Dazzling’s Revenge
Sunset Shimmer awoke suddenly, she found herself in a dark room, it was completely pitch black, with the only source of light coming from a single, low hanging, lamp, posed directly above Sunset shining light down on her like a spot light.
If that wasn’t weird enough she was also sitting on a chair, with her wrists tied behind her back. Her legs were extended straight out in front of her, with her ankles locked in a pair of stocks. This allowed her to notice her boots were absent, with her feet left being covered only by her fuschia and black striped socks.
“Ah you’re finally awake…” A deep voice said. Sunset suddenly jumped and stared in the direction the voice came from. “Sunset Shimmer, you have been captured for the crimes you have commited… For the destruction you have brought to this world… For all the lives you have-”
“Sonata?” Sunset asked, recognizing the voice almost instantly,
“What!?” Sonata yelled in her normal voice, before stepping forward into the light revealing herself. “How did you know it was me!?”
“You didn’t really do a good job of hiding your voice.” Sunset explained, rolling her eyes. She then pulled her arms forward, holding a small rope in her left hand. “Your rope tying could also use improvement.”
Sonata gasped at the reveal that Sunset was able free her wrists, so far the entire day not turning out the way she hoped. She sighed and then turned around and walked back into the darkness. Suddenly the lights flickered on, illuminating the whole room, revealing it to be the backstage of the school’s auditorium. Sunset looked around and noticed her boots sat discarded against a wall, next to black duffle bag.
“Why did you kidnap me and why did you bring me here?” Sunset asked, pulling on the stocks to try and free herself, but the stocks were locked via two padlocks on either side and the stocks themselves as well as the chair she was sitting in seemed to be bolted to the floor boards.
“Like I said, I am here to punish you for what you did to me and my friends.” Sonata said, trying to sound threatening.
“Is this about stopping you from taking over the school and destroying your gems?” Sunset asked, still looking calm. “Don’t you think you kinda…” She pretended to think “Brought that on yourselves?”
“You embarrassed me and my sisters in front of the whole school!” Sonata shouted, angrily stomping her foot on the floor and shaking her fists in the air. “And I’m here to make sure you pay dearly for it.”
“Revenge huh?” Sunset questioned, before replacing her confused look with one of confidence. “You really think you can break me?”
“I don’t think so…” Sonata said, before placing her hands on the top of the stocks and leaning over towards Sunset until her face was just centimeters away from hers and then whispering. “I KNOW so.”
Sunset sat there wide eyed, staring directly into Sonata’s fuschia colored eyes. Before just smirking and leaning back in her chair, once again showing her total confidence in this situation.
Sonata just squinted her eyes before pulling back. She then walked over toward the duffle bag next to Sunset’s boots. She picked it up and brought it back over to where Sunset was positioned and dropped the bag on the floor next to the stocks, making sure Sunset got a good look at the size of the bag. Sunset continued to just sit there, leaning back with the same smirk on her face and started rubbing her socked feet together in anticipation for what Sonata is going to do. ‘Bring it!’ Sunset thought to herself, believing she can take anything Sonata could throw at her.
Sonata then reached over and pinched the tips of Sunset’s striped socks, much to the confusion of Sunset Shimmer. “Careful with those…” Sunset said, as Sonata started pulling off her socks, she quickly pulled off Sunset’s left sock, to get a good look at Sunset’s foot.
Sunset’s bare, orange foot, was rather big for her height, going in at a nice size 10 and was immaculately clean and completely blemish free. Sonata felt the foot over with her and took notice of how soft and smooth it felt. The whole time Sunset just sat there confused, as she stared forward at Sonata touching her right foot.
“Umm… What are you doing?” Sunset asked, completely lost for words.
Sonata looked down towards Sunset. “Just taking a feel for authentication.” Sonata explained. “Gotta make sure, they’re right for the tools.”
Sunset’s eyes widened. “Wait… What do you mean tools.” She asked, as Sonata pulled off her other sock, leaving both of Sunset’s feet bare.
Sonata said nothing, as she threw both of Sunset’s socks behind her, before reaching down into the bag and pulling out a large, purple feather and holding it in between Sunset’s feet, letting her get a good look at it.
Sunset’s pupils suddenly shrank and a blush started forming on her cheeks. She had a feeling Sonata would be doing something to her feet, as evidenced by the stocks and her removing her boots and socks, but she didn’t think it would end up being THIS. Sunset gulped as she stared at the feather. “O… Oh… You mean that….” She squeaked, a tiny, nervous smile appearing on her face.
Sonata simply just smiled, finally seeing the reactions of fear she was hoping for from Sunset. “Yep…” She said, grinning devilishly. “I mean THAT… er… this.”
She then brought the feather over to Sunset’s left foot and started lightly swishing it up and down her sole. Sunset bit her lower lip, grinning and keeping her eyes glued to the purple feather. ‘Keep it in Sunset…’ Sunset thought, holding in all her laughter. Her foot started twitching side to side and her toes started going crazy.
Sonata just stood there, her eyes squinting as she stared at the foot she was tormenting. Almost as if she was trying to concentrate hard on seeing which spots she was hitting was getting the biggest reaction out of her enemy. So far she wasn’t getting any laughter, bar the occasional squeak and gasp that came out of the fiery-haired girl’s mouth.
Suddenly Sonata retracted the feather, finally letting Sunset let go of her lip. Sunset sat there panting for a bit, before looking up confused. “Okay I think I made my point.” Sonata said, standing back up. “And I think you’ve finally learned your lesson. You’re free to leave now.”
Sunset breathed a sigh of relief. “Thank you…. Now can you please unloOOAHAHAHAHAH! EEEHAHAHA!!!” Sunset suddenly squealed out. As soon as Sunset’s guard was let down. Sonata brought forth the feather and started swishing the feather up and down Sunset’s right sole again, from heel to the balls, the soft, wispy feather went. Without time to prepare for it Sunset was taken off guard and had no chance to hold in her laughter. Sunset would never reveal this to anyone, not even her closest friends, but Sunset was particularly sensitive, especially on her feet. Even back in Equestria, when she was a pony, she had surprisingly sensitive hooves and it only worsened when she crossed over into this human world.
Sonata could only smile as her gaze shifted from Sunset’s foot to her face and got quite a bit of a kick out of Sunset’s wild reaction to just this little feather. It’s not that she had some kind of kink for this, but tying up here sworn enemy and forcing bouts of laughter out of her did give her a sense of power over her.
“Still think I can’t break you? Huh? HUH!? Isn’t that what you asked earlier.” Sonata asked, trying to come off as imposing as possible.
“NOHOHOHOHOHOHO!!” Sunset screamed seemingly in response to Sonata’s question. But the truth is she didn’t really hear what Sonata asked, as she was too distracted by the soft sensations on her left foot.
Sonata growled. “No huh? Well maybe I’ll just have to up my game then.” Sonata then reached her free hand into the duffle bag and pulled out and identical looking feather the one Sonata was using on Sunset’s left foot and brought it over to Sunet’s right foot. Instead of going up and down, on this foot, Sonata started spiraling the feather around in one spot on Sunset’s left arch.
As soon as Sunet felt the feathery sensations on her left right foot her eyes suddenly shot open and darted toward her right foot. “T… Two!!?” She questionly shouted, slapping her hands on her cheeks, before breaking down into laughter again, seemingly a little harder than before.
“Yes Sunny…. TWO!” Sonata evilly said, like some kind of wicked witch. She continued swishy these two feathers for a bit, before suddenly bring them up and shoving each feather into Sunset’s toe spaces. The feather on her right foot went in between the big toe and the index on her right foot. While the feather on her right went in between her index toe and ring toe.
Sunset’s pin-sized pupils suddenly shot upwards towards the ceiling, as her hands continued to cup her cheeks, as she let out a loud squeal. “EEEEEEEEE!!!”. She squealed, as the feathers started sawing back, before pulling out completely and just started swishing back and forth in the undersides of them. “Not-the-toes! Not-the-toes! Not-the-toes!” Sunset shouted, shaking her head back and forth and swinging her fists, by the forearms. Not only were her feet the most sensitive part of her body, but her toes and under toes were the most sensitive area of her feet. Her feet of course shook back and forth trying to escape the torturous feathers, but Sonata’s surprsingly did a good job of keep up with them, even when one of Sunset’s feet did a trick manuever and escaped from the feather it only lasted about a second before the feather quickly found it’s spot again. It was a never ending cycle indeed. Occasionally a feather will quickly slip in and out between one of Sunset toes spaces, making Sunset gasp between her laughter.
Eventually however both feathers came to a halt and slowly retracted away from Sunset’s squirming toes. This finally let the fiery-haired girl catch her breath, as she leaned over and put her hands on the front of the stocks, panting deeply. A deep blush started appearing on her yellow cheeks, as her toes started twitching from the abuse they just received. “T...Thank you…” Sunset said exhausted, she had no idea why she just said that. But deep down she knew the truth because another thing she would never reveal to anyone, is that she secretly ENJOYS tickling to a degree. Like she doesn’t enjoy the actual feel of it, but she does get a bit of a rush from all the laughing and energy consumption that comes with it.
“Your welcome?.....” Sonata replied, taken a bit back, as she did not expect that response, only for her confused face to turn back into an evil grin. “But we’re not done yet.” Sonata placed both feathers back into the bag and pulled something else out. Sunset’s eyes opened slightly, when she started hearing a buzzing sound from where the bag was located, but fully opened when Sonata brought it into Sunset’s view.
In Sonata’s right hand was an electrical device Sunset had never seen before. It looked like a purple electric toothbrush, but instead of a toothbrush on the end, there was instead a white pipe cleaner brush, that vibrates back and forth slightly
Sunset gasped as soon as she got a full video of the device. “W-what is that?” Sunset asked, completely in shock, her eyes welded to the brush in Sonata’s hand.
Sonata shrugged. “I don’t know, I just ordered this from some weird website, I had to lie about my age to even be allowed to view this on said website, don’t know what that’s all about.” Sonata explained. “Well doesn’t matter. ON WITH THE SHOW!”
Sonata then brought the device over to Sunset’s right foot, this time aiming straight for her toes first. Sunset’s expression never changed, the whole time the brush came into view she bore the same wide eyed, mouth agape expression, never changing, not once. Well not until the brush was slotted between her big toe and index toe. Sunset let out a loud, ear piercing squeal, as the brush was slowly slotting in all the way to the edge and then slowly slotted back out. Sonata did this again for all of Sunset’s toe spaces, it wasn’t until she was on the third toe space on Sunset’s right foot, that Sunset finally spoke up. “PLEASE! PLEASE! NOT-MY TOES!” Sunset screamed, continuing to grip the front of the stocks, so as to not completely waste all of her energy shaking. “ANYWHERE BUT TOES!!!”
Sonata didn’t listen and continued to slot the brush between the rest of the toe spaces on Sunset’s right foot, before moving onto the toe spaces on Sunset’s left foot. As soon as the brush was started attacking Sunset’s left foot, she reignited with a second wind of energy and started laughing loudly again. “BWAHAHAHAHA!! NOOOOO!!! NAHAHAHAHT-MIHIHIHIHIHIHI-TOHOHOHOHOHOESSSS!!!” She shouted, using almost the entirety of her second wind on the scream alone.
Eventually Sonata finally slotted the brush in and out through the last toe space on Sunset’s left foot. “Okay that’s enough with the toes.” Sonata said, turning the brush off. She looked over towards the worn out, fiery-haired girl, who was now audibly taking deep breaths of air into her sore throat, keeping a tighter grip on the stocks to keep from falling over. Despite all of this being done out of revenge, Sonata had to admit, she was rather impressed not expecting Sunset to last this long. And for that she felt maybe Sunset deserved a little reward.
While Sunset was busy panting, Sonata reached her left hand into the bag to pull something else out. Suddenly Sunset heard buzzing, her heart sank, was this going to be another electric brush? Sunset didn’t want to look, but she knew she had to. So she slowly turned her head over to face Sonata again, expecting her to be along another, possibly bigger and rougher brush. But instead Sonata was holding something different. While the handle of this device was the exact same as the brush, instead of a bush, the head was this weird plastic teardrop, with a ridge going around it, that rotated rather slowly.
Sunset just sat there, although exhausted, still showed a sign of confusion on her. “Yeah I have NO idea what this is even for, I ordered it from the same website, it said it was a vibrater, but it doesn’t vibrate it spins. So I just call it the ‘spinner’.” Sonata explained as she brought the spinner over to Sunset’s left foot.
Sunset quickly shut her eyes and turned her head away, trying to resist the oncoming sensation as much as she could physically possible. Suddenly she felt something smooth and spinning slowly press against her right arch, just above her heel, she bit her lip expecting more tickling. But instead she felt something else…. Something that felt…. NICE actually. The slow rotation from the spinner didn’t tickle it felt more like a massage. Sunset moaned at the sensation, rather enjoying the feeling on her still abused sole and did wonders of calming down her alarmed nerves. “Oh… OHHH….” Sunset whispered out.
“Feels nice doesn’t it?” Sonata rhetorically asked, already knowing the answer, thanks to gentle moans escaping the fiery haired girl’s lips. Sonata then had another idea, she picked up the brush again, but this time set it on a lower speed setting and brought it over to Sunet’s right arch placing it a bit higher than the spinner.
“Ah!.. Oouuuh…” Sunset gasped upon feeling the brush touch her arch, before melting into a sigh of enjoyment. “That feels…. So good!” Sunset’s toes on her left foot curled and uncurled in pure ecstasy of the massage. And when Sonata stopped and moved onto her left arch, Sunset could only gasp and moan at the new sensations on her other foot.
The massage continued on as Sunset’s eyelids started lowering indicating she was falling asleep. Just as she was about to drift off into Luna land, she suddenly felt the speed of the brush and spinner increase tenfold, which changed the gentle massage feeling back into the fierce ticklish sensation from before. Sunset gasped, before exploding with laughter again. She then felt the brush slip between the space between her right ring toe and pinky toe, with the other side of the latter being occupied by the spinner. Having her right pinky toe squeezed between two different yet equally ticklish feelings sent Sunset into a silent squeal.
This tickling only lasted for a few seconds, before Sonata pulled away again. Sunset just sat there with her head facing downwards, but still managed to make eye contact with Sunset Shimmer, as her toes started wiggling like crazy, trying to get rid of the ticklish feeling still lingering in Sunset’s pinky toe.
Sonata spoke up. “Noticed you were falling asleep, consider this a wake up call.” Sonata giggled as she shut up off both the brush and the spinner and placed them back in the bag. She then pulled something else out, something new, it was these two purple, fuzzy cloth hoops with small purple and pink striped strings attached to them. Sonata then slipped each one on one of Sunset’s big toes, with the side with the strings facing behind them, towards Sunset.
Sunset spoke up. “What are those things?” she asked, as Sonata pushed Sunset’s big toes back, allowing her to tie the other end of both strings to these little black screws sticking out of the top part of the stocks on the side facing Sunset. To which Sunset never noticed before, also taking note that there are ten screws in total.
“Toe cuffs.” Sonata replied, finally finishing up on the knots, leaving both of Sunset’s big toes taut and immovable. She then once again went back to her duffle bag of many wonders.
‘Toe cuffs? How cute.” Sunset thought, as she wiggled her remaining toes. Suddenly Sonata came back with a bunch more smaller versions of the toe cuffs, she then proceeded to loop each one around each toe and tie them back one by one. Making each toe just as immovable as Sunset’s big toes and in turn making Sunset’s entire feet immovable. ‘Oh… Oh dear…’ Sunset thought as she tried desperately to move her feet but to no avail.
Sonata smiled. “Alrighty now that everything’s all set, let’s get to work.” She said, as she cracked her knuckles and placed her hands on Sunset’s feet, her right hand on Sunset’s right foot and vice versa. Although both hands were placed, Sonata placed them differently, while she had all four fingers on her left hand placed against Sunset’s left foot, only the index and middle finger of Sonata’s right hand were placed on Sunset's right foot.
Sunset gulped. “C.. Can’t we talk about this?” She asked desperately. But it was no use as Sonata simply started moving her fingers around on Sunset’s soles. On Sunset’s left foot Sonata dug into her skin with her nails, scraping down from balls to heel. While on Sunset’s right foot, she let the pads of her two fingers slide up towards the undersides of the Sunset’s held back toes. Sunset exploded with laughter, while this tickling wasn’t quite as bad as what the brush and spinner did, it was still enough to drive her up the edge, and with her feet immobilized, there was nothing she could do to lessen the tickling. “EEEHAHAHEEE!!! I CAN’T MOVE MY FEET!!!” Sunet shouted.
“I know that’s kind of the idea.” Sonata retorted, as she suddenly changed it up a bit now using only her index finger on her right hand to slide up and down on Sunset’s right foot and using her index and middle fingers on her left hand to scratch and draw circles and figure eights on Sunset’s left foot.
Sunset continued to laugh and squeak, her arms shaking as to try and keep her grip on the front of the stocks. “EHEHEHAHAHAH!! MERCY! MERCY! MERCY!!!” Sunset screamed. “I CAN’T TAKE ANYMOHOHOHOHORE!!!”
Sonata slowed down on the tickling, before retracting completely. “Oh I think you CAN!” Sonata said, as she quickly dug her hands back into the black duffle bag, she pulled out the spinner as well as another spinner that looked exactly like the first. She turned them both on at max speed and just shoved each one onto each foot. The result was explosive.
“OH MY CELESTIA!!!” Sunset screamed at the top of her lungs, as she felt the two spinners press against her taut soles. Sunset had never laughed this hard in her entire life, she never thought tickling as bad as this could even exist and yet here she was proven wrong, as Sunset cackled like mad now shaking her head back and forth rapidly, before eventually screaming “I’LL DO ANYTHING!!! JUST MERCY PLEASE!!!”
That was proof that Sunset was reaching her limit so Sonata turned off the spinners and placed them back in the duffle bag. She then looked back at the current state of Sunset, taking notice that her orange soles now took on a more red shade, probably from a combination of the toe cuffs and the spinner’s abuse. Sonata bent down and picked up her duffle bag and threw it over her shoulder. “Okay I think you suffered enough, I’ll just leave you here, tomorrow’s monday so you’ll be found here anyway, no sense in letting you go so you can walk back home when you’re already exhausted. Sonata then turned and started leaving.
Sunset didn’t really pay much attention to Sonata’s speech, as she was now panting, completely worn out from probably her fourth or fifth wind she had today. But she did catch sign of something else about her. When she looked down she noticed a rather large wet spot on her orange skirt…. Where her crotch would be located. WIth her last few pieces of energy Sunset shouted at Sonata.
“H… Hey Sonata!” Sunset shouted. Sonata stopped in her tracks and turned to face Sunset one last time.
“What?” Sonata asked.
“T… Thanks…”
