The Guardsman

by Moonshard

Ch: 12 For Redemption

Previous Chapter

It was a dark world, flat, dirt and rock huts back on the moon, just like her imprisonment; there were no stars above the flat dark world, only the endless void that stretched. With the silence with it, but it wasn't the moon. Still, a cage meant for one being that thought to be lost, one that fear lingers off of a pony with a coat darker than the void, a mane that shined and glowed a smokey blue hair, and slit eyes that glowed a teal. However, this mare walked, her coat held damage as if she was in a great battle with bruises and scrapes with damaged light blue armor. Yet this mare only walked the dark flat world for who knows how long with only anger and disgust filling in her body, mind, and heart.

Within the dark world, she stopped for the first time. She saw a faint light; it revealed the once dark rock dirt ground to a light grey color and a figure, not a body, perhaps the harlot that put her in this flat darkness deep within the void between life and death, a prison of limbo and now leaving her here alone. Yet the dark pony couldn't be slightly relieved at the sight of another body; it's been far too long since she's been able to rule over someone, let alone talk with someone; she contained herself and made her way to the light and the body.

After a few minutes of walking, she stopped and saw the body in full view; it wasn't a pony but a body of a different creature, one that she couldn't believe that they were here, let alone dead. The beast was beyond damaged; its body bared burns, missing limbs, cuts to stab wounds, shots, and a large two sizable holes on its body, yet somehow it was clinging, clinging to life. She could hear it wheeze at every breath taken; the sight of it was sickening to look at, yet surprisingly admirable, a creature that clings to its life as if it has work done, work that needed was remaining.

She only opened her large dark black wings out and gently touched the creature's head with it, using her magic to see what horrors and nightmares this creature was suffering to release so she may see how to bend this creature to her command. Looking into the creature's memories and nightmares and chuckles as she sees this creature's life only growing to maniacal laughter.

"Well, now you'd make for an excellent pawn for my coming return."

Only to feel the pain of her mane being pulled on, forcing her to back away from the creature and feel her face grabbed from behind; she quickly turned it to meet with a monster. A beast of a pure horrific sight, its claws were nothing but bone, views, and muscle as if its own body was burnt when it was alive; it roared at her face with its breath revealing a heavy musk of ash and blood. She through the beast off her, seeing it in a soldier's uniform and armor of strange color as it stood on two legs hunched down and laughed; seeing its muscles and bones move made her disgusted by the existence of this monster.

"That's ones mine... ya want it, then kill me for it kark."

The darkness was all that surrounded him; he didn't have legs, an arm or a hand, or even a jaw, feeling his body damaged but not the pain. His time came for him, yet he felt like it was too soon, but it didn't matter. He knew where he was, what had happened, and how he came here. The only thing he could have wished for was it to be painless, but yet he guessed everything must be hard on a penal soldier after all they... He was expendable after all, all because of those damn shackles, that demon that cursed him with the mark branded on his nape... No, he remained himself about a lesson from a captain, well, his father long ago that taught him.

'To blame to another is to make an excuse for your own faults, I along with every guardsmen, do not dare make excuses let alone take them. It was either your actions and responsibility, or fault, if it wasn't, then prove it wasn't soldier no soldier or son of will make excuses.'

Then the last thing was a punch to his face and another from that demon before the memory faded; it was his fault he got the shackles, his fault he earned the mark of failure, and his fault for staining his kin and bloodline with such a burden.

A True-born, failure.

His body felt light, laying on dirt and rock, and only black darkness stretched around him as if he were on a spacewalk; it was cold against his skin. Death was here, an old friend of his that teased him about his fall, and it wasn't alone; all he could ever do was close his eye and pray, lay on nothing, and give up finally.

Where the darkness of the afterlife is all that awaits him now, he could only pray he finds more peace here, being in the emperor's paradise heaven, than what he saw in that world.

Then he awakened to see the face of a dead soldier feeling his mouth pressed against his with his nose covered before raising and seeing both of his hands clasping over each other as he pressed down on the soldier's chest in a steady beat. Was this... A dream?

"Come, come private, wake the fuck up, ya kark little shit!" He shouted, pressing his mouth over his again, blowing air into his mouth.

"Ah, kark this!" she said, punching the soldier's chest, forcing the eyes of the soldier to snap open and hear him coughing heavily before flipping to his side and vomiting on the mud ground, and Grey only laughed at him.

"What? Can't handle the taste of ram charge and promethium to wake ya ass up can ya Oscar."

"Sergeant, Why do I feel fuzzy, and you taste like how tank fuel smells?" He said in a groggy tone spitting out the taste of vomit and greys breath from his mouth and wiping it clean with his sleeves.

"And why do ya taste like ya sister?" Grey said, licking the insides of his mouth, making Oscar glare at him, confused and angry at that question, before vomiting again and Grey laughing once more. He always knew to befriend that kid would be a benefit, yet now saving them, he kicked himself there. Before long, he shifted to a bunker base surrounded by other white shield guardsmen, steel legionaries, and kriegsmen shouting and cheering. He felt blood pour from his nose and mouth as kriegsmen stood before him, their fists bloodied and standing in a hand-to-hand combat stance.

"Come on Serg! Show these damn Kreig-freaks how a Cadian fights!" A steel legionary said, lifting Grey before he sprinted, tackled the kreigsmen to the ground, and laid out punches onto the kreigsmen mask, repeating his right and left hooks. He pinned their body to the groundbreaking, making the crowd of guardsmen cheer on till some white shields pulled him away from the beaten kreigsmen and handed him an engraved kreigsmen shovel as his prize with grey roaring in victory "Cadia!" over and over.

He remembered those blood brawls he made with other guardsmen making it into a sports game in the guard, usually fighting for rations and air weapons. Still, he also remembered how he stopped joining them after he got his ass beaten by a Catachen devil with a bionic arm after wanting this knife, the worse mistake of his life.

Then again, it changed but to a different sight; he was with a woman; though he couldn't see her face or remember her name, he felt her body, and... kicking against his hand, he looked down to see his hand was rubbing her belly. She was pregnant, but with who, and why was he here, unless?

"Do you feel that? She kicking; I think she would make a fine captain like you and maybe kick both of our asses. What do you think?" The women said it wasn't any women. It was his beloved; how could he have forgotten her? The touch of her smooth, soft skin and the joy of fighting alongside her were all gone. Was it the years of war, drug injecting drink, or... Cannibalism, no, it wasn't. It was all him, his fault.

He looked and saw a soldier standing in front of him; his back was turned towards him, yet he had the same gear as He did. Olive Green kasrkin armor, that Khaki tan uniform, and backpack power generator for a hell gun, but its cables were broken as if cut off from the gun.

“Heh, so this is how it ends for us, huh? This is how the once Thorn Cain Grey, true-failure son of bitch, dies. Pure and utter karken shit.”

The soldier spoke, his voice echoed around him, and the name he used made Grey feel something he thought he had forgotten as the soldier continued.

“Missing an ear, an eye, an arm and hand, both legs, lots of blood, your own skin, ya spine and bones, ya ribs, stomach and guts, and ya jaw... What a karken piece of fuckin work you became. And still, breathe too.” He said as then a voice came feminine voice that spoke as if it were the darkness around both of them; the soldier looked off into the distance.

"And here I thought it was dead, yet you proven me wrong, he would make a great pawn for my plans wouldn't you say?" she asked the soldier as he only chuckled.

"If it were up to me and I ran that shit show, I would've put some metal into my mouth and pulled the god damn trigger I don't fight for xenos."

The soldier said crudely to her as Grey lay there and watched the soldier talk with whatever xeno he spoke with. He was disappointed to be here, closing his eye to let death take him before getting punched in the face forcing his eye to snap open and forced to look at the soldier's face. It was untreated burnt scars showing his muscles, veins, and skull teeth and the bare eyeballs in his sockets as he used his burnt skeletal hands to hold Grey's head and look into his eye.

"Did I fucking say you can look away or sleep, kark?! Cause I sure as hell don't remember saying so ya bastard son of a bitch!" The soldier gripped his face and punched him again, flipping Grey to lie on his chest, feeling the dirt on his body before the soldier planted his bloodied boot on Grey's head, twisting and pushing down on him.

"Why do I even bother?" he said as the female xenos voice spoke again.

"My, to think such a soldier would give up; I remember in my times when my subjects would stand back up and still have enough before they're deaths, this one... Is just a pitiful sight to behold."

"He's a failure grandma and always will be; look at him, a living weapon helped by chains, a boom collar around ya neck, and a mark on ya skin t separate him from everyone! Fucking hell, that didn't stop us from disobeying officers or even kill them for the fun of if!"

Grey knew who this soldier was. His voice was irritating to hear, let alone the beating he was getting from him, every punch to his face, stomps on his head and broken spine, and kicks against his broken body and face. It was all enough to piss him off. This freak that reminds him of himself, all the faces he failed, all the people he let die or killed, all of his sins and crimes be shown to him...and it was working. This soldier was the only one that ever knew and called Grey by that name, that cursed name, for it was the same one that came to haunt his mind when he got the shackles and mark. Fucking Mad Dog, the Kark of fuckers. But he didn't know the female xeno, but he didn't give a damn at this point.

"Hm, well fuck, little ol' Cain might really kick it here this time, but ya call that a fight?! We've been through all types of hell and fought worse and worse, and here you are telling me you draw it here of all places. Like hell you are!" He said, grabbing his shoulders, flipping Grey up on his face, and feeling nothing but kicks to his sides and body. Grey only felt the heat of anger in his body; it was growing, and so was his impatience for death to release him and kill him.

"Deaths isn't and will not be coming, your hope for freedom is long dead as you are, believe me when I say this Thorn Cain Grey." The female xeno voice said as Grey looked to see armored hooves and a black coat, slowly looking up to see two large slit teal colored eyes staring right at him with a large sharp toothy smile. "We've been lock here for a long passing."

"And I'm going to enjoy slowly beating ya dead." Mad Dog said, stomping down his boot on Grey's broken spine; Grey watched the xeno with a sadistic smile as Mad Dog beat Greys, making him feel every bit of pain in his body.

At this moment, Grey couldn't take it anymore, of all the people that beat him, cursed him, and just wanted to kill him; Mad Dog, the criminal, and sinner of his mind, talking to Grey, reminding him of his failures and those he failed, his loved ones, friends end the holy emperor... He failed them, but he wasn't done; he needed more bodies, all of them, all their corpses, to climb to his redemption to the emperor's light and to be free and die in the fight. But just any barfight, fist fight or duel or battle he goes in, THE fight, the fight he promised to go to, the one where Grey is finally free and knows when it's the one when death was there with him, he made that promise.

“toap... calen... meh... dat!” Grey finally said, with a gurgling growl, and tried to move; his body felt heavier than usual as if a tank was pressing on him or he was restrained by something. Mad Dog only laughed at his attempts and kicked him in his stomach.

"And what are you going to karken do about it, huh? Come on Cain! What would a failure do without a body or even a karken jaw do besides lay their and just fucking die!?"

Grey felt a snap in his heart before roaring out as he struggled to get up; he looked at Mad Dog laughing at him, trying to get up, moving his stumped left arm to flip himself onto his back before he felt his hands and legs. Then his right eyes vision came back to him. Still, as a tainted red color, standing up in a staggering like a drunken mess with Mad Dog kicking his stomach, forcing him to fall onto his knees and but pushes himself up to his feet slowly. He staggered over to Mad Dog, watching with a horrific smile, wrapping his hands around his neck and clutching his windpipe, crushing it in his fingers and palms. He couldn't feel it. He felt the gripping and pressure on his hand but not the touch.

Grey slowly strangled before his fingers locked around Mad Dog's spine, followed by a loud crack and his head limp leaning to the side, but he still heard his laughter as he held the broken, floppy neck.

"Heh, attaboy... This is how we did it, right? From the start of it all. I raised you well to being what they wanted you to be... You and I will always and forever be remembered as... Their monster."

Mad Dog only laughed harder at Grey, letting out a vicious feral scream grabbing his jaw and his skull, and pulling them apart. Feeling his jaw's tendons snap and tearing muscles, losing and pulling it more till finally. It snaps off his head, and blood squirts onto his face. He sees the xeno that stares, watching him with her smile still held before, and laughs. She stretches out her wings and stands on her hind hooves before slamming her front hooves to the ground as the darkness of the afterlife that once surrounded him vanished into a bright white room, white almost blinding his eye.

"A perfect monster as my pawn, you'll do well little Cain." the xeno said as her voice faded away in his mind.

He held his hand over his face to block the light and let his eyes adjust slowly, revealing an overview lamp that hung off a mirror that he was standing before, and came horrified by the sight of himself. He only prayed it was a dream.

The mirror should see himself. Grey's right ear and eye were replaced by a bionics vox com microphone connected to a circular scanner attached to the socket of his skull and brain. Seeing calculations, X-rays of his body, statistics, brain activity, and heartbeat displayed as a monitor all obscured his tainted red vision and left an ominous red glow. All while connected to his jaw as it was metallic, with metal cable links and hydraulics. As he slowly moved it open and closed, seeing a blessed sight that the sides of his mouth were till flesh and blood and down his throat. He felt the links of fake artificial muscle tendons gripping his metallic spine.

His face looked more mechanicus than man's till he saw the rest of his body looking down at himself; his right arm was all bionic, even past his shoulders, as he gently moved his flesh to feel the pull on the metal. His left hand was the same up to his elbow; his chest bared a new skeleton place meant but upgraded.

It felt heavier, as if an orgyn were sitting on his body, yet seeing how his body didn't collapse, it would only mean he'd gotten an upgraded reinforced skeleton and bone replacement. Adding new scars on his body with his stomach was lined with stitchings and stables that held his flesh closed, with a mesh of false skin nerves and muscle over where a Tyranid ripper attempted to buro in his body.

He slowly moved his left hand's bionic thumb under his undergarments and pulled to reveal his pride flamer; thank the emperor; it was still there.

Looking at the remains of his legs, both knees down to his feet were nothing but more of the metallic cable links muscle and tendons with hydraulics bones and smooth plating over them like his arms and neck; there he was, false metallic arms, hands, legs, bones, a right eye, and ear. A metal-living mortal human man, till the sight of a thick red liquid of blood and the metallic coppery smell of it filled the room he was in.

Turning his back to be greeted with the sight of a blood bath, four doctors, six nurses, four guardsmen, and two holy sisters of battle of the adepta sororitas holy hospitaller Eternal Candle of the order of the Ebon Chalice. He noticed their black and white armor and red crimson robes of holy sisters that were daughters to the emperor at the rumor of their saint brought to the emperor's throne room to witness his grace. All dead with blood drenching his bionic hands, mouth, and legs; the same taste as the smell lingered on his tongue and mouth.

He only laughed; he laughed the laughter of a broken mind, chilling laughter at the sight of their bodies, broken jaws, broken necks, or their heads smashed against the walls and floors of the med station with pools of blood and metallic dent prints of fists and foot stomps that were in these players of blood bones and brains. With silence and droplets of blood, it vanished at the sounds of broken laughter as he turned to face the mirror before curling his metal hand and punching the glass, shattering the mirror from the sight of his face.

His laughter began to slow to an off-putting chuckle when the sounds of weapons clicking, loading new rounds, or energetic weapons charging up behind him. He only turned his head to have his left burnt eye greeted with a plasma pistol-vented barrel to his sight, followed by an armor of black armor even darker than the void of space and a skull death gas mask with a notable. I was on its center front, followed by red hair, a tired back, and a feminine figure as he stared into the dark goggles of the inquisitor's eyes. Then she spoke in a clear feminine high gothic accent.

"Kasrkin Sergeant Major Thorn Cain Grey, true-born son of Cadia Prime and of Captain Captain Grarn Cain Grey and Captain Suki van Abel Nova, brother to Viper Abel Grey." She announced as Grey only listened and looked at her; he wasn't afraid but remembered how they imprisoned him and gave him his penal sentence turning him into what he is now. He could quickly kill her and die by the squads of tempestuous scions and holy sisters of battle behind her, looking at him through their visors and helmets with disgust and malice. Aiming bolters, hellguns, and flamers. It only made him smile as the lady inquisitor lord continued.

"Criminal, Sinner to the God Emperor of Mankind meant to die on the 13th black crusade of Cadia only to desert from the battlefield front lines and onto... This... xeno world and conspire with such aliens yet you still fight against heretical forces of chaos with your body, mind, and soul tainted."

She finished her boring long monologuing all Inquisitional members say, acting on behave of the God Emperor's voice as if she was his voice. All eyes were on his back; he knew what awaited him, death and erasement off of imperial history forgotten, gone and dead to all an unnamed soldier. It only made his smile larger, knowing he'll die fighting an inquisitor again.

"Yet, seeing you in person now, my verdict and assumptions have changed, so now I only make an offer to you, and would only assume you, in your low gothic slang of" hearing me out." As you have information and an explanation that piques my interests." She said with Grey at gunpoint, only to sigh as he slowly turned and faced her, leaning on the mirror behind him.


With the recent coming salamander space marines Imperial guard reinforcements and the support of the Bosnian Knight for the lamenters, the odds are now in favor of the loyalist. With the death of a plague champion and the end of the iron warriors' captain. The iron warrior withdrew from the battle through the warp gate, abandoning the death guard to protect the warp gate of town squat surrounded and to await the slow coming of death guard reinforcements. But suffering a low number of twenty-five lamenters and the death of the Chapter Captain, they have chosen Lieutenant Masaccio to ascend to the rank of chapter captain. Now, he leads the final assault with the Salamander forge master and with Celestia and Luna and their guard in support of their wounded and fires support though suffering a deep language gap between the imperium of man and equestrian forces.

"Captain of the lamenters." A hardened, deep friendly voice called out as Masaccio looked up to see the salamander forge master and his brothers behind them. In his hand was a master-crafted combi bolter flamer as he wore a cape of magma and decorated armor to those of a forge.

"Hail cousins of the flame, you come in a late time but still appreciate the coming support and aid in our crusade." Masaccio said, though with hints of doubt at his new title of Chapter Captain, feeling as if it were undeserving for him.

“The warp only played with our long travel here; we’d only wish we had gotten here sooner than later, for that as apologies for cousins of the angel.” The forge master said, bowing his head before the lamenter apologizing for not the late arrival but the losses.

“It is fine, forge master. There is no need for an apology for us; we only do what is said on both his grace and of our primachs wills, but now with your aid, we will finally be rid of this tumor on this world and stop once and for all.” Masaccio replied as both looked to the large back tower controlling the warp storm. “Hmm, I see but cousins, there is another matter to be discussed, one in private.”

The Forge master said as he woke away from the imperial command post, and Masaccio followed till they were in a secluded area of the town.

“We were followed by a member of the Inquisition, my cousins of the angel; we had not expected such events to come, but I fear favor after the battle will not be on ours or your side.” The forge master said with Masaccio looking down at the ground; if a member of the Inquisition is here, then their time only grows limited to what they originally had.

“Have these xenos been evacuated away from the warp storm sight?” The Forge master asked, sensing the trouble within Masaccio’s mind wanting to change the mood.

"Yes, cousins of the flame, we have sent only a squad of out brothers including brother veteran sergeant Drecarous leaving our forces thinned down to only twenty brothers in hand... I... I fear for this may be the death of our chapter cousins."

"Masaccio said, feeling a pain in both of his hearts and his body heaving from grief and sorrow with the salamander's forge master placed his hand on Masaccio's shoulder plate. He did not like those not of his brothers or chapter to touch him, yet he welcomed it as he looked up to the forge master's helmet.

"Never doubt yourself, brother, nor fall into such fears, cousins, for if you are to die, then we as salamanders I'll die with you. Not for the glory of the imperium or pride of honor but as one within the emperors light, to protect those that can't fight and to live and continue to fight onward, you are not alone my cousins, even if you may be brand cursed. You are sons of the angel; shine as bright as he does, and you will see that you will be victorious." The forge master said before leaving Masaccio alone to be left in thought as he stared up at the swirling warp storm and tower, clenching his fists as he looked at it as raised his hand to open a vox com link to the Aether vessel.

"Brothers read the cannons for orbital bombardment; I want only the memory of this world to know of chaos, prepare the ion cannon to fire on my current position, then await my command to fireand ready yourselfs for an inquisitorial coming."

It was only moments before he could prepare for prayer before he departed off the Inquisitorial Strike Cruiser hanger and saw many transport Valkyries loading tempestuous scion sons. Grey joins the lady inquisitor in his old worn, battle-damaged Cadian Kasrkin armor and uniform with modifications he made. Removing off his right shoulder pad and his legs shin armor, seeing that his bionics didn't need them even rolling up his pants. The left sleeve of his dress shirt right sleeve ripped off, exposing his bionic arms and legs completely. The tempestuous scions aboard with him watching as he loads four four-gauged shotgun slug shells into a tube in both legs and two sixty mags of eight point twenty-five autogun bullets into both arms. Then last gun battery pack was on the side of his right bionic eye as it glowed red.

Before he could enter the Valkyrie, he heard a pair of voices that he thought he could never hear the call out his name behind him in a long time. "G-Grey... Is that you?"

He glanced up at the lady inquisitor gesturing him to turn around, and so he did and was present with the sight that made his burnt eye shoot wide as he saw three faces he'd forgotten in year's

Oscar Milan and two kreigsmen with the names "Alina" and "Aline" on their helmets as they look at Grey in horror; he can see it on their faces through their masks. The look of horror was present on their faces, seeing once a soldier proud and honorable now barely recognizable even as human; they looked at his damaged uniform, armor, the bionics attached to his body, and finally, the scars.

"H-hey guys... Been a while, huh?"

"Grey... what happened to you? I heard what happened to Cadia; then, when the Inquisitor told me you were alive, I was worried the worse would come to you, and now... Now." Oscar looked at him, placing his hands over his head and backing away, horrified at what Grey had become. Even the smell of his body made him cringe back some. Be looked at Oscar's uniform and armor, seeing the rank of Lieutenant on his left shoulder pad, causing Grey to scoff.

"Well, glad to see you haven't grown a pair yet, ya cowardly officer... yet to me, your still that young private shiny whiteshield boy."

They then looked at the Kreig twin sisters, who only remained quiet as they looked at Grey, no longer a human or friend they once knew but a feral animal reeked of corpses. Blood and now made into a weapon, Grey stepped forward but stopped there to see them break away more as on their helmets was a brand of kreigsmen officers. He makes a Grey sigh and shakes his head, turning his back to them and standing at the boarding ram of the Valkyrie.

"Good chat and thanks for catching up... soldiers..."

He said, boarding the Valkyrie transport ship and sitting next to the Inquisitor With a blank expression as Oscar, Alina, and Aline watched the Valkyrie gets lifted and prepare to launch out of their bays. Soon the cruise hit the low orbit of Equestria. And watched as all Valkyrie ships were shootout to the planet's atmosphere burning in on entry, and Grey held his dead blank face at one of the six tempestuous scions, making them uncomfortable.

"Quit looking at me like that, ya, fucking penal dog." The scion guard said to Grey as he only stared at his power sword and used his blond hand to point at it catching the attention of both the Inquisitor and the other scion guards.

"That sword, I want it... Give it." He said, making the six scions laugh. "Like hell, you're taken this from me. The only way for you to have it is when your dead. The moment we hit the ground, I kill you with it, right through that beatless heart of yours." he exclaimed to Grey, who only snarled, making all the Scions laugh more as the Valkyrie shook, entering the planet's atmosphere and preparing to land.

"Glad we share the same plan." He said, kicking up his legs before it fired two slug pellets at the tempestuous scion, blowing a large hole into his body and breaking through the Valkyrie wall, breaking it into the atmosphere and starting a fire as a red light alarm rang out. Causing all the tempestuous scions to panic, the lady inquisitor watched Grey stand up with his bionic hands extended and bent backward.

Opening fire and releasing a hail of bullets at the scions and roaring enraged like a feral beast. Making the few that hadn't been shot scream, meeting the sixty rounds of bullet hell that shot from Grey's arms with the Valkyrie descended in the warp storm before an explosion on its side caused it to barrel dive and spun out of control toward the heart of the storm.


Twilight Sparkle, with her friends Applejack, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie, all wearing the elements of harmony, stand before Discord and his growing kingdom of chaos as ponyville becomes the capital of chaos. Unaware of the war generated by Discord's magic, the author forgets to use them and that they exist because they're "that" useless and will have little scenes in the coming sequel. As you read this paragraph, the author made too many promises; no, this does not count as a bloop sadly, as he's saving that till the end. No, the author doesn't care if they're your favorite characters; deal with it and enjoy the story.

Discord sits on his throne, staring at the elements of harmony with a glass of chocolate milk in hand. "Oh, this again?" He remarked at their attempt to put him back to stone, drinking the glass of his chocolate milked filled cup and tossing the chocolate malk behind him as it exploded. 'explosion sound here.'

Applejack steps up before her friends, snarling at Discord, "That's right. You couldn't break apart our friendship for long!" She snorted before Discord used his magic to pull her by her element necklace up in the air floating before him.

"Oh, Applejack. Don't lie to me. I'm the one who made you a liar. Will you ever learn?" He said before using this magic to pull Rarity and Fluttershy, then Rainbow Dash and pinkie, who pulled back her necklace with her mouth before all five floating before Discord as Twilight watched in shock. She lit up her horn and soon teleported to be in the air with her friends, casting a shield around them and lowering them back to the ground, cleaning off a patch of chaos-infected ground.

"I'll tell you what we've learned, Discord!" she said with Discord listening to the monologuing unicorn, watching her with a smug grin on his face. "We've learned that friendship isn't always easy, but there's no doubt it's worth fighting for!" Twilight finishes as Discord slithers before them with a face of disgust and groans, cringing at her statement.

"Ugh, gag. Fine, go ahead. Try and use your little Elements. "Frienemies." He said mockingly, popping his eye to be big and puppy-like before slithering back to his throne

"Just make it quick. I'm missing some excellent chaos here." He finishes with a smirk and watches them group up as Twilight looks back at them, determined to finish this once and for all. "Alright, ladies, let's show him what friendship can do!" she shouts.

"Wait-wait-wait!" Pinkie pie screams out, stopping her friends as they all look at her sitting under a cotton candy rain cloud, slurping up the choco milk with a smile on her face as she licks it off her body. "We got to wait for Grey."

"Uh, Pinkie, he's back at Cantorlot Castle, knocked out; he has no to wait for him!" Rainbow Dash screamed out before Pinke pointed at the sky.

"No he's not. He's up there riding the burning remains of a Valkyrie Transport ship up there, thats spinning out of control and diving this way."

“Pinkie what are you talking about-” Twilight said, looking at the sky where Pinkie was pointing at the others before all their eyes went wide and pinpointed at the sight of a flaming ship spinning out of control like a meteor with as a death siren rings out. Discord looks up and sees the burning Valkyrie ship.

"Uh oh..."

Snapping his fingers to teleport away, the Valkyrie crashed into his throne. It scraped up into the infected chaos ground leaving a dirt trail of rubble, burnt bodies, and fire before the elements galloped over to see if Grey was ok.

"Grey!" Twilight screamed out before a hatch blasted open, making the girls jump back and recoil at the sound; as the door flew off, Grey took steps out with the main six gasping at the sight of him with metal arms, legs, and an eye that glowed red.

"G-Grey is... Is that really you?" Rarity spoke out, horrified by his beaten body, with Applejack trembling at the sight of him, Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash staring at him in awe at his body and bloodied, burnt, and damaged uniform and armor. He smiled and held out a bionic finger, gesturing for them to hold on for a moment.

"Yeah yeah, give me a minute. I got a guest with me." He said with hold out his hand back at the Valkyrie, only to have it smacked away as a tall human walked out. It took off its damaged coat, revealing its black slime armor with large shoulder plates, heeled boots, and a skull face with blacked eye sockets and the letter I in the center of its head.

"That was the last time you ever fly, let alone prove you were qualified to fly a ship!" it said in a clear, feminine voice as it looked at Grey, and he smirked, holding his hands up and shrugging with a smug face.

"Hey, I said I "was" qualified, but not anymore; you just didn't hear me." She sighed, irritated, before looking at six colorful xenos, five wearing golden necklaces and one with a crown. As they all took a step back, she hovered her hand over the plasma pistol, only for Grey to step in between them, holding his metal hands out, looking at both the Inquisitor and the main six.

"Woah, girls wish, let's calm down before we do anything we might regret and-"

"Might regret!" The lady inquisitor cuts off Grey as he holds both of his palms out at her standing in front of his friends. "You mean to tell you defending these xenos, you traitorous penal scum!" she screamed before aiming her plasma pistol under his bionic jaw and forcing his head to look at the sky.

"My lady, if you let me explain, these are the "Elements of Friendship," I told you about the xenos that possess the power I mentioned." He said, holding his hands up as the lady inquisitor glanced at them all, trembling in fear looking at Grey and her before she sighed again, holstered her plasma pistol, and stepped away as Grey recovered slowly.

"So these xenos are the one that could stops this, you believe hmm, they don't look like much to me, infect they disgust me."

“Well, give in mind they are weak as shit, but I can assure you that their power is something to admire. Yes?”

“G-Grey...” Twilight stuttered, locking eyes with the tall female human as it stared down at her, shaking in fear with her friends behind her.

“Do... You know... Her?”

The lady inquisitor looks at Greg with her hand placed on her hips as she leans to the side. “What did it say Guardsman?” she ordered as Grey looked at both the lady inquisitor and the girls.

“Wait... You cant understand each other?!”

They looked at each other and then back at Grey, shocked, and spoke in unison.

“So your telling me you can understand her animal cries?!”
“So your telling me you can understand her Gobley goop?!”

Grey only shook his head, glancing at the lady inquisitor and Twilight, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Rarity, Pinkie, and Fluttershy before a peal of certain laughter above them with the main six and Grey looking up. The lady inquisitor pulls her plasma pistol and fires a ball of blue flames at the laughing Discord. He splits his body in half, dodges the plasma ball entirely, and snaps his fingers to turn her plasma gun into a mess of bubble gun that binds her hands together as she struggles to split her hands apart.

"Discord, you freak show of shit did you do!" Grey screamed out as he only slithered down and wrapped around Grey's body with his own like a snake holding him up in the air and laughing.

"It's more of what I did to you; you see, when I pulled you out of the warp and stored my power in your body, I also gave you the ability to read, with and even speak the Equestrian tongue, is that great!" He laughs at the confused Grey, who struggles to free himself.

"Why the fuck are you doing this then! Why me and me are alone, you Karken circus freak show!?" He screamed before Discord dropped him to the ground, chuckling. "Is like I said, Grey... It's all for a game, and so far, you are winning. Congrats to you and nice chrome by the way; shame you had to... "Die" for it literally." He laughs at his joke as Grey snarls firing a las shot from his bionic eye, and misses Discord entirely as the main six looks at Grey, confused and concerned by what discords joke.

"Ah ah ah, it's not over yet; you still have to get rid of the warp storm and Chaos if you want to beat me." Discord laughs only for a loud explosion behind him. A bright light of a giant laser beam rained down from the sky. It hit the warp storm's dead center, sending a shockwave, knocking everything down as Twilight cast her magic shield again, protecting Lady inquisitor and Grey as Discord watched the warp storm slowly fade away.

"What the buck is that!" Rainbow Dash screamed out as Grey covered his eye from the bright light and the lady inquisitor watched the purple horned xenos shield protecting her and the other xenos and Grey.

"Tis the emperor's hammer of a bloody fucking Ion Cannons beam! Never seen one hit close before!"

He shouted as the heat of its road with the shock waves pushed them back; they tried to stabilize themselves with Twilight's shield seeing it slowly crack. Her horn glowed from purple to bright red before finally shattering, sending Grey, the Lady Inquisitor, Twilight, Rarity, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie, and Discord flying through the air with the flying rubble and debris hours. It finally slowed and came to a stop. The sight of ash and fog of smoke from fires with the smell of rot and blown down homes, trees, and ruins, a perfect beautiful sky over a vast wasteland and a huge crater.


Captain Masaccio, with the last remaining twenty brothers of the Lamenters space marine, surrounds the black tower and Warp Gate screaming orders over the bolter fire as he slashes the power sword of his former captain.

"Come, my brothers, our cousins vowed to pull back with the guardsmen and and the xenos let this be the last of our battles; let the emperor hear our roar, for all of our fallen brothers!" he screamed out as his brothers repeated his last words.

"For the Emperor and his Shining Light of Holy Terra!" As only fifteen stood, he roared out as his brothers repeated, falling to the ground with the light of light disappearing from their eyes. Firing bolters and only one heavy bolter struggle to fire at the incoming fire.

"For his Holy Son and our Beloved Father Sanguinius!" they carid out as the final heavy bolter support brother gets his arms, head, and have of his body blown off by a full charged plasma gun as his body fell to his knees and laid flat over the heavy bolter. As the remaining dwindled from fifteen to six.

"For those we cherish!" He said with the last of his brothers falling, one even trying to hold the banner of the Lamenter's fourth company standard as Masaccio grabbed his arm and held him up as he held his sword high.

"We Die in Glory!" He finishes as a bolt shot pierces his neck, and he falls backward to face the tower and the warp storm. As the light of life fades, he sees the aether astartes strike cruiser faintly through the warp storm as it hovers in low orbit, opens his vox com, and quietly relays his orders to the ship-readied Ion Cannon. "F-fi...a..." He sighed his final breath as the blinding light of the ion beam came down the hammer of the emperor, striking down onto the world of Equestria, at ponyville town square, and at the heart of the Warp storm with the bodies of heretics, traitors, demons. The corpses of both lamenters, guardsmen, ponies, buildings, and trees were disintegrating by the atom and sending a shockwave through the lands, burning everything. To a flat, barren burnt wasteland with a large crater in the center that could be seen from orbit—finishing the battle, the corruption of the warp storm, and chaos.

Finishing off the last of the Adeptus Astartes lamenters chapter, nothing more than hot dust of ash and the only memory to hold on to their legacy, for that's what they are and will always be known for, only memory.

For those they Cherished, They Died in Glory.

Discord only floated, stunned by what happened with Grey and the lord inquisitor slowly rising from the rubble and ash and gazing at the destructive force thrown onto this world as the fallout of a thick fog of ash rained and crept around them. Twilight and her friends slowly climbed and stood up to gaze and see nothing, nothing but ash and of ponyville. The remains of ponyville were gone, and the tears in their eyes poured down freely at the loss of their homes, friends, and everything. With only Grey, the Lady Inquisitor, and Discord to blame for such chaos, all six looked at them with pain and hatred in their burning eyes.

"This... this is all our fault all of you."

"Twilght calm down and take a bre-" he was interrupted by Rainbow Dash flying over and bucking his metal jaw, sending him to fall on his back. "Shut the buck up Grey."

He could see the hatred in her eyes as Applejack used a lasso and tired down the Lady inquisitor restraining her arms.

"Guardsman! By order and command of the Inquisition, I command you to kill these xenos. I knew not to believe in your verdict and should've thrown you out the airlock." She screamed out as Grey punched Rainbow Dash off him, only to see all six of them glowing and floating in the air.

"This wasn't me, Twilight! Listen to me, for the fucking emperor's sake! Please! Twilight!" He screamed out, holding both of his hands out as he readied to fire the last shots of his autogun arm.

"Guardsman! Kill them, you traitorous bastard!"

The Lady inquisitor screamed; the elements shot a rainbow blast towards Grey, the inquisitor, and Discord of them and heard the sounds of gunfire as Grey shut his eye and fired at them, and soon it stopped to only the sounds of silence.

Grey slowly opened his eye and saw the rainbow blast right before him, frozen, even his bullets that were shot out of the barrels in his bionic arms. Slowly looking around to see everything was frozen in place, almost as if time had stopped, he hears Discord's chuckling behind him, breaking the silence.

"Heh, well done, Grey, you won but yet at a cost..." He says in a low, calm tone as he looks at the ground, ashamed.

"W-what do you mean, what is the meaning of this!?" Grey shouted, looking around him and at the Lady inquisitor, slowly walking up to her and snapping his bionic fingers to get a reaction but nothing as he looked back up at Discord again, chuckling.

"I only wanted my kingdom and made deals with terrible friends in a sort of "game"... And this is what I gets for cheating at the game, I made, lives taken and lost and now you making enemies with Equestria itself, pulling you from your dead world to this one, and even bringing your kind here and some of your friends to see if I could win against them and the odds, yet now though I won... but won nothing now."

He said, looking down at Grey with genuine sorrow and pain as his plans failed, leaving only him and Grey to look at the wasteland horizon till he spoke again. "Why... Why do I feel this pain... this sorrow now?"

Grey didn't understand; he brought him to this world when he was meant to die, this beast god of chaos caused all of the warps, horrors, and chaos forces to this world, and now Discord is asking him why he feels... Sad. Grey only looked at him and then back at the frozen wasteland before him; thinking in thought, he looked down at the ground, his bionic legs, his hands, and back at the barren horizon.

"Simple, your sad... your feeling a human emotion called regret, Discord; you regreted working with Chaos and making a deal with such monsters only to be betrayed by them, and now look what it brought you," Grey said, looking up at Discord.

"Nothing, but only the death of thousands of blood on not just mine but on your... 'hands' too. Nothing to see, nothing to rule over but a grave sight on this world. I know this... Sadness, pain, and regret all too well."

He says, looking down at his hands, legs, and broken armor and uniform. "To have regrets, burdens, and the things you've done making you wish you could go back and undo all the wrongs you've done. Yet, in the end, this is something that can't be done, and only you are to blame for it, but you can learn from it I say, learn form it and only hope it never comes to happen again, or at the very least try not to let it happen..."

He said, looking up at Discord again and seeing the pain and regret in his red and yellow eyes as he took a slow deep breath from his nose and put his mouth. "Perhaps your right..." He remained quiet as both gazed at the crater of ponyville for a moment.

"Grey... I want to make a deal with you." Be asked, getting a disgusted snarl from Grey and awkwardly chuckles.

"No tricks and now dealings with chaos this time... I'm about to be in prisoner forever again... But just a simple deal, one that stays between us?" He said, looking at Grey and sighing, shaking his head before looking back up slowly, sitting on the ground hunched with his hands on his knees. "Fine..."

"With my power and what's left of this world, I can undo all this chaos I've brought and everything and the memories only going back to me trying to rule Equestria by "my" hand. Even having you save the day with the imperial forces is completely rewriting history and time with the powers of the warp. Even altering some minds and making you the hero of it all. Leaving all this between the both of us, from both princesses, the imperium, and everyone." Discord offers as Grey looks at him, appalled and confused by all things possible, sensing a hint of a catch in the offer.

"And the Catch..." He asked, only getting a smug hum from Discord.

"Don't play dumb now; I've been in a lot of bad deals and shady trades to know a catch and the smell of a liar when I smelled it." He said, pointing his finger at Discord as he closed his eyes, sighing before looking back at Grey.

Discord only remained quiet before letting out a sigh. "You will have to die for the safety of this world... I do not know when, where, or how. But the fate of this world will be rewritten, but only if you accept the offer."

"A-and if I don't..." Grey asked, concerned at such an offer.

"Then you will be held responsible for the death of not just this world, but every life on it will die, then you too will die in a painful death, one that would even make chaos fear."

It hit him like a baneblade to falling from high orbit to a world, a deal that requires him to keep his mouth shut and never mention the battle of this world again till his unknown death, or the world will suffer the same fate as a world under exterminatus. He will sign that death warrant for every life form in this world, dead or alive. He fell onto his knees and hands and was only left in thought at such a deal, either the death of a planet or his own he knew he was going to die, yet he didn't imagine it would be for such a deal, let alone a world.

He has killed people ranging up to the triple digits, yet the thought goes beyond that. It made him sick to the stomach, almost making him want to vomit. Yet, what does he do? Closing his eye and left to thought with Discord watching.

Moments passed for what felt like hours as Grey lay there, lost in deep thought, till he breathed in and sighed—standing back up and looking up at Discord.

"Discord, if I accept this deal, I only hope for however long you stay in that stone prison again, you learn from your mistakes and take it to heart, 'cause it not..." Grey said before pulling out his last trench knife from his boot and pointing the blade at Discord with a snarl on his face.

"I Thorn Mad-... Cain... Grey, vow to kill you where you stand and to take your last breath... Even if I have to reveal what has happened today." He exclaimed at Discord, who only smiled and chuckled before laughing at his threat.

"Hah, I'll hold you accountable for that, Grey...sleep well, Thorn Cain Greg, hero of Equestria." He said as a bright light blinds Grey, and soon he was asleep back to the... This place is the dark world he once knew as the afterlife, and he sees Mad Dog standing before him only with his back turned and in an officer's uniform though burnt in some areas.

"Huh, Hero of Equestria... Guess we got it, little Cain; we did it, we got our redemption we wanted and now bask in his light. Who know all it took was making a deal with heresy itself." Mad Dog said with a blank tone as Grey remained quiet and only stared at him, unable to move or speak.

"I can only pray on what goes through that insane mind of your Cain... But then again, we are the same person, after all we can do now is see what fate will do and what the emperor has set in stone for us to face. Be prepared, Grey; this isn't over. And neither are we." Mad Dog said before turning to Grey and walking to his side, laying a hand on his shoulder.

“Let me remind you of this Cain, even though all is forgotten and nothing will be known to them, you and I are really the only ones that know the truth... Good luck ya fucking kark, cya in hell.” He finished patting his shoulder, walking behind him before a bright light blinded light eclipsed his eye, and muffled voices called out to him.

"Grey... Grey... Grey!" He opened his eye only to be blinded by the sun's bright light. As the heat touched his body, he let his eye adjust to the light. He slowly looked around to see Twilight, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, Fluttershy, Princess Luna, and Princess Celestia, the equestrian guards, the ponies of ponyville. With the volunteered guardsmen from the lamenters, Guardsmen of the Elysian Drop Troops, Guardsmen of the Ultramar Auxilia, the imperial knight and his pilot sitting in his imperial knights' hull, The Salamanders space marines, the lady inquisitor with her Tempestuous Scions and the sisters of the battle of The Order of the Ebon Chalice all surround him. He lay on the ground looking up at the clear blue sky of Equestria and around him seeing the once wasteland. Grey saw nothing more than a few ruined buildings and debris scattered everywhere as he slowly raised to see everyone's gaze on him as he patted himself off. He was still wearing his broken kasrkin armor and had his bionic limbs on himself, only to feel both princesses and the main six jump onto him and hug him tightly.

"Emperor fucking damn, what's gottin to ya git!?" He shouted before The last inquisitors stomped on the ground catching his and the xenos embracing his attention."

"Sergeant Major Thorn C-... "Mad Dog" Grey, I must say, feet that no soldier or space marine could accomplish, let alone perform, especially when aligned with xenos." She said, looking up behind him to see the statue of the beast and God of Chaos Discord frozen and imprisoned as a statue; as he looked up at it shocked beyond all."

Then inquisitor stepped up to stand before him and gestured her hand to him kneel, and he followed, surprising both twilight and her friends and princesses as the watch confused. She looks at him and orders Grey to recite what she says to him for the ponies to understand.

"Sergeant Major Thorn "Mad Dog" Grey, though you are a man with a background of questionable tactics and a questionable sense of humor." She said, sparking a few chuckles from the guardsmen and ponies that watch listening to him.

"You are one of very few that accomplished a feat so momentous and rare by all... you have proven your word that these xen- "ponies" are as you told me as great beings and to not dare looked down upon them as of today, I renounce my judgment, suspension, and verdict I had on you guardsman." She said as Grey looked at her, confused a bit.

"And I here by Congratulate you on not just saving the lives of billions but an entire world that, with the power vested in me and the word by both generals of the Ultramar Auxilia, of the Elysian Drop Troopers the imperial knight of Bosnia. the Forge master of the salamanders, the once former fourth company of the Lamenters chapter and their commanding officers of the remaing volunteered guardsmen with them, and of the holy order the Inquisition." She says, taking out her power sword and gently resting the blade of it to tape on Grey's shoulders from right to left.

"Hereby promote you to being the first and only Captain of the imperial guard under penince." He looks at her blankly but holds back his pain and internal screaming, cursing the Inquisition internally. "Along with declaring as planetary Defense force leader, as per your agreement and to watch over this world as of now this world is to be under watch of the imperium of mankind, Captain, Thorn "Mad Dog" Grey Planetary Defender you may rise."

He slowly stood up and, with a blank-faced expression, at what was said. The ponies, all guardsmen, the knight pilot, and the space marine cheer him on at his accomplishment promotion. For a new world to be one with the imperium, he slowly turned to Celestia and Luna, smiling a menacing smile at him. Knowing he's going to have a long talk with both sisters and the lady inquisitor herself about what was said and it's meaning that he felt the fear of female anger. Celestia stepped forward to stepping on her hind hooves, wrapping both her hooves and wings around Grey, surprising all the imperial forces as she leaned on him with her mouth over his ear, whispering to him gently.

"Oh, you are in so much trouble, "Captain."

He hides his fear as Celestia smiles, turning to the ponies of ponyville and the human, preparing to speak for both humans—her ponies. The space marines, guardsmen, and Inquisition watch, looking at Grey for translation, now seeing he can speak the ponies tongue as he sighs and starts to repeat what Celestia said.

"Citizens of ponyville, soldiers of the Equestria, and proud warriors of humans of the imperium of man. We are gathered here today to honor the heroism and brave souls that were lost here; I know they look down at us, smiling proudly and with expectations to see this world prosper, and we couldn't thank them anymore for their sacrifice today. But thanks to these seven friends. The might of The Imperium of Man and those who scorified themselves to not only save but stand up to Discord and saved Equestria from eternal Chaos." She said out loud and looked down to the main six and up to Grey, giving him time to finish repeating her words in low gothic.

"My faithful student Twilight Sparkle and her friends, the Elements of Harmony, and with Captain Thron "Mad Dog Grey, Son of Cadia Prime, and honored soldier of the Astra Militarum of the Imperial Guard to the Emperor of Mankind." Princess Celestia finishes as the guardsmen and Inquisition and the ponies cheer for Grey and the elements of harmony.

Yet the only thing in greys mind is a scream of malic, fear, sorrow, pain, denial, grief, and debate whether he should blow his brains out right where he stands or accept it all and let future Grey take care of it.

Cause, after all, this is the story of a Karkin Guardsman Veteran, true-born son of Cadia Prime of the great Imperium of man, a bound loyalist to the golden throne of holy Terra and soldier in born eternal war, a man, a mortal human man; followed by trillions upon trillions of other ordinary men and women of the front lines of battle, holding the line for 10,000 years against the enemies of man. Now Captain and tasked with protecting the world of ponies and preparing himself for a new task, his new life in Equestria, where he learned the value and magic of Friendship. Now he will have to learn how to take what Equestria will give him, peace, joy, and possible... Love, but that is another story for another day.

Cause after all, it is only the beginning of many more coming duties for him to go over the spread of his story and tale of him spreading through the universe, spreading the legend that's soon to be known as...

The Gaurdsman

To be Continued...


Pick a vid for an ending song/ speech I didn't know which to choice or couldnt find a good one besides Dawn of war, eternal crusade, or ambiance, stringstorm or music of the 40k so I just went with this one

Tribute to The Imperial Guard - Cadia Stands by Siphon V. On YouTube


Author's Note

That's it, that's the end of it, all of it, and now comes the fattest thank you I can every give you, not just you as a reader on a phone or PC table or what ever, but you as a person, yeah I'm acknowledging you as individual calling the 1.8k viewers that read this story and the 101 people that actually like this story even the 11 disliked... Well not much as your are trash like me and shit show but still, thank you... From day one when this story was just a shit show among shit shows if you remember the original name for it then you are a general chad as the rest are all ya little guardian to boss around, get over dramatic still I can thank you knockle heads enough as now I'm currently working on the sequel as we speak, and I managed to get thidbtory done before Halloween. Give me that W as I WON the chosen- no I'm just shit poster getting happy that the story is finished and on to a new adventure those this story and all I ask do you my friend is

Would you like to join me as he walk through it together?


...The End, for now, I guess...

What expecting something long and tedious... Fuck you

... Fine

For the sequel, I need a reference to how Orkz fight... So you know uses the new shit I made up of the Magic of friendship being Anti warp magic and starts fighting each other like the ruthless maniacs you all are...

The winner will get a free commission on whatever they what if they can come up with that beats all other arguments and theories so now you have a reason to fight and I get my reference material along with you getting a show to watch a battle of nerds fight each other in a nerd off so it's a win-win. I'm kidding don't do it that would get me in trouble

So this is how GW must feel when they do something to the table top game... I love it

now time for BS credits in joy with this


Choosen Credit theme song cause we all need a boom for a shit bomb of a story

Credits

Executive Producer Dr. K-MoonShard

Music by YouTube

Main ambience title theme By YouTube

Songs by YouTube

Original characters donated
Oscar Milan. Bronycommander

Original Characters Used (yes I made them up/ used them in their own way and part)

Krieg N* 104 Aline + 105 Aline. Captain Steneaus Camail. Lieutenant Masaccio. Verterean Sergeant Drecaro. other Lamenters space marines. other Salamander space marines. Death Guard Champion of The Favored Sons and herald of Nug the Nurgling Allomere. Mysterious Plague sorcerer. other Dead guard of The Favored Sons. Iron Warrior Captain Varth Brul of the Iron Warriors, other brothers of the Iron Warriors. Other imperial Guardsmen volunteered service to the Lamenters, Imperial guardsmen of the Elysian Drop Troopers of Elysia. Guardsmen of the Ultramar auxilia of Ultramar. The Imperial Bosnian knight of the knight house of Bosnia. Tempestuous Scions of the inquisition. Adepta sororitas of the Order of Ebon Chalice of the inquisition, Lady inquisitor of the inquisition. Demons of Nugle. Cultists slaves. Cultists of Chaos undivided. Triator Guard of chaos undivided. Cultists of Nugrle. Cultists slaves of Nurgle. Traitor Guard of Nurgle. Dark Mechanicum. Adeptus Mechanicus. Imperial Navy officers and commanders. Imperial guard Officers and commanders. vox com castors. the warp. X.X.th Cadian Giggle Dogs. Penal legion. Armageddon Steel legon. Death korp of Kreig. Catachan Devils'. Imperial Guard whiteshields Viper "Abel" Grey. Thorn ~~"Cain"~~ Grey. Mad Dog. Captain Grarn Cain Grey. Captain Suki van Abel Nova. Imperial Guard 8th Cadain Regiment "The Lord Castellan's Own". Lord Castellan. Equestrian Royal Guard. Earthpony Knights General Solar Marble. Grand Mage of the Unicorns Sapphire Moonlight. The Daemonculaba. and Pegasi Commander.

I Dare you to say all these names in one breath... and I spent too much time in shit hole

Cannon Characters

Princess Celestia. Princess Luna. Discord. Twilight Sparkle. Rarity. Applejack. Fluttershy. Pinkie pie. Rainbow Dash. Spike. Zecora, Applebloom. Sweetie Belle. Scootaloo. Shining Armor. Raven Inkwell. Time Turner. Bulk Biceps. Granny Smith. Big Mcintosh. Mr. and Mrs. Cake. Diamond Tiara. Filthy Rich. Spoiled Rich. Snips. Sails. Thunderlane. Rumble. Featherweight. Sunny Daze. Peachy Pie. Nightmare Moon. The Wonderbolts. Cloudsdale weather Team. Ms. Cheerilee. Mayor Mare. The two Spa pony sisters. Toe-Tapper. Torch Song. Silver Shill. Gizmo. Cloud Chaser. Flitter. Train Conductor. Hayseed turnip Truck. Nurse Red Heart. Dr. Horse. Dr. Fruna. Doctor horse 2. Davenport. Berry Punch. Derpy/disty Do. Bon Bon. Octavia. Vinal Scratch. Blossomforth/Helia. Cherry Berry. Dinky Doo. Twist. Lily Valley. Daisy. Rose. Construction Pony. Screwy. Jeff Letroski. That weird pony with the Jam fetish. Minuette

You had no Idea how many fucking pics of horse to look at and names that made me want to blow my brains out just to make the wall of cutiemarks of these spesicif horses that I killed only to bring back to life because of BS Warp magic and non of you can say I can't do it.

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Educational Consultant The Fuck is thi- oh wait never mind I don't have that

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pretty much everything else was done by me. Dr. K-MoonShard.

I put this here just to waste your time in thinking I wasn't alone when I was. I did this, I wrote all 12 chapter. 1131 paragraphs and 76,981 word of this story and now working on a sequel that will even a twice as much of shit post that will clog the my poor toilet and probably flood my house I really love you fuck and hope to do more in the sequel

now if you excuse me I got a church holy water to replace and a barrel of good ol' mountain dew