The rise of Adam, the mysterious man: Twilights' extrordinary day

by realracer

Rating: mature
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Other, Romance, Princess Luna, Spike, Princess Celestia, Crossover, Sex, Human, Main 6
Length: 10725

This is Twilight's chance to meet a man from another universe

The basis of this story is to get a feel of what would happen if Twilight ever met someone from a different universe, who inadvertently fell, genuinely having a good time with her and her friends. However, there is an ending which I wish to reveal, in time and patience.
There will not be an immediate introduction with the ponies, instead, the story will travel at MY linear pace and go where I so choose.
Some of the terminoligies I might use will either be one of two things:
- Incorrectly spelled / misused.
~~~~~~~~OR~~~~~~~~~~~~
- Offensive to certian people.
Read at your own precautions, as soon as you start reading, the responsibility is no longer mine, sorry.

Published 2012-09-17 09:24:07 UTC
Last updated 2012-09-22 19:34:49 UTC

Chapter 1: In the human world

Chapter 1: In the human world

"Ugh, what a day..." a brown mane of hair flopped over the face of a human man, framed perfectly in a late afternoon window, his face was somewhat pale from the previous nights ordeal. "That was some party last night, jeesh, that Ivor can sure drink any man under the table with vodka!" This amused the man quite greatly, as he picked up a pinstriped black fedora that was strewn on the ground. However, underneath the hat was a post-it note with a hasty scrawl written on it, he picked up the note and read. "Adam, I saw your abandoned project downstairs, so I helped you, much respect for drinking ME under the table - Ivor."

Adam had realised, at that split second he yelled, "My project!" He quickly dressed himself in his white shirt, black pinstripe suit and matching trousers. he then placed the fedora on his head and took off out the doorway of his bedroom, suddenly startled by the news that Ivor had tampered with his machines. He had no time to stop, he quickly jumped off the balcony next to the stairs in order to get down, but Adam and gravity tend to have issues. He slammed to the floor quite forcefully, his fedora landed on his hea, perfectly in place.

He opened the hatch to the basement, where he'd kept all his machines, he slid down the rails along the crooked stairway and into the darkness of the room. However a soft glowing and humming emmitted from behind a tarp on a machine. He flicked a switch and the basement sprang to life with light and clour, the completed machines whirred to life. However all was not well in Adam's basement, he could feel a bad energy emmmiting from behind the tarp, which he had marked "Abandoned." He talked to himself as he approached the machine, he said "Project dimension." with a slight note of sorrow in his voice, it was his only abandoned project.

He removed the dust covered tarp from the machine, a U shaped machine came into view before him, a small panel was open to the left of the machine. He inspected the open panel to find that a diamond had been put inside it, he said to himself, "Curious, as far as I know Ivor has never carried gems with him, EVER, this must be pretty big then." he closed the panel. Adam looked curiously at the circut breaker in his basement and said to himself, "Dare I try?" He pulled the circut breaker down, then the machine came to life, it growled like a lion coming back to its days of pride.

He knew enough to know that wasn't a good sound, and he retreated to the basement hatch. Suddenly, the door slammed shut, he vigourously pulled at it, but to no avail. He yelled "Stupid security systems!" as he well knew that the door was deadlocked untill morning. The machine kept growling, sparks flew from the small conductive metal arms running up the entirety of the U shaped machine, excluding the main platform where you stood, which was already gathering dust. The machine clunked, clanked and clinked, it spun wildly and jumped about, even though it wasn't supposed to.

The power went out entirely, Adam could see that from his power grid monitor he had been given the last time he'd caused a power outage. However, the machine still hummed and spat out energy, then, when he least expected it, a bright flash came from the machine. blinded temporarily, he fell from the crooked stairwell, he regained some sight and took a peek at what the machine had done. A glowing orb hovered inside the U of the machine, he looked right into the orb, then the orb tunred into a model of earth, he watched the earth spin for a few seconds when the orb expanded to fill the entirety of the space provided within the machine.

He could see the earth, the moon, the sun, mars, venus, but the model started to zoom out, further and further, whisping him through planets, solar systems galaxies and finally zoomed out into our whole universe. He was astounded, but it did not stop, there were other universes smaller than ours orbiting it. His expression was priceless, and it kept zooming out untill it looked like an... atom?...

Adams brain suddenly exploded with questions, his mind was filling with these questions, and yet, somthing didn't seem right. A huge rope of purple energy floated from the orb, and all went cold and un-forgiving, the orb had zoomed into another universe, another planet, he quickly pressed the express dumb-waiter, which brought down weapons and a HUMUNGOUS bag of supplies. With little time to spare too, for at that moment, the purple energy wrapped around him, he feircly hacked at it with his swords, but to no avail.

The purple rope dragged him ever closer to the orb, he felt the energy of the orb touch his legs, it was... warm, an odd sensation passed up his body as he was dragged into darkness.

(End of chapter 1)

Chapter 2: The unlikely event

Chapter 2: The unlikely event

Adam heard nothing for a long time, the darkness had enveloped him, making him feel cold and lifeless, but he knew that wasn't the case. He knew he was still alive, however convincing his brain that was another thing, because it was making adrenaline like no mans business. However, he felt a slow warmth crawl up him, the same warmth he felt enetering the orb. He thought to himself, "Hm, I acctually feel quite cosy." He slowly began to regain his sences, a pleasent soft feeling from underneath him and a warmth covering him.

Two voices nagged for his attention, buzzing around his head like flies, he could not ignore them as his sences came to. However, the voices were muffled, one spoke with keen interest, whilt the other of disconcerining fear, he was unsure of his surroundings. He felt his body waking up, his brain started to put feeling back into his body, which was a grave mistake, as he yelled with pain. Nither of the voices seemed bothered with the yell, he had just realised he'd lost his voice breifly, he opened his eyes to see the inside of a treehouse. His voice came back to him and he muttered to himself, "Damn kids, my lab probably blew up and they proably found me unconcious, wanted to 'help' me again."

As he got up, he made sure to quieten himself, finally having gotten his voice back, he said to himself "Hopefully, all those years of sneaking past sleeping freinds to watch porn has taught me to sneak efficently." Indeed it had. His profound yet highly effective method of sneaking offered no one any give on his location, assuming no one saw him. He began sneaking down toward a huge libarary, down a curved staircase, when his ankle buckled and he flew head-first down the stairs. Suddenly, the voices became hushed, then the sound of... "horse shoes?!" he thought to himself. Adam thought "Damn, I've known some people with weird fetishes in my times, but somone who wears horseshoes can't be one of your regular 'run of the mill' people."

A door swung open to his right, and in came a... "DRAGON!" He yelled loudly and jumped up, he landed on his now injured leg and yelped with pain. However, what followed the dragon startled him alot more, "A pony?" he said quizically, balancing himself on his good foot. Bearing in mind gravity still has it in for adam, he harsly slammed to the ground as soon as he lost balance. The purple pony introduced itself with somthing of a calculating tone "Hello there, I'm Twilight Sparkle, this is Spike, my baby dragon. However, I'd like to skip formailities, please tell me who and what you are."

He gawped at her, his expression must be quite a sight, for the pony blushed to herself akwardly. He said "Fix my ankle, then give me over my stuff, then I'll tell you who I am, I promise, deal?" At this, the pony looked at him, her horn glowed bright purple, his ankle was immediately moved back into place, and his huge bag was teleported right next to him. He looked at the bag, slightly startled and said to himself with a little bit of a stutter "M.m.m.my n.n.n.n.n.name's Adam, I'm a Hu.hu.hu.hu.human." an unusual shyness caused him to stutter, which came from his anxiety of the world.

Twilight looked at him, slightly puzzled, she looked at her companion, Spike, for any help, but to no avail. she said quizically "What are Humans, then?" at this, Adam raised himself to his full standing height of 6ft 8" the 3 ft pony a dwarf to him by sheer comparison. She looked up at him, he picked up the bag he took with him and opened it, from it he removed a thick, leatherbound book and then sat down. The book was made from very strong tanned leather and had tested time for longer than any other books passage.

He said to the purple pony, "This is a book, entitled 'An anthology of Human-kind' please be careful with it, it is my only copy, but I guess I can let you have it, seeing as you have an immaculate library." Twilight squealed with delight, Adam did not initially know this, but she was really into books and studying. He felt the ponys front legs wrap around hs shoulders as he was pulled into a hug. He did not know it, but he had just given Twilight the best gift she could hope to recive, more books.

He closed the bag, as he did so, Twilight and spike talked to Adam about the place he was in, catching him up to speed as much as they could. "So you're telling me I'm in another universe, another time, with different people and a new life?" of which the pony and the dragon nodded. Adam didn't seem to adoment about the whole idea, in fact, he was quite reluctant.(See what I did there? ADOM-ent, oh fuck you, that's funny, also, expect more puns.) Twilight suddenly gapsed, he looked at twighlight with a raised eyebrow.

"We should take you to see Princess Celestia right away!" she looked excited with the idea, however adams thoughts were still trying to comprehend the fact that he had ventured into his own twilight zone.(More puns) He said "I have never gotten on well with royalty." This was a known fact for Adam, last time he'd met a princess, he accidentally managed to fart right into her face, and he REALLY didn't want to elaborate on that with a flashback either. Adam looked out as Twilight opened up the door of her treehouse out into the open world. He heard birds singing and animals playing, and it was clearly quite early in the morning.

Ladies and Gentlecolts of all colours could not help but stare at Adam, some of them looked taken aback at his appearance. He sighed slightly as Twilight summoned a carrige, drawn by gleaming golden armoured white war pgasi. He said to Twilight, "This almost seems like a rather fairytale way to get somewhere." of which she laughed. He also allowed himself to relax, but his demeanour stopped being relaxed the second the carrige gained a high enough velocity.

He yelled at twilight through the gusting wind, "How fast does this go?!" of which she heard her reply "Well, we'll be flying in a second, so I'd guess an hour!" As soon as he heard the response, he gulped "Flying... Why flying?" the carrige took off into the air as the pegasi spread their wings. His initial yells of terror were drowned out by the billowing winds, but slowly, as he realised that there was no particular way for gravity to begin hating him here. He relaxed slightly, his un-covered shaggy mane of brown hair blustering wildly in the wind. A small smile crept on his face, a rarity by his standards.

About an hour later, they arrived at the canterlot castle, Twilight told him everything about canterlot, as well as how to act there, he ignored the "Acting lessons"

(End of Chapter 2)

Chapter 3: Meet & greet

Chapter 3: Meet & greet

As Twilight and Adam walked toward the Canterlot castle, he couldn't help but feel a little anxious, the big purple golden gilded doors swung open before him and his pony guide. He was walked down a long hallway toward two thrones, the two princess's sat looking keenly onto him and Twilight. Celestia was the first to speak, "You've only been here a day, yet there has already been rumors and tales spun up about your appearance." Adam remained silent as she continued, "I have heard from Twilight's account how you had arrived, but now I wish to hear yours."

Twilight nudged him in the side slightly, she could see his anxiety. He said "Well, then you must know from her that my name is Adam." of which the princess responded with a nod. He said "I arrived here because, I think I might have built a machine that had temporarily ripped the fabric of the space-time continuum, and launched me into here to fix that rip." Twilight looked dumbfounded and said "I read a lot of books on science and magic, but I've never heard about a 'Space-time continuum' in any of my books!" Adam said "I'll explain to you later."

He spoke to the princess again, "Would you mind if we shook hands? hooves? ugh this is terribly confusing." The princess giggled slightly at this comment, then replied "Sure, I also think you MIGHT want to get your terminologies right, so when we have fully met, do not hesitate to explore Ponyville!" He repeated the name in his head "Ponyville" with an almost resentful tone. Adam's hand cupped the princess's hoof, then suddenly "WHOOMPH!" he was launched all the way back, then forcefully slammed into the doors of the entrance to the castle with a dull, echoing "THUNK!"

Twilight ran to him, to check if he was OK, but the matter of fact, he wasn't. However, a small amulet hung from around his neck, the circular stone that comprised it was black and white, shaped into that of Yin and Yang. Twilight's eyes fixated upon the relic from Adam's past, a slight fear, but also a slight interest crept upon her face. Meanwhile, Princess Celestia walked down the hallway, giving Adam such a scornful look that any man would have turned into a turtle and tucked himself away. However, this was not the case with Adam, as he stared deep into those scornful, unblinking eyes as she said "You tried to take my power, the second you touched me I felt the surge."

Twilight backed way from Adam, now coming out of his reach, he panicked and said "No, you've got it all wrong, it's not ME it's my amulet, it permanently COPIES peoples powers over to me. Then puts them all into MY memory so I can use them whenever I want to, if I haven't already copied another power like it, of course!" This statement even threw off princess Luna, who was stood behind her sister. He said "Without the amulet, I am completely normal, or otherwise considered mortal, I can die, starve, die of thirst, natural diseases or irregular diseases!"

At this, all 3 ponies stared right at the amulet with raised eyebrows, he would have laughed had the scenario not taken a turn for the worst. At this, Princess Luna said "So, as long as you are wearing that little relic around your neck, you will never die, no harm will come to you, nor will you feel hunger nor thirst?" Adam looked at the younger sister and smiled happily "See, you get the idea, and yes, it does mean all that stuff happens." Luna smiled back in joy, realizing she had just helped made her smile slightly wider.

Adam looked Luna over with his sapphire blue eyes, for a brief moment he was lost, concentrating purely upon the younger princess now, she blushed slightly as she recognized him looking her over. However his attention was brought back to the older sister by a slight cough from her. she smiled and said "I think I've seen and heard enough for now, I'll try my best to accommodate you in Ponyville, but until that point, you can stay with Twilight until I have a house ready for you."
(end of chap. 3)

Chapter 4: A Rare treat

Chapter 4: A Rare treat

Adam, having just arrived back into Ponyville, sighed heavily and looked at Twilight, who was still apprehensive of him. He said to her "Damn, my suit's a bit torn from that impact, know any tailors?" at this, twilight took him to the grand looking, "Carousel Boutique" he said aloud in his British accent, the way he pronounced French words almost seemed to kiss the ears of the surrounding Equestrians , including twilight, who smiled at the pronunciation. She said "Rarity is in one of her 'moods' today, you can go in if you like, but just be warned, she may want to model you." At this comment Adam became the apprehensive one.

He pushed open the door to the shop, a soft tinkle of a bell sounded from above the frame, he had to crouch slightly to enter, due to his sheer height. A voice came from somewhere in the back of the shop, "I'll just be a minute!" the voice exclaimed with a sweet tune. A few seconds later, a marshmallow white pony with a mane and tail of violet hue stepped out of a doorway in the back of the shop. She looked around and her eyes quickly snapped onto Adam, but they did widen quite a bit. She exclaimed "You! what.. WHAT IS THAT YOU ARE WEARING?!" he looked at his pinstriped suit and trousers, both of which had a few rips at tares in them.

"It's what's left of my pinstriped black set..." he said, sighing slightly, he then asked "Why?" The pony responded "Because it looks AMAZING, well... minus the rips and tares, but I could fix that up for you in a jiffy if you wanted!" He nodded and the pony smiled "By the way, my name's Rarity, and you are?" He responded "I'm Adam, you might of heard of me as the man who fell from the sky." Rarity gasped, "So it was YOU who crashed right through into Twilight's house, through that gigantic awful black rip that appeared, and disappeared, when you came!"

Adam recalled for a second, "Hold on, black rip?" of which she said "Oh yes, huge gaping hole in the sky, opened up, spat you out, closed right back up again, fancy that! Not that I liked it anyway, it clashed with the sky something awful!" He pondered for a second on the news he had just received, he then said "Twilight never told me about a gaping black rip that appeared in the sky, that must mean that my machine destroyed itself when I came through."

He was calm until he just realized what he had said, "Now that means I'm stuck in this universe FOREVER!" he exclaimed. Rarity gave him an odd look "This universe? you mean to say..." he interrupted "Yes, there are other universes with opposite traits and abilities, well, compared to this universe at least, gravity doesn't seem to hate me as much." He laughed slightly as she looked at him slightly confused. She handed him his repaired suit and said "Your trousers, if you please." Adam said "is there a changing room here?" She shook her head "Only pony size" she replied.

Her horn glowed bright blue and his trousers were forcefully removed, unfortunately his underwear had so chosen to attach to his trousers at that moment in time. he was stood there with his 12 inch long big john exposed to the elements. Rarity's cheeks couldn't have been any redder as she bit her lip to stifle a laugh, handing him back his underwear, she said "I have seen many a stallion, but none are as ready as you are." This made Adam a bit wary of his manhood now, he questioned "Too big? huh, I guess there really is such a thing, not my fault it's that big, it's what nature gave me."

Rarity said slightly cheekily "Well, maybe we can find it something warm and moist to wear, a 'fit-into' companion, perhaps?" at this, His cheeks also reddened adding to the humor. He said "Making such suggestions, not very lady like, a little.." he paused to raise an eyebrow, "..impulsive... I like it." Rarity laughed and said "No harm in a joke every once in a while, after all a lady has to let her hair down sometimes.

His trousers seemed to take far longer than his suit, he kept receiving glances from rarity, who blushed and looked away each time he caught her peaking at him. She had finished with his trousers and folded them upon her worktop, she then approached him and asked "Want a tour?" he followed her. Rarity had showed him all around the place, leaving a door til last, when she came to it, she opened it and said "...and this cosy place right here is my bedroom!" he looked around at the decorated room.

There was a clunk of the door shutting and the clink of the door locking, Adams eyes widened. Rarity smiled "Normally I'd never engage in such activities, however, seeing how... proficient.. you are, I couldn't pass the chance!" He shyly smiled as rarity wrapped the key in a velvety smooth piece of fabric, and attached it to her chest. She said "If you want freedom, you'll work me over for it." At this, Adam's brain finally clicked into place and he said "Please, get comfortable then." he signaled to the bed, Rarity blushed and laid upon the bed, spreading herself out, waiting.

He bent down to Rarity's hind legs, and placed his hands on opposite sides of the mare's vagina, he wasn't experienced, but he would try his best. He slowly teased her clitoris with his fingers, twisting and tickling the highly sensitive lump of flesh. She let out a moan of delight as he slowly made her moist, he seemed a bit apprehensive, but then he pressed his mouth to her moist pussy lips. Teasing her clitoris with his tongue, her moaning became enriched, and her pussy was moistened further so.

Adam was a little wary of Rarity, but he soon found out that this pony was dominant. She had flipped him over onto her bed, a wild look in her eyes, almost somewhat feral, as if she had gone back to key survival instincts. She grabbed his somewhat erect cock and began to lick it, stimulating his adrenaline and making his dick a rock hard 14 inches long. She drove the cock into her pussy and let out a massive squeal of delight as she rode him, he bucked her like a horse to try get her off, but the end result was only that he penetrated deeper and the moist tight walls of her pussy clamped around his cock.

He was getting extremely hot and hard down there, he could feel his cock throbbing, pleading, wanting, wishing to release. He was a fool to hold back, then all of a sudden there was a "Swoosh!" a splurging sound of cum being delivered into the crazy mare's uterus sounded like the filling of a water balloon. She smiled and kissed him upon the lips, as he ran his hands cross her chest to get the key. he had got it, put it into his pocket, but as quickly as the mare had gone wild, she slumped into a deep sleep, then so had he, both drained of all energy.

They both woke up the next morning, staring into Rarity's eyes, he said "Urm... let's keep this between you and me, shall we?" The pony said somewhat oddly "sure, but I don't understand what made me want to... especially with you, still something of a stranger I must say so myself." He said "Well, that was my first time, and it felt good to have it with you, Rarity, I guess nothing can replace that, not now, not ever. We both lost our minds, you more-so, and I complied to your needs, what else is a friend for?"

(End of Chapter 4)

Chapter 5: What's pink, bouncy and loves parties? ME!

Chapter 5: What's pink, bouncy and loves parties? ME!

Adam left the boutique in the early afternoon as soon as he got dressed, his suit renewed to its former glory. He smiled slightly and continued on his way, when he heard a voice, "Hey, I've never seen you before, that means you must be NEW, ooh are you that creature that came crashing down from the sky?! Wow, that must have been awesome!" Adam turned around to see a pink pony with extremely curled and puffy mane and tail, which resembled cotton candy almost identically. He guffawed a little at the ponies appearance and stifled a laugh.

The pony saw this and smiled widely, she then hopped around whilst Adam watched her. He laughed quite loudly now, unable to stifle the joy that seemed to infect him from this pony, his laugh was warm and loving, a rare sound indeed for him. He had normally no reason to hardly attempt a smile, various outcomes in his life left him so worried or so devastated that his face was normally deadpan. However the universe here seemed to have an adverse affect on Adam, lifting some of the most major worries out of his mind.

The pink pony said "By the way, I'm Pinkie Pie, I got a joke for you!" He looked at the cotton candy pony inquisitively. However, she then said "What's pink, bouncy and loves parties? ME!" at this he laughed. Pinkie lead him to a small shop, named "Sugar cube corner", once inside he happily hopped around in the well lit bakery. Tarts, cream cakes, pound cakes, cookies, cakes and an assortment of sugary treats lined the shelves of the bakery, choosing only one of them was hard. Pinkies voice floated to him "By the way, seeing as your my guest, you can help yourself!"

Adam picked out a stack of triple chocolate chip cookies from the shelf and lightly nibbled one, inspecting the flavor. However, the taste of smooth, rich chocolate was the first to hit his tongue, the cookies were both crunchy on the outside and chewy on the inside. Adam had tasted some delicacies in his times, but NOTHING came close to the chocolaty taste sensation that was engulfing his very personality and making him sweet. In just that brief moment of time Adam dropped into a waking stupor of blissful ignorance. His mind a blank and all his worries washed away by the taste of the one cookie, until he was summoned back to reality by "Call it a hunch, but I think he likes those cookies!" followed shortly by Twilight's laughter.

The faces of both Pinkie and Twilight came into view, he said "How long was I out for?" Pinkie said "About 5 minutes, I called Twilight over because your face looked FUNNY, not bad funny but HA HA funny!" He swallowed his pride, as well as the rest of his cookies. Twilight looked at him and said "It's sort-of getting late, you might want to move soon before it's too late." Adam looked out the nearest window and noticed the sun closing in on the horizon, he didn't mind the night so much in his world, but this one is different.

Twilight also said "Princess Luna had announced that she'd visit Ponyville to raise the moon tonight." at which Adam said "You mean, the princess' younger sister?" Of which Twilight said "Yes, that's the one!" He looked at her and said "Then I want to be there to greet her in person, you know, initiate a good look for royalty and so on." Of which Twilight said "Yeah lover-boy, I know what you mean." He blushed and said "I don't love her, she's just..." Twilight finished for him "Caught your eye?"

They spent the whole time bickering as they left the bakery shop, leaving Pinkie Pie to her own devices...or Hooves? By the time they had finished their argument, which got neither of them anywhere, they had both arrived at the "moon rise" podium that had been set up earlier by the locals. Twilight rolled her eyes as Adam took a seat on her bare back in order to get out of the way as much as possible, she found that contrary to his size, he weighed no more than a feather,but chose not to press questions about it. Instead, she too waited for the princess's arrival.

(End of chapter 5)

Chapter 6: Celestial Lunacy

Chapter 6: Celestial Lunacy

The Princess had arrived on Que, awed by many adoring fans, she smiled to all of them, but then saw Adam. For a moment, her eyes met his, quite shyly inspecting him now. She broke eye contact with him and raised the moon as the sun went down over the horizon, applause broke out from the surrounding ponies. Adam couldn't help but look in awe at the princess's raw abilities, as she curtsied and walked off the stage he stood up and made his own way toward her.

Guards cut him off just short of the princess, but she smiled and said "Let him past, he is a royal guest." Without so much as a noise, the guards moved aside and allowed Adam past. He smiled innocently and entered the carriage that Luna arrived in. A brief moment silence ensued as he attempted to start up conversations with the princess, again reading every detail of her as if it were life saving information. However, the princess seemed a little shy around him, he said "You did me a great favor, saving my neck back there with your older sister."

Luna's cheeks grew an incredible hue of bright pink, Adam laughed slightly then said "Anything you want, anything your heart desires, ask of me and I shall do my best, to give you the best." However, Luna finally spoke to him "I wish to find out who you are, study your biology, if I may." Adam smiled and said "Your wish is my command, but only for tonight." Luna now smiled and said "Well, we can get to the castle and I can study you closely, your mannerisms intrigue me, tell me how your species uses them."

So, he told Luna what all his differing mannerisms, sayings and comparisons were. However, he finished by the time they'd arrived at the castle, she said to him "Interesting, so when you say 'when pigs fly' it actually means an impossibility, something that would never happen? Now the confusion in me has halved since I first saw you!" Adam was then escorted to Luna's private quarters in secrecy. However, It seemed that Celestia was not fond of him or his abilities, despite the acts of kindness that he thought he had done.

He was demanded by the princess to remove all his garments, much against his character, he abided to her command, no matter how ridiculous. However, the princess scanned him up and down with her eyes, asking him to turn around when she had seen enough of one side. Then, Luna said "Are humans always that.. ample?" she looked at Adams 12 inch long john with a sparkle in her eye. He replied "No, my mistress, I am the only human to legitimately grow and possess a penis this thick and this long,"

Her eyes glittered "Ooh, one of a kind, HM, so I suppose that's why it's so big, that thing could put a fully fertile stallion to shame." Adam hid his shame, but also his slight joy of receiving such a comment, especially from a princess. She said to him "Now please, make yourself comfy." He laid himself upon the bed, waiting to hear what the princess had to say. Luna said "I've never tried using my mouth to pleasure a stallion before, but you are very clearly not just any normal stallion, for this I'll make an exception."

Adam's eyes widened as he realized exactly what was going to happen, but he allowed it to happen because he made a promise. He felt the princess's tongue, gently caress his shaft, slathering it with drool in a mere few seconds. He felt the same raging energy he did with Rarity, but he liked that feeling now. He felt the mouth of the princess slowly envelop his penis, the hot inside of her throat and tongue gently caressing the tip of his penis. The princess rotated herself so her whole body was on his, her hind legs at his shoulders. She sent an Image of him licking her pussy, and told him that she "wanted that to be done."

He buried his face into the princess's warm pussy, and allowed his tongue to undulate around the princess's clitoris, she was getting wet very quickly, as he realized in his mind "My tongue has practice!" His tongue dug itself into the princess's vagina, literally licking and fucking her at the same time. However, the walls of her vagina contracted with pleasure, then she had released her sweet juices into his mouth, and right onto his tongue. His eyes widened as the juice suddenly filled his mind with nothing more than the urge to ravish the princess.

He grasped the princess ad lifted her, she looked at him with wide eyes, and penetrated her pussy. As he feverishly slammed his giant erect penis repeatedly into the princess, who let out loud moans of delight. Between moans, the princess said "I thought that... this was supposed to be at my pleasure." she gasped as he dug deep into her with his cock. Adam said "So you're not enjoying it, you want me to stop?" he removed his throbbing penis from the princess.

She said, "No! please continue, I like this feeling." With that, he penetrated her a second time as she let out a delighted moan. her vaginal walls still squeezing further in on his penis. A few slams to the princess's pussy made her scream with delight, her older sister, Celestia, burst in and saw her... fucking... Adam. The older princess slammed shut the door and locked it magically, as she walked up to Adam.

"Well, clearly someone has a gift, mind if i experience this as well?" Adam thought to himself "Two for the price of one? Seems too much like a dream to me, but why deny her?", he said aloud "Climb on-board" Celestia obliged, placing her larger pussy into Adam's face, he went to work, fucking both the princesses.

He heard a "Sloosh! " as Luna was filled with cum, then he moved Celestia onto his shaft, allowing Luna to rest, Celestia was having multiple orgasms, much to her initial disbelief. He again felt the squeezing of another vagina on his shaft, and another loud "Sloosh!" as the older of the two princesses was now filled and dripping with cum.

He later regained his consciousness, the animal side to him had disappeared as quickly as it had came, then he fell asleep in Luna's bed.
(End of chapter 6)

Chapter 7: A royal pain in the rear

Chapter 7: A royal pain in the rear

It was a new morning, Adam put on his clothing silently and walked out of Luna's room, He then proceeded into the main hall. However, in her throne was no one else but Celestia, Adam said with a shy laugh "Have a rough sleep last night?" She looked at him and said "It was very rough, but VERY pleasurable." As she said this, he couldn't help but feel she winked at him, he knew exactly what she meant.

He said "I wish to leave early before any more 'experiments' are made on me." This made the princess laugh, she said "Seeing as you helped me de-stress, I'll teleport you out of canterlot and back into Ponyville." He said "Sure sounds quicker than walking." The princess walked up to him and kissed him upon the lips, white energy surrounded him as she did so and the ground moved away from underneath his feet, spiraling through a rainbow vortex. Then, the next thing he knew, he felt himself halt and the room briefly warped around him, building itself in-front of his eyes from the faster than light speed he had achieved due to the princess.

He was back in Twilight's library home, he had not noticed before, but many of the books were written on pony lore. He began to browse the books, then the front door had opened and Twilight trotted in. He had remembered his behavior, then smiled at her, she smiled back and said "I'm guessing you got what you wanted." He replied "Actually, I got her and her bigger sister." Twilight's jaw dropped, if it would've dislocated, he was sure It'd have hit the floor. She stammered "B... but no pony has touched Celestia, no pony has ever caught her eye or managed to get that close to her."

Adam smiled and said "Well clearly I'm not any-PONY I'm a somebody, not some-pony." Twilight stared at him avidly, her interest now peaked, she said "I need to run some tests on you, fitness, strength, stamina, intellect and of course magical abilities." He looked apprehensive, then said "Who do I see for strength and fitness?" Twilight responded "Applejack, then speed and stamina is Rainbow Dash, I'll test you on intellect and kindness with help from Fluttershy and I'll test you by myself on Magic.

Adam said "Well, I best get off to Applejack, you mind taking me to her?" Twilight smiled and said "Sure, follow me." As he walked out with his purple pony guide, he couldn't help but notice that no time had passed since his travel from Canterlot to Ponyville. It was still about dawn, but the walk to a place Twilight talked about, named "Sweet apple aches", was taking them well into the morning to reach, however the skies were clear.

He said "Hm, the sky looks beautiful and clear. I'm guessing this 'Rainbow Dash' is a flying pony of sorts?" Twilight said "Actually, she's a Pegasus, but you are right, within reason, she clears the skies using her ability to touch the clouds and physically walk on them. However, this is an oddity to your kind, I read the book you gave me." Adam smiled "Glad it cleared up most of the confusion, assuming you don't have any other questions."

"Actually, I have one question." she stated, "It's about that weird thing on your neck." Adam looked at her sincerely and said "I guess I owe you the truth. However, you must promise me that you will tell no one here, well maybe princess Celestia, but only if necessary." She nodded, he continued "This is the amulet of Equinox, I might have explained this earlier, but let me Re-cap, Yin and Yang, Good and Evil, Dark And Light, Life and Death all inside this one amulet. However, it's magical abilities are beyond that of incomprehensible, In fact, the power it has is limited at your imagination, if you can think it, you can do it."

Twilight looked at the amulet with awe, her studies had never heard of such a powerful artifact. Adam said to her "Oh, by the way, sooner or later, I might need to create a binding universe anchor." She replied "A binding universe what?" quizzically. He replied "Well, technically I don't belong in this universe, one way or another I'm going to have to force my existence into this world. However, it might mean that at some point that I will not only forget my human life, but I will also change, into what, I do not know, but something from this universe I can guarantee."

He paused and looked Twilight right in the eyes "However, I will keep all my memories of this world and all the abilities, special or not, that I had from the last. They might cover my rump just like yours, but mine, if I had to choose, might be an Infinity symbol." Twilight said "Infinity, that's never ending, right?" Adam smiled, "I see you really buried yourself in that book." Then he sighed and said "Yes, that means that my special skill will be never ending, so there will be no limit to what I can do or when I can do it, just like my current situation, for some reason, this universe seems to like me."

Twilight said "I like your hair, it looks like a stallions." Adam paused and said, "Have a mirror spare?" she created one from pure magic and held it up to him, his hair was long, down past his shoulders and to his elbows, his hair was streaked wildly bright blonde in places, making his hair look insane. His normal brown shoulder length mane replaced by a elbow length brown mane, with pure blonde streaked in his hair.

At first, he looked slightly bemused, but grew accustom to the look quickly, he examined the streaks and said "Almost looks like lightning struck my hair whilst it was growing, I've been here for 4 days now, i was K.O'd for one, exploring for two, and walking with you on my fourth. Wow, hair grows FAST here." Twilight laughed and said "You'll make rainbow dash green with envy when she sees that hair. It looks awesome on you for some reason."

He looked at himself and said "Yeah, I look like an old school blues player, a 'Hip crazy cat' or something." he laughed at his own comment. Twilight paused and said "Here we are, Sweet Apple Acres!" Adam looked over to see an orange pony at an apple stall. He walked over and smiled, then said "Hello my little pony, who are you and how are you this fine day?" A heavy Texan accent hung on the pony's voice as she spoke "I'm Applejack, pleasure to meet'cha Mr." He replied "I'm Adam, Twilight here was just talking to me about how you can help her test my Strength and Fitness?"

Applejack looked over Adams shoulder as Twilight approached, she said "Twi' y'know I Love seeing and helpin' new people 'n' all but y'gotta know that I'm kinda' busy." Adam looked at the empty road, a single whirlwind of leaves rustled across the pathway. He said "Sorry to seem rude, but this place really doesn't look busy, I mean it's fine if you don't want to help me. However, I just want to let you know it'd really help."

Applejack sighed, then said "Y'know Twi, your friends seem to be the strangest and most literal of all ponies, especially those who aren't ponies." Adam laughed and said "Thanks for the compliment." Sarcasm seeped from his mouth. Applejack came away from the stand, she said "The Zap-Apples are nearly ready, you can help me buck 'em, If you can keep up." He laughed and said "If I'm faster and more efficient than you, clearly I have not only passed my Strength and Fitness abilities, but have proved that I'm more than capable!" Applejack said "Game on!"

Adam stretched himself out, making sure he was nice and flexible, Applejack laughed at his peculiar stretches, he smiled politely. Applejack readied herself and started the countdown. "On the count of three" she said, "One, two, THREE!" Applejack started bucking down the rainbow colored apples with her hind legs, Adam kicked the trees for their apples, He was much stronger than her, managing to buck down more apples per kick. He also tired out less than she did, his energy supplies almost infinite compared to hers. She looked over at him, she was sweating from hard work and was surprised by his ability, she wasn't going to give up, but there were 10 trees between him and her.

Adam was fast approaching her, barrels filling with Zap-apples, he was way to up-pace for her to keep up. She sat down as one last tree separated him and her. He kicked the tree lazily and emptied it of all its apples. Applejack said "How many?" Adam smiled and replied "All 990."she knew she had 1000 zap-apple trees, but she still said "That'd have taken me ages, looks like there won't be any more bucking for me today. However, you're strong and full of energy, you could give many Ponyville residents a run for their bits."

Twilight said "Well, I guess it's time for you to meet Rainbow Dash." Adam replied "Indeed so, but about ponies and bits, I think I'll pass on making a joke there. No actually I think I've seen enough ponies bits to last me a few days." He laughed to himself.
(End of Chapter 7)

Chapter 8: Meet Rainbow Dash

Chapter 8: Meet Rainbow Dash

The trip to Rainbow Dash's cloud home was much shorter than the trip to Sweet apple acres, taking only a few minutes. However, the trip seem incredulously long due to the shower of fitness questions that ensued from Twilight. "How did you become so strong?" she asked, he replied "Years of training and experience, believe it or not a strong mind and body can accomplish anything. He mulled over in his mind "Agility and stamina, I guess I could do parkour, but I can't fly because I have no wings."

Twilight realized "Wings!" with an outburst, she then said "Stand still, please, I 'm going to give you a set of wings, they will be made from magic and should take shape of whatever you desire, but should function similarly." Adam stood still as he felt her magical presence touching his very mind, his very soul, altering his body to have temporary wings. Huge black leathery dragons wings grew into proportion of his size, they were slightly battle-worn and rugged. Twilight gazed at the wings, she said "I only supplied the magic to make the wings grow for a while, your magic seems to have done the rest." He looked at his amulet, which hummed softly.

He took off into the sky, leaving a black and white lightning shaped streak behind him. However, the air rushed past his face and this exhilarated him, he had never felt so alive, he yelled excitedly "I want to have real wings now!" He spiraled and looped, glided and slipped through hairpin bends with ease. This felt like second nature to him, like somehow, humans were made for wings, but couldn't make them on their own.

Adam lifted Twilight and flew with her to Rainbow Dash's home, she seemed nervous, but also thoroughly enjoyed the ride. She smiled because for those few seconds, he and she were interlinked, not just through friendship, but through emotion, and in mind. This was much more than any pony could ever claim on their behalf. Adam put her down gently on the ground when they reached Rainbow Dash's house, he then folded his wings and smiled.

Twilight called up to Rainbow Dash, who came hurtling down to her side at the sound of her voice, immediately pinning Adam to the ground and shoving her face into his, he noticed her rainbow mane, tail and light blue body. As he noticed her Thundercloud with rainbow lightning cutie mark, she snarled "Who is this punk, he hurt you?! If he did I'll make him cry!" Adam calmly responded "Actually madam, I'm the thing who fell from the black hole in the sky. However, the most trouble I've caused Twilight here is wrecking her roof as I hurtled through it at faster than sound speeds."

Rainbow Dash was taken aback, Twilight nodded at her, she helped Adam up with a laugh. "Sorry there, just thought you were doing something bad to her that she needed sorted by someone else." Adam calmly said "No it's fine, just get dust over my suit that I made, it's not like it cost me anything." He said sarcastically, Twilight giggled. Rainbow Dash looked confused, then said "So, what can I do you for?" Twilight responded "Well, actually I'd like you to test his Agility and Stamina, race him and evaluate how fast and maneuverable he is."

Rainbow Dash laughed "Race him? In my sleep! He's probably slower than the slowest of the slow!" Adam bit at her tease and burned her with "Well then you little Rainbow Dash, let's see if your name lives up to the expectations I have of you, otherwise I might think those weren't Pegasus wings, but chicken wings!"

Twilight looked shocked, Adam had never referred to anyone so impolitely, but she didn't know that when Adam reaches the end of his tether, his ability to out perform people logically raises significantly, but his politeness drops dramatically.
However, what he said struck a nerve with Rainbow Dash, as she angrily said "CHICKEN?! No one calls me chicken and isn't beaten by me for it, fin you'll get your race, then when I humiliate you in-front of every pony, you can be the feathered chicken!"

Adam unfolded his wings, he said "Show me where to fly to and from, I'll show you that speed is my element." Rainbow dash pointed all the way to Ponyville from her house, she said "Get to Canterlot and back here, whoever gets back the fastest wins." Adam nodded and smiled.

They both hovered in mid air, Rainbow Dash yelled "GO!" and they were off. Rainbow Dash was clearly much faster than Adam anticipated, air streamlined her figure as she flattened herself as much as possible. Adam thought for a second and threw his hat to Twilight, he let his long mane of hair flow naturally in the wind. However, this somehow sped him up, he was neck and neck with Rainbow Dash, who was hardly straining at the speeds she was doing. Then, she put on an extra bust of speed, again leaving him to trail behind, he folded up his suit and forced it to appear next to Twilight, he then gained speed again, catching up with Rainbow Dash once more.

That was, until a sonic Rain-boom happened, summoned by the light blue pony, her mane and tail becoming a streak of color in the sky. Adam forced his wings to go faster, but to no avail, he looked at his amulet, which glowed and hummed. He decided to press the center of the amulet, as it sunk down he felt a huge surge of energy in his wings and legs. He jittered for a moment as the energy took over, and then "FWOOSH!" with a great walloping force, his wings shoved him forward effortlessly, leaving behind trails of black and white lightning. However, he flew AHEAD of Rainbow Dash, who looked startled at his sheer speed. He kept going faster and faster, everything became a blur as time started to slow down.

He suddenly realized "I broke the sound barrier, but if my speed increases at this rate, I'll go faster than light!" he whooshed around Canterlot, leaving a lot of distance between himself and Rainbow Dash, he then hurtled back, faster and faster, almost scarily fast, but he liked it A LOT. he passed rainbow dash in the blink of an eye, his black and white lightning trail sticking to him relatively well, he maneuvered in between clouds and mountains with grace and dignity.

He saw it, his goal was in sight, Rainbow Dashes house, he was inches away from it when his mind said "Stop." His wings slowed down and he immediately slowed to a halt. Then, floated down next to Twilight, who gaped at him with a new-found awe. Rainbow Dash came 10 minutes later, seeing Adam complete first had really made her re-consider her speed. She said "Well, you beat me, so what disgraceful task do you have in mind?" Adam smiled and then said "Nothing."

Rainbow Dash looked at him, then said "I'm offering you ANYTHING, you are going to be a goody two shoes and let me go without shaming me?" He said "No, I'll shame you, but I'll need to know if you have any plans other than this right now, because I just had an Idea." His smile grew as he said this, Twilight knew this smile from when he insisted on going and seeing princess Luna raise the moon, then later, her hind legs. She laughed slightly, then said "I guess I'll see you later then."

Rainbow Dash looked at Adam, then asked "What does she mean?" he said "Well, if you're offering ANYTHING, then I wish to have sex with you." He said to her, pretty much straightforwardly. Rainbow Dash tried to say "Well, I didn't mean ANYTHING." He replied "Mhmm, and you were going to get Rarity to make me walk around Ponyville in a chicken suit for calling you a chicken." Rainbow Dash looked flabbergasted, she then said "Wow, you must have some strong magic about you, that was what I was plotting."

Adam replied "It's not magic, it's called Psychology, my dear, frankly you should look at a book about it, assuming you're bright and intelligent enough, you can assume ones intentions before they even happen. Not that I'm boasting" he said as she rolled her eyes. She then said "Fine, the sooner we get this done with, the better."

Rainbow Dash flew into her house, shortly followed by Adam, she laid upon the cloud bed she had made herself. She then made herself as flat as possible, so he could have access to her. Adam began with familiar routines, his fingers clasped themselves around her clitoris, she sighed as he began to play with her. His experience had made it much easier for him to get her nice and wet for him.

He slid his two fingers into her vagina, teasing both her clitoris and her pussy walls with the same hand. Moans of pleasure quickly started escaping the pony, but he was not done, he removed his hand and started face fucking the pony, rotating his tongue around her clitoris and vagina. His stress from the days events being released on Rainbow Dash. She climaxed and came in his mouth, her sweet pussy juices contaminated his mind, again he found himself slamming his dick into another pony.

She said "Harder, faster, PLEASE, I've never felt so GOOD, DEEPER!" Adam abided to her needs as well as his, his 12 inch cock penetrating her womb fully. She delightedly moaned as he followed each request for depth, speed and strength of his fucking. His face was wild with joy, he felt the pony's vaginal walls clasp around his cock, he needed to cum. She said "Fill me up, make me full, DO ANYTHING, or my clit might EXPLODE!" Adam complied and sloshed her full with his love juices.

It was early afternoon by the time he had finished the ordeal, he grasped his suit and hat from the ground outside of the cloud home as he bode farewell to Rainbow Dash. He said "Well, off to see Twilight, I might need to wait until tomorrow until I meet Fluttershy." He laughed.

He made it to Twilight's house before the moon rose, then he slept in wait for the next morning.
(End of Chapter 8)

Chapter 9: A test of Intellect, friendship and magic

Chapter 9: A test of Intellect, friendship and magic

When he woke up in the morning, Adam found himself cuddled up with Twilight in her bed, he was still fully dressed. However, the feeling was unlike any other, he was far more connected to this pony than any other. He moved and she sighed and said "You're terribly comfortable and warm there Adam, I'm not sure if I want you to move." He laughed softly "Well, if you want to skip out on the tests you're going to perform on me today, then I'll cuddle you right here, like this, all today."

Twilight sighed and looked at Adam, who placed a kiss upon her cheek, then said "Come on, I haven't got ages to muck about, lets get this done." Twilight blushed as she rubbed her cheek. He smiled and said "You remind me of myself as a child, Twilight, you bury your head in books and study like a maniac. However, no matter what, you seem to keep a positive attitude and be well known by others."

She looked at Adam and said "I never asked for any of this to happen, it was all natural, I have built up fantastic friendships here." Adam smiled, then sighed and said "Unfortunately for me. I wish that everything were second nature to me, so I need not struggle. Unfortunately not everything was handed to me upon a silver platter, seeing as I was diagnosed with autism as a child."

Twilight asked "Autism?" Adam replied "Hard to explain, even harder to understand, a mental state which affects those who are diagnosed with it differently." she looked at Adam, almost capable of understanding him in his entirety, for beneath the suit and the charms lived a man who had been alone and outcast for so long.

He smiled once again, returning to his cheerful self. Twilight smiled, but was slightly worried about what else Adam kept under wraps. Their journey to the cottage near the Everfree forest was short and sweet, Twilight knocked gently on the door and patiently waited. A creamy yellow pony with a pink mane draped over one eye, and a pink tail. Twilight smiled and said "Hey Fluttershy, this is my friend Adam. You might remember him as the creature you helped nurse back to health after he crashed into my home."

Fluttershy's blue eyes set upon Adam, who smiled shyly in return of her look. Fluttershy then whispered something to Twilight, who said "Don't worry, he's kind." Fluttershy nervously approached Adam, he squatted down do look less tall and threatening. This seemed to ease the pony, she approached cautiously, still afraid, she stopped by his feet. He sat down and smiled shyly, she said to him quietly "H-h-h-hello... I'm... f-f-f-f-f-Fluttershy..." Adam smiled and said "Hello Fluttershy, I'm Adam, I was hoping to become one of your new friends, if that's OK?"

Fluttershy smiled and said "Of course it's OK, come right in, any friend of Twilight is a friend of mine." Twilight smiled and whispered to him "So far, so good, keep up and I might just have to ace you on friendship right now." Adam smiled slightly wider this time, allowing his pearly whites to be seen.

Adam walked inside the cottage and sat down on one of the nearest sofas, staying next to Twilight. He put one arm around her and cuddled her slightly. Fluttershy asked "What do you need Twilight, not if you don't mind me asking?" Twilight responded "We've come here to test Adams friendship and intellect." but it seems that He had not only analysed the situation perfectly, but had also managed to befriend you in seconds." Adam smiled, his smile growing wider, a slight tear of joy rolling down his face.

Twilight said "Adam, are you alright?" He said "Yes, I'm more than alright, in fact I feel fantastic, I have never felt this way before." he sniffed "It is a wonderful feeling." Twilight said "Well that leaves me to evaluate your magical skills."

They made their way back to Twilight's tree-house, Adam still beaming with his new-found pride.

Next up, chapter 10: A magical moment
(End of chapter 9)

Chapter 10: A magical moment

Chapter 10: A magical moment

Adam stood in the center of the library,readying himself, still smiling. Twilight passed him magical books to read from and then perform the spells. His amulet glowing and humming intensely as he performed them. Even the most advanced and complicated spells seemed to be achieved with ease. However with a sputter, the amulet turned off and a huge rumble emitted from outside.

the big black rip appeared in the sky, Adam looked at it from a window, horrified. This meant that the amulet was keeping him here somehow. He did not know why or how, but now it stopped working.all his effort in this land would go to waste. He and Twilight stepped outside as all occupants of Ponyville did. He looked at the black hole and began to cry, his time was up.

The huge black rope wrapped itself around him. He was slowly being dragged toward the hole in the sky, he yelled "Twilight!" the pony looked at him, startled. He yelled "I have something to tell you!" she looked at him as tears filled both of their eyes. He yelled "I LOVE YOU TWILIGHT SPARKLE!"

Silence fell over the land, the rope stopped dragging him for a brief moment then pushed him forward to her. He cried "I love you I don't want to live without you." He hugged the purple pony tightly in his arms. However, the rope snaked up next to him and faced him, he knew this was it. He said "Had I have been able to stay, I'd marry you, Twilight sparkle, my heart would pine for you every waking day and night!"

There were three huge pulses that emitted from him, they pushed the rope back and closed the hole. He let go of Twilight, as he did Black and White lightning surrounded him. He hovered inches off the ground, as more of his body was covered. Tears covered his face as his whole body glowed black and white. There was a huge flash and a pile of clothing upon the ground where Adam had stood.

Tears came to Twilight's eyes as storm clouds built up overhead, she looked at the clouds and said "It's not supposed to rain so soon, how could one person, one soul, change so much?" A thundering boom ripped through the silence, white lightning struck Adam's pile of clothing. Another boom followed that then black lightning, his clothes turned into gold dust.

However, the gold dust gathered itself in the air, shaping and forming itself, a hoof , a leg, two legs. Black and white lightning struck the gold and there was another blinding flash. Then in front of Twilight stood a brown pony.

Twilight asked the pony was, hoping and almost expecting the answer. The pony replied "Hello Twilight Sparkle, I'm Adam, I'm surprised you forgot my name." She said "No, I didn't mean to... I just." He hugged her and said "I love you too."

Adam stuck to his promise and made a ring magically, it was pure diamond, he presented the ring to her and said "Will you do me the honor of being my loyally wed."

Twilight sparkle cried with joy and said "I do!"

[This is the end of this story, his transition from Human to Pony perhaps not a painless one, The amulet of Equinox still hung around his neck and he had an Infinity cutie mark.]

Credits:

The rise of Adam, the mysterious man: Twilights' extrordinary day, Inspired by some events from the show, others from pure imagination.

I would like to thank you all for your patience, I love each and every one of you, please don't hesitate to comment or correct any of my work, just make sure you credit me.

Finally, a message from me, I'd like to say thank you for reading this far. I had never thought this would get any publicity.

Signing off
Adam Wheatfeild