Umbra's Starry Night

by hundvalpp

Rating: mature
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Porn, Sex, Fetish, Profanity
Length: 5058

Umbra and his adopted daughter head out to watch the sunset, but once the moon rises, so does a few other things

Umbra and his loving, adopted teenage daughter head for a nice hill to watch the sunset together. But after a bit of a trek, and with nopony in sight, things start to go wrong for Umbra. Or, do they go right?

Contains: Musk, Incest (adopted), sweaty pony bits, and age difference. All ponies in this fic are 18 or older!

This is my first ever fic, so be kind! :fluttercry:

Published 2022-08-30 19:30:01 UTC
Last updated 2024-04-11 13:31:54 UTC

Night's Star Rises

"Come on dad! We're gonna miss it!"

Night Star's squeaky high-pitched voice rang through the quiet evening air, calling out to her adoptive father as they trot up to the top of a grassy hill, the young mare doing so with much more energy than her dad.

"I'm coming, I'm coming! We've got plenty of time hun, don't worry"

Umbra Darkfire chuckles to himself, rolling his emerald eyes and shaking his head, trudging his way up the hill. He wished he had as much energy as his young daughter, but that energy was spent long ago now, being in his early 30s, he still had some spring in his step, but compared to her he felt downright elderly.

"Daaaad come oooon! The sun's gonna be a supernova by the time you get up here!"

Star calls down to her dad from the top of the hill, he scoffs and looks up at her, wiping some sweat from his brow with a hoof, sighing and shaking his head with another chuckle, eventually reaching the apex of the hill.

"I barely took any longer than you, young lady!" He ruffles her mane with a hoof and pulls her into a loving hug, a slightly sweaty one, but a loving one nonetheless. Star giggles and gives her dad's soft chest fur an equally loving nuzzle, squeaking out softly. She didn't mind the sweat much, since she was a little sweaty also, it was a bit of a trek to the top of the hill, after all.

"You know I love teasing you dad~." The young mare giggles, looking up at her father with a warm, tender smile, her bright cyan eyes gazing at her idol, her hero. Her dad was everything to her, so any opportunity she got to spend time with him, she jumped on it as soon as she could.

"Indeed you do, my little Star. Now climb on, we've got a sunset to watch!" He returns the tender smile and gaze, giving his daughter a gentle pet, rubbing over one of her ears just to watch it twitch and flick back upright, chuckling to himself.

Star excitedly squeaks as her dad leans down slightly, making it easier for the small bat mare to climb up onto her father. She absolutely loved riding on his back, it made her feel like she was on top of the world, with the added bonus of being so close to her favourite pony. With a little flap of her wings, she hops up onto her dad, her hooves either side of his body. Umbra looks back at his daughter with a warm smile.

"Comfy?"

Star nods with a happy squeak, as a loving smile covers her dad's face.

"Good! Scoot up a bit so you can see over me, otherwise all you're gonna be watching is my mane, silly bat~"

Star giggles softly, scooting up her dad's back until she's able to rest her muzzle atop his head. He looks up at her with a chuckle, before laying down on the grass, finally turning his gaze to the entire reason they had come. The sunset. It had just begun, as if equestria itself waiting for the pair to be ready. Star wraps her hooves around her father's torso, holding on tight as she looks in awe at the beautiful scenery, the view was simply stunning, all of ponyville painted orange by Celestia's setting sun, the sky too, bathed in luxurious orange light. They may not have been able to see it themselves, but the two ponies were also blessed by the sun's brilliant light.

The pair sat there in silence, nary a whimper nor a squeak from Star, which she tended to do when she got bored, however there was the occasional nuzzle into her dad, so that he knew she hadn't fallen asleep. Time melted away like ice, and before long there was no more sun left to set, the moon had risen and stars began dotting the sky. Star was the first to break the silence.

"W-wow… dad… that was incredible… I've never stopped to watch the sunset like that before"

Umbra smiles to himself, chuckling lightly at the young mare.

"It's quite something isn't it? And the night sky isn't too bad of a sight either." He gazes up, looking at the hundreds and thousands of stars painting the sky with their dim light. Star nods in response, enjoying the view and the closeness to her beloved dad. She presses her muzzle into his mane with a happy chirp, inhaling a lungful of his scent, which almost made her squeak. She always enjoyed her dad's smell, flower and fruity with a hint of sweetness, but this time it was different. She couldn't pin exactly what it was, but it made her hind leg twitch. Her dad smelled good… really good.

Umbra took no notice of his daughter sniffing him, it was something she did regularly, as his smell helped her relax, knowing that her dad was there to protect her and keep her safe. He did however, raise an eyebrow as he felt her hind leg twitch, his ear doing the same as he turns slightly.

"You alright back there hun?"

Her father's voice snapped her out of the daze she was in, lifting her snout from his mane with a light squeak, her ears perking up.

"Yes! Y-yeah dad, I'm fine! I'm just.. enjoying the view!"

She giggles nervously, she didn't know what was happening to her, usually she takes in her dad's smell to relax, to calm herself and make her feel better when she was down, but this time… this time was different, it made her feel warm, and it was bringing about a tingling in her loins. She wanted more.

Umbra smiles, blissfully unaware of the lust building up within his daughter, resting his head down on the grass and letting out a relaxed sigh. She takes the opportunity to do the same, nestling into his mane to feed herself more of her dad's addictive scent.

Star continued huffing into her dad's mane, by now he had noticed her legs twitching, but he had just noted it down to them being tired and achey from the long walk up to this hill. That is, until he hears something odd. Did she just… moan? His ear twitches, listening more closely to his daughter as a quiet moan escapes her lips.

"Star? Hun? What are you up to?"

She squeaks softly and pulls herself from her dad's musky mane once again, shivering slightly as she looks at him, her eyes a little hazy, her mind slightly scrambled, trying to gather herself, she manages to croak out a quiet, shaky response.

"N-nothing… dad…"

He raises an eyebrow, he knew when his daughter was lying. And she had been sniffing him for much longer than usual.

"Hun, if something's going on with you, you've gotta tell me… okay?"

She huffs softly, she knew she couldn't keep anything from her dad, he always managed to find a way of getting the truth out of her. She admits defeat, sighing and looking away with a deep blush.

"W-well… your smell… it's… different… I don't know why or how but… it makes me feel strange…"

A crimson blush grows on the stallions face, realising immediately what she meant. His musk. He'd completely forgotten the effect it can have on young mares, even in small doses. His wife had spent many nights between his legs, drinking in his smell, turning her into a mindless, moaning mess. He had always made an effort to mask it when around his daughter, not wanting to mistakenly seduce her, but the heat of the evening combined with their long trek had made him sweat a good bit, making his natural scent reveal itself, much to his dismay.

He saw no point in lying to the small bat, gulping down his pride and turning to look at her, a blush on his cheeks as he huffs.

"A-ah… that… well hun, that would be my natural scent, it can have some, uhh.. effects on mares, especially young ones like yourself…"

Having been orphaned very young, and only recently been adopted by Umbra and his wife within the last few months, Star's sexual knowledge wasn't very strong, she knew very little, besides the very basics, and how much pleasure her left hoof could provide to herself.

"O-oh… how come it's never affected me like this…?" She questions, nuzzling into his neck fur to sniff some more, her ears twitching slightly as the tantalising scent dances on her nostrils.

"Well, I always try and cover it up around you hun, to stop you from… being affected, but I guess working up a sweat has made it come through…" He states flatly, unsure how to deal with the situation, not only did he have a young mare on his back, growing more and more aroused by the second, but it was his daughter. His adopted daughter, yes, but his daughter nonetheless. Should he stop her before things got out of hoof? Or should he allow her to sniff to her hearts content, hoping that she'd be satisfied with just his upper body.

Star meanwhile, was lost in her dad's smell. Pressing her snout against his fur, drawing in strong breath after strong breath, the burning in her loins growing stronger as she begins to pant against her father's neck, licking her fangs as she began to drool. Images of what she'd seen in the few educational books she'd read flashing through her mind, with her in place of the mare, and her dad in the place of the stallion. That very thought should have snapped her out of it… but it did the very opposite, sending a jolt of excitement through her body and to her nethers, causing them to give a strong wink, making her squeak softly.

"D-dad… n-nnhh…"

Umbra's ears perked up as he felt his daughter starting to grind her hips into his back, his mind screaming at him to stop this, pull her off and go home, and let Star's mother have a talk with her. But his body reacted differently. He lets out a huff as his sheath twitches. As his arousal began to grow, as did his smell, displayed by Star's increasingly frequent moans. He had to act, fast.

"Hun… I think you'd better come lay beside me instead, this isn't right." He nudges her with his wing, bringing out a soft whimper from the teenager as she slumps onto the grass, laying on her side and looking at her dad, sadness in her eyes.

"B-but dad..!" Star whined, rolling onto her belly and nuzzling under her dad's chin, pushing her side up against his. She had it bad, her marehood dampening the grass below it, having left a small wet patch on her dad's back fur too.

"No hun… it's… it's not right…" He lets out a huff, almost trying to convince himself as well. He could feel the damp spot on his back, and he could smell his daughter's arousal. The smell of an aroused mare had always been his weakness, the scent they gave off was simply divine and utterly intoxicating. Images started flashing in his mind, images of burying his snout into Star's tight, wet snatch… hearing her moans whilst he- No! No… he couldn't think like that, he had to stay strong for her. It wouldn't be fair for her dad to take her first time like that, no matter how badly she wanted it.

Unfortunately, his body had different ideas. Umbra felt his sheath begin to react, twitching as his length began to peek out, pressing against his belly and the cool grass. His daughter's smell continued to flow into his nostrils, fogging his mind further. Maybe he should give her what she wants, who else would be better as a first stallion for her than her dad?

"D-dad…"

Is his thoughtful daze, he failed to realise his daughter's hoof in his face, he jolts back, looking at the hoof in front of his snout, it was damp, but why? What from?

Then it hit him. The pheromone-rich smell of bat mare juices entered his lungs and set his mind alight, Star had unknowingly sealed her fate for the night with one simple action, as her father looked at her, shuddering as his lust takes hold.

"A-alright hun… I'll let you smell me, but you may as well get the best you can get, lay down for me, on your back." He huffed, telling himself that he'd just let her get a little whiff of his crotch, and let her pleasure herself to it. Nothing wrong with that, right? As long as he didn't cave in to his carnal, lustful desires, he'd be fine. All he needed to do was ignore the images in his mind of her tight, teenage cunt, gushing with his seed, twitching and rippling around his cock as she screams and begs for more… this wasn't going to be easy.

In the meantime, Star did just as her dad asked, laying on her back, looking into the stars, her hind legs twitching. Her body felt like it was on fire, a lustful inferno setting her nethers alight, all she could think of was her dad, every thought in her mind being of him, mounting her, fucking her, claiming her. And what she saw next only increased those desires. She couldn't see the stars anymore. All she could see was her dad's fat, throbbing cock over her head, she gasps as her marehood winks aggressively, biting her lip, her gaze drifting over his impressive package. His cock was easily longer than one of her legs, and thicker than her hoof. Her eyes locked on to those balls, and they were positively godlike. Churning with cum and twitching over her head, the thick, raunchy smell of her father soon followed, the scent from before had been dialed up to eleven, her mind and heart racing even more now.

"H-holy shit… dad… you're huge..! A-and… it smells s-so… so goo-mmmphh!!" Her dad cut her off, dropping his hips and smothering his daughter in his hot, sweaty sack, huffing and grunting to himself as his eyes gaze at her twitching teen cunt, and her medium-sized crotchtits.

"J-just… nghh.. just get it out of your system hun…" That's what he told himself. He was just helping his daughter cope with her arousal, nothing more. But in reality, his cock flexed, oozing thick pre onto his little girl, his eyes fixated on that tight teenage cunt, drooling from his cock and his maw.

Meanwhile, Star was in absolute ecstacy. The light hint of musk she so hopelessly wanted was immensely stronger now, as she starts desperately huffing and licking over her dad's heavy ballsack. Even as inexperienced as she was, she could tell he was pent up, her tongue dancing over the leathery flesh of his swollen nuts, drinking in his smell as his taste stained her tongue, her moans of bliss being muffled by her father's orbs and ass.

Umbra was struggling to keep his mind intact. It didn't help that his daughter's tongue felt fantastic on his sack, nor that her instincts made her spread her legs wide for her stallion, her throbbing marehood almost begging for his snout. Star was too preoccupied giving his nuts a polishing to pleasure herself, so he thought to himself… maybe he should do it… it would get this whole thing over with quicker, he told himself, slowly leaning down, closer to his daughter's winking snatch.

Star was none the wiser to his actions, her hooves wrapped around her dad's waist as she services his orbs, panting and groaning into them as they smother her in their heat and virile scent. That was until she feels something against her slit, she stops for a moment as she feels something hot and wet gliding over her winking cunt, moaning into her dad's orbs. It took until she heard a deep grunt from above for her to realise it was her dad. He had leaned over and begun to lick over her pussy. In his mind, he was simply helping his little girl, as his thick tongue glides over her tight snatch, rubbing it on her clit as she winks.

Star lets out high-pitched, squealing moans into her father's junk, as she feels his thick, experienced tongue expertly exploring her nethers, laying her head back to breathe a previously unexplored part of his balls, her eyes made contact with his twitching donut. She pops his orb from her mouth, bringing her snout to her dad's rear entrance and takes a sniff. It was godly. The smell was stronger here more than anywhere, and it immediately made her squirt thick juices into her dad's mouth. It wasn't long before her tongue was exploring her father's musky asshole, her lips wrapped around his puffy donut as she glides her tongue over his hole, sucking lightly on it.

"D-dd.. dahh… haahh… daaaahhdd… f-fuck…" Umbra lets out a primal snort into his little girls cunt, giving her flank a gentle smack as he pulls his lips from her.

"Mmh.. language young lady…" He smirks to himself lightly, licking his lips of her essence. He wasn't fazed by her tongue on his donut, he knew it was the strongest source of his smell, and his wife often spent time doing exactly this, worshipping and sucking on it. He lets out a hot grunt as a thick spurt of pre fires from his twitching flare, leaving a clear, sticky streak in his daughter's black fur, right over one of her breasts. He smirks and takes the chance to tease her further. "Looks like daddy made a bit of a mess… let me clean you up hun~." He leans down and wraps his lips around the teat with pre on it, sucking lightly and swirling his tongue around, cleaning up his pre. This brought out more shrill moans from Star, her body squirming beneath him as she continues to suck and lick on his sweaty asshole.

Soon, Star began to feel her pleasure build, a pressure growing in her abdomen as her dad's tongue swirled around her teat, rocking her hips as she gets close to her climax, detaching her lips from their tight seal around her dad's ponut, laying her head back on the grass. The stars above were blurry as her vision went hazy, from a mix of the powerful stallion smell in her mind, and the equally powerful onrushing orgasm.

"D-dad… d-dad! DADDY!!!~"

She lets out a loud, pleasured scream as she reaches her peak, birds fluttered from trees, squirrels scurried back to their homes, and deer fled the area as Star came, hard. Harder than she had ever imagined she could, humping her hips into the air as squirt after squirt of marecum soaks the grass, her father sucking on her teat all the while. He waited for her to go limp under him, smiling to himself and pulling his lips from her tit, giving it a soft kiss and lifting his rear from her face, looking down at her.

"You alright hun? Didn't pass out on me, did you?"

Star lay there, panting heavily, her dad's smell stained into her fur. She nods and pants heavily, the grass, soaked in her essence, glistening in the moonlight. She shakes her head, smiling at her dad with a loving, drowsy look.

"N-no dad… I'm fine… thank you, that was… incredible…"

Umbra lets out a soft chuckle, turning to face his daughter. A meaty smack made her ears perk up, as she looks at the large stallion, now standing over her.

"You didn't think we were finished, did you? Daddy needs to cum too… it's only fair~." A lewd smile creeps onto his face as he sits himself just above her teats, putting a hoof on his cock and pressing his sputtering tip onto her cheek, coating it with pre. Almost all inhibitions were gone now, Umbra had not only seen his little girl cum harder than ever, but he had caused it. Something inside him clicked at that moment, and this began to feel right. She was his daughter after all, and it's not like they were biological father and daughter anyway… he wanted to make sure his little girl's first time was special, and what better way to do that than by being the stallion that gives it to her?

He had made up his mind.

Author's Note

Chapter one complete! I managed to bust all of this out in a day, so I hope it's up to scratch! like I said, this is my first time doing anything like this, so forgive a few spelling/grammar mistakes if there are any!

Thanks for reading!

Night's Edge

Umbra lets out a deep grunt, pushing as hard as he can. “Come on Umbra!” He thought to himself, “For your daughter! Your little girl!” With one, final triumphant grunt, he finally does it. It was in. All of it. He had managed to push the whole bed into Star’s new bedroom, all by himself. He takes a step back and wipes his brow with a hoof, smiling to himself. The tricky part, getting the bed through the door, was over. Now he just needed to slide it across the floor into the corner. He does so with ease, sitting down on his daughter’s new bed, feeling the soft mattress. With a sigh of relief, he slumps back onto the bed, closing his eyes, a content smile on his lips.

Umbra wasn’t sure how long he dozed off for, but he was awoken by an ear-splitting squeak, jolting up with a gasp, only to be tackled back into laying down, by a blur of black fur and pinky-blue mane. Before he knew what hit him, he felt a thousand nuzzles against his chest, looking down and chuckling softly, starting to lightly pet his daughter. “Heh, so, you like the bed kiddo?” His question brought another loud squeak, as those cyan eyes he treasured so dearly gazed back up at him.

“I love it dad! It’s amazing! My very own bed in my very own room!”

Star couldn’t contain her excitement. She had only been an official part of this family for a few weeks, but she already had her own room, her own bed, and her dad even bought her a potion set for her to tinker with in her free time. She jumps from her dad’s chest, prompting a gruff ‘oof-!’ from the stallion. She danced her happiness out on the soft mattress, letting out countless squeaks and squees.

“I’m glad you like it Star, really. This is your home now, and it’s finally starting to look like a home too!”

She turns and smiles at him, grabbing her dad and pulling him down on top of her, giggling as she hugs him tightly and lovingly, giving his cheek a soft, tender lick as she looks into his eyes, and he looks into hers.

“You’re the best dad ever~”

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Star gazes up at her dad, dumbfounded by what he had just said;
“Daddy needs to cum too”. Something in her mind told her that he was right, it would be rude not to give her stallion the same release he gave her. Her mind was foggy, still reeling from the recent climax that had wracked her body. Without thinking, she started lapping her tongue at her father’s thick log of horseflesh, whimpering at the taste of his sweat-coated shaft. He had really worked himself up pleasuring his daughter, and it showed. His emerald eyes burning with desire as he looked down at the mare beneath him. He didn’t see his daughter anymore, he just saw a young, pretty, and downright sexy mare. He had never looked at her this way, but now he was starting to think there was no other way he could see her than a young mare, desperate for his cock.

Star was undergoing a similar change, she no longer saw her dad leering over her, she saw a stud. A stud who’s raw scent was indescribable, and absolutely intoxicating. Her nostrils flared as her dad’s smell flowed into them and filled her lungs, her tongue rubbing against his throbbing cock, drawing soft groans from his throat. His cock flexing and throbbing against her tongue, her efforts being rewarded by a hearty rope of pre, glistening in the moonlight as it spurts over her shoulder, making a soft pattering noise as it hits the grass behind her

“D-dad…”

His ears perk up, smiling down at his daughter, who was practically hugging his cock and lathering it in her spit and moaning for him. He glides his hips back and forth, rubbing his cock against her fur, effectively marking his daughter as his. Her tongue glides over the flesh hungrily, tasting every inch of her dad that she could. Eventually she reaches his flare, her nose pressing against it as her tongue laps over his cockslit, giving her a taste of his salty pre, making her shudder softly, just as a fresh spurt fires itself against her tongue and into her maw, her dad was a messy stallion, and she absolutely loved it.

“Ngh… fuck hun~ your tongue feels amazing on my cock…”

Umbra’s praise felt like the sweetest song to Star’s ears, she lets out a soft coo as she gulps down the pre in her maw, before wrapping her lips around his thick flare, her fangs perfectly resting on either side of his shaft, spaced at the perfect distance to not cause a ‘problem’ when blowing her dad. Her mind was swimming with lust, fueled in no small part by her dad’s incredible smell. His hoof reaches down and pets her gently as he lets out a snort, his dick flexing in her maw. “N-nngh… gods that feels incredible…” Once again Star lets out a happy coo, her eyes looking up at her dad, half-lidded and full of desire, lapping her tongue against his leaky cockslit, trying to coax more pre from him.

Her mind was completely consumed by thoughts about her dad doing various things to her, pounding her cunt, flooding her ponut with his seed, breeding her. That last one in particular brought forth a strong wink in her pussy, moaning around her dads meat. The more she looked over him, the more she realised just how much of a stud he was, taught, powerful flanks, tall, a well-toned body, and not to mention his thick, throbbing cockmeat and hefty orbs. Everything about him screamed stud, she wasn’t sure how she hadn’t seen it before, but now she had, there was no going back. She wanted her dad, in every way possible.

After a short while longer, and a few more flavourful spurts of pre into his daughters warm muzzle, Umbra grunts and pulls his hips back, laying his throbbing cock over her snout, smiling down at her as his flared tip sputters more pre, mixing with her spit, his cock glistening in the moonlight, as if Luna herself couldn’t keep her eyes off of the perfect stallion specimen.
“You look so pretty under my cock, hun~” Umbra says softly, his cock flexing on her face as he lightly pats it on her nose. Hatching a devious idea, he then stands up, eliciting a soft whimper from his daughter before he turns and takes a few steps, looking back at her. “Come on! It’s time to go home, mom’s gonna be wondering where we are~” A sly smirk grows on his face as he sees the look of utter despair on his daughter’s face, behind the shimmering ropes of his pre that lingered on her fur, that is.

“Wh-what!? B-but.. Dad! You said..”

He chuckles and turns to face her, his thick tool smacking against his belly as he gazes down at his daughter, her soft fur, her aching marehood, those eyes, glistening in the moonlight, seemingly almost on the verge of tears. He slowly approaches where she lay on the grass, his stallionhood hanging dangerously close to her soaked nethers, looking down at her, he smiles, licking his lips. “I said what hun? What did daddy say?~” His words were emphasised by another wet smack, yet another strand of pre flinging over his daughter’s form, as he looks down at his handiwork so far.

“Y-you said.. Th-that you need to.. Y-y’know… a-as well.. Otherwise it’s not fair!” Star whimpers and whines, pouting up at her father only for a moment, as her gaze returned to his thick, heavy length, the images in her mind of him making her his mare were more vivid than ever, his scent tantalisingly lingering on her fur, her tongue sticking out and licking around her muzzle, lapping up any pre that may remain. She wanted him, she needed him, desperately. “Daaaad… come oooon… don’t make me beg…” She pouts again, rolling onto her side and climbing onto her hooves, walking over slowly and lifting his mighty length with a hoof, gently suckling on his flavourful tip, gulping down a mouthful of pre, drawing out a lustful grunt from the stallion, as his cock flexes in her grasp.

Umbra was barely holding it together himself, despite the teasing he had dished out, he hadn’t anticipated just how sexy his daughter looked on the end of his cock. He lets out a huff, gently stroking her mane as she suckles on his tip, letting his chin rise ever so sightly as he clenches his jaw, grunting through bared teeth. He couldn’t keep this up, he wanted her, he needed her. They needed each other. His plan was to tease her further and make her beg for her father’s cock, but he couldn’t wait any longer. He steps back and leans down, nuzzling into her mane until he reaches her ear, giving it a light nibble before whispering into it;

“Turn around and spread those legs for daddy…”

Author's Note

A bit shorter than part 1, but I thought this would be a good teaser for the big finale~