ocellus said to Sour Treat". Sour treat do you remember these ponies? And hearing her question sour treat said to Ocellus" yes yes I do spirits I do remember these ponies I also remember the day that they were taken away from me". And as he said that a single tear came from Sour Treat's eye. Sour Treat said that the scenery change into not a happy scene but into a scene of great sadness where a five-year-old Colt was crying over the last of his loving parents.

And seen why sour treat lowed the holiday Smolder said to Sandbar" by the dragon lord Sandbar now I know why he would hate the holiday how can anyone deal with so much sadness". And after seeing why the Colt hated the holiday Smolder Sandbar Ocellus and Sour Treat saw a older stallion name Broken Dreams that look like Chancellor neighsay who walked up to a younger Sour treat. And when Broken Dreams walked up to Sour Treat Broken Dreams roughly grabbed the younger version of Sour Treat by the hoof.

And after broken dreams grabbed Sour Treat by the hoof Broken Dreams said to the younger Sour Treat with a little rage in his voice". Get up I said get up do not cry for your parents crying for the dead means you're weak and I will not stand for weakness". And after Broken Dreams said that to Sour Treat Sour Treat said to Broken Dreams with a sad tone in his voice" yes Uncle Broken Dreams". And seeing that sad past memory of Sour Treat's life who sells stop singing seeds of the past.

After seeing his recent past sour treat had enough of seeing the terrible memory. And after having enough of seeing his most terrible memory Sour Treat said to Ocellus" please spirit please enough of this I had enough of looking at terrible memories just take me back home". And hearing that sour treat had enough of looking at his terrible of memories Ocellus decided to grant his wish and just teleported sour treat home.

Then Sour Treat shut his eyes and started to cry out of sadness for remembering this terrible
memory. Then Sour Treat open his eyes and saw that he was home. And after Sour Treat saw he was at home sour treat thought that the whole trip was nothing but a dream. And back at Ocellus Smolder and Sandbar Smolder said to them" well that was a big waste of nothing". And hearing that from Smolder Sandbar said to Smolder" come on Smolder you feel sorry for the colt with his parents dying in dealing with that Uncle".

And after hearing that from Sandbar Smolder knew that he was right. Then Ocellus said to Smolder and Sandbar" well guys I wonder who's what's the next ghost going to do because I think the next door should". And before Ocellus was done talking with a flash of light Ocellus was teleported a way. And after Ocellus was teleported away Smolder said to Sandbar in shock" Sandbar did Ocellus just disappear?
Then Sandbar said to Smolder with a little of shock" I guess Ocellus did disappear or there is one thing that could have happened".

And hearing that there could be something else that could have happened to Ocellus Smolder said to Sandbar with curiosity in her voice" really what you think could have happened? And hearing the question Sandbar said to Smolder" Wells Smolder since we're in a storybook I think that when each of the characters are done with their part they get teleported away so what I'm saying is that Ocellus might be home right now? And hearing his answer Smolder said to Sandbar" really well I hope you're right Sandbar because if you aren't then I worry about the rest of our friends".

And outside of the book Spike was reading about what was happening to the young six until the book started glowing. And after the book started growing Spike told Twilight that something was going on with the book. And hearing that the book was starting to do something Twilight looked over to where the book was that and saw that Spike was right and seeing that Spike was right Twilight and her friends saw that the book was glowing. And with a giant flash of light Spike Twilight and her friends saw that the flash of light had teleported Ocellus right in front of them. And after seeing the flash of light had teleported Ocellus in front of them Spike Twilight in the rest of her friends went in front of ocellus to ask her what happened and where are the rest young six.

And after seeing that she was teleported again Ocellus saw that she was back in twilight's Castle. And after Ocellus saw that she was back in twilight's Castle Ocellus saw Spike in Twilight and the rest of her friends come up to her. And with Spike Twilight and the rest of her friends near her Twilight said to Ocellus with curiosity in her voice" Ocellus what happened to you and where's the others".

And hearing twilight's question Ocellus said to Twilight and her friends". I don't know Twilight all I remember is I was the Ghost of nightmare nights past doing a little ghost stuff and then when I was talking to Smolder and Sandbar". Then Twilight figured out that when a character is done with their part in the story they are teleported back to where they came from. And after Twilight figured out that when a character in the book has finished their part Twilight said to spike Ocellus and the rest of her friends" well everyone it seems that after a character is done with their part in the story that they are teleported back to where they came from".

And hearing the answer everyone in the room was amazed that Spike said to Twilight" wow Twilight that's amazing but question who do you think will come out next Twilight? And hearing the question Twilight said to everyone" I don't know guys will probably have to keep reading the book until we find out". And seeing that Twilight was right the rest Ocellus Spike and the rest of twilight's friends knew that they would have to just watch and see where the book would take them wondering who would be coming out of the book next.

To be continued
And my audience if you're wondering what will happen next in the story you'll have to find out next time. And who do you think will be the next ghost where will it be
A Yona
B Silverstream
Or C Gallus
Also guys the scene where Sandbar was playing with Ocellus in her ghost form was like in this scene from pair of Kings and also the reason why I did that scene like that is because it is funny

The ghost of nightmare Night's present

We start our chapter with Sandar and Smolder who just watch as Ocellus disappeared. And after watching Ocellus disappeared Sandar and Smolder wondered what happened to Ocellus. And after wondering what happened to Ocellus Smolder figured out what happened to Ocellus. And after figuring out about what happened to Ocellus Smolder said to Sandbar" Sandbar I know what happened to Ocellus". Then Sandbar said to Smolder" really Smolder what happened to her? Then Smolder said to Sandbar" since Ocellus was the ghost of nightmare night's pass that means when she finished her role she got teleported out of the book and that means if we follow our rolls then we'll all get out of here". And after hearing that Sandbar said to Smolder" a Smolder what do you think Ocellus is doing now?.

And outside the book after Twilight realize that if everyone in the book did their roles they would be able to get out of the book Twilight came with an idea. And after Twilight came up with a idea Twilight build a machine that would show them what would happen inside of the book. And after Twilight build a machine that would show then what would happen inside the book Twilight hooked the book into the machine. And after hooking up the book to the machine the book showed Sandbar and Smolder talking to each other. And after seeing that her machine worked Twilight and her friends started to watch what was happening in the book.

And back in the book Sandbar realized that they had to wait for 1:00 for the second ghost to come. Then Sandbar said to Smolder Smolder Said to Sandbar" Sandbar why are we sitting here doing nothing? And hearing the question Sandbar said to Smolder" it's simple Smolder we have to wait until it's 1:00 for I could get the second ghost here". And hearing that they had to wait until it was 1:00 for Sandbar to summon the next ghost Smolder said to Sandbar" do you want to make out". And hearing that Smolder wanted to make out with him Sandbar to Smolder" Smolder please something like got to tell you I'm actually not into females". And after hearing that Sandbar wasn't interested in females Smolder said to Sandbar" so that's why you were looking at stallions's flanks". Then Smolder said to herself" why didn't I say yes to by to join his harem wait maybe there's still time for me to join?

And I have to wait a few minutes the clock playing hit one o'clock. And after the clock hit one Sandbar said out loud" well it's 1:00 sorry for me you my job for as narrator". Then Sandbar said out loud' expect the second ghost at one". And after Sandbar said that like lightning out of nowhere a certain yak like lightning Yona teleport out of nowhere in front of Sandbar and Smolder. And after Yona teleport out of nowhere in front of Sandbar and Smolder Yona look at herself and saw she was wearing some kind of weird robe. And seeing that she was wearing some kind of robe Yona said to herself" fighting all yuck what am I wearing".

A picture of Yona as the ghost of nightmare Night pass.

Then Sandbar and Smolder went over to Yona. And after Sandbar and Smolder went over to Yona Yona noticed Sandbar and Smolder Yona Said to Sandbar and Smolder" Sandbar Smolder what happened where are we and what in Equestria are you guys wearing? Then Smolder said to Yona" Yona to make it short the book that Ocellus was reading we're trapped in it and the only way for us to get out is for all of us to play our parts". Then Smolder pointed to Sour Treat and said to Yona" okay Yona now that you know that we have to play our parts to get out of this book go over to Sour Treat over there and play your role as the ghost of nightmare night's present". Then Yona went over to Sour Treat to play her role as the ghost of nightmare nights present. Then Sour Treat notice Yona and after noticing her sour treat said to Yona"are you the ghost of nightmare night's present?

Then Yona said to Sour Treat" yes I am Sour Treat and I'm here to take you around the town to show you how your actions are infecting the citizens and now grab my robe town now follow me". Then Sandbar and Smolder realize that they better grab onto Yona's robe for they wouldn't be able to miss anything. And after grabbing Yona's robe Yona teleported herself sour treat Sandbar and Smolder knowing that they would they wouldn't want to miss anything that Yona would show Sour Treat.

Then Yona Sour Treat Sandbar and Smolder hand it up in a fancy looking mansion. And after seeing that they were in some kind of fancy mansion Sour Treat said to Yona" spirit whose house is this? And for some reason Yona knew the answer to his question. And knowing that she had the answer for Sour Treat's question Yona said to Sour Treat" Sour Treat this is the home of your cousin Sweet Muffin now watch as I show you your receipt reflect upon your loved ones.".
Then Sour Treat saw that his cousin Sweet Muffin was having a Halloween party. Then Sour Treat call that sweet muffin wasn't having a fun time at the party. And after Sour Treat saw that his cousin sweet muffins wasn't having fun Sour Treat saw Sweet Muffin's husband Fruit Stuffer who look like a certain old friend of a unicorn.

The unicorn food Sweet nothing husband looks like.

And seeing his wife wasn't having a good time at her party Fruit Stuffer asked why she wasn't having a good time at the party. And hearing her husband question Sweet Muffin said to her husband" oh my baby love it I just wish that my cousin sour treat would come to this party I know he would love being at this party". And seen that sweet muffin wasn't having a good time at her party because he wasn't there Sour Treat said to Yona" Spirit she really wants me there doesn't she". Then Yona said to Sour Treat with a kind smile" yes yes she does want you there but maybe now you can see how your arrogance and anger towards the holiday has affected her". Then Yona started to make everyone around her sing and dance to this song.

And after the song was over Yona said to Sour Treat" well sour treat it's time for us to go to our next destination". And like Yona said Yona child played herself Sour Treat Sandbar and Smolder.
Then Yona Sour Treat Sandbar and Smolder ended up in front of a house that looked like it was in poor shape. And after seeing the poor shape of the house Sour Treat said to Yona" Spirit why did you bring us here I don't know anyone on this side of the city". Then Yona said to Sour Treat" oh yes you do know someone in this side of the city this is the home of your loyal assistant Spikeus". And after hearing that this was the home of his loyal assistant Sour Treat said to Yona" spirit this cannot be my loyal assistance home by the amount that I pay him he should be living in a bigger place". Then Yona said to Sour Treat" well you try feeding five young ones. Then Yona pulled Sour Treat Sandbar and Smolder into the house.

When Yona Sour Treat Sandbar and Smolder we're inside the house to you there shock there cooking dinner for five young ones was silverstream. And after seeing Silverstream cooking for five young ones Yona said to Smolder" wow first she was a school student now she's already a mother Silverstream". Then Silverstream noticed her friends and after Sliverstream noticing her friends Silverstream went over to her friends then said to them" guys how did you guys get into heaven? And after hearing that Silverstream thought that she was in heaven Yona said to Silverstream" Silverstream we're not in heaven where in the storybook that Ocellus was reading Twilight's magic blasted us into the book".

And hearing that she was in a book silverstream said to her friends" that's why I Spike called me Camila and the reason why we have five young ones". Then Smolder said to Silverstream" five little ones we only see four little ones where's the fifth? And hearing the question Silverstream said to her friends" oh Flamestone is with his father they should be home any minute but first you need to know the rest of my children say hello to my first child fire diamond and my second children's Amber and Crystal and my third child Firestone and my fourth child Gemstone.

Here is the pictures of all the children of silverstream and Spikeus kids.

Then Yona Sour Treat Sandbar and Smolder heard Spikeus coming down the street with a little Kieran with a Kang in his right hand named Flamestone on his shoulders.

A picture of Flamestone.

And with Flamestone on his shoulders Spikeus walk into his home with Flamestone on his shoulders. When Spikeus was in the house Spikeus put limestone on a chair and said to Silverstream" oh my beloved me and Flamestone had a wonderful day today but my love I must say Flamestone did cough a lot today". And hearing that Silverstream knew that one day Flamestone would permanently fade away. And not wanting to bring everyone down Spikeus asked Siri stream to set the feast. And hearing her husband's request Silverstream set the table for their family to feast. And before Spikeus's family started to eat their food Spikeus hold his family that he was toasting the feast to the honor of Sour Treat. When Spikeus made the toast in honor of Sour Treat Amber and Crystal told their father that they didn't like him toasting the the feast to the honor of Sour Treat and that Sour Treat could choke on his own necktie.

And hearing what they were saying about his boss Spikeus hold daughters that they should send a example for their little brother Flamestone. And after hearing their father that they should example a good behavior for their little brother Flamestone Amber and Crystal decided to follow their dad's orders and and set a example for their brother Flamestone. Then Flamestone said to his entire family" happy nightmare Night everyone also Celestia bless us everyone and to the honor of Sour Treat". And after seeing that Spikeus and his son treated him with so much honor for him Sour Treat said to Yona" I really mean something Spikeus and his son do I spirit?

Then Yona said to Sour Treat " yes sir treat you really do matter to them but to let you know even though your loved ones vanish the love of those ones who love you still stays within you ". Then Sour Treat looked at Flamestone wondering about the young lad state. And after still looking at Flamestone wondering about the young lad's state Sour Treat said to Yona" spirit will Flamestone survive his tragedy? Then Yona said to Sour Treat with a serious tone in her voice" I don't know Sour Treat I am not the ghost of the future and besides my wrongdoings aren't the reason why he is in the state in the first place. But I must warn you if you do not change your ways then I have a feeling that this might be his last nightmare night". Then Sour Treat fell onto the ground and started crying in his shoes thinking that the nice young lad might not survive. When Sour Treat was still crying opened his eyes and saw that he was back inside of his room.

And after Sour Treat saw that he was back in his room sour treat said to himself" maybe I should celebrate nightmare night". Then but it's Sour Treat thought that since it was just a dream that it didn't matter and dreams are nothing but fantasy. And thinking that his dream was nothing but a fantasy that his mind made up Sour Treat decided not to change his ways . And outside the room Yona Sandbar and Smolder heard that he wasn't going to give up his hurtful ways. And after Yona Sandbar and Smolder heard that he wasn't going to give up his hurtful ways Smolder said to her friends" we're not getting through it to him but at least of this we know where silverstream is but how are we going to get through him or we get back home". Then Yona said to her friends" I don't know Smolder but something tells me some way somehow we will get through to him".

Then Yona saw that she started to glow white. And after Yona saw that she was starting to glow white Yona said to her friends" hey guys what's going on why am I glowing white? Then Smolder said to Yona" don't worry Yona you glowing means that you're just leaving the story and that you finish your part me and well mostly me has figured out that when someone has finished their part of the story they leave the story right go back to the real world". And like they said Yona disappeared into the real world knowing that she had finished her part in the story.

And after Yona disappeared Sandbar said to Smolder" So Smolder which one of our friends do you think of me next?

And outside of the book Yona came out flying out of the book landing on Spike. And after Yona landed on Spike Twilight ran over to him and said to Spike" Spike Spike are you okay say something". Then Rainbow Dash notice the way that she landed on him. And after noticing the way that Yona landed on him Rainbow Dash said to you Twilight" Twilight I think he's okay because by the way that her bosoms are in his face and I think he's all right". Then Yona noticed that she was back in her own world. And after noticing that she was back in her own world Yona heard Spike say to her" Yona honey I know you ocellus and silverstream are cuddlers but can you do me a favor". Then Yona said to Spike" sure honey what favor do you want me to do? Then spike said to Yona" Yona if you want to take this to the bedroom or start a harem right here and if you don't want to do that right now then can you please take your bosoms off me? Then Yona noticed that the way that she was on Spike.

And after Yona notice the way that she was on Spike Yona blushed and got off a Spike. And after Yona got off Spike Spike said to Yona" now that you're off me you think we can invite Smolder to join our harem because turns out she wanted to join". Then Twilight and the rest of her friends and said to Spike" wait a minute Spike if she gets to join then we're joining also". Then Spike said to Twilight and the rest of her friends" Twilight if you and your friends want to join my harem it's up to Yona she's the first one who wanted to date me". And after knowing that it was up to Yona to say if they could join Spike's harem Twilight and the rest of her friends look at Yona to give a answer. And seen all the eyes on her Yana gave into peer pressure and said to Twilight and her friends" fine you guys call join but I get first dibs in the morning".

And after knowing that they were all in Spike's harem Fluttershy said to Twilight" so Twilight who do you think is going to be next to come out of that book". Then Twilight said to Fluttershy" I don't know Fluttershy I simply don't know who will be coming out of that book next because that is fates decision".

And now everyone that's where we leave our chapter off until next time and you're probably wondering what will happen to Sandbar and Smolder and you're probably wondering who's going to be the ghost of nightmare nights future and for that what are you doing you'll have to wait until next time.

To be continued

Author's Note

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The ghost of nightmare Night's future

Are chapters starts with Sandbar and Smolder who just saw Yona disappeared. After watching Yona disappeared Sandbar and Smolder I saw two little Phillies walking like spiders walking towards them.

When the two Phillies we're in front of them one of them died talking in spider. And unfortunately to Sandbar can't understand what they were saying but luckily Smolder did and started talking spider right back. And not knowing what they were saying Sandbar said to Smolder" hay Smolder what did she say? Then Smolder said to Sandbar" she said her name is Ignorance her friend's name is Want and she wonders what what your leg taste like". And like Smolder said Ignorance bit Sandbar on his leg. And after Ignorance bit Sandbar on his leg Sandbar said to Smolder" ouch the little spider Philly bit me". Then Smolder said to Sandbar" maybe you'll get super powers". Then Sandbar said to Smolder" there's no stallion superheroes".

And seeing that he was right Smolder tried to kick the spider Philly off of Sandbar's leg but ended up kicking him in the balls. And after kicking sandbar in the balls Sandbar and Smolder waited for the next ghost show up. And at 2:00 the final ghost had arrived to Sour Treat's home.
When the final ghost had arrived to Sour Treat's home the ghost tripped on it's robe and fell down the stairs falling onto Sandbar. And after falling into Sandbar Sandbar and Smolder saw that the final Spirit was their friend Gallus

And after Sandbar and Smolder saw that the the final spirit was their friend Gallus Sandbar saw that Gallus had one thing that he never noticed before. And after Sandbar noticed the one thing that Gallus had that he never seen before Sandbar said to Gallus" wait a minute guys when did you have big boobs and especially where you always a girl". And after seeing her friends and hearing Sandbar Gallus said to Sandbar and Smolder first guys why am I wearing a robe that shows off my boobs and secondly I always been a girl my feathers hide my boobs one back in Griffinstone I was a stripper besides how you think I survived there".

And after hearing that their friend was a stripper Sandbar and Smolder start to imagine their friend as a stripper. When Sandbar and Smolder were imagining their friend being a stripper in Sandbar started to daydream about his friend being a stripper and in his imagination Gallus was wearing a black bikini while dancing in front of him.

When Gallus was dancing this song was playing in the background.

And as for Smolder she was imagining the same thing a step Gallus wasn't wearing anything and in the background this song was playing.

Then Gallus snapped her talents to snap Sandbar and Smolder out of their daydreams. And after snapping Sandbar and Smolder out of their daydreams Gallus said to Sandbar and Smolder" okay guys now that you know what I used to be is there anything you want to tell me? And still in shock knowing that their friend was a stripper Sandbar said Gallus" please marry me". And hearing what her friend said Smolder said to Gallus" what Sandbar meant to tell you was this". Then Smolder told Dallas about their situation and how they were all trapped in storybook and that is afraid the roles in the story they will all be able to get out of the book stand up since she was the last ghost you guys her part they would all be closer to getting out of the book.

Then gallas decided that if it was the best way for herself and her friends get out of the book then she would play the part of the ghost of nightmare night's future. And knowing that it was up to her to play her part as the ghost of nightmare night's future Gallus ask asked Sandbar and Smolder about who was she supposed to scare for they could get back to their world. And hearing the question Smolder pointed over towards Sour Treat. And seeing Sour Treat Gallus went over to Sour Treat to see if she will be able to make him change his ways. Then Sour Treat felt a dark presence right behind him. And after Sour Treat felt a dark presence right behind behind him Sour Treat turned around and saw a dark figure standing right behind him. And after Sour Treat saw the dark figure behind him Sour Treat said to the dark figure" are you the ghost of nightmare nights yet to come?

Then Gallus head yes and then started to walk away from Sour Treat. Then Sour Treat saw that Gallus had stopped in front of a door. And after Sour Treat saw that Gallus had stopped in front of a door Sour Treat saw Gallus pointed to a door. And Sour Treat saw Gallus pointed to a door Sour Treat saw that Gallus want him to follow her. And Sour Treat saw that Gallus want him to follow her Sour Treat went over to the door. And after going over to the door sour treat open the door and saw that he was in a brewery. And seeing that you was in a brewery Sour Treat saw many of the town ponies talking about someone.

Then sour treat heard one of the town ponies say" mares and stallions I like to make a toast the future for our town and now that he is dead maybe this town can have a future even though most of our foals have died here to the Future for future foals won't have to end up like ours".

And hearing that they were talking so bad about somepony and hearing and seeing so much sadness sour treat bag Gallus to take him somewhere that didn't have so much sadness. And hearing his plea Gallus teleported herself and Sour Treat into a new home. And after teleporting herself and Sour Treat to a new home Sour Treat saw that they were in the home of his faithful assistant Spikeus.

And seeing that he was in his faithful assistant Spikeus home Sour Treat saw that Spikeus was the only one in the house. And after Sour Treat saw that Spikeus was the only one in the house Sour Treat saw that Spikeus was was crying. And after seeing his faithful assistant Spikeus crying Sour Treat said to Gallus" spirit why is my faithful assistant crying? And after asking his question Sour Treat heard the noise coming from Spikeus. Then Sour Treat turned his head and saw Spikeus got off of the chair and went towards seven earns. And after Sour Treat saw Spikeus to seven earns Sour Treat saw Spikeus in front of the seven earns and started crying in front of them.

Then Sour Treat heard Spikeus say" oh why uncruel fate why did you have to take my family away from me why". Then sour treat realize that the seven earns where the ones that belong to his family. Then Sour Treat saw Spikeus pull out a dagger. And after Sour Treat saw that Spikeus pulled out a dagger Sour Treat heard Spikeus say to himself" Amelia my darling I hope I see you in heaven for what I'm going to do". Then Sour Treat saw Spikeus take the dagger and slid his own throat killing him into sleep thinking that if his death he was finally be able to be reconnected with his family.

And after seeing that Spikeus take his own life Sour Treat was shocked that Spikeus would take his own life Sour Treat asked Gallus what happened to Spikeus that would make him take his own life. And hearing Sour Treat's question Gallus took her talent and place it on sour treats head and showed that after the youngest child died from his terrible illness the illness had spread to the rest of Spikeus's children. And after seeing that the disease had spread to the rest of the children Sour Treat saw that the same fate that had befallen upon the youngest child. And after seeing the deadly fate that had happened towards the children Sour Treat saw that death had taken Spikeus's wife because after seeing that death has taken all of her children death had taken her by herself dying by a broken heart by seeing her children die in front of her.

And after seeing the the Fate of Spikeus's wife and children Sour Treat saw that they were in a graveyard that said child wing. And after seeing that he was in a graveyard in the child wing Sour Treat saw so many young ponies had perish Sour Treat said to Gallus" spirit after seeing all these death s please tell me who is the cold heartless monster that". And hearing Sour Treat's question Gallus pointed a tombstone with his name on it. And after seeing his name on the tombstone Sour Treat realize that his actions were the reason why this future had turned out so wicked and horrific.

And after seeing that this future was made because of his actions Sour Treat knew that he had to change this terrible and horrific fate of his town. Then Sour Treat went over to Gallus then asked her" Spirit please help me change the events of this terrible and horrific future please tell me what I can do to change this dreary and terrible future. Then Gallus said to Sour Treat" sour treat the only way you could prevent this horrible future from coming true is to change your ways in the presence also there's something else I want to tell you". Then Gallus took off her her robe and everyone saw that she was wearing some kind of old time jazz musician suit.

And after seeing what she was wearing Gallus started to play the piano and sing this song.

And after the song was done Sour Treat's
grave open and turned into a boneless pit. And after Sour Treat's grave open and turned into a boneless pit Gallus pushed Sour Treat into his grave. And after Gallus pushed Sour Treat into his grave Sour Treat started screaming while he was falling. When Sour Treat screaming Sour Treat said out loud" please spirits let me change this future don't let me turn out this way I promise I'll change my way forever". Then Sour Treat saw that he was in his own bed. And after Sour Treat saw that he was back on his own bed Sour Treat saw saw one of his maids Rare Broom come into his room and say to him why good morning sir". And after seeing Rare Broom come into his room sour treat came over to her and gave her a big hug. And after giving Rare Broom a big hug Sour Treat said to her" oh Rare Broom I am so happy to see you wait when you leave Rare Broom can you tell me what day it is please?

And not knowing what was going on with Sour Treat Rare Broom said to Sour Treat" well Mr Sour Treat it's nightmare night". And hearing that he was not too late Sour Treat said to Rare Broom" thank you Rare Broom for telling me it this the wonderful night of nightmare night and for a thank you for telling me what wonderful day it is take the day off because I I have things to do for this wonderful day".

And hearing that she had their day off Rare Broom went out of Sour Treat's home to goes spend the holiday with her family. Oh and back at Smolder and Sandbar Smolder and Sandbar we're about to think Gallus for her job as playing the ghost as nightmare nights future until Gallus disappeared by getting teleported away from them. And seen their friend game teleported away from them that meant that Gallus part in the story was done. Then Sandbar and Smolder heard Sour Treat talking about how he will make this night the best nightmares night ever. And after Sandbar and Smolder heard how sour treat was going to make this night the greatest nightmare night ever Sandbar and Smolder saw Sour Treat coming out of his home wishing everyone a Merry nightmare night.

And with all the town ponies we're shocked that Sour Treat was wishing them a happy nightmare night. When Sour Treat was going around wishing everyone a happy nightmare night sour treat bumped into Jack Smith and his brother. And after bumping into Jack Smith and his brother Sour Treat told them that he changed his mind and that he wanted to donate some bits to their charity. And hearing that he to donate to their charity Jack Smith ask Sour Treat how much that he wanted to donate to their charity. Then Sour Treat told Jack Smith how much that he wanted to donate to their charity.

And after hearing how much he wanted to donate to their charity Jaclyn Smith said to Sour Treat" why thank you Mr sour treat if there's anything we could do to repay you for your generous donations let us know". And hearing that they wanted to repay the favor for his generous donations Dollar tree told them if they wanted to repay him for his generous donation then they could help him make this night the most wonderful nightmare night ever.

And hearing that he wanted their help to make the night the best nightmare night ever but I have to Jack Smith and his brother told sour treat that they would be honored to help him to make this nightmare night the best ever. Then Jack Smith and his brother asked sour treat what they could do to make this night the best nightmare night ever. And hearing the question the connection sour treat told them what they could do to help him make the night the most best nightmare night. And after Jack Smith and his brother what they can do to make the night the best nightmare night ever Sour Treat started started going around town doing tastes to make the night the best nightmare night ever. When Sour Treat started started going around town doing tastes to make the night the best nightmare night ever sour treat started to sing this song.

Then the song ended when Sour Treat reached the door of Spikeus home. When Sour Treat in front of Spikeus's home Sour Treat knocked on the door. And after a few knocks Spikeus answered the door to see Sour Treat right in front of him. When Spikeus saw Sour Treat right in front of him Spikeus look into sour treats cold look and said to him"Sour Treat what are you doing here sir?

And hearing the question Sour Treat said to Spikeus" Spikeus you weren't at work today". And hearing that Sour Treat thought that he was supposed to be at work Spikeus said to Sour Treat" sour treat don't you remember you gave me time off to spend time before I spend the holiday with my family". Then Sour Treat said to Spikeus" Spikeus I need your help today because if you coming to work I will". When Sour Treat was still talking Silverstream thought that Sour Treat was going to punish Spikeus. When Silverstream thought that Sour Treat was going to punish Spikeus Silverstream said to Sour Treat" that's it time for me to show manners and I'm going to be doing that by shoving my foot up your".

Then Silverstream was about to finish what she was saying Intel Sliverstrean and Spikeus heard Sour Treat said to Spikeus" raise your salary". And after hearing that Sour Treat would raise his salary Spikeus thought that he misheard Sour Treat. And after Spikeus thought that misheard Sour Treat Spikeus said to Sour Treat" Sour Treat I think I miss her can you please tell me what you said again. Then Sour Treat said to Spikeus" you heard right Spikeus if you come to work I'll raise your salary". And hearing that Sour Treat was serious and if he came to work today he would raise his salary Spikeus that he would come in to work today. And hearing that Spikeus accepted his offer Sour Treat said to Spikeus" Spikeus if we're going to go to work I'll need you to do one thing for me before we go to work".

And hearing that Sour Treat wanted him to do something for him Spikeus said to Sour Treat" and what's the one thing you want me to do for you Sour Treat? Then Sour Treat said to Spikeus" that simple Spikeus I want you and your family to join me in a family dinner at my cousin Sweet Muffin at her home". And hearing that Sour Treat wanted them to join him in a family dinner at his cousin's house Spikeus said that he would do this favor for Sour Treat. Then Spikeus gathered silverstream and their kids and headed and took off with Sour Treat to his cousin's house she's going her in a family meal. And after a few minutes Spikeus and Sour Treat we're setting up decorations around the town giving out costumes to the pictures of pony of the town getting ready to make the night the most best nightmare night ever. And after appearing the whole town for nightmare night Sour Treat Spikeus Silverstream and Spikeus's and Silverstream's kids have finally made it to Sour Treat Sweet Muffins's home.

When Treat Spikeus Silverstream and Spikeus's and Silverstream's kids have finally made it to Sour Treat Sweet Muffins's home Sour Treat nocked on his cousin's door. Then Sour Treat's cousin Sweet Muffins answered the door into her surprise Sour Treat was standing there right in front of her home with Spikeus and his family with Sour Treat. And after seeing Spikeus and his family with Sour Treat Sweet Muffins said to Sour Treat" sour treat what are you doing here and why is Spikeus and his family with you?

Then Sour Treat said to Sweet Muffins" sweet muffins I'll explain to you later but can we come in? And hearing her cousin's question Sweet Muffins said to Sour Treat" sure Sour Treat you Spikeus's friendly to come in". Then Sour Treat and Spikeus's family were all in Sweet Muffins home. When Treat and Spikeus's family were all in Sweet Muffins home every creature who was at the party was shocked that Sour Treat was standing there in Sweet Muffins's home. And let me tell you everyone was shocked even Sweet Muffins's husband was shocked that Sour Treat was in his wife's home. When every creature was shocked that Sour Treat was in Sweet Muffins's home.

And seen that every creature was shocked that he was in Sweet Muffins's home Sour Treat turns his head to Sweet Muffin then said to her" sweet muffin I know you and the rest of your party guests are wondering why I'm here because it's not of a change of mind it's a change of heart I thought that if I celebrate this holiday it would only bring me heartache by remembering the day that I lost the most important ponies in my life but I realized even though the ponies who love you leave the love from the ponies never will leave your heart. And I realize that if you have love and a passion in your heart and if you have good friends with you you will live on through the ages and also I have one last thing to say".

Then Sour Treat started to sing this song.

Then the song ended and after the song ended Sour Treat said to Sweet Muffins" sweet muffins after banning nightmare night from this town you think the creatures of this town can forgive me for taking away this wonderful holiday from their children. Then Sweet Muffins said to Sour Treat" sour treat if I can forgive you then I am sure that all the creatures in this town will as long as you show the love for them within your heart. And you guys are wondering what about Sandbar and Smolder. And back at Smolder and Sandbar Smolder and Sandbar at the party with Sour Treat. When Sandbar and Smolder we're at the party Sandbar heard crying. When Sandbar heard crying Sandbar turn his head and saw that the crying was coming from Smolder.

When Sandbar saw that the crying was coming from Smolder Sandbar said to Smolder" Smolder are you crying? Then Smolder said to Sandbar" of course I'm not it's just that I got something in my eyes". Then Sandbar gave Smolder a look that says come on tell the truth. And after seeing the look on Sandbar Smolder said to him" okay fine but if you tell anyone I'll kick you in your stallion Hood so many times that you won't be able to have foals". And hearing the death threat that if he ever told any creature that she was crying that Smolder kick him in his stomach so much that he wouldn't be able to have foals Sandbar decided to keep Smolder's secret to himself. Then Sandbar look over to Sour Treat and saw him smiling while talking to the other creatures at the party. And after seeing Sour Treat talking to the other creatures at the party Sandbar said to Smolder" Smolder it looks like our job here is done looks like we get to go home. And knowing he knew everything about the story Smolder knew that their job was done.

And to Smolder's luck Sandbar was right because by showing a passion to every creature at the party sour treat had made friends easily with every creature in the party he even caught the affections for Spikeus's oldest daughter Fire Diamond. And after getting the friendship of the creatures at the party and the affections of Fire Diamond Sour Treat had also befriended the rest of the town. And after befriending the rest of the town sour treat new that by doing good deeds he could make the future be a happy one.

And with that statement the story was at its closing ending and with the story at its closing ending Sandbar Smolder and Sliverstrean got teleport out of the story and teleported them back to their home. And outside of the book Smolder and Sliverstrean landed back into Twilight library. After being teleported back into Twilight library the young six were all glad to be done with being trapped within that book. And being glad that they were done being trapped in that book Spike went over to Smolder and said so Smolder you have a thing for me". And wondering how Spike new Smolder ask Spike how he knew that she had a thing for him. Then Spike told Smolder that Twilight built a machine that would able to let them watch and hear everything that was happening in the book. And after hearing Spike's explanation about how he knew that she had a thing for him Spike said to smolder that she and Gallus could join his herd if they wanted to. And hearing that Spike wanted Gallus and Smolder to join his herd Twilight said to Spike" Spike you are not mating with Gallus unless you do one thing".

And hearing that Twilight wanted him to do something before he mated with Gallus Spike said to Twilight" okay Twilight what do you want me to do first? Then Twilight said to Spike" you gotta let me and my friends join your herd". A
And after hearing that Twilight and her friends want to join his herd Spike told Twilight that he didn't mind if she and her friends wanted to join his herd.

And after hearing that they had some you heard mates Yona said out loud" Yona has to say that Yona is glad that they are al out of book and that they won't ever have to do something like that again". And after hearing that from Yona the rest of the young six agreed with Yona about being glad that they were out of that book and knowing that they would never do something like that again. But unknown to young six and the main six they would be doing this type of adventure again.

And let me tell you my audience that story is a story is a story for another day

The end or is it

Vote time

Hey every creature it's like I said in the chapter before the last one you guys get to vote on who gets to play The ghost of nightmare nights pass and your options are
A Gallas

B Yona

C Ocellus

D Silverstream

Now guys get to vote on the next story I make options are

A. A changeling love mystery
B. Dragon crush
C. A unicorn marriage
D. Apple vs Griffin
E. Dragon fiance

So guys let me know your votes in the comments