Brothers of Valhala

by Wind tunnel

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Alternate Universe, Dark, Adventure
Length: 1136

exiled, broken, and left for dead Iron must journy forth to battel a great evil !

I have been exiled from my home! Forbidden to return, and now i have been dragged into a journey with the last of a tribe of viking ponies to defeat an evil that should be forgotin! If i succeed i may find retribution for my self and for the crime i have committed!

Extream Gore, Vilonce, and Language reader be warned later chapters will be gorey battels with lots of death

i am in need of a editor and prereader

please note i am canciling this story cause it is garbage untill i can come back and rewrite the story keeping the true story in mind good day

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-10-12 08:10:01 UTC

prologe -the funeral

DISCLAIMER I DO NOT OWN MY LITTLE PONY FRIENDSHIP IS MAGIC! MLP FIM IS PROPERTY OF HASBRO ALL CARICTERS IN THIS STORE ARE FICTIONAL AND ARE MY CREATIONS IF THERE IS ANY LIKENESS TO ANY CARICTIRES  IN ANY SORRY NOT MY ONE LET ME KNOW AND  I WILL FIX THE PROBLEM OR WORK WITH THE AUTHOR

A/N constructive criticism please  if you want to say something bad and derogative please do so else where  if you want more i will be happy to write more i consider this testing the waters seeing if continuing this idea and story will be worth it please comment but do so in a manner that is not going to cause problems  thank you and i hope you enjoy

P.S please tell me if i need to change the rating to mature thank you

THE  FUNERAL

THE BEGINNING THE END THE HELLO THE GOODBY

    I still remember the funeral it was a grim day that day it hadn't stopped raining since your death i sat there bound in shackles openly weeping at your funeral! i remember the day in vivid detail  it was hearts and hooves day and i was going to ask the mare of my dreams  to be my special some pony  i had my ring and a bottle of wine and a heart full of courage as i walked in to the house i heard noises coming from the bedroom i didn't even knock when i herd her screaming out i swung the door open and charged in to see you bucking my mare friend and i lost it i hit you upside the head withe bottle shattering it and splattering a mixture of blood and wine against the wall  i took the glass that was still in hoof and stabbed you in a fit of rage . i stopped when i herd her screaming my name telling me to stop i dropped the glass tears blinding my eyes relising what i had done i started screaming begging you  why!  WHY! WHY BRO WHY! i fell to the floor muttering what have i done  i stared at your body looking at the ugly stab wound's i had carved into you brown body crying hysterically now apologizing for what i had done i looked in to your eyes  and you looked back and then i heard it your last words those forgiving words "I'M SORRY BRO"

    I was still crying over your body when the guards arrived to take me away. I went quietly i knew that i had just committed the ultimate taboo i took a pony's life! They put me in hoof cuffs and put a magic inhibitor on my horn crying the hole time they walked me to the jailers cart  the ride was cold and wet as it had started raining as if the heavens had started weeping in your memory. we pulled in to manehatten police station and i was rushed in side the lead me to the first jail sell we came to and they uncuffed me and shoved me inside the cell i looked out to the guards seeing tears in there eye they where friends and i had just killed a peace of all of us and it was all my fault i turned back to my cell and shuffled over to the cot in the back all the time fearing and accepting the consequences of my actions i cried my self asleep that night with the thought that my brother had forgiven me for killing him.

    I awoke to the sound of hoof steps out side my cell i got up and stepped forward " IRON PEN YOU HAVE BEEN SUMMONED TO CORT TO RECEIVE YOUR PUNISHMENT FOR THE MURDER OF IRON SWORD"  two guards entered my cell and attached hoof cuffs to me then they led me outside in the rain to the cart that had brought me here. I was shoved in and pushed to the front of the cart. I stared out at the world watching the rain cascade down windows and buildings as we past buy on the way to the court house. Hardly any pony is out in the rain. I see the courthouse now the giant colloms are a dead give away they stop the cart and dismount i steeped out of the cart and was ushered inside to see what fate awaited me for my Hannis crime agents my own brother.

    "IRON PEN WE FIND YOU GUILTY OF MURDER AND HEREBY SENTIENCE YOU TO BANISHMENT AND THAT YOUR CUITYMARKS SHALE BE BURNT OFF TO SHOW THAT YOU NO LONGER HAVE TIES TO EQUESTRIA AND THAT YOU ARE A OUTCAST ON A LIGHTER NOTE THE BANISHMENT SHALL TAKE PLACE AFTER YOUR BROTHERS FUNERAL SINCE YOU WHERE HIS ONLY RELATIVE DISMISSED"  CLANG!

    The rain never stopped those five days i remember siting at your grave crying wishing i ha-dent done it the burns hurt less than the gilt i will carry for the rest of my life! That day they loaded me in to the cart and set off to the north east taking me to my place of banishment a small fishing town on the cost with no name .After a week of travailing the cart came to a halt i looked up over the rail of my transport all you could see for miles was sea and sky i turned and looked to the other side of the cart and saw a small cluster of buildings that looked to be made of stone i looked at the guard climbing of the cart "are we hear"  YES THIS IS YOUR NEW HOME GET USE TO IT he took my hoof cuffs off and the magic inhibitor FROM NOW ON YOU ARE NO LONGER EQUESTRIAN YOU HAVE NO RIGHTS AND YOU CAN NEVER RETURN  he  hoofed me a small bag of the local bits TAKE THIS 'thanks ' he reaches into the cart and pulls out a small golden dagger and tosses it to me i look at it then him THIS WAS YOUR BROTHERS KNIFE FROM THE SERVICE ITS YOURS NOW  i held back a few tears 'thank you for your kindness this means so much to me ' he snorted and turned back to the cart hitched up and left i took the knife out of the sheath and looked at it it had a silvery shine to it along with gold inlays and handle made to look beautiful and be deadly at the same time i sheathed it and strapped it to my iron black chest and grabbed the bits and i stared at the town i looked deeply in to my self why was i given this second chance given the opportunity to start anew in life i took a step forward with determination in my eyes " for my brother "

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TO START MY NEW LIFE