This was for Bean's Writing Group - Fimfiction

Week 31: A night where the sun didn't go down, with bonus: Theme chosen by another writer (secret Santa)

If I were to self critique this story, It'd... not be rated very well.

The original concept for this story was "What if there was a giant laser that required two people in love to power the thing". Although the beginning had some of that concept, I decided to save it for a much better story later on. As such this ended up just becoming a test bed for a new technique I wanted to try, as explained below.

Half the fun of this story was creating the "Music" which serves as both a neat way to break up the story and also as "Chapter Breaks".

I like the concept and will likely use it again in another story.

The "Musical Lines" are all in quotation for easy reading.

Thanks for taking a look!

Comments are always appreciated.