Crystal Love (Shining Armor x Thorax)

by BluFox

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Shining Armor, Sex, Thorax, Twilight Sparkle, Profanity, Pharynx, Slice of Life, Anthro, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Princess Cadance
Length: 4767

Thorax has had a crush on Shining since he moved into the empire. But, Shining's married. How will Thorax be able to show his affection towards him? Find out in Crystal Love!

Thorax has had a crush on Shining since he moved into the empire. But, Shining's married. How will Thorax be able to show his affection towards him? Thorax goes through many stages of problems, hardships, locations and creatures, Just to be with Shining Armor forever. Thorax swears to do anything to be with Shining, But What Will it cost him?
Find out in Crystal Love!

Published 2021-09-23 00:50:00 UTC
Last updated 2021-11-10 03:59:43 UTC

Feelings for Shining

It's been a few weeks since I've been accepted around the empire. The Crystal ponies are so nice! I was really bummed out Spike had to leave though and wouldn't be back for a while. Cadence was sweet but she seemed way too stressed with the empire to hang out with me. Shining Armor though, He was a lot more fun. He checked on me every few hours to make sure I was staying calm, especially during these past weeks. I began to have these thoughts though, They felt like love I had taken, But I had never taken any before so it didn't make sense. I learned a few days ago from Twilight that I have romantic feelings for Shining!

~~Day 25~~

"Hey Thorax, You awake?" I had heard Shining call from the other side of the door.

I groaned, "Yeah, I'm up Shining. I'll be down soon"

"Okay bud." I heard as hoofsteps faded away.

I rolled out of bed and looked at myself in the mirror and thought,
'Why would he want someone like me? He has a wife for Changling Sake!'

I chuckled at my little exchange in my head as I thought about what I'd do today. Maybe I'd go visit some of the ponies, maybe even see if I could visit Ponyville! That'd be something fun!

"Thorax!" I heard Cadence call out.

"Yeah?" I yelled back.

"I'm leaving for a few hours, Shining is downstairs waiting. Have fun!" Cadence said as she walked away.

"I-Okay" I yelled back.

A day alone with Shining? This can't end well. What if I say something wrong? Do something bad?

I stopped in my step when I realized Shining had been waiting downstairs alone for 5 minutes now. I quickly walked out my room door and made my way downstairs.

I entered the Crystal Hall, Where a giant table was placed for Royalty or Other guests in the castle. I was luckily a guest so I was allowed there. I saw Shining organizing books on one of the shelves.

'Those feelings again, I can't stop them' I thought as I felt my face heat up..

Shining turned around, Seeing me standing in the doorway, "Thorax! Almost scared me bud. Have a seat"

I flew over to a seat next to Shining and started to eat. The food was always amazing, but I couldn't help but keep blushing around Shining.

"Is the food good?" Shining asked, Seemingly wanting to break the silence.

"It's amazing! The food is always amazing, Shining. You don't have to ask me every time we eat" I chuckled.

"I was just extra curious today because I made it. Cadence and our chefs didn't have much time to make breakfast today so I cooked instead. Trying to make sure you're staying fed" Shining said, Seeming very content with my answer.

"Where did Cadence have to go anyways?" I asked.

"She had to run to Ponyville, Something going wrong with Twilight. I think she said it was a sickness. Flu or Cold probably." Shining said, Continuing at his food.

"Oh, I hope she's okay" I said.

"She'll be fine, My Twily never let's sicknesses get to her" Shining said.

I admired his enthusiasm with this type of stuff, Especially with his family. I never had many people around me when I was at the hive. I had my brother, Pharynx, but he always berated me for being "Soft."

"Thorax? You're staring" Shining said, Waving a hoof in front of me.

"Oh Shoot, I'm so sorry!" I said, Covering my face the best I could with my hooves.

"It's Okay bud, You okay?" Shining asked in his sweet and caring voice.

"Yeah Yeah, Just still a bit tired" I lied, I was just trying to get myself to stop blushing like crazy.

"I did hear you last night, You sounded scared. Wanna talk about it?" Shining asked.

"Just more nightmares, Nothing new" I lied again, I had a nightmare that Chrysalis visited and hurt the Crystal Ponies.

"Hm, Okay. Well, You seem finished, you can go and get some rest if you'd like" Shining said, Taking mine and his plates to a nearby sink.

"Sure, I'll be in my room if you need me" I said, Flying towards the door.

"Oh wait, I just remembered that the designers are gonna be here around 3 to look at your room to redesign it. So have it cleaned by then, okay?" Shining said, Rinsing off the plates.

"Okay Thanks, Shining" I said.

"Of Course, Thorax" Shining said back.

I flew up to my room and shut the door once I entered it.

"I almost ruined everything!" I slightly yelled so Shining couldn't hear me.

I always had a staring problem but this was the 6th time it's happened this week alone.

"He must think I'm some weirdo now that likes to look at him!" I said again, but then agreed that I liked to see him.

I looked out my window and looked at the Crystal Ponies surrounding the Heart.

"What am I gonna do? I can't just tell him I feel this way. I can't keep lying either. What should I do?" I asked myself.

Thorax?

Confessions

"Thorax?" A voice asked behind me.

I turned around quickly and saw Twilight standing there. She seemed to have a lot of scrolls and letters but most of them seemed to be trash.

"Who are you talking about?" Twilight asked, Seemingly invested in what I just said.

"Um..Just a random Crystal Pony. You wouldn't know them." I chuckled, Hoping that it was convincing enough.

"Thorax, I know it's someone different. Is it Spike? You two have seemed really close as of recently." Twilight asked, Setting her bag on my bed.

"no, it's your brother" I mumbled under my breath.

"Couldn't catch that" Twilight said, Raising a hoof to her ear.

"It's...your brother, Twilight." I said, Becoming a blushing mess.

"What?, Oh My goodness, You have a crush on Shining?" Twilight squealed, Still staying quiet though.

"Look Twilight, I know he's married and everything but I can't help but feel this whenever I'm around him or even think about him. Is there anyway for these feelings to.. go away?" I asked, Seemingly putting her into a thinking trance.

It took a few minutes for Twilight to gather her thoughts because she's always been the type to think of every possibility and outcome.

"To be honest Thorax, I don't think there's any safe way to get rid of these feelings you have. Maybe talk them out with Shining? Maybe that'll help!" Twilight suggested.

"What? That's…," I sighed as I thought, "Not a bad idea"

"Great! I'll go see Shining and then I'll come get you to talk about your feelings for him, Okay?" Twilight said, Lifting her bag on her back with her magic.

"Okay" I answered.

Twilight left the room as I started to prance around again. I was terrified of what Shining would say. Would he kick me out? Not be my friend anymore? Would he make me go back to the hive?

I stopped as I looked in the mirror again. Shining wouldn't be that cruel, would he?

~~30 Minutes Later~~

"Thorax? You still awake?" I heard Twilight call from the other side of the door.

"Yeah, I'm coming" I said, Walking to the door and opening it.

I opened it and was greeted not only by Twilight, But Cadence. 'She told her, didn't she?'

"Thorax, I have been informed that you have feelings for my husband. Why is that?" Cadence said in a sweet but rather monotone voice.

"I..I mean, He's sweet, caring, loving, adorable, admirable, cute, He just has this impact on me that causes me to blush like crazy whenever I'm around him" I said, While blushing like crazy.

"I always adore those traits about him as well, and that's why I will allow you and Shining, If he says yes, To go on a few dates and maybe do more than that if they go well. Under one condition though, You never cross his boundaries. Deal?" Cadence said.

"Deal!" I said, Fluttering my wings without even thinking about what she'd just said. I get to date Shining Armor, That's all that mattered.

"Well, I'm pretty sure he will say yes, Especially since Cadence said that she's okay with it." Twilight said, Giving her genuine smile she always gave towards me.

"Well, We two will stay up here, as you go ask. Okay?" Cadence said, Entering my room.

"Okay, Oh yeah. The designers are supposed to be here soon right?" I asked.

"Yup, We'll clean your room for you, You just owe both of us." Twilight said.

"Okay, Thank you Twilight. And, Thank you Cadence for this opportunity" I said, Scratching at my rough skin on my hoof.

"Of course, Thorax. Hope it ends well" Cadence said, Picking up some trash with her magic.

"Me too" I said as I left the room and closed my door.

I headed downstairs as I thought of every possibility that this could end in. Yet I only thought of one where I believe it would be true. He would reject me. Now, That's just me being anxious right? Hopefully.

I arrived at the doors of the Crystal Hall. I was just here about 1 and a half ago and I'm already back. Well, Here go nothing.

I opened the doors, Greeted by a very clean Hall. It's never been this clean though. I noticed Shining slowly pulling something off of a shelf as It seemed really heavy. He pulled it off, but he started tensing up. Without thinking, I used my magic to quickly help him lay it on the ground. Afterwards, He turned around and saw me standing as I had to breathe from lifting that. I had never used my magic like that before.

"Thanks bud, I thought I'd end up dropping it without help but I thought I had it. Do you need something? You never come back to the Hall until lunch" Shining said, In his sweet voice yet again.

"Um..Yeah actually. I do need to ask you something" I said as my blush fest began again.

"What's up?" Shining said, Taking a seat in front of me.

"I...do you want to date?" I said, Much more quietly than expected.

"Pardon?" Shining said.

"Do you want to date?" I partially yelled, Just trying to get it over with.

I noticed Shining starting to turn a slight shade of red. Is he blushing? I started to walk away since I figured that meant no.

"Is Cadence okay with it?" I heard Shining ask.

"Yeah, She is. She said as long as I don't cross your boundaries, she's okay with it" I said enthusiastically.

Shining sighed, "Yeah, Why not? Let's try it and see where it goes. I think I have the perfect idea to start our new relationship" Shining said, Placing a hoof over my back and walking me towards the castle's front doors.

"Remember the Crystal Fair?" Shining asked.

"Oh um.. Yeah I do. Weren't you and Cadence going together this year?" I asked, not wanting him to put me over Cadence.

"Nope, She had to cancel because of her Ponyville trip. She's gonna be leaving again here soon with Twilight. So, are you okay with going?" Shining asked, Stopping and looking at me.

"Uh..Um…Sure" I said.

'C'mon Thorax, Gotta take a breather' I Thought as I took a breath.

"Yes, I wouldn't mind going" I said in a much more calm tone.

"That's the spirit buddy, Let's go" Shining said as we continued towards where the festival would take place tomorrow.

'What could go wrong?'

Day with Shining

~~Day 26~~
Shining and I made our way towards the festival early since he wanted us to get in early. We still could've gotten in front of everyone later since he's literally the prince but he wanted the best for me in our new relationship. This was still way too surreal for me but I found him sweet and compassionate so I let him take control of what we did.

"We're here, Thorax!" Shining said as we arrived in front of the gates to the festival.

The festival's area was ten times bigger than when Twilight and her friends saved the empire with it. It was huge now with many more activities for everypony to do.

"Wanna head in?" Shining asked.

"Sure, I just...What will ponies say if they find out we're dating?" I asked back.

"We'll say that we are. Cadence is the Princess of Love, Everypony knows she has a very open mind when it comes to this sort of stuff. Think of it as a poly relationship" Shining said, Clearly attempting to comfort me.

"Um..Okay. I'll try" I said, Giving him a small smile.

"Thorax, I know this is new, Especially for you, But I want you to know that even in a relationship, Just think of it as we're just great friends today, Okay?" Shining said.

My mood changed almost immediately, I always thought romantic relationships meant to act differently around each other. Good thing Shining is my other.

Shining seemed content with my mood change. We continued past the gates after the ticket stand pony let us both through.

~~4 hours later~~
We did a lot of activities before ponies started flooding in. The only activity we skipped was Magic Race.

Magic Race consisted of 4 ponies in their only lanes and they had to use their magic to get to the other side. Only Magic that was banned was teleportation. We skipped because I knew little to no magic so I was bound to lose. When the festival got too crowded, We decided to go home and rest. It had been about 4 hours so we still had a lot of the day left to waste.

"Thorax, Wanna grab some grub? We barely ate at the festival" Shining asked.

"Sure. But afterwards, Can we go home and rest? I'm really tired" I asked.

Having only slept 3 hours last night wasn't a very good idea, Especially with going to the festival. It was fun though, Don't get me wrong, Also being able to be with Shining all day long as romantic partners is a dream come true.

"Of Course, Thorax. I actually have an idea for when you rest" Shining said, Nudging my shoulder.

"Oh Okay! Is it a good idea?" I asked, Confused at what he meant.

"Oh yeah, It's a perfect idea" Shining answered.

I was still confused but didn't bother to ask. All I wanted was some food then some rest. I'll be much happier then.

~~15 minutes later~~

Shining and I arrived at a small food shop next to the castle so it wouldn't be much of a walk after we ate. We walked up to the counter and were almost immediately greeted by bows of everypony working. Shining Waved his hoof, Which I knew indicated that no one had to be professional at this time.

"What may I get you two?" The kind crystal cashier asked.

"How about 2 hayburgers and some crystal fries. That okay Thorax?" Shining asked, Looking down, only to realize I was busy staring at the beautiful aquarium that had a lot of fishes.

Shining seemed to continue as I looked at the fishes. They were really cool and I barely saw them. They even let me name one of them because I was so interested in them. I named them Reae. It seemed like a fitting name for a fish.

I suddenly felt a pair of hooves wrap around me and immediately felt my face heat up. I looked and saw a blue main and white fur. It was Shining.

"Hey, Are you enjoying the fishes?" Shining asked in a rather soothing voice.

"Yeah, But Shining, We're in public. Why can't we do this stuff at home? I don't want people thinking you're cheating" I said.

I like having him around, Especially this close. But in public, It's a different story. He's really sweet and caring, So I don't want him being hated by the whole empire.

"It's fine, and besides, I have other plans for what we're doing at home" Shining said, He still used his soothing voice which made me feel butterflies in my stomach.

"Shining Armor!" The cashier called.

"I'll go grab our food, Wanna eat at home or here?" Shining asked, Letting go of me.

"We can eat at home if you want" I answered.

"Alright, Be right back" Shining said as he walked towards the counter.

I stood for a bit as Shining got our food. Whenever he was so close to me, I felt like this is something that could go forever but I don't know if it can. I wonder if Shining wants this to last.

"C'mon Thorax" Shining called.

I Immediately pranced over to Shining and he put his hoof over my back before we left. I may ask Cadence what the "Hoof over the Back" Gesture is. I don't know. All I know right now is Rest and Eating.

Shortly after leaving, We arrived at the Castle. We both knew that, Besides guards, We were alone. Cadence and Twilight were in Ponyville so it was just us. As we walked, I realized we walked past the Crystal Hall.

"Shining, We walked past the hall. Where are we eating?" I asked.

"My Room. Well, Mine and Cadences. Since she's not home, I figured it'd be a change to be in there with someone else" Shining said.

"What?" I yelled, Leaving Shining's grasp.

"What's wrong?" Shining asked.

"I...I can't go into yours and Cadence's Room. Isn't that like an invasion of privacy?" I ranted.

"Thorax, Calm down. As long as one of us allows someone in there, They're allowed. That's why it's okay for you to be in there. Also, You're my boyfriend so it makes sense" Shining responded.

"Oh. Sorry about my rant. I just didn't want to betray yours or Cadence's trust" I said.

"It's okay, Thorax. So, are you still okay with our room?" Shining asked.

"Yeah, I am. I'm just wondering what you want to do after we eat" I asked.

"Oh, You'll see" Shining said, Giving me a wink.

I didn't even answer before we continued towards his room. I was blushing heavily the entire rest of the walk there.

We arrived in front of the doors of his and Cadence's room. He opened them with a specific lock number and the doors swung open.

It was beautifully decorated. It had two sides to it. A pink side and a blue side. My guess was Pink was Cadence's and Blue was Shining's.

"I feel like Cadence went a bit overboard with decorations, but I didn't say anything because I didn't want to make her mad" Shining shrugged.

"Now, We eat?" I asked.

"I want to do something first, Get on the bed" Shining seemingly demanded.

"Perfect"

Relationships and A Problem

(Author here: Hi, I'm Blu. Now, Before you think Thorax is a minor in this fanfic. N O, He is not. My headcanon for Changlings is they grow up 3 times as fast as Ponies. Thorax was born 9 years before this story, Hence making him 24. Changlings normally learn about intercourse and more adult things around 30-33. Shining is 28 and Cadence is 30-31. Mane 6 is about 18 and Spike is about 8-9. Hope that clears things up. Back to the story!)

"Shining?" I asked hesitantly.

Shining stood over me. I turned a bright blue from blushing so hard. I closed my eyes as I felt vulnerable to anything. But What Shining did was not what I expected.
He hugged me.

"You didn't think I'd actually have sex with you without permission? It's been almost two days anyways so it would've been too soon. I can say though, I'm comfortable with this relationship to keep going. Now, You said you wanted to rest, right?" Shining explained.

I had only ever heard of what 'sex' is from Pharynx and I was still and am still too young to learn about it.

Shining sat down next to me and handed me my food and started eating his. I was dumbfounded by what just happened. I sat up and looked at Shining. He looked embarrassed. I wanted a way to comfort him but I wasn't sure how.

'Now, If someone you're together with needs comforting. Here's some tips; Kissing them to show how much you care, Hugging them, Telling them how much you care, or even all three. Hope these help Thorax.
~Twilight'

That's it! You really are helpful Twilight. I saw Shining was still embarrassed from the whole exchange. So, I followed Twilight's advice. I Hugged Shining, Making him jump, which I felt bad for to be honest. Then I spoke.

"Shining, Even though it's only been almost two days, I can say that I love you. You're the only pony that's been able to make me this happy in forever. I know that you and Cadence are married and eventually we'll have to go our separate ways but I just want you to know that…" I stopped as I looked his cheek.

'Whew, Here goes nothing' I thought as I pressed my lips against Shinings cheek.

It wasn't very long as I got embarrassed by it but I still held him tightly. He seemed shocked but also flustered at the same time.

"I love you too, Thorax" Shining said as he looked at me.

Shining gave me a very adorable but genuine smile as he hugged me back.

I yawned, "I'm gonna go get some rest"

I let go but Shining didn't. "Shining, I need to go sleep for a bit"

Shining gave me puppy dog eyes. 'Dang it, Not those'

"Want me to stay here and rest?" I asked.

"Yesss" Shining said as he pulled me back into bed.

I blushed heavily as I was against his chest. He was really…
Really…
Warm.

~~Shining's POV~~
Thorax fell asleep on me. He's so cute when he sleeps, so I'm not complaining.

I slowly laid down, hoping not to wake him and shut my eyes. This is one of the best things to happen to me. He is one of the best things to happen to me. I want this to last forever, but I know Cadence will eventually get jealous. I just hope Thorax would take it easy as he knows the same.

~~Cadence's POV~~
I entered mine and Shinings room, Only to find the two Lovebirds asleep on the bed. I can't get mad since Thorax's room is still being remade but why on the bed. We have a couch after all. I left so as not to disturb them as they looked very peaceful, Especially Thorax.

"Princess, A blizzard is coming from the west!" A Guard pony called out.

"What? Is the Crystal Heart okay?" I Asked quickly

"It's safe, But what's the source of it, if it's not Sombra?" The Guard Asked.

"I don't know, I'll have Twilight and-" I was cut off.

"Hello, Princess" A familiar voice said.

"Chrysalis" I said bluntly

"You remember me, Perfect" I heard the Changling queen say before everything turned black.

Return to The Hive

~~Thorax POV~~
I Woke up after sleeping for about 15 minutes by screaming and banging. I shot up onto my Hooves and peeked through a Peephole on the door.

Chrysalis….

"What's she doing back?" I Asked Myself outloud

"Thorax? Why did you leave?" Shining said in a very drowsy voice, Maybe he was tired as well.

"Um.. Nothing. Just um…" I couldn't think of an excuse until she called out.

"Thorax! I know you're here, traitor!" Chrysalis called out.

"Thorax, Chrysalis is here?!" Shining shot up.

"Yeah, But we can't do anything. She's ten times as powerful as both of us combined" I exclaimed

"What About Cadence?" Shining asked

"I...I think Chrysalis already got to her. I'm sorry" I said, Scratching my hoof on the ground

"Thorax, It's not your fault. Don't apologize. I'm sorry that she's back. Go to Ponyville and get Twilight and the rest. They can stop her" Shining said, Hugging me

"No! I'm not leaving you here alone. I can't lose you" I said, Hugging Him back

"Thorax, Look at me" Shining said

I looked at him and he gave me his sweet smile he had given me earlier. I then felt him press his lips against mine. This was...new.

"You won't lose me and I won't lose you. I Promise" Shining said

I was blushing more than ever but I spoke, "Okay, Please hide or be careful"

"Of Course I Will, Sweetie" Shining said, Giving me a wink again.

I gave a smile back and flew out the room's window. I just hope that Shining will be-

What?

"Thorax!"

Shining?

"Finally found you, Traitor"

Chrysalis?

"Get away from him!"

Shining, Stop. I'm not worth it

"Just wait till your brother knows who you really are"

"Thorax!"

I love you...Shining

~~3 hours later~~
"Hey punk! Wake up!" A familiar voice yelled

I then felt a hoof punch me, Shooting me awake.

"Ow! That was….Pharynx?" I asked

"Yeah, Who else would it have been?" Pharynx said sarcastically

"Pharynx, I have to get back to the Crystal-" I was Interrupted by Pharynx punching me again

"What The hell were you thinking?! Do you know how worried I was when you ran off?" Pharynx yelled, Causing me to cower

"I didn't think you'd care. You always hurt me before I ran!" I said, Standing my ground

"Oh, So since that dumb Empire took you in, You've become all tough shit?" Pharynx said.

I never liked when Pharynx swore. It always meant he was past his limit. But this time, I wasn't scared of him. He and Chrysalis took me away from my boyfriend and this time, I was the one past my limit.

"No! I'm still who I was before, it's just I'm not scared of you anymore, Pharynx. You took me away from the ponies I called family and you always said that you'd always have my back! You told me this after Mom died! After everyone we cared was killed by Chrysalis! You're not my brother, Pharynx! You're just a bully" I said, preparing myself for a beating.

I felt a pair of rough hooves wrap around me. Pharynx was hugging me. This was new, He had never hugged me like this before.

"Listen, I know what I said and I've tried to hold it. I love you, Thorax. You're just so soft that I get blamed for not teaching you. I'm scared of losing my position as a guard" Pharynx let go of me.

"Go" He said.

"What?" I asked

"Go back to your family, The ones that care for you. I'm staying here but you go" Pharynx said, Pushing me along

"Thank you" I nodded

"No problem, Bro" Pharynx said

I flew off, Luckily no one saw me but I realized that I couldn't go back to the empire. I'd put them all in danger. I'll put Shining in danger.

I'm staying in the Everfree Forest. Maybe the Zebra there could help.

Revamping and Restarting

Hello, Blu here! I'm going to be taking a break from this story for a while and will be continuing it at a later date, which is to be determined. No, This story is not cancelled nor will it be continuing.

What I mean is, I'll be restarting it from scratch. Chapters, Story, The whole 9 yards.

The story of Shining and Thoraxs romance will continue later on. For now, It's good to say this won't be continuing for another 2-3 months or so.

Motivation sucks but the story will continue later down the line.

One story change will be the Crystal Fair. It will take a bit longer for, not only the Crystal fair to take place, but for Shining and Thorax to date.

I've realized I need to put more space in between when and what happens in fics like this.

A few fics besides a remastered of this is as follows:
Questions and Confessions (Gallus x Sandbar)

TBD (Thunderlane x Soarin)

TBD (Garble x Spike) (THIS WILL ONLY BE FLUFF AND A FRIENDSHIP BETWEEN THE TWO DRAGONS)

That's all I have right now but besides this, I have nothing else to share for a while.

FYI: Remastered Crystal Love will come before any of the other fics first.

Bye guys!