Harmony fall, is it so bad?

by L Morning Star

4- A friend and welcome to Ponyville

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I slowly opened my eyes as I released a slow breath and a great chill attacked me, it was cold, very cold! Which was strange if we consider that I stopped feeling things like that since I came to this world, sometimes I could feel a little cold, but the heat had practically become non-existent for me, maybe something to do with my flames? "F-fuck" It was really cold!

I brought my front hooves closer to give them a shower of my flames, but frost came out instead. "What the fuck?" only then did i wake up long enough to realize there was something wrong, my hooves were blue "WHAT THE FUCK?" I immediately sent a signal to one of my wolves to come, as soon as it arrived I concentrated on our connection to see me well, it was blue... all my fur was blue, although otherwise it was normal or as normal as a pony can be magical “ Achu ” a sneeze snapped me out of shock and reminded me that I was freezing “A-up” I said shivering

It took us a while to get to the surface and for the first time it wasn't my fault… well yes, but they couldn't blame me for this I had no idea what had happened to me to change this way, when we finally got out I immediately threw myself to the rays of the sun with the hope that it would help me at least a little to raise my body temperature

Minutes passed, but it felt like hours, I even asked my wolves to start a fire, but it was no use, I couldn't stop shivering, I was very cold! Never in my life had I had so much “V- vamon -nos” I tried to get moving, but I immediately lost my strength and fell to the ground

I must have gotten sick or something, some kind of magical illness was all I could think of, which meant I needed help, I had no idea what to do in this situation I could barely float some objects I could never find a cure for my account

With a thought I sent a signal to all my wolves to stop what they were doing and start exploring except the ones in front of me, I ordered one of them to charge me and the rest to protect me and wait for something anything happened, my vision was getting blurry, at this point the only thing I had left was to pray that it wouldn't take long, but I couldn't even do that anymore, the incessant bite of the cold that ran through my body I no longer felt it, but not because it had gone but because it reached the point where my body could no longer feel anything I could only watch helplessly as my vision darkened and I used the last of my consciousness to give my wolves one last order 'Take me to the first one you find '


It was so warm, I didn't care where I was the important thing was that finally the torture had stopped and that was enough, I slowly opened my eyes and to my surprise I couldn't see anything everything was dark and I couldn't feel anything under my hooves, that was strange, but the problems started when I tried to take a breath and a liquid too sour for my liking entered my nose and mouth "BRUU" I tried to expel it, but only bubbles came out, I was drowning! I started kicking desperately, but I wasn't used to this body, I was lucky if I went a day without kissing the ground... at least once

But to my luck my efforts paid off when I felt one of my front hooves hit something hard, I quickly got my rear hooves into position and kicked out hoping the momentum would be enough to bring me to the surface “BRAA- CAF CAF ” As soon as I surfaced and tried to get some air when I was attacked by a violent cough, I slowly expelled the liquid from my lungs and the much needed air made its way

I stayed for a while to catch my breath before taking a look around me, it was a house or at least it looked like one, I could see some roots passing through the walls, there were also quite a few ceremonial masks, jars with all kinds of shapes on the shelves already in the distance you could see a bed made with furs, curious one would bet that this is the home of an African tribe or something

I looked down and I couldn't help but breathe a sigh of relief when I saw that my fur had returned to its normal color, although the feeling of relief disappeared as quickly as I realized that the place where I was was not a bathtub or something, but rather it was a cauldron lit, suddenly the theory of the wild tribe began to take hold

"It's nice to see that you have been able to return to the waking world flaming spirit" I froze for a second when I realized that I was not alone and in the entrance of the house there was a zebra, although what disconcerted me was not her but the fact that I had barely realized that I had been thinking and speaking in an unknown language since who knows when, maybe since I arrived… if most likely “Flaming Spirit seems shocked, or does he not know the speech of the living? ” Now if I was confused "Hey, I understand you perfectly" I said something doubtful "Very good yours are not beings that should wander around these parts there is much that is not known" He said as he raised a jar with a very familiar flower "I know her, I wanted to put it in my garden” The zebra shook her head “Well, you have had a terrible judgment, with this plant you do not play, even if it does not cause discomfort, you always want to make fun of it” Before that I could not help protesting “That thing almost killed me and barely I touched her, it's more than just a tease!" She just nodded. "Certainly, that's why you can never be too careful in the Everfree. "

I couldn't say anything against that since I've seen a fair amount of pretty big predators since I got here, plus she just confirmed that this forest is the Everfree so maybe I can get more information “Can I ask what this is in what am I getting into? How did I get here? and who are you?" I gave him a somewhat distrustful look after all it still seemed like I planned to cook myself "Oh your doubts are understood spirit, but not your fears , this plant is called a poisonous joke and you have already witnessed its effects as far as your place is a natural remedy that the cancels” While explaining, he showed me a green book in which I could see a few recipes and procedures in plant refinement “As for how you got here, your guardians left you at the entrance of my dwelling although I have to admit fear for my life and as your servant I introduce myself, I am Zecora and you are welcome Flaming Spirit "

I didn't know why she was calling me that, but I decided it would be best not to correct her since I don't know if my name would stand out too much or if it would be wise to say "Hey, thanks?" She just gave me a slight nod "You're welcome and please make sure you stay until you feel that the potion has fulfilled its function" Without further ado she sat down at a desk and did I don't know what with some herbs, meanwhile I decided to check the status of my wolves 'WHAT THE HELL?' I almost screamed when I realized what was outside

Outside a literal tree house there were more than three hundred timberwolves . Where did they come from?! In these four days he had managed to obtain 96 timberwolves , including the modified ones, the alpha and the golems .

Of course I had met some stray wolves so to speak, but never such a quantity only in groups of two or three which when approaching me or my wolves immediately became mine, although now that I think about it this is good, having more warriors never hurts i guess

They must have found them when I ordered them to search the entire forest, I wonder how many of them are out there should I put more effort into my exploration tasks and not just relax, I couldn't help but internally scold myself as I remembered that the reason I almost died … again, it is that I decided to make myself a garden just because I had nothing else to do and the worst of all was that when I finished it it was of no use since I forgot that caves are not the best place to plant to work” It was almost a whisper, but it seemed that the zebra had a good ear “If you have the courage, help is always appreciated” was not what I wanted to say, but it was a start

Zecora and I spent time organizing things and grinding herbs, I didn't like the smell of some of them, but helping her after saving me was the least I could do, I also took advantage of the moment to obtain information on how to use some plants and information about the world, Apparently he was in a country called Equestria , a land of ponies and their subspecies, and Zecora was from another country called Zebrica, mainly a country of zebras, among others.

That disappointed me, in the manga I had read it was constantly mentioned that countries were defined mainly by the race that inhabited it, but I was hoping to have left that shit of racism in my previous world, it seems that I was not going to have that luck

Secondly, I also asked him about technology and immediately noticed something strange, from how Zecora described it these ponies seemed to live in the middle ages, but they had a steam train and machines in their hospitals, when I asked about the oddities of this she just shrugged

" Baaag " Zecora let out a big yawn while rubbing her eyes, I couldn't help but feel a little guilty since apparently my wolves had brought me quite late and she had to spend much of the night taking care of me and making the bathtub-sized potion " Is there anything else I can do?" She shook her head "You've already done enough, my help was never out of desire but out of courtesy" I couldn't help but show a smile "I still took a lot of your time and materials, isn't there something you had to do today or something? I will gladly do it”

She paused for a moment to think, she seemed doubtful, but in the end she relented "Indeed your skills could be appreciated" She said as she stood up and took out a bag, paper and a pen?, she wrote down some things and then handed me the paper "This it is a list of materials that the forest lacks and only in ponyville will I find” “Pony what?” That name was somewhat disconcerting "It's a town that can be found at the exit of Everfree , you just have to stick to the path there is no loss" Basically I wanted him to go shopping, I can handle that, but there was something important that I had to ask "Do you think have a library? I'd like to learn about magic." The smile on his face gave me hope that I wouldn't have to spend days experimenting to figure out how the damn thing worked. "If you've seen a home like mine filled with knowledge, you'll know it when you see it."

I had to fight the urge to jump on her and hug her, this was going to be exciting!


Me and all my modified timberwolves were marching completely filling the Everfree trail the rest had been sent back to their duties and the new timberwolves I gave them scouting duties and some gathering for Zecora , maybe I was exaggerating bringing almost a hundred , but after almost losing my life at the hands... at the roots of a simple flower I preferred not to take any more risks " Bttt " My wolves informed me that we had already reached the edge of the forest and I ordered them to stop, I didn't want to cause a commotion by entering with an army so it would only take one which, more than an escort, would serve as a pack mule carrying the materials and the bag with bits? I think that's how Zecora called them , the rest would wait for me hidden at the Everfree entrance

At a slow but firm pace, my partner and I approached the colorful town, it was very different from what I was used to, the houses were scattered without any order, just respecting the paths and although most had a similar design, each one was different. both in size and shape

We kept going until we reached a different building from the others, it seemed to belong to the witch from the story of Hansel and Gretel, I was spellbound looking at the alien architecture for a while until I noticed something strange, of course besides a house made of sweets

Everything was empty it almost looked like a ghost town, I looked around and I can swear I saw a tumbleweed where did everyone go? When I looked with my wolves at the entrance of the forest I could see the ponies in the distance doing their things in the town and now nothing “ Bttt ” or so I thought

My wolf gave me a warning of something moving behind me, more precisely in an alley, although I did not feel alarmed by the warning, so what I saw there was probably not dangerous

I turned around looking carefully at the alley where there were only some trembling bushes, it didn't take much thought when I used my magic to move the branches and let me see what was hiding there " Owww " Immediately I was hypnotized by the most tender thing that seen in my life, the thing was a cream-colored filly with red mane and a bow that only made her look cuter, something I didn't think possible "Ah" a scary screech came out of her muzzle while she gave me a look of panic, that it confused me until something in my head clicked and i immediately covered my mouth which almost made me spit because of the crap i just put in

Even I admit that I look terrifying and that is my own face, imagine what I would look like to a girl and now add a smile full of sharp fangs and you have a nightmarish being, I gave him some time and once I saw that he calmed down I smiled at her again, but this time it was a more controlled and reassuring smile making sure not to show any of my teeth, I slowly approached her and when I noticed that there was no rejection I extended one of my front hooves in her direction to give her a light caress , I didn't mind not having fingers anymore I had to give him affection, it was part of human nature to caress everything that looks tender

BOOM or would have if she hadn't been shot down by a fucking multicolored rocket! For a second it was all pain, but it quickly faded and as she tried to make sense of what had just happened a helmet wrapped around her. my neck while someone climbed on top of me "What th-" I tried to curse, but the asshole only increased the strength of his grip "RUN APPLE BLOOM" I heard a voice say in the distance also the filly's confusion, but I couldn't seeing neither of them instead I tried to use my magic to attack the thing above me since I couldn't reach it with my hooves, but I must have seen them shine because I felt myself hit them which not only made me lose focus but also It sent a pulse of pain from my horns to the rest of my body "AHH" In response to my need for help my escort ran towards me to help me until he was stopped by a noose that wrapped around his neck in a similar way to me , he resisted pulling hard and almost knocking over the orange pony and would have if it wasn't for others who came and helped her pull the lasso

We were both stuck, I was desperately fighting to get this damn thing off me while my partner nearly got knocked down, he hated it, first the flower and now this, once again I could feel my anger turn material inside of me and was fighting to get out, but I couldn't do it every second that passed her grip on me got stronger it got to the point where everything became a blur, I did what I could, but I couldn't shake her off, once again my wolves were useless and I couldn't let go of my flames

Of all I think that was the worst not being able to launch my flames was much more suffocating than being strangled, I could feel that they were accumulating inside me like a balloon that inflates beyond its limits to the point where any thing can bust it "Come on give it up, you'll never scare ponies again!" Frighten? FRIGHTEN? I DID NOT KNOW ANYTHING, I just wanted to buy something "Apple Jack hold it still it's almost ready!" I could barely distinguish it among all the stains, but the lavender glow of its horn gave it away, I could see it pointing at my timberwolf , its intentions were clear, it wanted to destroy it! They may not be sentient beings, but they were mine they were my creations and I was proud of them, I couldn't leave her, I WASN'T GOING TO ALLOW IT

"BOOOM" The balloon finally exploded or rather I did, my whole body was bathed in green flames just like the ground around me, I don't know what happened to the damn thing that was on top of me I think it went flying from the explosion , she was not very busy catching her breath "RAINBOW" the lavender unicorn lost her focus and her spell was lost, I recorded error, seeing that she was no longer in immediate danger the timberwolf was no longer so desperate so instead of continuing Playing the strength struggles, he let himself be pulled, causing the mares to lose their balance enough for some to fall, and immediately he returned to pull with all his might, managing to send the orange pony that still had the rope between its teeth into the air, the which when she was close enough she was received with a powerful punch from the wolf which seemed to knock her out, I wasn't surprised the truth hurt me just seeing it

"APPLEJACK" My attention was returned to the lavender unicorn, as I hated her, I was already charging the energy in my horns to attack, but she was faster, her lightning took practically no time to charge "BANG" To my luck, my wolf reacted just as fast and he lunged to intercept the attack, a large part of him was blown off one of his front legs and part of his torso, but he was still standing and was already repairing himself and I was ready "SHING" My scratches similar to the electricity went in the direction of the pony which again was faster and managed to create a shield before they hit

"AHHHH" It looked painful the way it shuddered and cracks appeared on the shield, but still the shield didn't fall "GRAA" A scream that sounded more like a roar came from me and the intensity and number of scratches increased to the point where some didn't even touch his shield, but fell into the ground around him causing slight explosions and burn marks

managed to last about three seconds “ CRACK ” until finally it broke, I didn't even have time to scream again, my scratches sent it flying until it crashed into a house to which I didn't pay much attention since I had found something much more interesting, a literal tree house 'you'll know it when you see it' Zecora was right and it was funny that he only saw it because it sent the pony flying

Just like with the manticore I was going to take what was mine "E- hey you stop!" I turned around to see that more ponies had gathered, the one speaking was pon- a white pegasus , full of muscles and a weight on his butt, the others gathered seemed to be helping the fallen ponies, although I could see you doubtful and they did not stop of giving me terrified looks "What?" I did my best to control myself and act rationally "L-get out of our town!" I stood for a while looking at him and the few brave ponies that were grouped "What you heard we don't want monsters!" This time the one who spoke was an orange filly, which curiously seemed to be the least fearful of those present "Well, excuse me, but as far as looking good is not a crime, besides they were the ones who started!"

My words were of little use when they began to throw stones at me, my horns were still releasing smoke from the previous effort, so the wolf became my shield again "Out monster!" "We're going to kick you out for what you did!" "Freak!"

I stopped listening as I concentrated on containing my anger, I was sick of these guys, who do they think they are to attack someone on the street and then say it's okay? “Go and take that striped witch with you!” Zecora ?! _

"GRAAAA" That's what she did, I may not have known her for a long time, but Zecora was my friend and I wasn't going to allow them to insult her too "ATTACK" I couldn't contain it anymore, I wanted revenge "GRAAAA" My order was answered for almost a hundred of my creations who did not hesitate to march at full speed against the town

The faces of the ponies when they realized what was coming… I tried, I really tried, but it was impossible for me to contain my laughter when I saw how those who had come to help and supposedly 'kick me out' were the first to run away , even abandoning several of her own, the lavender pony was still nailed to that wall

Luckily it was enough to lighten my mood and not cause a massacre, my only objective here was the library, so I didn't hesitate to order my wolves to raid it and take what was important, while I collected the materials that Zecora sent me . ordered and left the bag of bits on the counter

When everything was finished and we were at the entrance of the forest ready to go when I took one last look at Ponyville "what a horrible place, I hope I never have to go back"


Author's Note

Proofread and edited by Underrated Drake

I apologize for what I did to Zecora , but as some of you may already know, I'm bad with English , so any rhyming phrase I make won't be noticed once the story is translated, so I'd better choose to give it a more tone. mystical to his way of speaking, I hope that at least partially compensates

I think I can say it now without giving spoilers and it is that I am mainly inspired by the game “ Overlord ”, but only in skills and they will not be like in the game, I am only inspired by it, I am not going to copy it.

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