Changling King conquered by Beauty?

by Timothy1509

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Thriller, Sex, Spike, Slice of Life, Thorax, Twilight Sparkle, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 3729

The Changeling King Thorax gives the mane six and Spike a tour around his Hive.

The Changeling King Thorax, has sent invitations to his friends known as the mane six and Spike to his Hive for an invitation so that he could your them around his Kingdom to see how it is going and what it is like. However, during the tour, Thorax was attracted to one beautiful mare, and that beautiful mare is Twilight Sparkle the Princess of Friendship. Will the Changeling King be able to win the hearts of the young princess?

New story! This story will be my last Twirax story, I hope you all will enjoy it! Also, I do not own My Little Pony, it belongs to Hasbro, and the coverart I am using belongs to my great friend Rhino932 Toon on DeviantArt.

Published 2021-09-23 12:10:00 UTC
Last updated 2021-09-23 12:10:00 UTC

The grand tour

Ponyville

In Ponyville, the ponies of the happy and beautiful town were all seen having a stroll through town along with their friends and families, or just having a chat and doing their jobs as usual in the merriment town of theirs where friendship is spread and taught by the one and only princess Twilight Sparkle.

In a library in the town however, a young alicorn princess named Twilight Sparkle was seen looking at her reflection with the help of her mirror, she was seen wearing a beautiful blue dress that she ordered in one dress shop, her hair was tied and she has put makeup on her too.

The reason behind this is due to the princess of friendship as well as her friends receiving an invitation from the changeling King Thorax himself offering a huge grand tour of his Hive where there will be fun and many more. Therefore, she has decided to dress well for the occasion due to it being the first time visiting the hive which would be a great experience for the young mare to learn new things. Although the fashioning and the dress is a little bit too much but, at least it'll be appropriate.

"Alright, I'm done." Twilight said looking at herself in the mirror with a satisfied expression. Then, the friendship princess heard the sound of her library door opening. The princess looked behind her and saw her friends walking in.

"Oh hello girls." Twilight greeted with a smile. Her friends were beyond shocked by the makeup and dress Twilight was wearing.

"Whoa Twilight, what is all of that?" Applejack asked.

"Oh, it's just the dress and fashion that I ordered in a dress shop." Twilight replied simply.

"Although I do admire your sense in fashion but, don't you think that it is too much?" Rarity asked "We're just going on a tour around Thorax's Hive, not a fashion show." She said logically.

Rainbow Dash was seen covering her muzzle with her right hoof while snickering due to how preposterous and hilarious Twilight looks in that funny dress and makeup, she looks like she is enrolling in a stage play or something but, she couldn't make fun of her, she is her friend after all.

"I know Rarity but, I just got this dress so therefore, it wouldn't hurt to wear it once right?" She asked, and Rarity just shrugged. "Anyways, are you girls ready to go to the changeling Hive?" She asked.

"You bet I am!" Pinkie exclaimed in an enthusiastic tone.

"Then what are we waiting for? Lets go!"

After that, Twilight walked to her friends. When she got to them, they all exited the library and began to embark on their journeys to the Changeling Hive. Although the dress that Twilight is wearing is a bit long and she could potentially step on it an strip over but, she is able to manage it, after all, she does have a lot of dresses.

However, during their walk in Ponyville, many stallions and mares were seen staring at the friendship princess Twilight Sparkle with perplexed expressions due to the dress that she is wearing, is there some occasion happening or something? However, some stallions and mares were snickering at how ridiculous the princess looked in that dress.

Even though Twilight did took notice some of her subjects laughing at her due to the dress that she is wearing but, she didn't take it seriously, she can disregard things easily.

Changeling Hive

In the Changeling Hive, the changelings of the town were seen having a stroll around town as well as doing their jobs like usual in their Kingdom. Life was steady for the changelings like the ponies.

At the front gates of the Changeling Hive however, the Changeling King Thorax was seen standing at the front gates of his Kingdom waiting for his friends Twilight, Rarity, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, and Applejack to come over for a visit after he sent invitations to them all, Spike was visiting the dragon's land so therefore, he couldn't attend. Luckily, Pharynx knows about this little thing that he has done and he gave permission for him to do it as long as his friends does not enter any restricted areas that only royals like them, and the guards could have access to, and Thorax complied with his order, after all, if he disobeyed, he would anger his brother which would be daunting.

"I really hope they come." Thorax said to himself. "And I also hope they would enjoy themselves here." He added, he has done his best to make this place as exquisite as he could.

Then on cue, the changeling King heard the sound of hoof steps coming towards him. Thorax looked forward and saw his friends walking towards him.

"Hello everypony!" Thorax greeted.

When the mane six made it to Thorax, they all greeted him by saying hello and how he is doing and he just replied with a simple 'I'm fine, thank you'. However, just as the changeling King Thorax looked behind the five mares, he saw something that made him blush slightly, at the back was Twilight Sparkle wearing a blue dress with her hair tied in a fashionable way, and she had lipsticks on her lips, she was just absolutely pulchritudinous.

"Wow, Twilight's beautiful." Thorax thought with a small blush "But, wouldn't this be a bit too much." He finished.

"Hey Thorax, why are your cheeks so red?" Rainbow Dash asked in a perplexed tone.

When Thorax heard her, he immediately shook his head and snapped out of it. After that, he shot the pegasus mare a sheepish expression.

"Oh uh... nothing, I was just a bit hot." Thorax said with a sheepish smile but, Rainbow Dash wasn't convinced due to it not being that hot today but, she shrugged it off "Anyways, are you all ready for the tour?" He asked them.

"You bet we are!" Pinkie exclaimed enthusiastically.

"Ah can't wait to see how you renovated your Hive after Chrysalis's control." Applejack said.

"I hope that your Kingdom is exquisite." Rarity said.

"I hope that it'll be awesome in there!" Rainbow Dash said.

"Don't worry girls, all of you will find something that suits you all to your likings." Thorax said.

Then, without any further delays, Thorax guided them through the front gates of the Changeling Hive and to the front doors of his Hive where they will all enter. When they made it to the front doors of the Changeling Hive, the guards guarding the front doors both stepped aside and pushed the doors opened for the King and the mane six.

"Thank you."

The guards saluted and the changeling King and the mane six all entered the Hive, when they were in, the elements of harmony were amaizng by how big and beautiful the hallway was. It was dark and scary in the past when Chrysalis ruled it but now, it is nothing short of beautiful and attractive due to the renovations that Thorax made with the help of his subjects.

"Wow, now this place sure is attractive." Rarity said.

"Thank you Rarity, the hallways took a while for me and my subjects to renovate." Thorax told them. "The town took at least three months to do as well due to me needing to do many calculations." He finished and the mane six were astonished by how hard-working the Changeling King was.

King Thorax and the mane six's first stop was the town, in the town there were countless of Changelings seen shopping for groceries near food stands, having a stroll through town with their young drones, playing with each other, having a chat, working and many more. There were also guards stationed here to corroborate that there were no bad circumstances occuring in the busy crowd.

"This everypony is the town where my changeling subjects shop for groceries, work and many more." Thorax said "Our foods include a wide variety of fruits, vegetables, spaghetti, lasagne and many more." He finished.

The mane six were beyond astonished by King Thorax's statement that he had presented to them all, the changelings sure do have a taste in healthy and highly nutritious foods as their staple foods in their own hive, this means that they are living a very vigorous life in their Kingdom.

"That's a very good thing Thorax, nutritions are significant to your health." Applejack said.

"Agreed."

"Thanks girls." Thorax said with a smile "Now, let's move on to our next area shall we?" He asked.

The mane six nodded and Thorax began to guide them all to the next area of the Changeling Hive.

The next stop was the work out station area or, the gym to be precise, the place is located on the ground floor area of the Hive, to get there, the changelings would have to take an elevator down to the basement floor. Thorax had to take the mane six down to the gym with the stairs due to the elevator only having the capacity of five changelings only, luckily, the staircase also used as a fire escape was not that cramped. When they were in the gym, the mane six were amazed by how big it was with all of the fitness equipments for exercise, five water fountains for hydration and many more. Rainbow Dash was the one who was mostly astonished.

"This here is the Changeling Hive's gym where my changeling subjects do exercise with many fitness equipments to ameliorate their physical and mental health." Thorax said.

"Wow, now this place is awesome!" Rainbow Dash exclaimed with a smile.

"Now, I bet that all of your changeling subjects would be free from ailments if they all keep up their adequate exercising." Applejack said with a satisfied expression.

"I know, that's one of the most crucial reasons of maintaining a good physical health." Thorax told them, and Applejack nodded in agreement.

"Hey Thorax, do you think that I can come here to do some physical exercises please?" Rainbow Dash asked.

"Sure." Thorax replied with a nod.

Rainbow Dash hovered happily when she heard that she is permitted to do exercise here, this would be a breeze for her if she wants to work out and get strong.

"Always very demanding." Twilight thought with a roll of her eyes.

After the gym, Thorax brought the mane six to an area located outside of the Hive, in this particular and significant area of the Hive, there were Changelings seen growing crops, planting seeds in the dirt, pouring water on the seeds and covering them too, some were also seen collecting the crops and bringing them to the Hive. This area is known as the farming area, it is where the changeling farmers grow and plant crops for healthy nutritious foods.

"This is the farming area where my farmers grow crops for the town and my subjects." Thorax said "When the crops are fully grown, the farmers collect them and send them to the market for selling purposes for my subjects." He delineated.

The mane six were astonished by the sight of how big the farm is as well as how hard working the changelings are. With a farm this big, the changelings could grow dozens of crops and send lots of vegetables and fruits to the town where the citizens could buy them. Applejack was the one who was the most flabbergasted one due to her being a farm pony, the way the changelings are working hard on throwing crops for the citizens reminds her of the time she farmed for food back in her home.

"Wow Thorax, ah am impressed." Applejack said "You guys sure are hard working." She said.

"Thanks Applejack." Thorax said with a smile.

"Wow, with this much food, you can even feed Ponyville!" Twilight said with a smile which made Thorax chuckle, and he blushed once more due to her elegance.

Once Thorax has finished showing the mane six the farm, he has brought them to their next and final destination of the tour of his Hive, the final place that he has brought them to is, the Changeling Hive library.

"This, everypony is the library where my changeling subjects who are in their adolescents, adulthood and many more read books of their interests." Thorax told them.

The mane six were all flabbergasted by the sight of how many books there are in the library, this place probably has everything that a pony needs for knowledge in order to become sagacious in something they are interested in learning. However, Twilight suddenly got too hyper and ran forward into the library.

"Oh my Celestia! Look at all of these books!"

The changelings in the library were irked due to the alicorn mare's behaviour in the library, the library is suppose to be a quiet place for studying purposes not, a party area. The mane six including Thorax were a bit worried about Twilight currently breaking the rules. Therefore, the changeling King decided to stop her. He walked towards the young mare to tell her that she is breaking the rules of the library.

"Hey Twilight." Thorax called her.

"Huh?" Twilight asked. But suddenly, the young mare has slipped on her dress and was about to land face first on the wooden floor. "Ahhh!" She screamed.

Miraculously, Thorax was able to catch her in the nick of time before she has hit the floor, and now, Thorax was currently carrying Twilight in a dip position from the fall. The sudden contact has made them both blush.

"Wow, he is handsome." Twilight thought.

"She is so pulchritudinous and cute." Thorax thought.

The mane six on the other hand were snickering from the sight of Twilight and Thorax probably falling in love with each other.

"Hehehe, Twilight's got a crush." Rainbow Dash thought in her head mockingly.

It is nighttime now in Equestria, it was time for the mane six to return back home to rest and eat dinner with their families.

"Goodbye Thorax, thank you so much for the tour." Twilight said with a smile.

"Indeed, the tour was awesome." Rainbow Dash said.

"You're welcome girls, have a great day, and I hope to see you all soon." Thorax said.

Then, the mane six all turned around and began to leave the Changeling Hive and back to Ponyville after a great and merriment day in King Thorax's Kingdom, this sure was a fun day. However, Twilight had a smirk forming in her lips due to a plan being formulated in her head.

While Thorax was watching the mane six walking away, he couldn't help but stare at Twilight Sparkle, she was just nothing short of elegant, brave, smart and cute. Too bad he wasn't able to ask her for a walk privately through town, or maybe even for some tea. His eyes then slowly averted downwards until his eyes were fixated onto her flank.

"Dang." Thorax mumbled with a blush. But then, he snapped out of it "Oh what am I doing, I must prepare for tomorrow." He told himself.

After that, Thorax turned around and began to head to his bedroom where he will take a shower and brush his teeth before going to bed and preparing for tomorrow's work. While he was walking down the hallway, he still had a depressed expression on him due to him not being able to spend more time with his crush Twilight. Maybe he'll try next week, when she is not too occupied with work.

In the bathroom for King Thorax's bedroom, the Changeling King was seen finishing brushing his teeth after a four minutes shower, he then rinsed his teeth with water and spay it down in that sink. He then looked at himself in the mirror and smiled slightly, the thought of him being married with Twilight would be a dream come true.

"Maybe some day." Thorax said with a shrug.

Then, Thorax washed toothpaste off of the head of his toothbrush and placed it in his cup. After that, he closed the tap and turned around to face his bathroom door. Then, he walked up to it, pushed the door open and prepared to head to his bed.

"You're finally done."

Thorax flinched from the unexpected sound, he looked forward and saw Twilight Sparkle lying down on his King his bed, it also seems like she has taken off her dress too but, she is covering her body with it.

"Tw-Twilight, what a s-surprise." Thorax said while anxious.

"You're cute when your nervous." Twilight giggled which made Thorax blush.

"Th-thanks Twilight, but, what are you doing on my bed?" He asked.

"Isn't it obvious, I'm giving you your reward of course." Twilight replied which got him a little perplexed "You gave me and my friends a great tour here in this beautiful Kingdom of yours, your actions gave us a good time. Not to mention that you also saved me from my excruciating fall that would result in me receiving a bruise on my face. In addition to that, since you're an entirely new species, it would be a great experience for me." She told him.

Thorax was now currently blushing madly now due to him hearing this, this can only mean one thing, Twilight wants to mate with him, he was intending to take her out on walks and stuff but, since Twilight already wants to mate with him as a reward for his contribution for her friends, he couldn't decline the offer because, this would be a dream come true. Then, he felt something firm and soft on a certain part of his body. He looked down to see what is was and noticed that his member was pointing straight forward, the sight has made him blush madly.

"Oooh, looks like somepony likes that idea." Twilight mocked as she licked her lips. "Come on handsome, this is your bedroom after all right? Therefore, nopony will disturb us." She told him as she threw her dress on the floor revealing her beautiful body.

Thorax then smiled and rolled his eyes from Twilight's logical statement, he decided to accept her offer. So, he walked to his large bed and climbed on top of it and Twilight, then, without a warning, the friendship princess pulled the changeling King in for a loving kiss, Thorax was surprised for a moment but, he kissed her back with her eyes closed. Fifteen seconds later, both royals broke their kiss and began to pant heavily.

"I love you." Twilight said between breaths.

"I love you too Twilight." Thorax said kissing her neck which made her moan. Then, he pulled back and looked down at her with a smile on his muzzle and he smiled back.

"Take me now handsome." Twilight said spreading her back hooves.

Thorax smiled warmly and positioned his member right her tunnel. When he did, he pushed his hip forward and inserted himself into Twilight, and both royals groaned in pleasure from the joining. Then, the Changeling King began to thrust in and out of her.

"Oh! Oh! Thorax! You're so huge! Don't stop!" Twilight screamed in ecstasy.

"As you wish princess." Thorax groaned.

King Thorax was thrusting in and out of Twilight's love tunnel like a wild animal, the friendship princess was astonished by how strong her lover is and how amazing he is at this.

Thorax on the other hand was having the time of his life with his love, she just feels so good and warm on the inside, this is certainly the bets day of his life.

Two minutes later, both Thorax and Twilight have got the feeling of something flowing out of them soon.

"T-Twilight, I'm going to." Thorax grunted.

"M-me too Thorax."

Then a brief second later, Thorax let out his final groan before releasing his fluid in Twilight's love tunnel. While Twilight drenched his member with her fluids. Fifteen seconds later, both royals have finished their spewing, and Thorax collapsed on top of Twilight making her whimper in return. Then, both royals began to pant for their breath.

"Wow, I've never felt something like this before in my life. You are amazing Twinkle's." Thorax said getting off of her and lying on his side, and Twilight giggled from the hysterical and cute nickname given to her by him.

"I'm glad that you enjoyed your reward Thory." Twilight said with a giggle, and Thorax chuckled from the hysterical nickname given to him by his now special somepony.

"Well anyways, shall we hit the hay now?" Thorax asked.

"We shall." Twilight replied with a nod "I'm sleepy." She said with a yawn.

Then, Thorax turned off the lights of his bedroom thanks to his magic before pulling his blanket on top of him and his beloved. The couple then embraced each other in a hug and prepared to sleep, not without saying.

"Goodnight Thory my handsome King." Twilight cooed.

"Goodnight Twinkle's my love." Thorax said giving his love another kiss to the lips for a brief second.

After that, the lovely couple both slowly closed their eyes and drifted into sleep. Today sure was a wonderful and romantic day for the two!

Author's Note

Well here we have it my followers, my last Twirax story has been officially completed. This one was planned for a while, and luckily, I was able to finish it on time for you all before I start on my other stories.

I'm gonna miss writing my Twirax stories so much:fluttershbad: Twirax is my favourite ship from My Little Pony Friendship is Magic, it always makes me smile when I see Thorax and Twilight Sparkle being together as a couple, but unfortunately, I will no longer continue writing anymore Twirax stories.

I want to say thank you to you all for reading and putting all of my Twirax stories into your favourites and other bookshelves, as well as giving me some tips on how to ameliorate in my future stories. I appreciate it a lot. All of you are awesome!

I also want to say a big thank you to my great and awesome friend Rhino932 Toon for doing all of these phenomenal, cute and astonishing Twirax arts for me so that I can write my stories. He certainly is an amazing friend.