The Stranger in the Bar

by That_One_Bat_Pony

Rating: mature
Tags: Profanity, Random, Sex, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance, Original Character
Length: 2941

Two ponies with no one to go home to decide to spend the night getting to know each other.

Piercing Whisper, a pony living in an unnamed city meets a pretty mare in his usual bar, but quickly realizes she's no what she seems. Feeling adventurous he decides to let her come home with him regardless of who she is.

Published 2022-04-29 14:30:00 UTC
Last updated 2022-05-04 00:40:16 UTC

Part 1

It was already 10:30 when Piercing Whisper walked through the front door of Aged Berry’s tavern, the bell above the door ringing as it shut behind him. He surveyed the ponies scattered around the bar with relative disinterest, until somepony caught his eye. Usually the same stallions and mares were always in the bar, in their usual spots. This time however there was a lone mare that sat at the bar, a mare Piercing Whisper had never seen before.

“Good evening.” Piercing Whisper said, walking up and taking his usual spot which just so happened to be right next to the newcomer. “Never seen you here before. Something got you ticked off? come to the nearest bar to bury it?”

“Huh.” the mare let out, looking up to meet the Stallion’s gaze. “No, what would make you assume such a thing?”

There was an odd, naiveness to this mare. It wasn’t just the question either, something about the tone of her voice made her sound … inexperienced. This city was full of ponies, all of which knew how it worked. When you got mad or wanted to forget, you drank, it was just common practice here. Piercing Whisper chose to ignore it. “Most of the people who come here are trying to forget something. And the ones that aren’t are usually just looking for someone to spend the night with.”

“And which one are you?” the mare asked, giving Piercing Whisper a small grin.

“I guess you could say I fit into the first category. Although I don’t come here to forget, I come here to destress, and occasionally this is the only place with the tools to put me to sleep.”

“You sleep here? In this bar?” The mare now had a puzzled look on her face as she pointed to the counter in front of them both.

“Haha,” Piercing Whisper allowed a chuckle to escape him. “No, of course not. There are just some days where even at home I can’t fall asleep till I come here. I don’t know what Berry does, but no matter how much I drink at home, it doesn’t give me the same relief that coming here for a stiff one does.”

“Oh, I guess that makes more sense. But tell me, even though you said you fit into category one, does that mean you have no interest in the second?” The mare fluttered her eyelashes a little.

Piercing Whisper took a moment to look over the inviting mare. She was definitely pretty, her fur was a beautiful pure white, her hair was a dazzling light purple and silky smooth. But the thing he liked most about her, were her beautiful emerald eyes that almost seemed to glow with a light green blaze. She was perfect, a little too perfect. After a moment, a realization finally hit him and he responded. “I’d be lying if I said I never got a little lonely. Hey Berry, get me the usual, and a one for the mare as well.”

“Coming right up.” The bartender said, walking over and grabbing a large whisky bottle. He walked back over with two glasses, and a smirk on his face. “Here you are.” He placed a glass in front of each pony, dropped two large ice cubes in each and finally poured in the sweet nectar form the bottle into the waiting vessel.

The mare looked over at Piercing Whisper with a bit of confusion, but she still smiled and took the drink in her hooves. “So tell me.” Piercing Whisper started, picking up his own glass. “Who are you?” The mare nearly choked on her drink as she went to take a sip.

“W-what do you m-mean?” The mare’s eyes were shaken but focused as she stared at Piercing Whisper.

“Umm, what’s your name? What do you do? Etc. Etc.”

“Oh… right” A large blush came over the mare’s cheeks as she downed the contents of her glass. “M-my” she let out a long sigh before regaining her composure and turned to look at Piercing Whisper. “My name is Hidden Gem, but you can just call me Gem. I do restorations on old items. What about you?”

“My name is Piercing Whisper, but all my friends call me Wisp. I’m a lawyer, hence the stress and need to drink.” Wisp let out a small laugh at his own joke and looked up at Gem. “So tell me Gem, what brings you to the bar tonight?”

“Love.” she said simply, beckoning Berry to fill her glass.

“Love huh.” Wisp finished his glass and also waved to Berry to refill it. “Seems a bit out there, don't you think? How old are you anyway?

“I’m 23.” Gem said simply

“And you think you’re gonna find your prince in a bar like this?”

“I don’t know, you’re not too bad so far. I don’t think you’re my price yet, but you seem like good company for tonight. And who knows maybe we'll meet up again sometime.”

Wisp finished off his glass once again, but this time gestured for Berry to take it away. “Do you want to get out of here then?”

“I thought you’d never ask, Mr. Whisper.” Gem stood up and pushed her glass forward for Berry to take before following behind Wisp out the front door.

“So, my place or yours.” Wisp asked, giving her a sly grin.

“Umm, your place.” The mare looked down at her hooves.

“Very well then, follow me.”

* * *

Finally after about five minutes the couple arrived at the front door of Wisp’s apartment building. “You live here?” Gem asked, craning her neck to look up at the tall building.

“Yep, up in the penthouse to be exact. Come with me.” Wisp walked through the front door and led Gem over to the elevators. He pressed the button labeled 12 and the elevator began to ascend.

“So what does your place look like?” Gem asked, trying to fill the silence.

“It’s nothing special, an open living room attached to the kitchen, high ceilings, one bathroom, and one bedroom.” As Wisp finished his explanation the two heard a small ding and the elevator doors opened. They stepped out into a small hallway with only one door. Wisp enveloped the door in his magic to unlock it, a few clicks could be heard before he reached out and opened it with his hoof.

The couple walked into Wisp penthouse and Gem closed the door behind them. “Are you nervous?” Wisp asked, turning to look at the white mare.

“Why would I be?” Gem countered.

“Because you’ve never done this before.”

“Never done what?” Gem asked. “Drained a pony off all their love after luring them somewhere private.” Gem’s body was suddenly enveloped in a blaze of green fire. After the smoke settled Wisp could view her clearly. Her fur was now a menacing black, her hair matted and thick it almost looked like cobwebs, her perfect white horn now jagged and black. She had holes in her legs, a new pair of thin pretty blue transparent wings on her back, but still Gem had those same beautiful emerald eyes. “Trust me I’ve done this plenty of times.”

“Yeah, but you’ve never done this with me.” Wisp raised his hoof and placed it on Gem’s cheek, then moved it to the back of her neck, pulling her into a deep passionate kiss.

Gem pushed the stallion away and wiped her lip. “What the hell. You should be cowering in fear, or at least be yelling about how I tricked you.”

“Tricked me? Tricked me how?”

“Hellooo. I’m a changeling.” Gem stood on her hind hooves and gestured down with her front hooves.

“Oh, right, that. Sorry to ruin the surprise. You see your eyes gave it away, that and how perfect your disguise was, no mare looks that flawless. Also you forgot to give yourself a cutie mark.” Wisp tuned his rump to face Gem and pointed to the briefcase with papers sticking out of it on his flank.

“Wait so you brought me her, knowing that I was a changeling?”

“Yes.”

“You’re insane.” Gem faced hooved before getting angry again. “And another thing, Why Can’t I absorb any of your love? That little kiss of yours would have killed most ponies.”

“Oh that’s simple.” Wisp said, taking a few steps forward. “I’m not directing any love towards you, I don’t know you well enough for that. You see…” Wisp leaned in placing the tip of his muzzle right next to Gem’s ear. “You’re the object of my lust.”

Part 2 (End)

Gem’s eyes went wide as she tried to process what she just heard. “I-I’m.. wait, you? You’ve got to be fucking with me right!?”

“No, I don’t think so.” Wisp gently raised his hoof to stoke Gem’s pretty wings. “By the way, is Gem really your name?”

Unable to think properly due to the odd pleasant feeling coming from her back she just answered. “No, mmm. My name is Firefly”

“That’s pretty, I think I like it.” Wisp moved his muzzle in closer asking. “What about your age? Obviously you’re over 18, but are you really 23?”

“I-I’m 25, Just tried to seem a little younger to increase my odds of you taking my bait, eep…” Firefly let out a small yelp as Wisp moved his muzzle in closer to nibble on the edge of her wings and then after a moment let out a soft moan.

“Not to pry or anything, but aren’t you a royal changeling? Why’d mommy Chrysalis let you out.”

“She, ah. She doesn’t know about me.”

“Oh, do tell.”

“I was never supposed to happen. Female changelings are a lot more rare than males, but they can still be born and not be royalty. When A changeling becomes a royal it jumpstarts the reproductive organs so the Queen can reproduce asexually. However a female changeling can still give birth, there just has to be a stallion involved. Long story short my mother got pregnant, gave birth, and decided it was best if I got away from the hive, if chrysalis ever found out about me I’d have to take her place as queen. My mom wanted a better life for me.”

“So where do you live?” Wisp asked reflexively as he led Firefly to the bedroom by the hoof. As they walked in Wisp stood up and lifted Firefly with his forehooves, placing her on the large bed.

“Uh, I have a little tree house in one of the forests around the city.” Firefly answered as she let Wisp press her down onto the bed. “But a girl’s gotta eat. So every now and then I wander in and drain a few ponies of most of their love, but I never kill anyone, I was just acting menacing earlier to make sure you didn’t tell anyone about me.”

“Well, now I feel like I know you enough to keep going.” Wisp said as he slowly lowered his head to rest between Firefly’s hind hooves. Pausing only a moment to look up at Firefly who nodded to keep going, he pressed his muzzle into Firefly’s surprising wet vagina. Firefly let out a loud moan at the contact and instinctually placed her forehooves on Wisp’s head to keep him from pulling away.

Giving into her demands Wisp pushed further in and pierced her entrance with his tongue which caused Firefly to let out a loud moan that echoed in the large room. “Mo-more!” She cried. Wisp retracted his tongue and instead moved his muzzle up and began nibbling on Firefly’s clit. Wisp raised his hoof and began rubbing Firefly’s pussy right under his muzzle. Gently, Wisp adjusted his hoof to slip the tip of it inside Firefly.

Firefly could no longer contain herself, her wings stretched out and began a faint buzzing. She writhed and jerked on the bed letting out a series of animalistic noises, juices started dripping from her nethers. After a few moments Firefly slumped down and began panting heavily, retracting her hooves from Wisps head. “How was it?” Wisp asked, standing up and his hind hooves.

“A-amazing, but I’m guessing it's not over yet.” Firefly said. Looking down at Wisp’s rock hard member just centimeters away from her entrance.

“Not unless you say it is, I may be a persuasive stallion, but I won’t make you do anything you don’t want.”

“Oh, how considerate.” Firefly said in a mocking tone. “But don’t you dare leave me hanging.” Firefly lifted her hind hooves and began rubbing them up and down Wisp shaft. “If there’s one thing you never do as a stallion, it’s leave mare wanting. So get to work.”

Wisp got a smirk on his face and leaned down, bringing the two into a deep passionate kiss, one laced with lust and desire from both ponies. “Yes ma’am.” Wisp moved one hoof down to guide his cock into the lovely mare beneath him. Once the tip was securely resting against Firefly’s entrance Wisp pressed both front hooves into the bed and thrusted forward.

Firefly’s cry could probably be heard all throughout the city. Her voice rang out with intense waves of pleasure and a surprising amount of pain. After waiting a moment Wisp asked. “Should I start moving?” which caught Firefly off guard.

“Uh, um, yes please.” Even though it was her first time, Firefly wanted it bad. Nodding his head Wisp pulled back until just the tip was still inside her, and then thrusted forward once again. Firefly let out another cry of pleasure, this one with less pain. Wisp continued to thrust in and out gaining speed as Firefly’s moans grew more intense and pleasurable. ”P-please, don’t stop.” Firefly called out wrapping her hooves around the stallions back pulling him down on top of her.

Wisp looked deep into the eyes of the mare beneath him getting lost in that glowing green hue that had so captivated him before. Without a second thought he once again pressed his muzzle into hers striking deep into her mouth and exploring every inch he could reach with his flexible tongue. Firefly let out a purr as she too pressed her lips deeper into his and tried to map out every inch of his rough mouth.

As Wisp continued to thrust and penetrate deep into the mare beneath him, he was overcome with a sense of pride. Seeing the look of pure bliss and pleasure on the face of the mare he had set out to make his, if only for a night, it was a feeling unlike anything the stallion had ever felt before. Even after winning a court case he had never felt this warm, tingly, buzzing feeling in his core that seemed to surge like electricity through his body.

After several minutes of thrusting, panting, and passionate kissing, Wisp could feel himself reaching his climax. Although the mare under him had already succumbed to her pleasure multiple times, he couldn’t help but feel a bit disappointed that he had not lasted longer. “I’m about to-”

“DO IT!” Firefly shouted, cutting him off. “I want you to fill me up. Make sure every stallion I meet knows I’m yours and yours alone.”

Hearing a mare call out those words to him, a mare who had never even laid with a stallion caused something to burst within him. A dam that had been sealed up suddenly burst. “I love you!” he called out, not caring about the weight behind his word or what it meant for the changeling beneath him.

As Wisp finished thrusting and finally released his load a terrifying realization came Firefly. “I love you too.” she called out pulling the stallion down into a warm embrace and hugging him close as he slipped out of her.

Wisp laid there holding the soft mare as tears streamed down her cheeks. Firefly made no attempts to siphon off the dumb stallions new found feeling, instead she just laid there in his hooves, drinking for the warmth of his body. Wisp could tell that nothing was happening and asked confused. “Are you going to take my love?”

“I can’t you dumb colt.” Firefly made a pouty face and glanced up at Wisp. “Changelings siphon off the misplaced affection of other ponies, but if that love is returned we can’t absorb it because it’s as much our affection as it is theirs.”

“Huh, I guess that means I can do this properly then.” Wisp pulled the pitch black mare in close and gently pressed his muzzle against hers. It wasn’t rough or intruding, it was soft, gentle, and nice. The kiss lasted about ten seconds before Firefly pulled back.

“What was that for?” she asked, a dreamy look lingering in her beautiful green eyes.

“That was our first kiss with actual love behind it.” Wisp moved his hoof up, caressing Firefly’s side as it made it's way up to rest on her cheek. “And if you really can’t take any of my love, that means I can do this as much as I want.” Wisp once again drew the mare in and kissed her, this time a bit deeper but still within reason.

“I love you Firefly.” Wisp said, gazing into his mare’s pretty green eyes.

“I love you too… Wisp.” A deep blush rose on Firefly’s cheek as she realized that was the first time she called him by his short name, but as she pondered, she looked forward to all the time she would get to say that name in the future.