Taking the Queen

by Kiernan

Chapter the Twentieth: Lather

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Shining Armor sat on the bench next to the entrance, a bag of scrubbers next to him for anypony who came in. Starlight was holding a bar of soap, and any time one of the brushes was too dirty, it would be rinsed off and reapplied. This turned out to be much more necessary than anticipated, as every minute of scrubbing took off layers upon layers of dirt and grime. at the start, the white suds that had come from the brush were quickly turning grey, and the water carried so much dirt that it seemed to turn dark brown, almost black.

"This has been a long time coming, Chrysalis," said Starlight, scrunching up her nose. "I can smell the excessive rot that was deteriorating under your exterior layer, being doused in your bodily oils. This is the most rancid smell I've ever experienced."

"It's not as though I can do this myself," sneered Chrysalis back, wincing as a guard carefully tried to brush through the knots in her mane. "I haven't been granted the opportunity to come in here, and there's no shower in my cell. If I'm dirty, it's your fault."

"I'll admit to partial blame," smirked Starlight. "We were having some trouble convincing you to behave enough that we could bring you up here. We had considered a week ago just pinning you to the wall and spraying you down with a hose, but you decided to cooperate. This will undoubtedly yield better results."

"It's so tangled," grunted the guard brushing her mane, having to pick away at pieces with a comb. "It'd almost be easier just to cut most of it off and start from scratch."

"Do you want her to suck you off while you work on it?" offered Starlight. The guard didn't need to answer, as his body was already doing so. As his cock slid from his sheathe, Chrysalis knew what she was meant to do. She took it between her lips and sucked it into her mouth, caressing it with her tongue. It tasted like it had been recently cleaned, which made sense, as he looked to have been finishing his shower when she came in.

She didn't hear any further complaints from him, but she could still feel him messing with her mane. She hadn't looked at how unkempt her mane had been, as there was no mirror in her cell. That was likely because she could break it and use the largest shard as a weapon, either on herself or her captor. She didn't even have a brush to deal with the knots on her own. all she could do now was watch as the torn away clumps and knots drifted by in the murky water running down her legs and into the drain catch, a soft plastic netting that hat small plastic spikes to catch hair. Guards had to keep their manes and tails moderately short, but they were allowed to keep them long enough that these became necessary to keep the drains unclogged.

"What about me?" asked the guard that was scrubbing her shoulders. Chrysalis didn't need Starlight to tell her what to do here, either. She shifted her hips and raised her tail, displaying her slit. The maneuver was obvious enough that the guard caught on right away and hopped aboard, slipping into her.

"I'm not going to fault you all blowing off some steam and having fun with her, but remember that the goal here is to clean her up," reminded Starlight. "You can blow your load all you like, but don't forget to keep scrubbing while you do." This warning reminded the guard that he had opted to assist. He picked up his brush and immediately began scrubbing at her flank.

Two more guards walked in at that moment, having finished with their training. "Well, this is a surprise," came a familiar voice. Chrysalis pulled her head back and looked at the two of them. One of them was the guard who had run with her. She still didn't know which one, but she had some time to find out.

"You'll need these," said Shining as she turned her mouth back to the stallion brushing out her mane.

"You can use her holes, as long as you scrub," informed Starlight. Moments later, one of the stallions was scrubbing her neck while another was brushing out her tail. The one that was handling her neck, she could fondle with her hoof, but she was unable to do anything for the one brushing her tail.

"Never thought I'd see the day," chuckled the guard scrubbing her neck. "If, during that wedding invasion, you told me that one day, the queen of the changelings would be stroking my balls, I'd think you were absolutely nuts."

"Just wait until she's gagging on your shaft," said the one working on her tail. "She's clearly had some practice."

"Spiceberry's right," grunted the guard on her mane. "She knows how to work her tongue..." It wasn't long before he gripped her horn and blew his load down her throat. As soon as he was done, he pulled away, and the one she was working with her hoof took his place. He tasted and smelled sweaty, having only just come in from his training. The taste faded pretty quickly, though, as the water spraying over them all washed away a lot of the heavier stuff. He still needed soap, but given that he was in her mouth, now was a bad time to add it.

More guards came in over time, and after an hour of switching out, only Spiceberry remained, having just scrubbed and brushed her mane and tail without having her perform any activities on him. It took her the full hour to clean up, partially due to the caked-on grime, partially due to several cumshots landing on her back that needed to be cleaned again, and partially due to her mane, tail and wings needing extra attention to keep them from being damaged by the more abrasive brushing.

When the water was finally shut off, she felt almost two kilograms lighter. She was a bit sore and quite sensitive, having lost her exterior coating that had protected her ever so slightly. It felt kind of nice, actually.

As she reached for her track suit to put it back on, Starlight stopped her. "It would invalidate your shower if you just put your dirty clothes back on," she said. "Spiceberry will take them back to your cell and put them in your hamper." She picked up the cable that served as a leash. "Your cell should be clean by now. Come on, let's go back to have a look."

It was spotless. It had been scrubbed clean, though perhaps not as vigorously as she had been. The bed now had a bit more padding, the dust was gone from the floor, and a chair had been added next to the wardrobe. Starlight uncoiled the cables, made sure they weren't tangled, and secured them back in place. She and Shining locked her in place, and she was back to sitting and waiting, though her space was a bit nicer now.

"I'm proud of you," said Starlight, feeding Chrysalis with love as Shining and Spiceberry walked away. "You didn't bite anypony, even accidentally. You're well on your way to freedom. See how nice it is when you cooperate?"

Chrysalis nodded and was rewarded with a kiss to the tip of her horn. Things were beginning to look up.

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