Sunset has a Mind Control Fetish

by Autistic Witch

Sunset&Rarity

Previous Chapter

“So, how has Bridlewood been treating you?”, Fluttershy asked excitedly.

“Like hot garbage, but I’m building up my network. I should be finding speaking roles soon.”, Wallflower said.

It was another day at Sugarcube Corner. The girls were hanging out, drinking, and chatting. Wallflower, now Bridlewood bit actress, was visiting her little, middle of nowhere hometown. The sky was clear. The sea was calm. There was just one thing amiss.

“So, where’s Sunset and Rarity?”, Wallflower asked.

“We have no idea.”, Twilight said.

“Haven’t seen ‘em in a couple days.”, AJ added.

“Isn’t that a bit concerning? Isn’t Sunset some princess you guys are supposed to protect?”

“Sunset’s an alien demi-goddess. We’re more there to make sure nobody does anything stupid that results in Sunset potentially killing them. Plus, I’m pretty sure Rarity’s with her. Hey, remember that time some kids were being a bunch of turds, so Rarity made Sunset this big-ass crystal sword, and Sunset set it on fire, and she ran at the kids while screaming and waving it around like he had gone completely insane. I swear I saw one of them actually piss themselves as they ran off.”, Rainbow said.

“I remember that.”, Pinkie excitedly said. “By the way, speak of the devil.”

The girls that weren’t facing the door turned around to see the women in question walking in, wearing their full tactical get up. They both wore bullet proof vests with radios, flashlights, pepper spray, and body cams attached over black, long-sleeved shirts and utility looking belts with their guns, stun guns, and badges attached with army green cargo pants, combat boots, and shaded safety glasses. They looked intimidating. They also had a bag with them.

“What the hell do you two do that needs all that?”, Wallflower asked in shock.

“Heheh, we’re bounty hunters.”, Sunset said.

“That’s still a thing?”

“Yeah, and that’s actually why we’re late. We’ve got a crazy story to tell.”, Rarity added. “Let us just get our drinks first.”

The two of them got their respective drinks that have more caffeine in them each than a normal person should drink in a week and sat down with the rest of them, earning glances from less informed people the whole time.

“Oohooh, story time.”, Pinkie excitedly said as she sat like a little kid in front of a TV.

“So, to preface this story, we’re also P.I.s that specialize in stalking cases. We’re a private police force, basically.”, Sunset explained. “A couple days ago, a lady hired us to investigate this guy. Nothing new there.”

“This fine example of ‘pretty boys can be creepy too’ was stalking this poor woman, and the cops, being cops, said “We cAn’T do AnYtHiNg BeCaUsE he HaDn’T bRoKeN tHe LaW”. That's where we come in.”, Rarity continued.

“We were hired to find something on him that would force the cops to arrest him.”

“And oh boy did we.”

“When we looked up his name, and got past the three other guys with the same name as him, we found that he already had an arrest warrant out on him in another state and a sizable bounty on his head. It wasn’t huge, but it certainly covered the gas and mileage. This wasn’t the first girl he stalked, and the cops over there actually did their job.”

“We find his address and go to arrest him. We knock on his door, and he comes down the stairs. We announce ourselves, and he says, “YoU cAn’T cOmE iNsIdE. YoU nEeD a wArRaNt”. I say, “We’re not cops”, and then he says, “ThEn Go AwAy”.”

“Then I say, “No, we’re officers of the court. You need to come with us”, and he was all like “CoMe BaCk WiTh a WaRrAnT”. Then I said, “We are the fucking warrant! Come out or we’re coming in!”, and he just shouted “Fuck off!” n’ ran upstairs.”

“We broke down the door, gave chase, and got upstairs just in time to see him close his door. We draw our side arms and approach the door carefully, and just as I was about to open the door, he bursts out wielding, I am not making this shit up, a fucking katana, a crappy Haynese metal stamped Katana.”

Sunset jumped up from her seat and held her hands together like she was holding a sword. “He was all like, “Hiya, yOu CaN nOt DeFeAt Me.”

“And there we were, weapons still trained on him, trying not to burst out laughing. We each shot him with a rubber round, and he went down, likely wishing he was never born, and we moved in to cuff and grab him.”

“We got a good look at his room, and he was a secret neckbeard. His room was freaking nasty. There were posters of lewd anime girls, a body pillow that was standing on its own at that point, and bottles and cans everywhere. I bet if you shone a blacklight in there, the whole room would’ve lit up like a disco nightclub.”, Sunset said very animatedly.

“Ew”, the rest of the girls and even some people from the neighboring tables that were listening in said.

“I’m glad he couldn’t see my eyes.”

“We got him into our car, drove him down to his state, to the city that issued the warrant, dragged him into the station, pulled out our IDs and said, “Hi, we’re bail bondsmen from Mane, and we’ve come to return your trash. Oh, and he attacked us with a sword. May we please have the number of his bondsmen.”, Rarity continued. “He got booked, we told the story to the officers, they laughed, and we met with the bondsmen and got paid.”

“We spent the rest of the day exploring Manehattan and made it into a date. We just got done telling our client he was arrested.”

“You guys are such jerks, spending a day in Manehattan and not inviting us.”, Rainbow said, incensed.

“We got you all souvenirs.” Sunset opened up the bag and began handing out its contents.

“Okay, you guys aren’t that big of jerks.”

“How ‘bout this then? The whole place smells like hot garbage because it’s everywhere. I spent the whole time holding my nose.”

“Hang on, sorry to interrupt, but I think I’m out of the loop. I thought Rarity and AJ and Twilight and Sunset were going out.”, Wallflower said.

“All seven of us are a part of one large romantic n’ sexual relationship. We can have sex or go on dates with anyone else in tha group, but we also have our favorites.”, AJ explained.

“Our relationship is also open, if you wanna join.”, Pinkie said while giving bedroom eyes to Wallflower. The people that were listening into their conversation promptly resumed ignoring them.

Wallflower blushed and tried to sink into her chair. “Could we, um, discuss this in private.”

“I’ll take that as a yes.”


Sunset pulled Rarity into her place and activated the privacy glyphs. Rarity could get very noisy, especially when Sunset commanded her to beg. They were still wearing their bounty hunter gear, and as neither of them had that kink, they were quick to discard it. “Quick” was a relative term as none of what they were wearing was meant to be taken off quickly.

“Y’know, I think Manehatten might actually be stinkier than my boots.”, Sunset joked.

“I’m not smelling them to check.”

Sunset took a sniff of her boot and then dramatically pulled back and began coughing, causing Rarity to laugh. “Nope, my boots are worse.”

“And I’m supposed to be the masochist.”

They got their gear off and shoved into a corner then got down to business.

“Are you sure you don’t want me ta do it permanently? It’s safer, and this is the second time you wanted me to do this.”

“I’m sure, darling. Rainbow and Fluttershy described to me what it’s like, and that’s not what I want.”

“Sigh, oh well, I guess my second attempt at getting a mind controlled army has been foiled.”

“Heheh, is that when you realized you had that fetish?”

“Eh, I mean in hindsight, I was definitely excited by having Flash like that, but no. I only realized it during the Dazzlings’ second attack. Now, come here.”

Rarity glided over to Sunset, and Sunset grabbed her face by the chin. Sunset ponied-up, spreading her wings in a display of dominance. Even though Rarity was a unicorn hybrid, her instincts still told her what it meant. She took on a submissive posture and squeezed her legs together. Sunset stared deep into her eyes and activated the spell. Her eyes turned red, and the magic spiraled as it bored into Rarity’s mind. Given that this was the third time Rarity has been placed under the spell, it faced no resistance as it slipped inside and wrapped around her mind. Rarity let out a gasp and a moan as Sunset’s magic filled her mind, turning her into an extension of Sunset’s will, her Mistress’ will.

“Mistress”, she whispered.

“Hm” Sunset hummed in satisfaction as she stopped the spell and let go of her face. “Who’s a good kitty?”, she asked as she scratched her chin.

Rarity purred happily. Out of all of them, she was the most submissive to their Mistress, but she would gladly have her submission beaten into her.

Sunset stopped the scritches and took a couple steps back. “Down on all fours.”, she commanded.

Rarity practically fell down to her hands and knees. She bowed her head, already panting with excitement.

“Good girl. Now, you may only cum when I command it.” Sunset began to circle Rarity like a stalking predator. “Everytime you hit the edge, you will feel great pressure in your cunt. It will be so much pressure that it’s painful. My touch will be as pleasurable as getting rammed from behind. My words are your reality. You see what I command you to see. You smell what I command you to smell. You hear what I command you to hear. You feel what I command you to feel. You taste what I command you to taste. You are fully aware that whatever reality I construct for you is merely a hallucination, but the knowledge that I have that much control over you only makes you hornier.”

The commands poured into Rarity’s mind, and she soaked them up like a sponge. Her voice was angelic. Whoever would disobey such a perfect voice was a fool. The tendrils of Mistress’ magic squirmed inside her mind, making them truth. Rarity moaned at the feeling. “Yes, Mistress.” Mistress ran her perfect hand up Rarity’s back, sending searing pleasure across her body. Her back arched in response, and her hips bucked like she was being taken from behind.

“You are wearing nipple clamps.”

Rarity moaned as the feeling of cold metal encased her erect nipples and the pain coursed through her breasts. She looked up at her beautiful Mistress. She had stopped circling and stood in front of Rarity. Her golden, sun-kissed skin, her silky hair, her glorious wings, her muscular body, her entrancingly hypnotic eyes, she’s perfection. She’s powerful. She’s a princess. She could, and arguably should, bring both worlds under her thrall, but the fact Mistress doesn’t shows just how merciful she is.

“You are in the farmer’s market with Applejack. It’s a bright day, and the sky is clear. The place is bustling with people.”

In her mind’s eye, she could see the scene. It felt completely real, but she knew it wasn’t, as her Mistress commanded. Obeying brought Rarity to the edge, but as her Mistress commanded, she didn’t come. Wonderfully painful pressure built up within her. The pain and obediently not cumming only made the experience even more pleasurable. Her fluids poured out of her, coating her inner thighs. “Aaaaah, yes, Mistress, I am there.”

“That’s a good whore. Look at all those people around you. Feel their gazes wash over you. Your beauty has caught their attention. Your mate is with you. Her beauty arouses something primal in you, something feral. You can’t control it. You jump on AJ, bringing her into an impassioned kiss and ripping her clothes off. The people around you notice and begin to stare. You can feel their eyes on you.”

As Mistress said “You can’t control it”, Rarity involuntarily ponied-up. She was brought to the edge again, and her juices flowed from her freely, now soaking into her tail. It was so wrong, so indecent, but it felt so wonderful. Their judging stares and the loss of control only turned her on even more. Her eyes rolled into the back of her head as her hips bucked back in an attempt to hit anything. Her carnal agony was only worsened by Mistress petting her ears. Rarity let out a howlish moaned at the wonderful agony.

“Quiet”, Mistress commanded. Rarity’s mouth slammed shut. She looked up at her Mistress, fearing she had angered her. “How are you going to obey me if you can’t hear my commands?” Mistress was right. She wouldn’t have been able to hear her divine voice with how loud she was moaning. “Now, beg for your forgiveness.”

“Ye-es, Mistress, my-my apology, Mistress. How dare my sluttiness interfere with my hearing of your great orders. Words fail to describe how truly great you are. I should be punished for my transgression.”

“Yes, you should. The crowd jeers at you for being such a whore. You begin fingering AJ, causing the crowd to start throwing the produce at you.” Sunset moved around to Rarity’s back, casted the dick growing spell, and proceeded to pound Rarity while still petting her ear. Rarity’s fluids were puddling on the floor now. “AJ clamps into you, digging her claws into your back and her teeth into your shoulder.”

The pain, humiliation, and Mistress’ perfect cock in her pussy combined together to make it so Rarity was hitting the edge hard about every minute, causing even more pain and horniness. It was a perpetual loop of agony, wonderful agony. The only thing going through her mind was the scene Mistress laid out for her. She was too out of it for anything else. She couldn’t even register her Mistress’ orders but obeyed nonetheless.

Sunset kept up an even pace with Rarity bucking hard against her, letting herself savor what she did to Rarity. She couldn’t see her eyes but knew the hypnotized devotion she’d look at her with through those hazy eyes. “You rip yourself free from AJ and flip around on top of her. The two of you start going down on each other, and AJ digs her claws back into you. You hear the voices of your sorority sisters in the crowd, but you don’t care. You’re pure primal lust now.”

“Yes, Mistress, I obey.”, Rarity said through heavy panting. That up Sunset over the edge, and she came. Rarity bucked even faster and made animalistic grunting sounds. Sunset pulled out, cleaning herself up and turning her genitalia back, and walked back in front of Rarity. She was a mess with her tongue lolling out like she didn’t even have the focus to keep it in. Her eyes were glazed over, almost closed, and completely unfocused, but she still looked up at Sunset.

“Okay, looks like you had enough.”, Mistress said as she petted Rarity’s ears. Rarity couldn’t understand her words. All she knew is that it wasn’t an order. That wasn’t to say non-orders were any less important. Everything Mistress said was the absolute truth. “I’m going to count to three, and when I get to three, you’ll cum, and when you cum, it will be so intense that your brain will reset and you’ll no longer be under my spell. One… two… three…”

Rarity’s body locked up as her nerves exploded with stimuli. White hot, searing pleasure cascaded across her body. Time ceased all meaning to her as wave after wave of pleasure numbed her to anything else but the pleasure and Mistress' voice.

Mistress spoke, and her commands reverberated within Rarity, despite any ability to comprehend was long gone. “That’s a good girl. You’re obeying me so well. Obeying me makes your orgasm longer and more intense, and this is a command, so you’re obeying me the longer your orgasm is, creating a cycle of pleasure.”

“Yes, Mistress, I obey.” Rarity wanted to scream. She wanted to shout her Mistress’ praise from the tops of her lungs. But Mistress’ command stopped her. All she could do was pant and quietly moan. Her arms and legs began to shake as wave after wave of pleasure came over her and flowed down her legs. The sheer power of it made it painful, wonderfully painful. After what felt like hours, her orgasm finally subsided, and she collapsed, exhausted.

Sunset sat on the floor and pulled Rarity onto her lap. The girl was barely conscious and breathing heavily. Sunset stoked her hair and ears, and Rarity moaned quietly and snuggled up closer. Sunset casted a spell to clean up their mess and pulled Rarity up into her arms and laid her head on her shoulder and wrapped her wings around her. Seeing her peaceful face and taking care of her like this satisfied something with herself. There was a growing need to care for something inside of her, something more than just Ray. He didn’t need the kind of care she wanted to give. Maybe I should get a cat, but it might eat Ray.

“Mmm, Sunset?”

“Hey, did you enjoy yourself?”

“I did. You are such a cruel mistress.”

Sunset nuzzled the side of Rarity’s head. “And you are an obedient slave.”

Rarity nuzzled up to Sunset and licked her neck. Sunset picked her up and brought her up to her bed. She tucked her in then climbed in herself. Rarity pressed herself up against Sunset, enjoying the heat of the living furnace. Sunset had been protective of them since she’d slipped into being their leader, but ever since she became an alicorn, she gave off a strong energy that could best be described as “alpha energy”, as cringy as that is. Her aura’s so overpowering that all of their monkey brains force them to act more submissively around her, but it also makes them all feel safe around her, like having a guard dog in your room. It made it easy to fall asleep.


Sunset was rudely awakened by her beeping alarm and rolled over to slap it silent only to be blocked by another body. She opened her eyes, saw that it was Rarity, and remembered last night. She repositioned and turned the alarm off. Rarity stirred and looked up at Sunset with bleary eyes. “Good morning.”, Sunset said softly.

“What time is it?”, Rarity said groggily as her brain booted up.

“It doesn’t matter.” Sunset laid back down and began running her hand over Rarity’s body. They stayed in bed for a while until they were more awake. Their stomachs let them know it was time to eat, so Sunset got up and made them some food in her office breakroom of a kitchen while Rarity sat down at her two person table. Sunset brought over the food, only wearing an apron.

“Wow, I’m impressed you’re able to make this without a proper stove.”

“I have a lot of practice, but I would like to have an actual kitchen.”

“Why not move in with Twilight? She surely has enough room for you.”

“I would, but I couldn’t stand living with her parents. I like them enough as people but not as roommates. Remember when that gas line broke, and I had to evacuate and stay with Twilight for a bit?”

“Oh yeah, I completely forgot about that.”

The two of them ate up, and Sunset took their plates to her counter so she could wash them later, which she needs to use her bathroom sink to do.

“Sunset, before I head out, I wanted to ask you about something.”

“Shoot” Sunset took off her apron and retook her seat.

“Applejack likes to lick my feet, but I have sensory issues with it or having my feet touched at all really. It’s annoying, especially when they’re sore. I was hoping you could… fix that.”

“I’m guessing you want me to hypnotize you to fix it?”

“Yes”

“Okay, I’ll see what I can do. I’ve never tried anything like that before. Want me to do anything else?”

“No, just that.”

“Okay” Sunset grabbed Rarity by the chin and looked into her eyes. She activated her spell, and Rarity became completely enthralled within the first second. Sunset kept the spell going, letting the glowing red spirals bore deep into Rarity’s brain. “You are completely helpless against my power.”

“I am completely helpless against your power.”, Rarity mindlessly droned.

“I am in complete control over you.”

“You are in complete control over me.”

“You will do whatever I tell you.”

“I will do whatever you tell me.”

“You are whatever I tell you you are.”

“I am whatever you tell me I am.”

Sunset stopped the spell, let go of Rarity, and leaned back in her chair. “Rarity, you said you don’t like the feeling of AJ licking your feet. Why is that?”

“It… doesn’t feel good. It… feels… slimy.”, Rarity said in a hypnotically drunk tone.

“What if I were the one licking your feet, running my tongue along your skin, stimulating such a sensitive part of your body. If I reached down and began massaging your feet, it would feel wonderful.” Sunset began playing footsie with Rarity. “It feels nice, being stimulated, the sensation adding to your arousal.”

Rarity let out a moan and curled her toes. “It… it… I…” It felt strange. She wanted to obey Mistress’ commands, but her body was telling her something different.

“Rarity,” Sunset said with a firm tone. Rarity’s eyes snapped forward to focus on Sunset, “I control you.”

“Yes, Mistress, you have complete control over me.”

“Your mind is but putty to me. I control how you perceive the world. Whatever I tell you is true.”

“Yes, Mistress, you can warp and shape me however you want.”

“Good girl, you don’t mind having your feet touched, and you like it when Applejack or I touch your feet.”

“Yes, Mistress, I don’t mind having my feet touched, and I like it when Applejack or you touch my feet.”

“Good girl, feel my order burrow deep into your mind, implanting itself as a part of you.” Sunset stopped playing footsie and sat up straight in her chair. Some part of her was tempted to do more, but Rarity had said no. I can only hope she comes around. “Now, I’m going to count backwards from three, and when I hit zero, you will be released from my spell, but my orders will still be a part of you. Do you understand what I’m saying?”

“Yes, Mistress, when I’m released from your spell, I won’t mind having my feet touched and will like it when you or Applejack touch them.”

“Good girl, now… three… two… one… zero.”

Rarity blinked a few times, and the haze left her eyes. “Did it work?”

“Let’s test.” Sunset leaned back and began playing footsie again.

Rarity was surprised when, for the first time in her life, her immediate reaction to her feet being touched wasn’t ‘Oh fuck this, no!’ and to pull away. It was mildly pleasant. “Mm, it worked. Maybe you can further test the results by licking them.”, she said in a sultry voice.

“Lick them yourself. I have a personal policy of no hooves nor feet in my mouth or in the mouths of anyone I kiss. From now on, I’m gonna ask AJ if she’s sucked toes since the last time she brushed her teeth.”

“Heheheh”

“What’s so funny?”

“You just reminded me of when she got several threatening emails from the founder of Wikifeets after she posted a bunch of two star reviews of a bunch of celebrity feet saying “not enough toes”. The guy threatened to come to her house and shoot her in her sleep. She got a lot of amusement out of that one.”

“A, what the fuck? B, there is a website called ‘Wikifeet’? C, what the fuck? When did AJ become such a troll?”

“It was a one time thing. She was just hit with a wave of inspiration and decided to stir the crap.”

“And here I thought I couldn’t respect that woman more.”

They had some coffee and chatted for a bit more before they got dressed and headed into work. They had creeps and jumpers to catch.