Flitter, My Love

by HerbertBerpert

Bonus Chapter

Previous Chapter

Separate story from the actual story, meant as an intervention of sorts.

Irritation Is No Good



“That big jerk!”

Those were the words that the lilac pegasus named Cloudchaser yelled out as she laid on her bed. She had broken up with her coltfriend Thunderlane a few days prior because of the fact that she had found out from her sister Flitter that he had been cheating on her. She can just imagine Thunderlane and whoever whore of a pony he’s with, she didn’t care anymore. Now, she was in trouble, as the call of nature was beginning to bug her. No, not that calling of nature.

To put it in simple terms, Cloudchaser was in heat, and needed a stallion to come help her and satisfy the itch that was coming from the lower portion of her body. She was in constant need to soothe this unpleasant itch, and Thunderlane was the only one who could satisfy it at the time. As she laid on her back, she had put one hoof to her already dripping slit and was rubbing it as hard as she could, filled with satisfaction and anger, trying to get rid of the itch that was there. No matter how much she rubbed though, her body still longed, no ached for a stallion.

“Stupid jerk! Fucking asshole! Why did he have to cheat on me at a time like this?!”

As she continued to pleasure herself on her bed, she began to hear a knock coming from downstairs. She ignored it at first, thinking it was just some Poneovah’s Witness and would go away soon enough, but the knocking didn’t go away. Instead, she began to recognize the sound of the knocking, the pattern of it. ‘It’s him.’ She thought bitterly.

With an annoyed sigh and grunt, she stopped trying to pleasure herself and picked up a tissue, wiping the juices from her hoof and from her crotch, though it probably wouldn’t matter. Luckily she was all alone in the house as she shared it with her only sister, who was out at the moment and wouldn’t be back for a few days as she was visiting their parents in Cloudsdale.

As she made it to the front door, she swung it open and yelled. “I’m not taking you back! You’re the one…” She trailed off though as she looked down at the real pony who was there. Instead of the dark grey ex-coltfriend that she was expecting, there sat a small lighter grey toned pegasus colt. “O-Oh, hey Rumble.” She said to the little guy, recognizing him as the younger brother of Thunderlane. “What’s up?”

“Hey Cloudchaser… Can I come in?”

Not wanting to seem suspicious, she agreed to let him in. “Sure, I suppose that’s okay.” She said as she stepped out of the way for the small colt to come in. As he entered the house fully, she closed the door behind him and brought him up to her room without thinking. When they finally got into her room, she spoke up again. “So what brings you here, Rumble?”

Rumble didn’t seem to respond at first though, as he was too busy looking at a ton of pictures that were lying on top of Cloudchaser’s desk. “This is…”

“Ah, that? Yeah, that’s the time we all went on that one camping trip. You can go ahead and take those.” She answered with a hint of bitterness and hatred.

“Eh? What do you mean-“

“I don’t want to look at them anymore. After all, it seems your brother has somepony else to care for now!” She answered, now fully upset and landing on her bed with a *thump*, crossing her front hooves in defiance. She was filled with mixed emotions; anger, despair, hatred but most of all, the raging sexual desire to get her satisfaction.

“W-What? Does that mean all four of us can’t play together anymore?”

“Your jerk of a big brother cheated on me, so I dumped him! I don’t want to ever see his face again! He could go get killed for all I care!” She answered, pulling a pillow to her chest and hugging it tight, as though she was squeezing the life out of it as it represented Thunderlane. Oh how she despised the cheating stallion she was imagining before her. What happened next however, shocked her.

“No!” Rumble yelled out as he jumped onto Cloudchaser, hugging her tightly then she could have imagined.

“H-Hey, what the?!”

“You can’t break up with him, you just can’t!” He told her, rubbing his face into her stomach as his lower legs began to rub her crotch without realizing it.

“H-Hey, s-stop it! W-What are talking a-about?” She called out, her breathing getting heavier now as he continued to rub her pussy. ‘Why in Equestria does he care so much about us being together?’ She thought to herself, trying to keep herself preoccupied with something else, but she was failing miserably. Her body was becoming hotter and hotter, and there was nothing that could stop it.

Suddenly, Rumble said something that caught Cloudchaser’s attention. “Please! I-I’ll do anything! I swear!”

Cloudchaser stop trying to squirm out of his grasp for a second to contemplate what he said. A devilish smirk grew on her face. ‘Hmm…’ “You’ll do… anything?” Several thoughts were rushing through Cloudchaser’s head at the moment, all of them wanting the same thing. She was going to get this young stallion to satisfy her no matter what it was going to take.

He looked up at her nodded. “Yes!”

The same devilish smirk seemed to grow. “Alright then.” She said as she was finally able to climb out of Rumble’s grasp, but only far enough so that his face was now facing her nipples near her pussy. “I want you to play with them.” She told him, but only got a confused look in return.

“W-What?”

“You’ll do anything, right? I want you to touch me.”

Rumble turned from Cloudchaser’s face, down to her nipples, and gulped. “A-Alright…”

As best as he could, he began to suck on Cloudchaser’s nipples, hoping to satisfy her enough to listen to him. In response, she let out a moan. “Y-Yeah, like that, u-use your tongue too. Bite it gently.” She told him as her panting began to get more and more ragged. With the command, she could feel Rumble begin to lick and bite her sensitive, hardened nipples, making her let out an even bigger moan. ‘There’s no way I’m taking him back, but perhaps this will be a good way to vent both my frustration and help me get rid of this itch!

As she begun to feel herself on the verge of finally finishing off with satisfying orgasmic pleasure, she stopped Rumble from playing with her nipples any further. “D-Did I do something wrong?”

Cloudchaser slowly shook her head. “Nah, you didn’t do anything wrong kid, I just want you do something else, that’s all.”

“Something else?”

She nodded, and pointed to her pussy. “Could you possibly lick me down there? I couldn’t possibly reach, and I would be extremely grateful.” She said with a smaller smirk than earlier. Rumble understood and nodded. He lowered himself a bit and began to lick the bright pink walls of Cloudchaser’s pussy, getting his tongue deep inside. “Mmm, yeah, that feels great kid. If it weren’t for your age I would probably think that you’ve done this before!”

As Rumble continued his licking, Cloudchaser had begun to arc her back and flare her wings out as she began to get closer and closer to orgasm. “Y-Yes! That’s it! Deeper! Stick your tongue in deeper!” She called out. “T-Tease me here too!” She called out, using her hooves to point to her anus and clitoris. Rumble complied and began to nibble on the little bump coming out of her pussy, while prodding her anus and pussy with his hooves.

As he continued his foreplay, Cloudchaser had finally had enough, and her juices began to spray out onto Rumble’s face. “A-A-Ahhhh! Y-Yes…!” She screamed out as she reached climax. As she panted hard, she called out to the little guy. “T-That… That was amazing…” She said softly, but something was wrong.

As she looked down at the small colt, she could tell that even with her juices sprayed all over him, that he was indeed crying. ‘Ah crap, I ended up getting too much into it!’ She thought to herself.

Wiping both the sticky wetness of Cloudchaser's pussy and his tears away, he looked up at her with a smile. “What can I do next? I’ll do my best!” He told her.

Feeling a bit guilty, Cloudchaser turned away from him, having her back face him. “T-That’s fine Rumble, you’ve done enough.”

“B-But!”

“I’m sorry Rumble, but it’s already over between me and your brother. I can’t keep the promise I made.” She said softly. “B-Besides, it’s not right that I’m abusing you in this way, not to mention that if we continue, I might really fall in love with you.” She said with a small chuckle.

What surprised her was that Rumble was not so quick to give up as he quickly made a move to bend her down and have her plot facing him. “H-Hey, Rumble! What in the hay are you doing?!” She yelled out as she looked back, only to see Rumble getting ready to mount her, his penis having come out of its sheath and was ready for sex, positioned at her pussy. “W-Wait, Rumble, no!”

It was too late though, as her pleas fell on deaf ears, and Rumble made his first thrust into her. ‘A-Ah! It went in!’ “S-Stop Rumble, pull out!” She tried to plea with him again, but he only pulled out enough for him to slam back in. “S-Stop! D-Don’t think you can just do whatever you want with my body!” She screamed out, but again, it fell on deaf ears. Was she getting raped? Was the only thought going in her head at the moment.

As he continued to pump in and out of the mare, Rumble could feel himself getting closer and closer to actually orgasming himself. “S-Stop Rumble, I might actually fall in love with you at this rate!” Cloudchaser jokingly said, but she knew there was no way he was going to stop. The answer she got however, she didn’t expect.

“Fine, fall in love with me!” Rumble called out as he continued to pump in and out. Flipping her to the side as for easier access, he continued to tell her his feelings. “I love you Cloudchaser, I always have! More than my big brother! I want to be your coltfriend Cloudchaser!”

“R-Rumble…” She softly said, now knowing his true feelings. “You didn’t do all of this for your brother, did you?” She asked, forgetting how Rumble was continuing to violate her.

“I-I’m sorry!” He yelled out. “I-I thought that if you and big brother broke up, then I wouldn’t be able to see you anymore! So I thought-“ But he stopped when Cloudchaser put her hoof over his mouth, silencing him and emitting a soft smile.

“It’s alright Rumble, I’m sorry for not noticing your true feelings this entire time.”

He stopped momentarily to find out if she had really meant it. “T-Then?” She nodded. “Yes!” He screamed, using all of his strength to spread her legs and prop her up on top of him so that he was on his plot, while she remained riding his dick.

“W-Wait, d-don’t lift me up!”

“I love you so much Cloudchaser!” He called out, helping her be stabilized in the air as she was leaning against the bed frame. “I love you so so much!” He continued to violate her, out of both pleasure and satisfaction.

“W-Wait, this pose! W-Why are you standing on your back legs?!” Cloudchaser called out, but it didn’t matter, as Rumble continued to pump away anyways.

“C-Cloudchaser, I-I’m-“

“M-Me too!”

They both felt themselves getting closer to that surge of pleasure that they oh so waited for, and as they were getting closer and closer, Rumble called out. “Let’s do it together!” Cloudchaser could only nod.

“I-I’m gon- I’m cumming!” Rumble screamed out, as did Cloudchaser. The hot, white liquid exploded into her womb, making her pussy begin to wrap tighter around Rumble’s dick as he continued to jizz inside of her.

A… A colt is cumming inside of me.’ Cloudchaser thought to herself, a bit shocked. She didn’t mind in the end though. After all, it seems she got herself a cute new coltfriend. As the two finished orgasming, they kissed and hugged, wrapped in each other’s tight embrace.



It seems I got a new cute coltfriend. I guess everything turned out for the best in the end.’Cloudchaser thought to herself as she watched the young colt sleep soundly next to her. At the same time, she continued to rub her pussy that was already beginning to ache for more stallion. Oh, but why does he have to be so cute sleeping? “It’s only making me more eager for when he wakes up!” She quickly put a hoof over her mouth as she realized she said that out loud.

Opening one eye, Rumble began to wake up. “W-Wha? Did you say something Cloudchaser?”

With a smile and patting him on the head with her unused hoof, she spoke softly to him. “No, everything’s alright, you can go back to sleep.”