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Misty Needs a Hug

by EileenSaysHi
After Misty flees the sleepover, Zipp notices she's still in the garden outside the Crystal Brighthouse. Zipp ends up learning something unexpected about the strange newcomer -- and how she can help.

An alternate take on events that begins in the middle of Chapter 2, Episode 6 ("The Traditional Unicorn Sleep-Over") of Make Your Mark. This story assumes reader knowledge of the show up to that point.

Zipp had a lot of suspicions about Misty, the strange unicorn that Izzy had met in town earlier that day and invited to an impromptu sleepover party at the Brighthouse. But while she'd been exercising her detective skills on their guest all night as the oddities surrounding her piled up, she hadn't meant to drive Misty away. So when, after Misty flees from the party in a panic, Zipp notices that she's still out in the Brighthouse's garden, pacing frantically, Zipp decides to see if she can talk to her, and figure out just what is going on with this curious new pony.

And what she learns may well give Zipp room for pause -- and a need to exercise some comfort skills.


Please note that while this fic is rated E, there is some mild discussion of parental/familial abuse.

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Cover art by emera33; used with permission. Pre-read by TCC56 and Goldenwing.

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Everyone
Complete
Sad
Drama
My Little Pony: A New Generation
Slice of Life
Alternate Universe
 
MMZ

3199 words: Estimated 16 minutes to read

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