What a broken game

by EntityAffinity

Rating: mature
Tags: Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Human, Original Character, Adventure, Violence
Length: 6997

A human finds themselves transported to the world of Equestria, equipped with a random assortment of video game abilities and stats. However, something seems to be off and their abilities are not functioning as they should.

A human falls into the magical world of Equestria, bringing with them an impressive array of gamer abilities and exploits. With their arsenal of skills and an excess of experience points, this human is ready to take on whatever challenges Equestria has to offer.

But being lost and confused in a strange new world, the human must navigate their newfound powers and abilities, learning to use them to their advantage. What will they do with their newfound strength and abilities? The possibilities are endless - and it's up to you to find out.

Published 2021-10-25 10:10:00 UTC
Last updated 2021-10-25 10:10:00 UTC

Chapter 1: From one world into another.

I'm not surprised anymore, I know my life must be someone else's entertainment by now, like really? I arrived in a land filled with magical unicorns, ponies with wings and the 'Magic of friendship'? Wait, let me introduce myself first before I begin my long tale on how I got here and what I did, and trust me Its an interesting one to hear.
My name is John raze, I'm part American or Canadian, don't know which, I never got to know so don't ask, I'm 23 years old, my friends call me Jonny, and I enjoy reading fantasy stories when I was younger, ye all that good stuff, well...

I don't read much anymore or enjoy much anymore, when your life gets ripped from one world to another that would usually change some minds, especially mine, I was a lazy and sleepful person, now? Now my mind is always active and aware, it hurts to stop thinking, well that's enough about me, this is how my story begins.....

{Somewhere on mother earth, an employee is working at the well-known gas station}

Today was supposed to be like every other day, normal and boring, I finally got done my job as a local gas pumper and left that cursed gas station that started to make a bigger part of my life than I wanted it to, My daily routine started with me waking up, and walking to the gas station and work 12 hours before walking home and doing nothing for the rest of my time, this routine tends to be boring to most people.

But something was different today, smelling the air I could smell small traces of rain "Goddam it, Fuck off clouds" was the words that left my mouth and by some luck, a random god of thunder heard my comment as the rain started to pour down onto me and settle down on my barely clothed body.

Knowing what will happen if I stayed in one spot for too long, I begin my walk towards my house, my walk turned into a power walk and that power walk turned into a full sprint like the clouds see my running as a challenge and started releasing the little water bombs faster and at higher speed down on me.

The rain hit the ground with a splash as my vision was taken by my laboured breath, I knew it had a small chance it would rain, but this was far greater than the measly 10% of rain on the forecast, In the back of my head it sounded like someone was laughing at my misfortune that I was stuck in before I could think on what I was hearing. The most unexpected and impossible thing had happened.

Before I could stop my labouring run, a swirling portal ring that's purple with blue and green swirls starting from the sides and falling towards the center had appeared in front of me.

My shoe stepped into the portal before I could stop and do anything, followed by my whole leg, body, arms, then the rest of me. The next thing that happened was my senses being assaulted by a flash of colours, noises, and feelings as my entire world changed before me literally, this went on for a few seconds even though it was more like a minute, probably because I was screaming like a banshee the whole way.

As the portal trip ended, I appeared a few hundred feet above a dark forest and started to fall towards the ground, the only thing my eyes can pick up before my view was obstructed by the view of trees was the land being in the shape of a chessboard and pink clouds took the sky, this was probably caused by my panicking mind as I finally hit the trees.

I manage to hit every tree branch breaking them and taking the leaves with me as I fell before I can even process what is happening I felt myself smashing against the ground as my world went dark.

{Back to the present}

"Now I know it's not the best s-" my thought was cut off by my partner laughing from his spot before slowing down to a chuckle.

"No, no continue with your story, you have just gotten me interested," he said before awaiting my story to begin once again.

Sighing to myself I begin "Well when I woke up"

{Somewhere in a forest at Equestria's boreders}

The first thing I recognized was the dull pain over my entire body as I open my eyes, it was a struggle at first when my eyes felt like they had weights to them, but when I did get them to open fully my mind started to process at what I'm staring at.

In front of me was my hand but instead of the high amount of details that it held and the small scars I had on my arm, instead, there was a cartoony pastel-coloured hand with no details and looked skinny, it gave off a darkish peach colour, even though it was dark I was able to sill see it.

When I finally process what I was looking my heart jumped into my throat as I stared dumbly at it before my attention was taken by the scenery around me, everything looked the same as I did, the trees were huge and thick, with leaves that spread as far as they could absorbing as much light that they can manage, because of this the forest has been given offsetting darkness to it.

"Hkerrr" Are the words that left my throat, a raspy voice replace my rougher sounding one, my throat sting with disagreement. I slowly got up through pain and determination to move once again, once I did I finally can get a look at my surroundings, as I stand up fully I felt a chill run through my body as I felt colder than usual,

Looking down I can see my ripped up gray T-shirt with a few blood stains that it was carrying on it, but my pants had it worse, it was ripped to my knees and had a few chunks that barely held on my a few strings, my shoes, on the other hand, were non-existent with nothing left except one lowly sock that was somehow holding on, glancing up I can see the trees where they had branches with leaves were no broken and ripped off completely.

'What the hell? How far did I fall to cause that?' Thinking to myself as I quickly remembered about my blood-stained T-shirt as my hand travelled across my body examining for any wounds, luckily and somehow I did not find anything, but this only left me with questions with no answers.

'Why am I so calm about this? I just fell from a bigillion feet and somehow survive with no cuts what so ever' Thinking the thoughts of wonder but no moving due to the soreness I still feel.
'Oh god, why can't it be another boring day?' I think to myself as I begin stretching the soreness out and felt the burn as I started to gain more control of my limbs.

During my stretching I found something to the left bottom corner of my eye, there was a little stat bar in the colour blue, waiting for my vision to automatically concentrate on it as I begin to read.

Hp 100

DF 0

MDF 0

Att 15

Energy 300

Magic 0

Armor 3

The little blue screen was sitting there at the left bottom of my vision, it was see-through and yet, not at the same time, the first thought that came to my mind was the time of video games or Dnd.

'Uhh, game... stats..?' I questioned myself as I continue to stare at them, before my thoughts were stolen by the way this day went, first I fall through a portal and then wake up in a cartoonish world now figuring out that I have stats now? It has happened, logic grew wings and flew out the doggy door that was attached to a window. 'Wonder what other little surprises will now appear' as my confusion deepened it just up and disappeared like it never was there, I still don't know what is happening though but I don't feel worried or anything at all.

I started to look around my surroundings using my dulled senses to their fullest capacity, but yet only achieving a few conclusions, first conclusion I'm in a forest, the second conclusion the forest that I'm standing on is standing on a slanted hill itself, and my last conclusion though not important as the others but still, I'm very hungry.

The forest in greater detail was dark, unnaturally dark it was like the very forest itself was absorbing the light and the air was cold and brittle, and there is an intense feeling in the forest not to mention the forest itself feels like its watching every move that I made.

The slanted hill is slanted enough to allow small glimpses of the outside and the lands beyond this forest, also It would be easier to walk down the hill instead of up so that's a plus as well. I can probably find a village too.

'My head feels clearer and the voice in my head is much louder than before' I looked at my hand and yet felt no tension in it, it disappear like it never exists in the first place.

'Where Am I? Why do I feel so calm about this? Why do I feel more empty? Normal? I just don't feel the same' Thinking to myself with a more rational thought process than I had back home, I begin to piece together my story 'Ok, ok let's see, I'm in a cartoon world, I feel different, or maybe I'm still in a state of shock, does shock make people think more clearly? is that possible?' My thoughts were consumed by this, my mind started going into scenarios about my possible coming to this world.

My thoughts started to drift to the empty feeling I felt as I start to look around 'Will I ever see my family again? If I could enter this world with the magic of some type then I can leave it by the magic of some type' My eyes drifted towards the stat bar as I remembered about the 'Magic' at the end of it.

Before I could once again go into my world of imagination, my ears finally adjusted to the eerie quietness of the forest, My ears were able to pick up the soft sound of water rushing in the background, I turned towards the sound and started heading towards it.

I quickly moved towards the sound, careful not to step on any sharp stones or stick sticking out of the dirt, Once that is done I pushed through the bushes and see a small river that expand 30feet away and was a foot deep, the river itself shined with an unnatural color with it being fully see-through with small.... Shards? Ya right, flowing soothingly through the water undisturbed.

I could feel a smile start to grow on my face, slowly and first then into full bloom, 'If there is a river then there is a village at the end of it' Don't know if that's the exact words from the few survival movies and Tv shows I watch when I was younger. But it went something like that.

Moving towards the crystal-like river and staring past the flowing water and right into it, I was able to see a few shards flowing through it, my hand shot towards the water and manage to grab quite a bit of them, I move them closer to my face to examine them more closely, The little shards stand at 1Cm tall they're reflective and see-through at the same time and holds a baby blue glint to it, it was like holding tiny diamonds but without the rough texture, but don't get me wrong they're still very sharp.

During my examination of the Shards my left forearm glowed and ruins appeared a little above the skin, the runes glowed blue and they wrapped around my whole forearm, the ruins themselves looked like spikey vines at first glance but the closer I look the more detail I manage to get.

Not a second later after the runes appeared, a screen appeared, but this time it was a few more inches away from the skin, the little screen has the picture of the shard I'm holding with a name and a description to it, it also has some other labels such as worth and Kgs.

Water Shard

A small shard created by the natural flow of magic and steady streams of water, the magic will flow into a pattern afterwards the water will start sticking to the magic creating an illusion that the shard is soild matter

Worth: C1

Rarity: Common

Material

Consumable

'More video game logic, There has to be an Inventory or a skill tree' with that finished I looked around me to make sure no one is watching me make a fool of myself, Hey just because I don't have my emotion in check doesn't mean I can't still have my dignity, before looking at my clothes, well what dignity I have left.

I open my mouth and started to speak in a louder voice than I wanted "Inventory!" looking down at my forearm and seeing nothing I look at the sky hoping the gods would help in my luck, "Stats!......" nothing

"Skill tree!" Nothing once again.

"Now I just feel stupid" as I walk towards a tree that is near the crystal river and start saying everything that my mind can think of, before getting creative with the words that I'm saying.

{Back to the present}

"hahahahaha" As my new listener started to laugh at my little story, Why? I don't know, When his laugh went into a chuckle he replied "So you were yelling them out loud? In the middle of the forest?" I rolled my imagination (Yes imagination) before replying.

"Well I never knew how my abilities worked yet and it only took like five or so minutes to learn what to do," I said plainly

"Five or so minutes? What you can't remember the exact time?" He asked with wonder?

"it's been years since I've told this story also It's hard telling a story when you're upside down" I said before trying to think how my story went.

"Well, alright then John, Continue, And stop and remember I want to know everything after all we do have the stone age after all," My listener said.

"That pun was weak and you know it." Before clearing my voice and continuing my story "Well it took six minutes to learn what to do a-"

{Back to the forest at the border of Equestria}

By now I'm sitting down at the side of a broken tree speaking of any references that my tired brain can come up with, before looking towards my left forearm that had the same glowing blue ruins and speaking words once spoken.

"Inventory" before I could correct my words my forearm glowed a bright blue as even more runes appeared above the already marked forearm, and now a blue screen also appeared above both of them.

Inventory, Page 1/3 Normal Space Vacuum: Back /Next
[Player] [Skills] [Magic] [Encyclopedia] [Inventory] [Map] [Crafting Menu]

Nothing inside here....

When I'm done staring at the 'Inventory' I could recall the memories of playing RPG games and movies related to this situation and coming up with a few scraps of memories.
'So when I wanted to summon my 'Inventory' I think or speak 'Inventory'? But what made it different from my last attempt?' I start contemplating before piecing together my possible answer.

'Do I look at my forearm when I summon 'Inventory'? Can I store anything the same way?' As I turn my eyes to the pile of shards sitting beside me, both my hands go and pick them up from their resting place before moving them in front of my face.

'Absorb? Store?' And to be proven correct the shards in my hands started to turn into a blue mist before fading entirely from existence, I couldn't help but smile at the little accomplishments I manage to get before I could bask in the little feeling I saw a little Blue screen appear to my left side.

Added Water Shards *37

'Holy- I'm, I-' I could barely get a hold of my excitement before moving my eyes towards my blue screen that is still on my forearm, and so it was the Water Shards were there underneath the 'Inventory'.

My hand immediately moved towards the 'Player Info' and selected it and what I was able to see was-

{Back to the present}

I stopped talking and decided to inform my new friend that, wait friend? man, these ponies are rubbing off on me, well I said "Ya just believe that there's a 'Player Info' and player stats and stuff it would make my story more... well believable?"

"Oh don't worry about that I definitely believe you, Can't wait until you get to that one part of the story where you have skills that's ripped right off SAO" He said in a joy-filled tone.

"SAO? what are yo- you know what never mind, So what I saw....

{Somewhere in a forest near the border of Equestria}

A blue screen with my listed stats on it and boi it was... well I don't have anything to compare it to but I felt a little confused about some of the properties.

[size=1.5em) Player Info
[Player Info] [Skills] [Magic] [Encyclopedia] [Inventory] [Map] [Crafting Menu]

Jothanthen Raze
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Race: Player(Human)
Level 0
[EXP] 0/5
[XP] 0/5
[TXP] 4/5
Attribute: Hp
{Armor (3)}
Helmet: NON (0)
Gauntlets: NON (0)
Chestplate: Warn out gray T shirt (1)
Leggings: Warn out navy blue jeans (2)
Boots: One white right sock (0)
Shield: NON (0)
Weponds: NON (0)

{Physical Stats}
Height: 5' 8"
Weight: 86kg
Carry strength 31kg
darkesh peach body with Greenish blue eyes and dark gray hair.
Travel Speed 24km/h
Scroll down to see more

I look over the stats shown to me and began thinking about the newly acquired knowledge and the first words that left my mouth were "Really? I'm that weak." My eyes scanned over the 'Carry strength' before moving towards another problem: the EXP system, Like really? who needs 3 EXPs? 'EXP is experience but now there are three of them? Why?' I think to myself trying to understand but eventually pushing it the back of my mind and marketing down for future John's problem.

Once I moved on from that I started to read my 'Physical Stats' or lack of.
'Wait that's not how I look' I said, quickly getting up from my spot near the tree and walking towards the shard-infested waters and falling to my knees staring at my reflection.
What stared back at me was young man with spiky gray hair with Greenish blue eyes and wearing hobo clothes, my arms are skinny as a twig and my face looked innocent but my eyes on the other end looked empty, It was a little frighting at first glance.

"Oh God, I look like a poor boy, I look like I should be in a homeless shelter," I said outloud as I continue poking and prodding my new face, Now looking back at what happened I could barely believe I was cought up in 'A different world and different body, OK sure, I have abilities that belong to a video game, No, no I can't' I think to myself as my mind starts going into a factory meltdown followed by a calming sense that snapped me out of my meltdown.

I get back up with a little falter and look back towards my forearm ready to consume as much knowledge about my new predicament even though this is a dream 'Player Info' I demanded before rereading the information and trying to get a better grasp on whats going on.

"No, I think I'm going to take a short break" Speaking out loud before staring at the sparkling water for a few minutes before my mind starts to drift towards my family, well the little family I still had.

'Now that I think about my past, I wasn't the brightest hrmm' I think as a few memories flooded my mind, 'I had everything and now I don't have anything, Will I see my family again?' I think to myself and wait for a shred of longing or sadness inside myself but coming up with nothing.

My younger self would jump at the opportunity to go into another world with magic and such by now? Well I know my Job is boring and my life would probably not lead anywhere, is this a better choice? God, I don't like thinking this much.

I put my hand into the water and let the shards drift around my hand "Well.... I can't do anything at the moment or ca-" before I could finish my self monologue I felt something scratch my hand as a little number 1 in red jumped from my hand before disappearing, this caused my to pull my hand out of the water at lightning speed before examining it, there was a large cut and a blue shard sticking out of my hand.

I pulled the shard out before becoming surprised once again, my wound started to close fast, within twenty-ish seconds, a wound that would take days to close just closed within seconds in front of my eyes!

'Wha- How, Did my hand just heal that fast! HAha, I'm like Wolverine, Wait shards....' My eyes drifted towards the water shard that had a small amount of blood one it, Then it clicked 'I can make something with these!' My hands grabbed some of the shards from the water
'Store'
Added Water Shards *84

'I mean I can probably craft something with this, there has to be a way to use this, Smiling to myself before that little feeling of joy faded as fast it came.
'I guess its time to read more information huh' My eyes go to my forearm as the ruins started to glow ready for a command 'Player Info' my forearm shimmered as a screen appeared above it showing already seen information before being scrolled down into the newer parts.

Once that was done I begin reading.

Stats
Hp 100
DF 0
MDF 0
Att 15
Energy 300
Magic 0
Armor 3

Complex Stats
Pirce 0
Repeal 0
Accuracy 50%
Magic Strength 0
Magic Output 0
Magic Regeneration 0
Magic Amount 0
Stamina Output 80
Stamina Regeneration 20
Health recovery 1
Healing Amount 100%
Critical Chance 0%
Critical Damage 0%
Critical Defence 0

(Buffer)

Strength 0(0)
Endurance 0(0) *1.3
Perception 0(0)
Agility 0(0) *1.3
Dexterity 0(0)
Intelligence 0(0)
Wisdom 0(0)
Chrisma 0(0)
Luck 0(0)
Extra 0

Scroll down to see more

My eyes drifted down the long list of stats as I tried my best at understanding everything that is being shown to me, most of the things I could understand like Hp, Att, Df, and Energy, Another thing I find a little odd is the amount of 'Buffer's that there is.

'Strength, Wisdom, Charisma, and Intelligence is the most basic but Agility and Dexterity? What's the difference?' I can understand 'Output' which is pretty obvious.

'Ok, ok this stuff is probably important better remember now than later, Like magic, Can I really do magic?' I couldn't help but smile to myself at getting a small chance at doing real magic, it was like I was a child once again.
'Everything is different like magical strength? what effects can that do, ohh can't wait for me to level up! I'm going to be so powerful!' I think to myself though not knowing how true that statement would be, I continue reading through my list of powers and now and then get reminded about the times I would play Dnd or anything that had magic in it like Skyrim.

'What would be the best way of learning magic? Wisdom and intelligence? I mean that's most likely the way to gaining magic, Magic regeneration is how fast I gain magic but how fast?' My eyes go towards the 'Health regeneration' and that cut I have gotten a while ago.

'My Health regeneration is 1 and I healed fast like within 20 to 30ish seconds could I heal missing limbs? Well, I an't doing nada.'My eyes turned towards the three Crits 'Critical Chance, Critical Damage, and Critical Defence, Critical Chance is the chance of getting critical strikes but its a percentage so no dice alright then, Critical Damage is also a percentage which probably means how much damage I do? and Critical Defence? well, it's not a number so what is it?' I decided to push it to the back of my mind for later.

'Healing Amount? What is even that? Of course, I don't have any extra knowledge on how this works.' Huffing to myself, my hand went to the 'Scroll down to see more' and clicked it before beginning to read more about myself.

{Back to the present}

'You know looking back on it now I kinda wished I tried a little harder to understand the newfound powers that I just got.' I said to more to myself them to my friend 'It would have helped a little in deciding what to do, mehh, Well don't care about it now.'
Not getting any response I continued my story 'So I clicked the'

{Somewhere in a forest near the border of Equestria}

The rest and final information was smaller then the rest and yet contained more information regarding my current situation that I found myself in,

Effects
{PER} Race Ability
{PER} Player's Mind
{PER} Player Body
{PER} HP attirbute
{PER} Loot
{PER} Hammer Space Perk
{PER} Hammer Space

(Cons)

NON

[Reset]
[Quit]

'PER? Does that mean anything? and Race ability? like Player or Human and Wow that's a big boost like four times gain for my exp?' My eyes move towards the 'player mindset' I couldn't help but get a little worried as a unwanted thought and yet darker came to mind 'Londer duration emotions will be disabled? does that mean I won't feel anything? or care? And Short combust emotions will revert into default?' I couldn't help but get even more surprised about that.

'Is, is that why I was calm about what was happening? I really did change, not just physically but mentally as well? Know thinking about it my mind feels more clear and I can think faster, Wait I also Can remember more why am I thinking so much about myself?' Thinking back on how I got here it's like a terrible way to start a story.

Like really? I fall through a portal into another world and get a physical change and mental change to go with it, then I have powers that relate to video games? How can my day get worse oh wait could remember almost my entire life, it was like I have a rusty photographic memory, that time I would get low grades in middle school, hell even the time where I slipped and fell face-first into a puddle of mud, and I don't even remember that.

Now looking back at my past I couldn't help but feel a little disapointed at what I could remember, I was not the best tool or the right tool in the shed, I don't even know how I got past high school, wow future me is mad at past me, what a suprise.

I continue reading the rest of the 'Effects', 'Ok great, at least I don't feel much pain anymore, makes stubbing my toe more bearable, never one for pain, and Hp Attribute? Well at least I got a boost from it and Loot.' I felt my tiredness taking over as I continue scanning the list.

That's until something caught my eye 'I can store living creatures in my Hammerspace!?' my mind started going back to the 'Inventory' tab I had and the 'Page's 1 to 3 it said Normal Space Vacuum does that mean it can store unlimited amount or a limited amount, sighing to myself 'I wish I had a guide or something'

'So I could examine, combine, alter, and incinerate anything within my Hammer space! Wait it says alter does the mean I could change the state of being that its in? Cool! science actually becomes useful.' My mind started to restart the engine to my 'Smarter and better' self that seemed to disappear when my dog died when I tried feeding it chocolate that one time.

'Could I store gasses? Man if only, I could fix global warming probably.' My hand went to the 'Skill's tab as I clicked it and another blue screen replaced the one that was occupying my forearm. This day was getting more and more surprising, makes me wonder what else will show it selfs to me 'Ha soon the only thing that will surprise me will be the world is ruled by ponies HAHaha'

Skill
[Player] [Skill] [Magic] [Inventory] [Map] [Crafting Menu]
Generated Skils

Points 0

[Running] Investment 0 (Can run up to 24km/h but costs 1 energy per second) [Increasing this adds 20% boost][0%][Gain 0.1EX every ten minutes]

[Observe] Investment 0 (The ability to collect information by 'intensely' looking at an object, person, or place) [Increasing this adds more Information and do more than just 'Observe'][NON][Gain 0.05EX every Observe]'Generated Skills? Huh, if I do something I'll get a skill for it? Do I get 'Points' when I level up? Dam, no answers and even more questions' My eyes drifted from the blue screen that was on top of my forearm to a random tree sitting idle near the water.

The tree itself was exactly like the others around it, It was standing at 20 to 25 feet tall with the width being 3 times my width and the leaves sitting on the branches seems to be eating the light itself. "Well let's see if I'm correct about my assumption," I said towards the tree not expecting any response from it 'It says Generated skills, so it would Generate skills by my every move? Or something I do that's considered special?' Before getting up and strutting towards the tree, I think to myself before speaking again this time towards the tree.

"Sorry for this buddy, But you grown it the wrong place" Getting in my fighting stance with one foot forward and the other back with my arms in a similar stance as my right hand balled into a fist as it was thrown towards the tree, sadly it wasn't full force, my nervousness for knowing what pain would be expected for punching a tree.

[0]

I barely audible thud was heard followed by a soft pain in my boney knuckles as the result from my punch, letting go of the breath I didn't know I was holding I looked at the little red zero floats of the tree and disappear 'Am I that weak? To the point I couldn't hurt a tree, I should have not held back.'

I stand still waiting for something to happen, luckily I didn't need to wait long as a little yellow bar appeared to my right eye, Smiling at being right about my little guess I started to read it.

New: 'Punch' Skill aquired

I was about to go to my 'Skills' to check my new skill ability when I felt and heard my stomach growling for attention, it seems my ignorance for self-preservation as finaly come back with fury because of that another and yet burning question came "could I starve to death? or would my healing speed heal faster?" I said in a questioning tone before getting up and start walking the way the water flowed.

'Villages tend to be where the water flows, hope their civilization somewhere.... anywhere at least. That would suck if I was the only one that's intelligent...' I think a little ticked off at what would be at the end of the river and hoping it didn't end in a water fall or something I couldn't get over.

I was walking for a few minutes when I was able to see a clearing though it was small, it was enough see the outside world, the sky was the brightest baby blue with little fluffy white clouds that looked more solid then gas, also from moving around to get a better view I was able to see a mountain in the far distance standing proudly with its impossible steepness to it, it was like the mountain was place there with how spike like it looked.

Being done with the view I look down and let my eye readjust to the darkness before continue walking down the hill following the rushing water, and not a minute could see the end of the river, and to my surprise, I just goes into a big hole in the ground.

"Are you serious? that's where this goes? into a fuckin black hole?" annoyance was clear in my voice as my eye went up as well from surprise, the hole itself was huge with it standing 30 by 40 feet wide and with it going down into the land even the light that the clearing was able to give was eaten away from darkness of the hole, to sum it up... it was ominous.

'Even if I wanted to go down there I don't think I could get out of it.' sighing started my walk this time remembering where my last steps are just in case I need to go the dark ominous hole again hopeful that won't happen anytime soon.

I think I found the end of the line... It was a wall? well it was a wall of bushes and trees and there appears to be a little bit of light shining through.

'Finaly a way out' My hands go and push through the bushes and trees to be blinded by the full force of the blazing sunlight, my eyes took a few seconds to adjust to the brightness and when it did I was at awe at how bright and colourful the world looked, the grass was lush green and filled with life, the air was far fresher then the city I can even say it was more fresh then the wild and it was relaxing, the sky is the same from the view I have gotten from the forest.

I couldn't help but to smile when I started to walk barefoot towards the less curved hillside, this world was more different them earth even though it was pastel colour it was happier and delightful, when I was done sucking up the oddness of it all I was able to see a few houses in the distance, the houses themselves were medieval looking with most of them having little farms to the side of them.

I hurried towards them before stopping my movement at the next thing I saw, working away at the farms, walking around, and even trading where bright and colorful horses!? I drop to the ground to conceal myself better as I begin my crawl towards the homes and only stop when I could get a better view.

The horses are mini, they could be considered ponies from how tall they are, I don't know if it was my shock mind getting back into control but I could finally think again and think I did, they are intelligent and most likey built everything here, I got up and started running back towards the forest, I could deal with this later when the time comes.

When I got towards the forest I hesitated before rentering and just like that the cold atmosphere of the forest started to set back in, the dark and looming forest gladly consumed my vary present, I begin following my footsteps in order to find my black hole that most likely held all the shards inside it, hey I could probably get rich with the ponies with the shards.

{10 minutes later.......}

My ears were listing for the rushing water but not finding anything, I've been searching for the river for ten or so minutes but not coming up with nothing. 'OK maybe going to the ponies would be better, No, no, I can't go their they probably think I'm a monster or something dumb like that' My thought quickly brought down my suggestion 'Well maybe I could convince them' I started to think about a backstory before saying out loud in my most friendly voice.

"Hey! I'm a little lost can you help!" what came out was a raspy voice that sounded devoided of life, this caused me to cringe and think of another plan, also I'm low on gas need food quickly, My thoughts where interrupted when I heard a growl coming from the left of me.

My body felt like it turned into ice as I turn towards the growling as I froze, my body was kicked into full gear as the adrenaline started to flood my system, what came out of the bushes were different and darker than the cheerful world that it was in.

It was..... a pig, ya a pig, the pig looked diffrent from the pink and dark spoted the ones I expect from this world, but instead was a sickly pale white pig with two husk-like points protruding from its face and a bright red glow came from its eyes, even though it was pastel colored like the world it still held an aura of death unless it was the smell coming from it.

My reaction to this? was to scream like a bitch, turn around, and run away, the heavy thumping of curved hoofs followed along with me, I could hear it getting closer and closer with every step, quickly thinking of a strategy, I started to take sharp turns as I could feel branch or rock on my bare feet, my next sudden turn caused me to trip and tommble down the hill.

The hill was at the peak of steepness because of that it caused me to fall faster than I was running, that's when the first stinking of pain happen, I slammed back first into a tree.

[20]

My breath was ripped away from me as I continued rolling down the hill, my mind was starting to be consumed by fear when I could hear the sound of hoofs slowly moving down the hill.

My rolling was starting to hurt with me leaving blood spatters and skin behind with every fumble until I started to slow down to a crawl'

[2]

My mind was tired and sick from the constant rolling that I was in, my body was filled with cuts and bruises that started to form, my ripped-up clothes looked even more ripped up with blood being soaked into the fabric.

Before I could get up or even get my head back into what's happening I felt a stinging of pain followed by my arm being thrown around, from what I could see was the pig bitting into my arm and thrashing around before ripping a huge chunk of as it greedy maw was now bloody with flesh and skin, my wound started to bleed at a fast rate, my mind went into a state oh horror at seeing my ripped up arm that had pieces of skin holding onto it.

[24]

"HaaaAAAaaaAAaa" I screamed out as my arm was left bloody, my other arm shot up towards the pig went I noticed it going for another attack, desperately trying to pushing the pig away was my poor logical mind could do.

The soreness of my body started to disappear as I got up fully and tried to get away before I could take my first step, the pig bit down on my leg and forcing me down onto my knees followed by my face, though the pain was not bad or as worse as being cut with a knife the horror of seeing missing chunks where enough to get my fear into new hights.

[24]

"HELP! HAAaa" My vision started to darken as I tried another useless attempt at getting away but everything I tried didn't work, I felt another big this time going through my shirt and into my side and piercing my ribs my panicking breath became chokes as I started coughing blood and the smell of blood started to fill the air.

[24]

The last thing my dying brain could think of was a green-haired hoof smashing into the pigs head with a loud crack followed by a sqweel of pain, my eyes darkened as I fell in to bliss of unconsciousness, Thank god.

Author's Note

This is a reboot of my god awful story with the same name, I'm still new to writing so if I've made a mistake please notify me.