Sunset has a Mind Control Fetish

by Autistic Witch

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Term guide: wingspan= wing length + width between wings + wing length; wing length is the measurement of an outstretched wing from tip to base; hybrid vigor is a term referring to the offspring of different species becoming larger and stronger than either of its parents. For example, lion + tiger = liger.


“Sunset?”, Twilight called out. Twilight closed and locked the door, leaving the house in complete darkness. Despite her name and having been a student of the sun, Sunset always kept her place dark. She still lived in the house with the loft and giant window that let in the sunrise, but said window had massive blackout curtains keeping the light at bay.

“I’m here, just putting the final touches together.”, Sunset called from the darkness. Twilight gave her eyes a minute to adjust before going any further. Due to hybrid vigor, the girls were faster, stronger, tougher, and have better senses than their “parent” species. This included night vision and stamina, both kinds, but Twilight had the worst - any kind of vision of them. Many of the girls that tried to find human mates were left unsatisfied. This led the seven of them to enter into an open relationship with each other, but that didn’t mean they didn't have their favorite partners. “Okay, ready.”

Little dancing flames lit up in the air, lighting up the space enough for Twilight to see. The spell was one of Sunset's creation, called will-o’-wisp. She did use it to lure her prey into her trap, but it also had uses such as this. Sunset sauntered over with swaying hips that were hypnotic in their own right. The light from the will-o’-wisps danced across Sunset’s face and sparkled in her eyes. Her eyes were predatory and hungry. Sunset had taken Twilight’s virginity a long time ago, but Twilight couldn’t help but go weak at the knees whenever she got like this. Sunset was strong, the strongest creature on the planet, and the only one that can second Twilight. She was also kind and nurturing and squishy like a pillow. Twilight’s brain screamed at her “This one! This one is the perfect mate! She will provide for your young!”. It made her dizzy but in a good way.

Sunset approached Twilight and pinned her to the door, simultaneously activating the sound isolation glyphs painted on her walls. They could be as loud as they wanted as late as they wanted. Sunset only wore a black sports bra, giving Twilight a clear view of her arms and abdomen, black leather pants, and a pair of latex socks that had the toes and heel cut out, leaving the balls of her feet and heels exposed. It was strange but also undeniably Sunset, making it a strange kind of hot. “Ready to have that little thing quieted down?”, Sunset asked sultrily while poking Twilight’s forehead. She spoke with such calm authority, the kind of authority where she knew she commanded respect and reverence by her actions and power rather than words and rules. She was the only creature that held true authority over Twilight. Police officers, politicians, and the government only had authority over Twilight because she allowed it. She was a god amongst mere humans, the true apex predator of this world. If she truly didn’t like something, she alone could take over the country and impose her own rule. But Sunset, Sunset was her god. Sunset had true authority over her, and Twilight liked that. She was alpha of their pack, chief of their tribe, their princess.

“Ready”, Twilight said breathlessly. If her mind wasn’t still racing a mile a minute, she would think Sunset was already using her power on her. Twilight could just get lost in her eyes, enthralled by them even.

“Good, take off your shirt and come with me.” Sunset released Twilight and turned back around to go to her living room. Twilight pulled her shirt off so quickly it almost ripped and tossed it into the corner and followed Sunset like a dog would their master with a treat in their hand.

Sunset grabbed a length of rope from the coffee and showed it to Twilight. “You know what to do.”, Sunset ordered. Twilight spun around, put her arms over her head, and ponied up. Her wings unfurled from her back and opened half way before Twilight fouled them in. Sunset moved Twilight’s hair out of the way then laid the rope over her elbow as she took one of Twilight’s wings and spread it. Their wings had grown over the years and were no longer those little cherub wings, with Twilight having a wing span close to eleven feet. Their larger wings took more time to care for, but it was well worth it because they made it so much easier to fly. Plus, Sunset liked preening Twilight’s wings and having hers done in return. Sunset went over Twilight’s wing with gentle caresses. She knew Twilight’s wing pattern better than the back of her hand by now and knew where exactly she liked to be touched. Twilight let out a shuddering breath as Sunset caressed a particularly sensitive spot. Her free wing twitched and fluttered wildly, begging for attention. “Hm, someone’s got a lot of energy.”, Sunset whispered into Twilight’s ear.

“I, uh, huhauha.” Twilight’s body twitched under Sunset. She was a head taller than the purple woman and a lot heavier too.

“Maybe we should stop, give you a chance to get the energy out.”, Sunset teased.

“Wha- no! Please, no.”, Twilight shuddered. Her eyes were closed as she tried to contain her arousal. She wanted to jump on Sunset and just ram her pussy into her.

“Are you sure? You could fly around the block a few times.”

“No! Please! Just fuck me already!”

Sunset let go of the wing and wrapped her arms around Twilight’s chest with the rope in hand. “Alright, let’s get you all dressed up then, you horny little turkey.”, Sunset said in a more playful tone then gave Twilight’s ear a quick nibble. “You remember the safe word?”, Sunset asked, dropping her persona.

Twilight nodded quickly. “Yes”

Sunset took a breath then got back into the mindset of her role. She pulled the rope around Twilight’s torso and snuggled it under her breasts. Twilight took deep breaths so Sunset knew how tight she could make it. She didn’t want to restrict Twilight's breathing, that would be for later, but she also didn’t want the rope to not do its job. Once the rope was secure around her chest, Sunset moved on to Twilight’s wings. She wrapped one end of the rope around what would be the forearm if it was an arm then did the same with the other wing and tied them together. Then she repeated the process with what would be the hands and looped the rope around her chest one more time. Twilight’s wings were now strapped down to her back and could only wiggle.

“Turn around and show me your arms.”, Sunset said in her dominatrix voice. Twilight lowered her arms and turned around to face Sunset. She held her arms in the “well officer, take me away” pose. It was fitting as that wasn’t far from what was going to happen. Sunset bent down and picked up two magic suppressor rings she had specially made to fit around human wrists. The face the craftsman made when she gave him the dimensions was one of delicious fear. She had to assure him that Equestria wasn’t under attack by two giant unicorns, but it’d be worth it. Despite the name, suppression rings don’t actually suppress a creature’s magic. They merely cut it off, kinda like a tourniquet. To a unicorn, it was the same thing, but Twilight would still able to use magic out of every other part of her body.

Sunset secured the bands around Twilight’s wrists. Twilight flexed her hands, feeling the coldness from the lack of magic. The rings each had an extra loop so they could have a chain attached and act as handcuffs. Sunset picked up the last bit of bondage gear, a studded, black dog collar, and secured it around Twilight’s neck along with a leash. The collar was tight, but Twilight could still easily breath. Sunset yanked on the leash, causing Twilight to stumble closer to her. Twilight cupped her hands over her exposed breasts. She was collard, couldn’t use her magic, and her wings were bound. She was at Sunset’s mercy, and it was incredibly hot. She looked up at Sunset with pleading eyes, hoping that would push her to start.

Sunset smiled down at her possessively. Twilight knew she could smell her arousal. “Let’s get started.”, Sunset said. Sunset yanked on the leash again, and Twilight obediently followed her up to her loft. Sunset pushed Twilight onto the bed and gave her a chance to get properly on the bed and comfortable before mounting her. Sunset took Twilight’s glasses off and placed them on the nightstand then began playing with Twilight’s tits before leaning down to Twilight’s face. “You remember what I said about this spell?”

Twilight nodded. “Yes, although you’ll have control over me, it’s easy to break. There will still be a quiet part of my mind, that will be aware of everything, that can break the spell if needed.”

“Very good. Now then,” Sunset activated the spell, and her eyes glowed red. Twilight let out a light gasp as her eyes went wide. The light spiraled within Sunset’s eyes, penetrating into the deepest parts of Twilight’s mind. It was so beautiful and captivating. Twilight tried to analyze what was going on, form any thoughts at all, but the light wiped them all away. Nothing else was important, only looking into those eyes and obeying their owner.

“Feeling turned on, Twilight?”

“Yess”, Twilight said as if she was a million miles away.

“Hm, why?”, Sunset asked as she continued to play with Twilight’s tits. She wanted to put her mouth on her body, but she needed to maintain eye contact for the hypnosis spell to work.

“Y-you’re ho-ot, and-and huuh.”, Twilight tried to get out, but one of the side effects of the spell was increased arousal.

“Sshh,” Sunset took one of her hands from Twilight’s breast to make the shush gesture over Twilight’s lips, “just be quiet and fall under my control.” Twilight looked really tired now, and her eyes became half lidded, but she dared not close them. Sunset took the hand she used to shush Twilight and used it to massage her behind the ears. Twilight grew even more relaxed as Sunset brought her to heaven. Sunset knew from personal experience that this essentially turns your brain into very expensive goo. Twilight’s eyes eventually closed, signaling to Sunset the spell was completed and Twilight was fully hypnotized.

“Twilight”, Sunset whispered.

“Ngh”, Twilight replied sleepily.

“Who am I?”

“Sunset Shimmer”, Twilight slurred out.

“Yes, but you will call me Mistress while we are playing, and you will say that after every order I give you, and you will obey your mistress’s orders. You will also feel pleasure when you obey one of my orders.”

“Yes, Mistress.”, Twilight sighed. There was nothing but Mistress’s words and obedience. There was only one clear thought in Twilight’s mind, ‘obey’.

Sunset’s hips jerked with excitement, her instincts telling her to get it over with and mate, but she wrangled them back under control. She wanted to savor this, the power, the dominance.

“Good girl.”, Sunset cooed as she continued to scratch Twilight behind the ears. Twilight’s body twitched under Sunset’s as she let out cute little content sighs and moans. Sunset planted a kiss on Twilight’s lips then more on her chin then on her neck. “My words are your thoughts. They are your reality. When I tell you something is, it is. When I order you to jump, you don’t ask how high, you obey and jump. You are my hypnotized slave.”

“Aagh, yes, Missstress. I am your hypnotized slave. I-I obey. I serve and obey without, agh, hesitation.”, Twilight said through her moans.

Sunset grinded her pussy into Twilight’s. She loved hearing Twilight say those words. It was arousing to no end. “Good girl.” Sunset raised herself to the full length of her arms, which were a bit long for her body. Twilight let out a displeased whine at Sunset stopping her ministrations. Sunset smiled down at the helpless woman and ponied up herself. Her wings had a span of thirteen feet, making them the largest and an intimidating display. Sunset domed her wings, a dominance display for pegasi, and restarted her kneading of Twilight’s breast. “Twilight, open your eyes.”, Sunset ordered.

“Yes, Mistress.”, Twilight cooed. She opened her eyes slowly, like she was waking up from a deep sleep. Her eyes were hazy but filled with pure lust and worshipful adoration and devotion until she noticed Sunset’s wings. She immediately took up a submissive posture, trying to make herself smaller, but the way she looked at Sunset didn’t change. She jerked her hips against Sunset’s, desperate for any stimulation.

Sunset smiled wickedly and flew off the bed, landing and crouching on the loft railing. The flimsy metal railing had been replaced with a much sturdier version after the first time Sunset tried this and it collapsed under her. That was an interesting trip to the ER. Twilight sat up with half lidded, pleading eyes. Her hips were still jerking, pleading to be filled. “Mistress, please. I’ve been waiting for so long. I need you.”

“Take off your pants and underwear and give them to me, slave.”, Sunset ordered.

“Yes, Mistress.” Twilight squirmed out of said garments and crawled across the bed to give them to her owner. Sunset took the clothing, dropped the pants on the floor, and took a whiff of the panties. “Does my scent please you, Mistress?”

“Did I give you permission to speak, slave?”, Sunset asked, spreading her wings in a threat display.

“N-no, Mistress. I’m sorry, Mistress.”, Twilight said while bowing her head.

An idea that made Sunset rub at herself through her pants became forefront in her mind. “Twilight, stand on your knees.”, Sunset ordered. Twilight obeyed, standing ramrod straight from the knees up. Sunset dropped the panties and launched herself off the railing and onto Twilight, pinning her to the bed. Sunset looked into Twilight’s eyes and reactivated the hypnosis spell. Twilight’s eyes immediately went half lidded, unable to put up any defence. She was entranced again, and her arousal began to drip. Sunset began tracing circles around Twilight’s stomach and kneading her nipple again. “You are my pet, my hypnotized bitch, and dogs can’t speak - normally. You may only bark, whimper, howl, and make other dog sounds. The only words you may say are ‘yes’ and ‘Mistress’.”

“Yes, Mistress.”

“Good girl.” Sunset broke off the spell, hopped off Twilight, and grabbed her riding crop from under her bed. Twilight let out a whimper of displeasure, but Sunset silenced her with a smack from the riding crop on her thigh.

“Awr”, Twilight whimpered.

“Present, eyes forward.”

“Yes, Mistress.” Twilight obeyed and got on her elbows and knees and moved her hair out of the way. Mistress’s words echoed inside her slave’s head. They were all encompassing. They were impossible to disobey.

Sunset kneaded Twilight’s ass with the riding crop in hand then smacked her in the ass. Twilight whimpered and barked, which made Sunset chuckle. “Aw, what’s wrong? Cat got your tongue?”, Sunset asked while going back to kneaded Twilight’s ass.

“Ruff, ruff.”

Sunset moved to dry humping Twilight’s ass and smacked the riding drop on the side of the bed. The sound made Twilight flinch, but she quickly realized that there was no pain. “Mistress?” Sunset answered Twilight with another actual smack on the thigh. “Ahoow”, Twilight threw her head back and howled in pleasure.

“How would you like to actually get rutted?”, Mistress whispered into Twilight’s ear. Her breath on Twilight’s ear caused her to shiver in pleasure. She was so turned on that Mistress’s every little touch caused waves of pleasure throughout her body. Twilight was more than ready.

“Yes, Mistress! Oh, yes! Mruff!” Twilight tried to say ‘please’, but she couldn’t even get her mouth to form the shape. Mistress pulled away from Twilight, and she tried to move her head to see what her Mistress was doing, but it was like those muscles were replaced by stone. She could move her head up and down but not side to side. Even if that wasn’t the case, every time she tried, Mistress’s order echoed through her mind. Twilight pictured her Mistress’s hypnotic eyes in her mind as she heard her orders over and over again. They were so perfect, so beautiful, so… hypnotic. Twilight’s eyes became half lidded. The mere thought of those glowing spirals was enough to entrance Mistress’s slave and cause her arousal to spike. She bucked her hips against the air, hoping to hit anything.

“Someone looks excited.”, Mistress said. Twilight felt Mistress mount her again, this time with a strap on. Twilight was broken out of her trance. Mistress was not actually entrancing her, so it had no staying power.

“Ahooooow!”, Twilight howled in excitement. Mistress circled her clit with the tip of the phallus, causing no end of suffering for her hypnotized slave. “Mistress! Mruff! Mruff! Ahooow!” Mistress finally put her slave out of her misery and rammed into her thrall’s clit at full alicorn force. She likely would’ve broken something if Twilight was human. Twilight howled in pain and pleasure. Mistress launched forward and bit and pulled on Twilight’s ear. Mistress also grabbed and squeezed her breasts and used her magic to pull on her slave’s leash while moaning loudly into her bitch’s ear. Mistress continued to ram into her pet at full force while she yelped, moaned, barked, and howled in painful pleasure. Twilight’s wings twitched and fluttered as they tried to escape from their binds, and there were times she couldn’t intake air. It was only her superhuman durability that allowed her to breathe at all.

Sunset continued to ram into her little pet as she moaned, barked, and howled into the night. She felt the dildo slam into her own pussy as well, electing her own moans, and she used her magic to knead her own breasts. The two of their juices leaked and spurted out onto the towel and their legs. Twilight let out the longest howl yet as she came. Sunset continued to pound her through and after her orgasm. Twilight’s arms collapsed from under her, and Sunset let go of her ear and leash and let her collapse. “Fuck me! Fuck me, you bitch!”, Sunset roared. Groggily, Twilight jerked her hips in time with Sunset’s until she came. “Fuck yeah! Fuck yeah!”

Mistress collapsed next to her slave and brought her into a wing hug. Twilight couldn’t return it, but she could gaze into that perfect face and that perfect body. Twilight reached out a hand to grasp Mistress’s perfect breasts. “Did I give you permission to touch me?”, Mistress asked. Twilight panicked at Mistress’s words. She was being disobedient.

“Mistress, ruff ruff ahoow.” She tried to express how sorry she was and that she was obedient and will obey, but still couldn’t speak.

Seemingly sensing her distress, Mistress, her great and beautiful Mistress, reactivated the hypnosis spell and put her slave in a wonderful trance. “You have permission to touch me.” With the divine permission of her Mistress, her slave got to work kneading and massaging Mistress’s breasts. She only had touch to go off of as she dared not look away from those swirling, hypnotic, perfect, beautiful eyes. Mistress commanded every single thought in her slave’s mind with those eyes. Her slave had a vague memory of being able to break out of the spell, but why would she ever want to do that? “You can speak again.”, Mistress ordered.

“Thank you, Mistress. I love you soo much. I worship you. I am your thrall. I love how you take control over me. I love-”, Twilight said but was cut off by Mistress putting a finger to her slave’s lips.

“Just because you can speak, doesn’t mean you always should.”, Mistress said. Mistress’s words thundered through her slave’s mind. They were her thoughts. They were reality. Obey, worship, serve, Mistress, slave, those were the only words in Mistress’s slave’s mind. She was not Twilight Sparkle. She was just a slave.

Mistress placed one of her primaries up to her slave’s mouth, which her slave greedily took. It was covered in Mistress’s juices. It was almost enough to make her slave’s eyes roll back and break contact with those hypnotic orbs, but Mistress’s power was stronger than her slave’s lack of control. Mistress broke eye contact, which left her slave whimpering. “Mistress” Mistress’s slave felt her Mistress doing something to slave’s pussy, so looked down. Mistress had placed the phallus on her slave. Mistress’s slave didn’t understand and had no orders, so just twitched at the sensation.

“Get on your back.”, Mistress ordered. Mistress’s slave obeyed and rolled onto her back. The phallus was now standing straight up against her body, causing slave to giggle. “Wow, your brain really is shut off.”, Mistress said. Mistress mounted the phallus, electing a moan from her. Mistress’s slave became aroused from her Mistress’s arousal. Mistress held her slave’s head, staired into her slave’s eyes, and activated the hypnosis spell. Everything fell away. There wasn’t even a slave, just pure obedience to Mistress. Serve, obey, obedience, Mistress.

Sunset pounded herself against the dildo as she looked into Twilight’s eyes. Twilight’s eyes looked, hazed over, directly into Sunset, without any self awareness behind them. It was so erratic to have this much control over someone. “Tell me, slave, what’s going through your head?”

“Mistress, serve, obey, obedience. Mistress, serve, obey, obedience.”

“Is that really it? Nothing else in there?”

“No, Mistress, you are the Mistress. There is nothing else but obedience to Mistress. I am a vessel for your will. I serve and obey you, Mistress.”

Sunset felt herself getting close and kissed Twilight as she came, moaning into her lover’s moth. Strangely, though, Twilight had no reaction. Sunset pulled away to catch her breath and looked down at the mesmerized woman with concern in her eyes, and Twilight immediately locked onto Sunset’s eyes. “Twilight, are you okay?”, Sunset asked softly. Twilight didn’t answer. “Twilight, it’s time to break the spell.” Twilight still didn’t answer. Getting an unnerving idea, Sunset tried something she really hoped didn’t work. “Slave, your Mistress asked you a question.”, Sunset said in a commanding tone.

“I am your slave. I couldn’t be better.”, Twilight said in a dreamy tone.

“Oh shit. Okay, okay, what to do? Um, slave you are Twilight Sparkle. There is still a part of your brain that’s still her. Obey your mistress and find her. Tell her it’s time to come out.”

“Yes, Mistress.”, Twilight said in that same dreamy tone. She smiled up at Sunset like a dog until some form of intelligence returned to her eyes. Twilight blinked a couple times, and Twilight Sparkle returned. “Aagh aagh.”

“Twilight?”

“Oh, fuck me, pleeaase!” Twilight pulled Sunset into a kiss, but she was too stunned to reciprocate. Twilight began thrusting her hips into Sunset’s, but Sunset stopped her.

“Twilight, wait. Is it really you?”

“Yes, it’s me, but please, I’m so close.”, Twilight pleaded desperately. Without knowing what else to do, Sunset obliged and began pounding Twilight. “Aagh, aagh, yes! Yes!” Twilight came quickly and collapsed on the bed, closing her eyes, to catch her breath, not seeming to care that she was almost lost within her hypnosis-addled mind.

“Twilight, what happened? How much do you remember?”, Sunset asked, concerned for her lover.

“Hu-ha, hu-ha, your hypnosis had a compounding effect. Each time you tranced me, you put me deeper under. Aagh, it was so hot.”

“Twilight, you were almost lost. You didn’t even respond to your name. You only responded to slave.”

“Yeah, I remember. I was always in there. I just found it difficult to want to come out. It felt so good. I was never at risk of “dying”. I want to do it again.”

“Okay, but let’s try a different technique next time.” Sunset heard Twilight moan in response to her words as she pulled out the ‘Magical Hypnosis’ book from the restricted section.

“Whatcha doing?”

“Putting a warning about the compound effects in.” Sunset waved her hand over the first page in the section, causing the writing to move and a detailed description on what happened to appear.

“You’ve used that spell to mess with the professor's book, didn’t you?”

“You found the penis made out of words?”

“Yes, I found the word penis.”

“Hnhnhn, serves him right. Now, let’s get cleaned up and go to bed. I’m going to use this spell on the whiteboard tomorrow.”

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