One Rare Nightmare

by Great Humanity

Rating: mature
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Second Person, My Little Pony Comic, Romance, Thriller, Original Character, Nightmare Rarity, Human, Anthro, Drama
Length: 2962

A clopfic between you and Rarity's nightmare-ish persona

(Early Halloween special, fyi)

It's Nightmare Night, and everypony's out and about, ready to have fun. Your daughter is out with friends trick or treating, and you're having the time of your life, drinking with your friends, but you can't help but feel like you're forgetting something, or rather someon- er, somepony...

Published 2022-11-21 21:50:00 UTC
Last updated 2022-11-21 21:50:00 UTC

A Dreamy Night-Mare

Nightmare Night, a night filled with candy and laughs, and all in Ponyville too. Plenty of fillies, colts, boys, and girls were all coming up with costumes, left and right, and just looking out into the streets, it was clear that tonight was gonna be busy. Your daughter, Crystal, was planning to go out with her friends, ‘parently wanting to get as much candy together as a kid could ever dream, and you laughed at how adorable she sounded, and she’d be dressing up as a certain Little Red.

You, on the other hand, were plannin’ on headin’ out drinking with a couple friends, like Bolt, Genus, and Frosty. Neither of y’all had to worry about kids, as Pinkie and Cheese Sandwich had them covered. Though, as you waved your daughter Crystal off and got ready to head out, you felt a gentle hand grab your arm.

“Silver, darling. I know you’ll be celebrating tonight with friends, but… are you sure that you can’t spend tonight with me?” she asked, giving you puppy dog eyes as you sighed

“Rares, I’m sorry, but… the guys really went out of their way to plan out tonight, it’d be bad if I missed out. I promise you, we’ll cuddle when I get back” you said, but she pouted, and you petted her, “I Pinkie Promise?”

She ‘hmmmmphed’, and then kissed you, “Alright, but you better stay true to your promise, darling” she said sweetly, but seriously too

“Yes dear” you responded earnestly as she let you go, and you headed out the door. You hoped she’d be okay with you missing for a few hours

I love him to death, but he can truly be so… frustrating! She thought to herself as she huffed and went to her fridge, trying to find a tub of ice cream

You met up with the guys at a bar, and it was the bar of Berry Punch. It was pretty busy tonight, and that was to be expected, and as there were mostly ponies, there were a couple of humans in the bar as well other than yourselves

“So Silver, how’ve things been with family?” Genus asked you, and you nodded with a smile

“Fairly good, Genus, you?” you asked him as he smiled back

“Family’s good, couldn’t be any better. This place is packed, don’t you think?” he said in response, and you nodded

“Agreed, fellas, guess that means we’ll have a bit more fun, eh?” Bolt joined in, smiling a little as you and Genus nodded

“Not too much. Flutters doesn’t want me blackout drunk when comin’ home” Genus said, sighing a little, and you both didn’t blame him, as Fluttershy would always reprimand him the next morning

“Awwww, that’s a shame, though it still is good that she cares. Could only imagine what it’d be like if she didn’t tell you to” Bolt said, “At least you’ll join me in my fun, right Silver?”

“Yeah, sure. Sounds good, for sure” you said, a bit nervous as Frosty smiled

“C’mon fellas, let’s get our drink on!” Frosty cheered aloud. Clearly, Pinkie’s excitement rubbed off on Frosty over the years

As you hadn’t gotten home yet, something was going on with Rarity. She missed you greatly, and just wanted to see you come home, and who could blame her? After putting Crystal to bed, she just seemed miserable, eating ice cream like an ordinary fashionista.

“It’s midnight and he still hasn’t come home…” she said, gulping down a spoonful of ice cream, “Why won’t he just come home already?!” As she said that, her room got colder. As she shivered, she saw shadows along the walls, and then something coiled around her like a snake, and she knew all too well what it was.

“Well well well~ Hello, dear Rarity~ Long time no see~” a voice said that sent chills down her spine.

“Oh no… not you body snatchers again! What do you want?!” she panicked as something shadowy covered her mouth

“Darling, darling, we mean you, nor anypony, any harm. We noticed how sad you looked, taking note that your husband hasn’t come home yet” the nightmare forces spoke

“Whatever it is you want from me, I won’t give it to you!” she muffled out from behind her shadow gag

“We simply want you to take charge, dear. A man shouldn’t ignore his wife and hang out with friends, correct? He could’ve cancelled, rescheduled, or even better, just stayed home. Seems he has greater interest in drinking then spending time with his ‘special somepony’. Don’t you want to change that? Punish him in a way where he’ll think twice about prioritizing somepony else over you?~” the forces asked her, scratching under her chin softly

As Rarity sighed and nodded, the shadowy gag vanished as she breathed softly, “True… though I don’t want to make him hate or hold a grudge against me…”

“But he won’t! You see, you’re usually the submissive one, correct?” the forces asked her, and she nodded carefully, “So why not allow us to grant you your nightmare form so that you may be dominant over him for a change? We’re sure he’ll love it~”

As Rarity thought carefully, she was still skeptical of the whole thing, but knew that it’d be pleasurable in a sense, so she smiled a little, “Alright, I accept… just… don’t hurt my Silver, please…”

“We promise, dear, as long as you do your part” the forces said, causing her eyes to widen

“W-Wait, what?” she said, surprised

“We’re merely giving you you’re form and the power to make him obey you without question, or maybe he’ll obey outright, but we give you this form to assert dominance over him, and you have complete control over it. Make sense yet?” the forces asked her

“Yes, I’m ready” she said, and a small, seductive cackle could be heard

“We know you are~” they said, completely engulfing her

As you opened the door to the boutique, everything was dark. Not a desk lamp lit, and not a ceiling light on. On a normal night, it wouldn’t be a problem, but the cold and chill of the place was enough to make you a bit scared

“Rares? You there? I hope you’re not too upset about me rejecting you earlier. I’m home now” you said, though you didn’t hear any excited hoofsteps, or angry hoofstomps either. You were about to assume that she was asleep, but then you heard a sinister giggle, turning around a bit scared, “W-Who’s there?”

As you kept looking around, you felt a tail sweep across your legs, or a finger across your shoulder, but just couldn’t track it. After you heard one false hoofstep behind you, you caught the hand that was about to caress you again, hearing an angelic yelp, “Rares?”

As you turned around, you saw what looked like Rarity, but all black with an even bigger bust, as if it had gone from an E to at least a G-cup, and they were concealed in a different bra, thank god.

“Seems you’ve found me, Darling. Now, time to discuss your fun-ishment~” she said, already holding a strap-on in her left hand

“Whoa whoa, hold on. What happened to you?” you asked her, and she giggled

“That’s a se~” she tried to say as you placed a finger on her lips softly

“No secrets. Tell me what happened” you said, seeing her smile fade as she sighed and looked you in the eyes

“Some nightmare forces from my past came to me…” she confessed, brushing back her unstyled mane, but it still looked beautiful to you

“The same ones from long ago?” you asked as she nodded, “And you allowed this?”

“Well, they think I should ‘punish’ you… are you okay with that, sweetie?” she asked, showing her puppy eyes, kinda.

The idea of being dominated by your own wife was a new one. Usually she was the submissive one, and rarely showed any dominant sides of her. You did think it was these ‘forces’ that were controlling her, but the fact that she confessed all that, told you that she was in full control. You smiled and picked her up, making her yelp in surprise as you kissed her.

As you held her bridal style, she couldn’t help but wrap her arms around your neck softly and embrace you. As the two of you pulled away for air, you said, “Sure thing, mistress~”

“Good boy~ I’ll treat you well, and give you a true night you won’t forget~” she said, reaching up and caressing your cheek softly as you carried her to your bedroom.

As you got into your bedroom, you saw the bed adorned with kinky things of all kinds. Handcuffs, leg cuffs, a paddle, and plenty of other kinky stuff you dared not think about. Seems she really wanted to punish you, but it seemed fun too.

As you set her down carefully on the bed and joined her, she grabbed a collar and put it on you, holding a small remote in her hand, “While those dastardly Flim Flam Brothers are untrustworthy, they sure have quite the thing for scenarios like this~”

“Rares, what’s the collar f- ouch!” you said, feeling a shock go through your neck and throughout your body, seeing her giggle as you glared, “What the hell?!”

“That’s what it’s for, dear~ I am your mistress for the night, and if you step out of line, one press of a button is all I need to get you to listen to me~” she said, hovering a thumb over the button as you hugged her, looking up at her with begging eyes

“Please Rares, don- ow!” you said, feeling another shock, and scooting away as she giggled more, “Why?!”

“What’s my name, darling?~” she said seductively, and that’s when you caught on: She wanted to be called ‘mistress’, so you sighed and scooted closer, laying your head in your lap as you looked into her eyes

“Please don’t shock me… Mistress…” you said, feeling her gentle caress and a kiss on your forehead

“Good boy~” she said, and then, she got up, taking off her bra and panties as she put the strap-on over her marehood, and then looked at you, staring, “Well don’t just sit there looking all cute~ take those clothes off, now” she said sternly

Not wanting to get shocked again, you nodded as you stripped down, watching her cheeks get redder as you did so. Once you were fully stripped, she smiled as you blushed, “N-Now what, m-mistress?”

“On the bed, on all fours, your ass facing me~ all in that order~” she said, and you wasted no time in doing as she said, getting on all fours and having your ass exposed to her. You decided to get a little dangerous with her, and shook your rear at her as she giggled, “Ooooooo, you must really want me to buck you silly, huh sweetums?~”

“Y-Yes please…” you said, feeling her mount the bed and take her position behind you as you felt her soft, furry hands touch your asscheeks softly and caress them.

“Such a gentlemen, too~ I knew my manners would rub off of you, darling~” she said, and without warning, she plunged her strap-on into your anal cavity, thrusting in and out as you moaned and felt yourself being penetrated.

While this was happening, you were aware of what happened last time when she was like this, but you simply just sighed and went with it, as Rarity was in full control, even during this pleasurable moment. As much as you wanted to ask if she had experience doing this, you held off on the chance that you’d get shocked again, and you didn’t want that.

As she kept thrusting, you couldn’t help but think about how much she looked like Nightmare Moon, and honestly, it only made you hornier. Before another thought could enter your mind, you felt her busy inside you, her climax filling your ass as you both moaned in ecstasy.

As she was panting, she pulled out and leaned down, “Everything alright, my pet?~”

As you turned to face her, you got an evil glare on your face, and before she could reach for the remote, you stopped her and seized it, holding it out of reach, “My turn~”

“You-! I wasn’t finished! Give that back!” she hissed, yet you held it more and more out of her reach, tossing it into a storage chest as she growled

“Did you seriously think you’d be domming me all night? Heh, no, but nice try~” you teased, grabbing a pair of cuffs, and she gulped seeing you holding them, but she also blushed

“Be careful with my wrists, dear…” she asked politely, and you nodded, kissing her and running a hand through her nice mane, then handcuffing her hands to the headboard. After that was done, you made quick work in removing her strap-on, seeing her marehood in all its glory, making her blush ten shades redder

“Only the gentlest for my precious gem~” you said sweetly, making her smile softly. As you straddled her, she just stared at your chest, sighing dreamily

“I’m glad you were the one for me, Silver. You’ve done so much for me, my absolute charm~” she flirted, and then you slowly plunged your shaft inside her, hearing her moan in ecstasy, “No patience? My my, I knew I married a man of action~”

“No point in wasting time. Gotta make every moment count, right?” you looked down at her with a sly smile, and she nodded. After that, you thrusted into her hard, and she moaned in response, and to spice things up, you gripped her flank like it was a pillow.

As you pounded her, her mane glowed, and looked absolutely beautiful. Again, you felt lucky as ever. After a while, you finished pounding her into the mattress, and blowed a big load in her ass.

As you slumped onto her, she took this as an opportunity, and regained control, managing to get the remote in hand, “Silver, darling, seems you let your guard down~”

Your eyes went wide as she pressed the button on the remote, and you felt a shock in your neck, “Ack! Damnit! I thought we were past that!”

“Not by a long shot, dearie~ It wouldn’t be fair if I didn’t take over every now and again… now lay back and don’t argue with me, darling!” Rarity said, gripping your shaft as she licked it

It was clear to you that she meant business, and you made it a mental note to not interrupt her like that again. Regardless, she got bored of licking your shaft quick, and completely put her muzzle around it, cleaning it up on the spot.

You had lost track of just how long things had gone on for. At some point, Rarity had mounted you completely, and had been bouncing on your shaft for a while, and it was firmly planted in her pussy. She wasn’t planning on leaving your shaft either, as every time you tried to lift her off for a break, you’d feel another jolt of electricity through you, before she tenderly stroked your cheek and kissed it too.

Eventually, you had enough, and felt your climax coming, so in a swift motion, you groped her breasts and pushed her onto her back, knocking the remote onto the ground as she blushed furiously and looked at you, “Silver! I wasn’t finished yet!”

“But I… almost am, my precious diamond…~” you said softly, as her eyes went wide, and her tone softened

“Oh~ I see… well, finish what I started, darling~” she said, her mane flowing majestically as you rutted her like there was no tomorrow, feeling your climax grow closer. Despite giving you chills every now and again, she was actually very merciful and patient with you, and you loved that about her.

As you pounded and pounded her, she moaned like an angel. You felt lucky, having such a beautiful mare. Eventually, your thoughts were lost as you felt your climax once again, and couldn’t hold it anymore, “R-Rarity! I-I c-can’t-” you tried to say as she smiled and reached up, cupping your cheek with a gentle gaze

“Blow it all. Not a drop wasted~” she flirted, laying back as you let go and blew your load. Your nightmare-ish mare began to return to normal as her womb was filled, and her eyes returned to normal, as she softly sat up and snuggled close to you, “Ah, mag… nificent… darling…”

“Yeah… thanks Rares… will you…?” you asked out of curiosity, and she nodded softly

“More than likely, darling, but I know that it won’t be the end of the world. Besides, I’ve been thinking of giving Crystal a younger sibling” Rarity admitted, laying you both down as she pulled the covers over you both, “Goodnight, darling, I lo-”

“Wait, what about-” you attempted to say, hoping you could pull out

“Oh, don’t be like that~ Just be in the moment and enjoy this, darling~ goodnight, Silver. I love you~” Rarity said, sloppily kissing your cheek as she snuggled into your chest, and closed her eyes.

You laid there, sighing softly before you kissed her forehead softly and did the same, “Goodnight Rarity, my precious diamond, I love you dearly~”

And thusly, the two of you slept through the night. You thought heavily on how your son/daughter would look like once born, but that would be another thought for another day, as it made you pretty happy that your wife, for the most part, was the dominant one this time around.