Fluttershy's "Friend"

The day started like an ordinary day for Fluttershy,her friends were still in cantorlot,and had already had been seeing him for a week now,they seemed like the perfect friends,but they kept it secret,they agreed to not tell their friends,nopony had heard about the two shy'est friends in pony vile,today was more special in some ways,because she had finally got the guts to ask him out,and today was the day she was going to do it,so when they met up at the usual place,she was wearing a nice little bow her bird friends had made for her,and said "Hey,u-u-uh,G-Greenheart,w-would you like to,ummm "maybe go on a date with me tomorrow?" Greenheart looked surprised,he then squeaked in suprise then screamed "Y-YES!!!!""I mean...Yay..." "W-where should we meet?" said fluttershy "How about your cottage?I would love to meet your animals." said Greenheart "O-Ok,how about same time tomorrow?" said Fluttershy trying not to studder out.Then Greenheart said goodbye and they both went home to prepare,Fluttershy went to the library,went and borrowed a book titled "Dating for shy ponies" and read the whole thing in under three hours,and Greenheart asked everypony he knew about dating,he preped and they both went to bed at about the same time.When fluttershy awoke in the morning,she was feeling very nervous,so she went to sugar cube corner,and bought a muffin,went to the library,and read about animals,and then went back to her cottage to prepare for what's about to happen,she fed the animals,dusted,collected the eggs from her chickens,and made a nice salad for angel,and then made dinner for the two of them.When Greenheart arrived at Fluttershy's cottage,he was wearing a not so fancy hat,and brought a rose for Fluttershy,and breath mints for him,he quickly took a breath mint and then knocked on the door quietly,then when he wasn't looking,Fluttershy opened the door and softly said "H-hello?" "H-hi Fluttershy,may i come in?" Greenheart said firmly,
"S-sure Greenheart." Said Fluttershy softly,gesturing Greenheart to come in,so Greenheart went in followed by Fluttershy,who then shut the door and showed him the living room,capturing each and every little detail of the scenery and the furniture,but unlike ever other pony,Greenheart was actually listening to her,about an hour of talking later,"Sh-Shall we eat dinner now?" Fluttershy asked Greenheart "S-sure Fluttershy,I-I would love t-too." after about half an hour of eating,Someone knocked on the door,startling both of them ,when they both went to take a look,Fluttershy saw none other but the element of magic,knocking on her door, "Fluttershy?Are you there Fluttershy?Were back from cantorlot!" yelled Twilight Sparkle.
"G-Greenheart,go hide upstairs!" Fluttershy whispered to Greenheart,who then quietly trotted away and flew out the back up stair window.

Sorry too end it here but oh well,End of chapter two