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Heartbreak: Strange Pony

by The Psychopath
Fluttershy is helping her 'student' HB clean up the first floor of her home when a visitor stops by. Her bizarre mannerisms and speech make Fluttershy think she is wounded and traumatized. The small spiders in the attic aren't buying it.

HB is recovering from a nasty case of 'Everything Disease', and, being both her teacher and caretaker, Fluttershy decides to help the mare with cleaning her home. Unfortunately, their would-be chores are interrupted by a pony arriving at their home with the appearance and mannerisms of a poorly animated wooden puppet. Taking it as a sign of trauma, Fluttershy invites her in temporarily until she can take the visitor to the hospital.

While HB is skeptical of this pony's behavior, the sad-faced veneighzuelan spiders in her attic aren't buying the 'performance', especially after all the strange occurrences happening around their dilapidated old house.


Heartbreak is the creation of Potatobreak (:>). The Sad-faced Veneighzuelan spiders are also their creation. This is a late birthday present for them as well. Happy ECHday!

Their first story would be this one if you're interested: My Little Heartbreak: Heartbroken.

I'd say you don't need to read it just to understand this short story, because I feel like I portrayed Potatobreak well enough. Still, you should read them, they're fun to go through.

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3680 words: Estimated 18 minutes to read

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