Big Mac Accidentally Makes a Harem: Revamped

The sweltering hot rays of the sun cast itself unto a small farm known as Sweet Apple Acres. The trees, while providing ample shade from the gruesome heat, also proved to be a rather difficult challenge for the farms resident's. At one such tree, an orange limb slammed against a tree, causing the apples high in the branches to suddenly fall to the ground. A yellow teenager with beautiful red locks of hair gleefully picked up said apples from the ground. She then threw said apples to her brother, a quiet, stoic stallion, who tossed it into the cart behind them.

Indeed, this was the normal for the Apples during this time of year. Apple cider had to get into production as soon as possible, since the rush they were expecting this year would be enormous. Not to mention that making said cider was a time consuming process, especially since the Apples wished to do it the old fashioned way. In fact, tradition played such a big role in their lives, that they would be willing to fight tooth and nail to preserve it. However, even if they had to start production soon, that didn't mean that they had to be in a rush...

"Hey Applejack? That apple won't fall down!" the yellow mare shouted as Applejack looked up at the tree she had just struck. On the highest branch, almost taunting her, was a jucy apple just waiting to be picked. Removing the brown Stetson from her head, she fanned herself.

"Well I'll be! That sure is one tough apple!" Applejack confirmed, grabbing the attention of Big Mac. His eyes also looked up, watching closely at the red apple, swaying blissfully in the wind. Suddenly, a loud 'WHOOSH' followed rainbow contrail suddenly appeared where the apple was. When the contrail was gone, the apple was nowhere to be found. However, based on the telltale signs, Big Mac exactly knew who this was as he turned around.

Laying on a branch of one of the picked trees was a cyan mare. She wore a athletic bra to conceal her E sized breasts. coinciding with her choice of bra was a pair of athletic shorts, which glistened with sweat against the brutal sun. Her rainbow hair flew gracefully through the wind, as he wings contracted behind her back. The apple that had vanished was held in the palm of said mare. Grinning down at them like an idiot, this mare took a large bite out of the apple.

Shaking his head in amusement, Mac pulled his cart along, urging his younger sister to move forward.

"Consarnit it Dash! You know that y'all arn't supposed to eat our products off the limb!" Applejack shouted with a slight touch of annoyance to it.

"Eh, it's no biggie Applejack," Rainbow countered as she took another bite out of the apple. "Mmmm, sweet as always!"

A frustrated sigh escaped Applejack's lips as she asked, "Why are you even here girl? I thought you were practicing again."

Shrugging her shoulders, Rainbow answered, "Yeah, I was practicing. I just got done a couple of minutes ago."

Nodding her head, Applejack said, "Alrighty then Dash, now if you would excuse me, I have to-" Applejack turned her head to find her brother, only to see that him and Applebloom were already 5 trees ahead of her. "Well shucks! That's going to take a bit to catch up to!" Looking up at her colorful friend, she asked, "Hey, could you help me with some of these trees here? That way they can do less work on the way back."

Throwing the apple core behind her, Rainbow Dash got up and stretched her entire body, wings and all. "Yeah, I guess I can help you. Besides, consider it payment for the apple."

As she fluttered down to her friend, Applejack asked, "Really? I thought you were busy on Tuesdays."

"Yeah, but 'Shy cancelled on me today, so I've got nothing else going on," Rainbow responded as she landed besides her friend, her wine irises meeting her friend's green ones.

"Aww, I'm sorry sugarcube," Applejack answered as the two of them walked to the adjacent unpicked tree, "I didn't know that you and Fluttershy had an arrangement today. You go on home; I can handle this just fine."

"Nahh, It's nothing," Rainbow answered, looking at her friend with a smirk, 'Besides, I already told you that she-" Suddenly, she stopped, recognizing the tone of Applejack's voice. "Wait, what did you mean by arrangement?"

Looking back at her friend with confusion, Applejack said "Uhh... I meant it like a date."

"Date? Why would you think me and 'Shy are dating?" Rainbow asked back with a hint of aggresiveness in her voice. Despite the voice, she had a look of shock on her face.

Applejack didn't look that much better, her own eyes widening with suprise, " Wait, you mean that you and 'Shy arn't..."

"Hell no! I like Flutters, but I don't like her that much!" Rainbow said.

"But don't your barn doors swing..."

"No! Are you calling me a fillyfooler?!" Rainbow asked with anger.

Applejack brought up her hands defensively as she answered, "N-No! I just assumed..."

"Yeah? Well stop assumeing things!" Rainbow finished with anger as she turned her head away from her friend.

A long moment of silence passed between them before Applejack asked, "...If you don't swing like that, then what do you do with 'Shy?"

"Fluttershy is my closest friend Applejack; I've known her since I was a filly. Can't I just get together with her sometimes?" Dash answered with frustration.

A par of hands came from behind her and wrapped her into a warm hug. " I'm sorry that I thought you were a fillyfooler Dash, it was wrong of me to assume that. Could you ever forgive me?"

Silence passed between them, as Applejack let out a silent prayer for her friendship before Rainbow said, "Only if you let me have the first mug of apple cider."

Letting out a small chuckle, Applejack replied "Of course Dash. Now, about these trees..."

Reminding her of their original task, Rainbow said, "Oh! I forgot about that!" As the two prepared to harvest the first tree, Rainbow said, "Listen, let's just put all of that sexual stuff behind us and never speak of it again. Agreed?"

Nodding her head in confirmation, Applejack and Rainbow set to work.

Rainbow was having a mental meltdown.

She had been called fillyfooler many times in her life, especially because of her lifestyle and her hair, but those were just insults. But to have one of her closest friends just assume that about her... that hurt. "Why would Applejack think such a thing! Sure, maybe I'm not the girliest of girls, but that's not who I am! I could get a colt my own way! It just so happens to be that hang out with my friends more often... who are all girls... who I'm really close to..."\

Realization struck her like the Friendship Express at full speed. If she was friends with only girls, and at least from a public perspective, it looked like something was certainly going behind the scenes that she didn't want to get out. "Crap! I can see where they are coming from! Everypony must think that I'm a fillyfooler by now! She bowed her head a bit as apples fell around her, thinking sadly to herself, "How am I supposed to get a coltfriend now?"

The sun slowly began to sink into the horizon when Applejack and Rainbow Dash came back to the farmhouse. Applejack looked back at her prismatic friend with concern. During their work, Dash had barely spoken a word to her, which was very uncharacteristic for her. Normally, the two of them couldn't stop talking during their work, constantly joking and challenging each other about many things. However, she could tell that something was deeply bothering the mare. Had her faulty belief on her sexuality hurt her that much?

"Sugarcube, is there something you would like to talk about?"

Rainbow appeared to snap out of her deep thought, turning back to look at her friend and saying, "What? Nah, I'm ok. I'm just thinking about something..."

That was a lie. That was one of the most obvious lies that she has ever heard. But she could still tell that her friend refused to talk about it, so she dropped it.

"Well," Applejack begain as she moved into the house, "You're welcome to stay for dinner. We're having apple pie tonight!"

Rainbow smiled, thinking of the succulent pie that her friend was speaking of. It was no secret that the Apple family's famous apple pie was the best in Ponyville. For Celestia's sake, she even sold it at the Grand Galloping Gala a couple of years back. She would be insane to turn down that offer. Shugging her arms in a 'why not?' jesture, she said, "Sure, I've got time. I'll be in soon, so you can get started without me.

Accepting the reply, Applejack enetred the house, gently closing the wood door as she went. Rainbow Dash streatched her wings, just to get one last flex in before being cooped up inside a home. She was about to go in when she heard something move inside of the barn. Her ears perked up, looking at the small gaps in the barn with curiosity. Sure enough, there was something moving in there! Curiosity gripped her mind as she begain to unconciously walk towards the door.

Rounding the corner, peering into the large barn, a tall red figure came into view. He was bent over, setting a basket of apples down on the floor. Anypony who had met the Apple's knew this figure like the back of their hand. As he stood up, his muscular back glistening with sweat, Rainbow decided to get his attention, "Hey Big Mac! Food's almost ready!"

The sudden presence of the voice caused Big Mac to whirl around with shock and unease. However, for Rainbow Dash, something far more appealing made itself apparent. Since it was such a hot day, Big Mac had decided to go shirtless that day, which did wonders to Rainbow's imagination. His sharp and clear 6-pack drew attention to his chest, with a pair of strong arms on each side of it. Sweat gently dripped from the muscles, venting after a long day of work. A sharp blush appeared on her face as she fought off a suprisingly strong wingboner.

Seeing that it was just his sisters friend, Big Mac relaxed almost instantly, before saying, "Eeyup. Tell them I'll be in soon."
He turned around and got back to what he was doing, rearranging the baskets of apples for better efficiancy for cider production. However, Rainbow Dash couldn't move. With the image of his naked chest freshy imprinted in her mind, and the situation that had occured earlier, she decided that now would be the best time to ask a guy about what he thinks of her, to hopefully dissprove the rumors to herself.

"Hey, Big Mac," Rainbow softly asked.

"Eeyup?"

"Am I pretty?"

Big Mac immediately stopped what he was doing. Pretty? Was Rainbow Dash, quite possibly one of the most athletic, colorful, and, at least in his eyes, beautiful mares in Equestria, asking him if she was pretty? He turned back to her, a mixed look of confusion in his eyes. "What do you mean?" Mac replied, his own curiosity peaking as the converasation unfolded.

Rainbow let out another blush, as she bashfully looked down at her feet, holding one of her arms with the other. She replied, "Well...somepony told me that they thought I was a lesbian... which I'm not. N-Not that I have anything wrong with that! But... when they said that, I began to wonder if I was even pretty enough for a colt to be interested in me. I was just asking for your opinion."

He looked at her in shock. It was extremely uncommon, if not improbable, to ever think that Rainbow had insecurities about herself. Knowing her, it was almost a shock to him! But her question was certainty a tough cookie, so he stood there and thought for a moment. What did he think of her? He had observed her and Applejack plenty of times back when they were all younger. Sure, she was braggy, arrogant, and acted before thinking quite often. But she also had many charms to her... charms that he was almost afraid to admit. "Do you want the easy explanation or the hard one?" he asked her.

Always one to take up a challenge, Rainbow said, "I'll take the hard one."

Nodding his head, Big Mac carefully articulated his thoughts the best way he could, "Well, there is a lot of ways to define beauty. Some ponies think that beauty is based on the body, how strong they are, how curvy they are, or how sexy they are. Some find beauty in intellect, with the mind beating out whatever the mind may look like. By those standards, ponies may not find you beautiful..."

Rainbow hanged her head in sadness. She knew it. Big Mac didn't find her attractive. It didn't really surprise her, considering her persona and attitude made her seem rather against the concept of love. It'll only be a matter of time until she's all alone and-

"But that's not what I see."

Rainbow looked back up at him with surprise, only to find him much closer than last time. His green eyes looked so warm...so comforting...eyes like that gave her a sense of calm and security. He put a hand on her shoulder, the heavy hand softly pushing her down slightly, "When I look at you, I don't see an extravagant supermodel. Nor do I see a nerdy recluse. I see a mare who has somehow managed to balance both. When I see you, flying up there in the sky, you genuinely look absolutely gorgeous. The way your hair flows in the wind, the proud look you have any time you complete a trick, and your rocking body shows just how effortless you are when it comes to your body."

She smiled up at him, her eyes beaming with hope as she said, "D-Do you really think so?"

Big Mac smiled as he looked deep into her eyes, into her very soul, as he continued, "Yes, and that's not the only good part about you. You're surprisingly intelligent, but unlike so many others, you don't attract any attention to it. You're dedicated, and fiercely loyal to the ones you care about, and I find that incredibly hot. If any stallion were to meet you, they'd see a mare who is never willing to back down and who'll always stay by their side. That's what I see in you."

A moment of silence passed between the two. Big Mac was really unsure about how it went. He wasn't really known for his speaking skills. He'd much rather show how something's done then explain it to someone. It was a miracle that he didn't stutter doing that entire speech. Besides, Rainbow Dash's expression was unreadable. She just stood there, staring off into space. He was concerned that she was completely immobilized, but as he was about to go and snap her out of her trance, she said in astonishment, "Dude, how in Celestia do you not have a marefriend yet?"

A hidden blush appeared on Mac's red face as he siad, "Well, that's mighty kind of you Miss Dash, but I just-"

"I'm being absolutely serious about that Mac," Rainbow Dash countered as she began to close in on the stoic stallion. Her eyes were entranced with his own, and as she grew closer, she kept speaking, "I've met a lot of ponies Mac, and a lot of them have tried to earn my favor by saying nice things. However, they had no heart. But you... what you just said right there was one of the kindest, sweetest, and most genuine things anypony has ever said to me." She was now right as his chest, and as she traced her fingers along his powerful muscles, she concluded, "And I find that hot as Tatarus."

She then brought her face up to his and gave him a kiss. It certainly wasn't the kind of kiss he was expecting from her. He was expecting her to kiss him roughly, much more like the tomboy acted. However, she kissed him softly, her cyan lips bushing against his own. Her surprisingly soft hands reached up to his shoulders as he slowly got into the kiss. She let out a lustful moan as he reached behind and grabbed her soft and firm rear.

However, the need for air overpowered their kiss which resulted in them separating with a loud 'SMACK'. The two of them looked at each other gently, as Rainbow said, "I-I bet you're confused right now, right?" With a nod of his head, she let out a shy laugh as she said, "Well... I might as well come clean." She once again pushed up against him, but this time, she ran her hand over his concealed bulge, while lustfully admitting, "I like you Big Mac; I've liked you for a long time now. You're everything that I look for in a stallion. Strong, yet kind. Quiet, yet imposing. A loner, yet dashingly handsome. You're everything I have ever wanted for a mate."

He could feel his member slowly rising, pushing up against the tight confines of his pants. As her hand ran over his member, she let out a lustful gasp as she said, "I need this Mac... I need you in my life." Then, in a split moment, she lost control. She suddenly pushed his pants down, and got on her knees as the garment fell, revealing his turgid cock. With a lustful moan, she whispered, "By Celestia, it's even larger than in my dreams." She smacked her lips, her pink tongue licking her lusty lips.

She brought her head close, and as she smelled the growing musk; her mouth began to water. Refusing to wait any longer, she grabbed his length and shoved it into her mouth. Big Mac eyes widened with shock as the overwhelming senses of pleasure washed over his mind. She was completely unlike Twilight! While Twilight was more refined and cautious, Rainbow went at it like a bat out of hell! She was willing to do anything to pleasure him, even willing to sacrifice precious air to do it. Her tight lips squeezed and massaged his pulsing cock, trying their hardest to milk him for everything he had.

However, she suddenly stopped and released his cock from her mouth. She gasped for air as clogged up drool cascaded from her now open mouth. She suddenly got up sparking concern that he had done something wrong. However, when she looked at him, pink hearts dominated her eyes. She suddenly tackled him into a pile of haybales, giggling as she went down with the giant. Once they landed, Big Mac pushed her against the hay, allowing him to look directly into her eyes.

Seeing what he was thinking, Rainbow nodded gleefully, "Yes! Please Big Mac, fuck me! I've been waiting for this for 4 years!" As his proud length throbbed with anticipation, Big Mac was already on the move. He grabbed her tight sports bra and ripped it off of her, causing a squeal of delight to come from the mare. Her E cup breasts bounced in the cold air; her pink nipples grew stiff on her areolas. He then roughly grabbed the freed breasts, mashing them together, which brought a sharp brush to Rainbow's face. She let out a sharp moan when he brough his head down to her right tit and lightly tugged it with his teeth.

If Rainbow was horny before, she would be at the breaking point right now. She panted loudly, as a loud 'SQUELCH' came from her marehood, which was hidden behind her soaked shorts. Deciding that he had enough foreplay, he removed himself from her breasts. Rainbow panted as she struggled with recovering, as the pleasurable dopamine slowly began to ward off. However, she suddenly felt her shorts being removed. Looking down with a look of anticipation in her eyes, she saw that Big Mac had brought her shorts down to her ankles. He then brought himself on top of her, positioning his member in front of her needy lips. He looked at her, his green eyes filled with desire and lust as he said, "You want it?"

Nodding ferociously, Rainbow instantly replied, "Yes! Make me yours!" Nodding, Big Mac finally gently pushed his penis into her vagina.

And Rainbow came harder them she had ever before.

"Dang Nabit! Where are those two?" Applejack angerly asked. It had been an hour since she had seen the two of them, and dinner was starting to get cold. She threw on her boots and jacket and stormed out of the door. Her original plan was to go out into the forest, since that's probably where they were. Mac was probably reading a book and Rainbow was also in a tree, napping on the branches. She was about to move when she heard something. At first, she thought that one of them had hurt themselves. But then, a sharper, mor feminine moan followed.

It wasn't a moan of hurt, it was a moan of pleasure.

Her blood ran cold as the color drained from her face. "Nononononono, this can't be happening! There's no way..." She rushed over to the barn door and opened it without a care in the world. "Big Mac?! Y'all better not be..." Her eyes widened with shock as she saw Big Mac, who was as naked as the day that he was born, thrusting his length into her friend. Speaking of her, Rainbow let out a moan as his dick plowed into her tight depths. For a moment, she didn't even see her friend until a small gasp came from her.

Rainbow looked at her friend, who's green eyes were widened with shock. For a moment, they just looked at each other, unsure of what to do with each other. However, Rainbow suddenly got an idea, "So, she thinks I'm gay, huh? I'll show her!" Giving her friend a wink, she began to push back against Mac's thrusts, bringing more pleasure to the two of them. She knew that she was close, meaning that he must have been close too. Deciding to give the stallion one last "push", she said to him, almost as if she was taunting Applejack, "Come on big guy! Give me a big finish! Flood my womb with your semen!"

Big Mac was barely holding back until Rainbow begged him to cum. Dropping all forms of resistance, Big Mac let out one last groan and slammed Rainbow down to achieve the deepest depths possible. With a mighty throb, cum erupted from his penis, painting her walls with semen. Rainbow also let out an orgasmic scream as her own cum came rising out to paint Big Mac's crotch with sticky girl cum.

As they two held each other tightly, Rainbow drifted her hand down to her belly. Despite being a rockstar athlete, she could see a noticeable bulge on her stomach. She ran her hand over said belly and moaned as she felt the pints of cum inside of her slosh around. In a moment of post-orgasmic bliss, the two partners gave each other a loving kiss. The two just stood there for a moment, basking in the bliss of each other's company. Unfortunately, the need for air outweighed the moment, and the two reluctantly pulled apart.

They smiled at each other, looking deeply into each other's eyes. "I had a great time Mac," Rainbow quietly said, as the chirps of grasshoppers could be heard from outside.

Big Mac gently set her back down, her naked body still pressed tightly against his. "Eyyup, I did too," he replied.

As he gently began to stroke her hair, making her let out a girly sigh, she asked, "Mabey we can go out together sometime... maybe lunch?"

Big Mac gave her a loving smile as he kissed her on the forehead, "I think I would like that."

Smiling, Rainbow nodded her head in agreement. She pulled herself away from him and made her way to the barn doors. Before she left, ignoring the fact that she was naked (besides, she was so fast, nopony would be able to notice that she was nude), she gave Big Mac a slutty wink, and briefly bent over and opened up her used vagina. "One last look for the road stud, " Rainbow teased, as she heard Big Mac whistle with delight. Giggling to herself, she pried open the barn doors and stepped outside.

Closing the doors behind her, she was surprised to find Applejack sitting next to said door. She seemed to be in a distant state of being, seeming to not notice her dear friend. When Rainbow tried to move forward, Applejack finally seemed to notice her, and she turned her head to look at Dash. The two just looked at each other for a while, the crickets chirps being the only noise penetrating their ears.

Eventually, Rainbow smirked as she said to her friend, "See? I told you that I'm straight!" She then threw her wings open, and blasted into the air, zooming off to blissfully dream of her night with Big Mac.