Elements of a Good Buck (M/M)

by ExplicitEscritoire

Rating: mature
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Rainbow Dash, Romance, Fluttershy, Sex
Length: 1797

R63 Fluttershy (Butterscotch) and Rainbow Dash (Rainbow Blitz) practice the elements of a good buck.

(Warning! Here there be stallion x stallion porn! This is a M/M clopfic involving R63 version of both Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash. There's a much better explanation of why this story was written at the top of the actual story. Basically my friend in real life - who is a non-brony clop hater - requested this story. It's parodying the elements of a good cheer, and is making fun of the believe that women are always talking about emotional support and the such, whereas men are always talking and thinking about sex. I hope you enjoy, and again be warned that this is gay pony porn in literature form.)

If this shouldn't be listed as a Fluttershy x Rainbow Dash, I'd ask that the reviewer change it to whatever is appropriate for me :3 if you'd be so kind, Alexstrasza?

Published 2012-09-10 01:44:03 UTC
Last updated 2012-09-10 01:44:03 UTC

Chapter 1

The Elements of a Good Buck
By: Explicit Escritoire

“Right!” Rainbow Blitz shouted below as he flew above the shy yellow pony below him. “Now, what have we learned?”

Butterscotch stood below, contemplating the situation he was in. How did he always manage to get stuck into these awkward situations with Blitz? They'd been together for so long that Blitz was pretty much the only pony he trusted his inner voice with. He began to speak, confident in the presence of his friend from flight school. “Lots of control.”

“Good.” Blitz said in response, waiting for Butterscotch to continue as he paced in the air.

“Screaming and hollering.” Butterscotch began to show some shyness in his voice and expression as the reality of what was going to happen started to kick in.

“Yes! And most importantly?” Blitz was started to get a little excited at Butterscotch's confidence. This might actually happen for him!

“Passion.” Butterscotch said, his confidence issue slowly fading as he noticed the other pegasus' cock slipping out of his hood a little.

“Right! So, now that you know the elements of a good buck, let’s have one!” Blitz exclaimed, his excitement getting the better of him. He landed in front of his stallion friend, which is when he noticed his own cock dangling slightly as it pulled out of his hood, and he also noticed Butterscotch's doing the same.

“Oh, I-I don't know, Blitz...” Butterscotch said timidly, peaking glimpses at Blitz's shaft and feeling drool pooling inside of his mouth as he started to do everything he wanted to, only in his mind.

“Oh come on, Butters, it's gonna be fun! You haven't done it with another stallion yet, and I can see the way you're staring at it.” Blitz commented, moving his forehooves to the sides so that Butterscotch could get a better peek at him. It was so thick, and Butters could already see a bead of pre forming at the tip from Blitz's pure excitement.

“I-If it's what you want, too, B-blitz.” Butters said, lacking the confidence to truly express himself in this situation. His shyness was part of what attracted Blitz, though, and he knew it. If he just held on to his shy act, he would get what he wanted soon.

And so he did.

Butterscotch was pressed against one of the large trees near his home on the edge of Everfree Forest. His forehooves were braced high up on the tree and his back legs were spread apart, exposing both his hard shaft – currently pressed against the rough bark of the tree – and his tight flank hole, surrounded by his soft, large flank.

Rainbow Blitz was right behind him, nuzzling his cheek against Butter's soft flank and giving it gentle licks. Each lick solicited a soft moan from his shy stallion friend. Blitz began to move his nuzzling closer to the center of Butterscotch's flank, his nose wriggling gently against his tight little flank hole.

“Blitz~” was all that Butterscotch could muster between moans as he could feel his tight hole being prodded at. The rough feeling of Blitz's nose was soon replaced by the wet feeling of his tongue, which caused him to move forward suddenly from pleasure. This made Butter's cock rub against the roughness of the tree's bark, and a warm stream of cum jetted out of his rock hard cock, coating the tree in a straight line with warm, white cream.

Blitz took notice of the cream and he pulled his tongue away from Butterscotch's flank, moving over to the spot on the tree that had been painted in cum. He licked at the end of the line, following it back to where Butterscotch's cock was, giving that a few gentle licks as well. Blitz's tongue slid along the shaft of Butterscotch's cock until it reached his hood, where he switched back to his original position, tongue once again wriggling against that tight little hole.

Butterscotch pressed his cheek against the tree, closing his eyes and thoroughly enjoying the wet feeling between his legs. His eyes suddenly opened wide as he felt Blitz's tongue slip inside of him, wriggling around inside of him. He turned back, peeking at Blitz through half lidded eyes, his heart rate starting to pick up from the sight, thought and feeling of Blitz pleasing him so. As amazing as this felt, Blitz had lots of control over him.

Blitz pulled his tongue from Butterscotch's rear, moving forward and moving his forehooves up onto his pink-maned friend. He was so far up Butterscotch's body that his cock was pulled back, the shaft pressing between Butter's flank cheeks, pushing the wetness deeper in between his rear legs. “Did you enjoy my tongue, Butters?” Blitz asked, a surprisingly even more confident and smooth voice coming from his lips.

“Y-yes, Blitz. I-I loved it.” Butterscotch responded shyly, his cheeks completely red now from the reality of what was happening. He was about to speak again before he noticed Blitz pulling back, trying to move his cock into position for a moment before he successfully hooked it against Butterscotch's flank hole.

“I want you to tell me how bad you want my cock, Butters~” Blitz said, pushing forward and having his cock slip inside of Butterscotch's tight flank hole. It was much tighter than any stallion he'd been with before, which was evidence of his virginity. Thankfully, ponies could take the barrage of thrusts that other creatures in Equestria couldn't. His cock pressed further and deeper inside of Butterscotch, filling him up all the way to his hilt. He stopped where he was, though, nibbling on Butter's back where he could. “Well?”

Butterscotch's body was heating up everywhere. The new sensation was filling him with untold pleasure, far beyond what he honestly expected. Buck, he could even feel his flank squeezing down around Blitz's cock. It was almost too much for him to handle, and he could barely let out a whisper through all of the pleasure. “I-I w-want it....”

Blitz pulled his cock out of Butters until he could feel his tip slipping out, and then he pushed himself all the way back in with one swift thrust. He could feel his shaft being massaged the entire way in, and he could feel the trembles throughout Butterscotch's body. He didn't get the words he wanted at first, but he definitely got an earful of deep moans and groans.

“I-I want it!” Butters exclaimed, his voice still really soft, nothing compared to the moan that he'd let out a moment before. That was what Blitz wanted from him.

“Louder!” Blitz said dominantly, making the same motion as before, but rougher and faster. The same moans came, and he was pleased to hear Butterscotch's voice pick up as well.

“I want it!” Butters screamed. His usually soft voice disappeared for a moment, surprising himself that he could even speak that loud. When tempted with this kind of pleasure and torture at the same time, he seemed to lose control of his usually gentle tone.

“I want it...?” Blitz asked, pulling himself back out and waiting for his stallion friend to speak again before giving a few more rough thrusts.

“I want it, Blitz! Please!” Butters borderline screamed, but more in his usually soft tone. Blitz immediately gave the yellow pony what he craved, pushing his cock all the way in and getting a steady rhythm started, only to find himself stopping a moment later as Butterscotch's flank tightened so much that he could barely move. It was then he noticed how bad his friend was trembling.

“Oh, Blitz!” Butterscotch yelled out, feeling his entire body break out into pleasure. It started in his rear, and shifted to his cock. He hadn't even been touched, aside from one lick and the occasional rub against the tree, but he was cumming? He pressed himself hard against the tree, grinding his cock against the bark gently, his cum pouring out of his cock, giving the side of the tree a massive coating of white cream. He nearly collapsed as he came close to the end of his orgasm. Buck Blitz made him feel so good that he had him screaming and hollering...

“I'm gonna keep going, alright Butters? I want to get off inside you.” Blitz said in that confident voice. He looked to Butterscotch who was looking back with warm, slightly tired eyes.

“I-I want to s-see this time” Butters said, wriggling away from Blitz, who was a little surprised to see the usually shy pony taking a little command for once. Butterscotch turned and rested his back against the tree, looking down at Blitz's cock and then back up into his eyes. “Whenever you're ready...”

Blitz nodded with a smile, moving forward and pushing himself back inside of his friend. The new angle made it a little more difficult to get inside of Butter's flank, but it paid off so well. Butterscotch was twice as tight now with the constraints the position put on him, and that doubled Blitz's pleasure. The two of them moved in time with each others bodies, each thrust being paid in full with grinding and the occasional moan. As the two continued, their bodies began to heat and their moans and groans came more and more often.

Blitz was the first to cum, his body shivering as the pleasure surged through him. He suddenly felt his legs grow weaker as he filled his pegasus friend to the brim with his warm cum, which in turn pushed Butterscotch over the edge as well. Butterscotch, not expecting the sudden burst into climax, was helpless to prevent his cock from spray stream after stream of cum all over the cyan pony above him. Within moments, there was a huge mess of sticky cum between them, slowly dripping from Blitz's stomach, down onto Butterscotch's. Butterscotch stared into Rainbow Blitz's eyes, his lustful gaze now turned to one of passion...

Butterscotch let a forehoof play in the sticky mess on his stomach before he pulled it up to his lips, giving it a gentle lick. She said to himself in the softest voice, “Mmmh, Yay~”