A Tragic Separation!

by MLPkillers

Rating: mature
Tags: Original Character, Suicide / Self Harm, Tragedy, Profanity, Violence, Death, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Sad
Length: 2317

A killer know famously with a dark pink mane and tail and light pink coat and light blue eyes was torn from her own family by beings more higher than her, she was picked up and forced to work in a place no pony should ever work!

Story worked on by DarknessPinkamena and MLPkillers! A dark pink mars coat mare wakes up distorted and ripped from her dimension, she felt bruised and beaten, but she is still as heartless and ruthless as ever and ready to kill if allowed, this pink mare lives for the suffering and killing of other ponies

Published 2022-07-11 05:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2022-07-11 05:50:01 UTC

A Distorted Awaken! Struck Down!

A pink mare awoke, all she remembered was her family being separated from her, her memories were still kinda blurry and she felt bruised and beaten, she thought she could heal herself, and she attempted to heal herself, not feeling the effect of healing at all, she struggingly got up, falling back down attempting to get back up, she tried again and with success, she was back on all four hooves panting heavily, why did all that happened to her? Who did that to her and her family? Why!? She looked around and attempted to sense for her family, not being able to feel their presence at all, she was either in another dimension or from the previously failed spell lost her powers, the pony was a pink mare with balloons as her cutie mark and blue Balloons on the left and right of her flank and a yellow balloon in the middle of both of the blue balloons, the blue balloons had yellow strings and the yellow balloon had a blue string on it, her mane and tail was a darker pink, her mane was a mess, it looked like a pony pulled and ripped her mane a little and her cutie mark had a red X made by herself crossed off and the length was from one blue balloon to the other and pass the blue balloons, she carved it herself, the cautery was painful, but she enjoyed it, frankly, it reminded her of her victims when they were gutted and stabbed, tortured and screaming for help and mercy, foolish ponies, help would never come to them, the only thing that would come to aid them is "Death."

("This must be karma for what I've done, buck Celestia! When I get the chance I'll gut her too!")

The pink mare thought in anger. She walked around and realized this was definitely not her dimension, she was indefinitely separated from her family, they were all sent to other dimensions and this was a different dimension, she wanted to cry, but there were no tears in her, only the ones that dripped on her, she has no empathy for ponies. She nearly tripped over a branch, after catching herself on her right hoof, she turned around and stomped on the branch, breaking it in one stomp, this reminded her of that one victim she beat to the ground and stomped on their head repeatedly until a splatter was heard, ah that was great, who knows, maybe she can do it here? She looked over to the flowers, the blossoms, this reminded her of her sisters, this place is too peaceful for her, she didn't like it, she rather see blood and hear screams, she heard wheels rolling and turned to the sound, in the distance she was able to see a brown colt and with a white and black mane, the tip of the mane was black and the rest of the mane that headed towards the neck was white and he had white splatters on his pelt, he had a green bandana and he looked like he needed help, she notice the wagon fell
on the left side and brainstormed, the wooden wheel had snapped and the wagon was about to tip over, she looked back to the broken branches, one of the pieces, a long one she would use, so it would look like a cane and saw an opportunity, she could use the branch and kill him with it, she picked it up and carried it with her as she walked towards the traveler, carrying the broken branch at her side, she had a second thought, what if it wasn't penetrative enough, she sat down and crossed her two rear hoof and held the branch, she turned the branch to see the broken part, she held it vertically up, pulling her right front hoof back and punching it repaeatly, she felt the splinters go in, but she liked the pain, she bathed in it, she started to pick the wood out of her right hoof and started putting her left hoof on the branch and pushing down on it, making sure more of the splinters would break off and they did with success, she smiled and pulled the splinters out of her hoof, she thought maybe this colt would have some aid with the new wounds she gave herself, if not then she might have to use his flesh as bandages, she looked to her left and saw a stone, she picked it up with her left hoof and started carving the wood, evently making a large stake out of it, she didn't want the colt to see it so she would use that part to act like that is the part for the cane to help balance the cane to the ground, she started to walk towards him, her smile wicked as ever and it faded when the colt looked at her, he waved to her, once she was close enough she lowered her tone, offering to help, with a innocent smile, the colt accepted but relized the wounds on her, he wasn't going to let her help and bleed has she did.

"Now you hold on, I'll get you some free aid before you start helping me, I plan to give you some bits too."

The pink mare smiled, she looked so innocent but looks can be deceiving, the colt ran into the tipping wagon, nearly making the rim of the wheel break off, and got her some bandages, he brought them out, and the pink mare went for them, but the colt insisted he'll do it, she sat down and he wrapped her hoofs in bandages, the left, and right front hooves, she would almost feel bad for killing him, but at least she'll make it quick.

"There you go!"

"Thank you very much, I really appreciate the help, now I noticed your wagon tipped over on the left side, what happened?"

The colt remembers pulling the wagon and it falling to the left side, at first he thought he hit something but no, the stupid wheel was wearing down and finally broke. The pink mare grabbed her stick or stake and held it with her right hoof to hold her up, and the colt noticed this and was curious.

"You ain't old, so why do you need this cane?"

The pink mare smiled, if this was her first confrontation maybe she'll be a little too nervous but she was calmer than colt with his family at home on the couch watching a movie. She simply told him she had nerve damage and she need the cane to help keep her balance. The colt told her to wait while he went into the wagon and grabbed the spare wooden wheel and brought it out and sat it near the rim; the pink mare thought he was going in to get a cane but was a tiny bit surprised when he got a wheel.

"What are you carrying in that wagon?"

The colt was happy to tell her.

"I am pulling back goods for my family, two fillies, and a loving wife."

The colt laughed. The pink mare thought about her family, is this empathy? Ha, he's dying, family doesn't matter anymore.

"It shows what type of mare you are since you are willing to help a colt who you never meet put a wheel on his wagon so he can get food and goods back to his family, even when you know you will suffer helping, we need more mares like you in Equestria."

The pink mare smirked, not with praise or embarrassment, but from the idiocy this colts shows, he will learn very quickly how fast strangers can change their attitudes and reveal their true intentions and nature. The colt grabbed the wheel and put it back on the rim, he pounded it with his right hoof and it went back on, the pink mare saw this as her only opportunity to strike, she walked closer reminding him she was there to help, he turned with a smile.

"I know you are, but I believe I got it now, but your welcome to!"

The pink mare ran at the colt, quickly raising the stake and hitting him in the head with the stake, she used her left hood to push him down and raised the staff above him, quickly stabbing him in the chest with the stake, the colt grabbed the stake, he yelled in pain and tears coming down his eyes.

"Why, please, spare me, I have a family like I said, I-I-want to see them, graduate-!"

The pink mare twisted the stake, causing more blood to splatter and the colt to yell in more pain.

"I should care why? Your family may be my next victims, you will not die alone, trust me."

The colt closed his mouth in anger, he tried to move with all of his strength but failed, he couldn't move his legs, wait, she actually stabbed through his spine!? He closed his eyes.

"You can kill me... But not my family... Leave them out of this! They're innocent!"

The pink mare brushed her hair and pulled the stake out and put it in the colt's face.

"You're a fool... No pony is ever innocent. Thanks for aiding me..."

The pink mare lowered her head to the colt's face, he wanted to so badly it in her face but resisted the urge. He laughed mentally, his mother was right, being too kind will get you killed. The pink mare stabbed the stake into his mouth, the stake exited out the back of his throat.

"That would make sure you can't talk to me anymore."

The pink mare leaned closer and licked the tears from his face.

"Hmm... A little salty, but guess you can't be picky with hydration."

The pink mare pulled the stake back out and stabbed it into his chest again, the lower part, she was going to make sure she doesn't damage the heart, she pulled down with all her force, the stake broke, she got down on her knees and ripped the cheat openly and saw the ribs nearly broken, she punched them two times to finish the job, then grabbed the heart and looked into the closing eyes of the colt, she smiled with devious intention.

"You won my heart, but I only thought this was the way I would win yours."

The pink mare ripped the heart out and saw it take its last beat, before she bit into it, eating his heart, she would eat his other organs, but decided to leave it for the vultures, she ain't that hungry and she just wanted blood. She turned his body over, receiving another Idea to hide suspicion, she pulled the body over to the wagon, she pulled the wheel he put on back off, she place the body on the ground, stretched his deceased limbs out, and stab the wheel into his chest, she put the strap for pulling the wagon closer and letting the rim fall on his head, stabbing into it when she stepped into the wagon and jumped, she was stronger than the average colt, she thought why didn't she just leave the wheel on, because she wanted the extra brutality, and for ponies to know, this is a murder, buck suspicion really, she'll kill them all. She looked at the wagon and raised a hoof towards it, saying bye and... Nothing happened, the pink mare cursed in anger, her powers were gone, what the buck! That is bucking bullshit! The wagon and corpse were supposed to go boom! She turned to her front and sighed, closing her eyes and then reopening her eyes.

"I guess this way is much more entertaining, oh well, if I had my powers, maybe I could destroy this entire Equestria dimension, haha, who knows...?

The pink mare smiled with nostalgia and confidence, she knew her powers would return but when she only hopes soon. The pink mare walked off through the desert, oblivious to the colts who saw her kill that colt.

"You saw that!?"

"I did."

"The boss would be so happy with us if we forced her to come with us and work for him!"

The other colt hoof palmed, did he forget what she just did?

"Um... Us...? How about buck no! She just killed him with no hesitation or conscience, sorry but no, sorry Harry."

Harry smirked.

"Yeah, guess it was dumb to suggest both of us force her to come with us, but maybe if we tell the boss, he'll send more workers to come and force her to come, this would be a big chance to increase the productivity of our organization."

The brown colt smirked, he knew he and his buddy will get a big fat raise for her, heck maybe a bonus check?

"Alrighty then, let's go before we get spotted."

"Agree."

The colts said quietly, heading south from where the pink mare was traveling, they started running west after running 500 hoof steps, they looked at each other and smiled, raising their right hooves up, like they were giving a thumbs up, their right hooves having a small scare in it, not too deep or long, same side seems like they were blood brothers. The pink mare walked north of them, still wondering if she gets her powers back. The flowers disgusted her, the only purpose they serve is a painful reminder to one of her sisters. She hoped the town she lived in would maybe help her, but probably not, they all would think she is crazy, but that's where she's heading.

("If they don't have a clue how to help me, maybe they would only serve a toy to break for me then?")